As requested (Forum PM),
[
General]
- Why is Star Stream's diff the only diff with custom name? A bit inconsistent.
- Same thing with background, why Rui's diff the only one with a different background.
Not really major issues, but be sure to have a reason why, if a mat/bat asks.
[
Easy]
00:39:159 (1) - Curving this slider looks nicer to me. (Copy 2 and paste it here)
http://puu.sh/jpGJ00:42:931 (3) - ^ Same thing, looks better if this slider is curved to me.
00:45:674 (2) - Why red point on this slider? Looks weird to me
00:47:045 (1,2) - Feel a bit empty because of the drum, how about repeating slider and 3/1 slider instead?
http://puu.sh/jpHD. 00:49:102 (3) - You may want to change to hit circle + slider if you follow this suggestion, but it may be too hard for this Easy.
00:58:017 (1) - This slider looks a bit unsymmetrical to me, try to make it nicer?
01:00:759 (1) - Consider lowering the volume of the slider tick, sound too loud for this part for me. Also consider adding finish to begin and end (if you want to distinguish the finishes a bit, use timing point to change the volume of them, for example, one at 50% volume, one at 60% etc.)
01:04:189 (2) - Move up a little to avoid overlap?
01:08:988 (1) - Slider ticks on this slider also sound too loud, consider lowering the volume.
01:10:702 (2) - Weird wave slider imo, consider doing just a normal curve slider or place it somewhere else?
http://puu.sh/jpKN01:29:559 (3) - Don't understand why you use red point on this slider. If you wanted to use red point here then, you should use it at 01:26:817 (3) - as well as it's the same rhythm.
01:34:702 (2) - I think it look nicer if you curve this, just personal preference.
http://puu.sh/jpLr01:36:759 (x) - Should have a note here, perhaps move 01:37:102 (2) to here instead. Be sure to add finish on it.
01:39:159 (1) - Same as 01:00:759
01:44:988 (x) - Similar to 01:36:759, perhaps move 01:45:331 (1) to here and add finish.
01:46:017 (2) - Consider moving this to 01:45:845. It's on a red tick, but the drum starts here and it makes the slider feel too late to the music.
01:51:502 (1) - Looks better to me if curved.
http://puu.sh/jpOf02:03:845 (1) - Weird red point again, I prefer if you do a normal curve slider (remove red point).
02:12:759 (2) - Slider ticks sound too loud, consider lowering the volume of it.
02:14:817 (1) - ^
Map looks good to me, everything is suggestion, you don't have to follow them, but I feel they help make the map look/play better.
[
Normal]
- Please use 3 od (Easy use 1, Hard use 5, so more balanced spread).
00:02:302 (5) - Consider silencing the slider tick here, sound very off to the music for me.
00:04:874 (2,3,4) - Consider a diamond shape like 00:03:159 (1,2,4).
http://puu.sh/jpQT Looks a lot better to me, but you'll have to adjust the part afterward if you want to keep spacing consistent.
00:37:445 (3) - I prefer if you do something else other than kick slider, main reason is, your diff is quite difficult (big jump from Easy to Normal) so I recommend getting rid of stuff like this for a little nicer spread.
00:39:845 (2,3,4,5) - Weird pattern to play and seem too difficult for Normal, please simplify this.
00:42:931 (4) - Kick slider consider changing
00:45:674 (4) - ^ completely unexpected, unless you know the song
00:49:102 (4) - ^
00:59:388 (5) - ^
01:03:502 (1) - I really don't like h ow whistle sound on slider body, I recommend removing it.
01:04:874 (2) - ^
01:06:245 (1) - ^
01:07:617 (3) - ^
01:09:674 (1) - ^
01:54:245 (3) - Kick slider consider changing
01:56:988 (5) - Don't like whistle on slider body.
02:05:217 (5,6) - These two sliders don't look very symmetrical, perhaps work on them a bit.
02:09:331 (2,3) - Whistle on slider body :/
02:15:502 (1,3) - ^
02:26:645 (3) - Consider finish like the other diff?
I highly recommend changing those kick sliders and 00:39:845 (2,3,4,5). Not nice to see since Easy isn't very difficult. The rest is just suggestions. The second half is quite good, so good job there.
[
Hard]
Your whistle seem quite weird at the beginning, try this (following all suggestion, before saying no)
00:01:102 (4) - Add whistle
00:01:274 (5) - Add whistle
00:01:445 (6) - Remove whistle
00:01:617 (1) - Add whistle at begin, remove from end
00:02:302 (2) - Add whistle at begin
00:03:845 (3,4) - Add whistle to both hit circles
00:04:188 (5) - Remove whistle
00:04:359 (1) - Add whistle to begin
Following guitar make more sense to me
00:16:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider 1/4 repeating slider instead, this look really ugly, because of the approach rate and can be hard to read.
00:33:845 (5) - Understand why you did jump, but I think it look nicer if you keep it to 1.2x distant snap. Looks like a spacing error. If not, use higher distant snapping to make it clear you want to do jump here.
00:40:531 (2,3) - Maybe place them more.. even?
http://puu.sh/jq1800:46:017 (x) - Feel weird not to have a note on the drum here.
00:59:731 (x) - ^
01:40:188 (7,1) - If possible, please move them down so that they do not touch hp bar. Doing this make your diff looks more polish/clean.
01:51:331 (5) - Perhaps jump here? Or stack this at end of (4) and move 01:51:502 (1) further away?
02:02:645 (1) - Same as 01:40:188, move down if possible.
02:24:588 (2,3) - Snap properly to 1.0x (without grid snap), minor spacing error, but it's very noticeable here.
Patterns look pretty good, but the hitsound feel like it needs some work.
[
Insane]
00:43:959 (2) - Perhaps stack this with end of (1) for a jump? Seem better then keeping it to same distant snap.
00:50:302 (2,3) - Consider doing jumps for these slider, it makes the jumps on (4) & (5) nicer to play for me.
01:39:674 (3) - Place this at x:64 y:56 so there is jump on (4)? This part feel weird to play for me, and when I did this, everything seem to flow a lot better.
01:41:388 (4,5,6) - Place like this so everything is 1.6x distant snap?
http://puu.sh/jq7V This pattern doesn't seem to flow smoothly for me and this seems to help.
02:02:131 (5) - Should have a jump here, all the notes that begin on white ticks here had jump 02:00:759 (1,2,3,4), so should do one here as well.
02:21:331 (3) - Stack this on begin of 02:20:302 (4) so there is a jump for 02:21:502 (4)?
02:24:074 (4) - Stack this at end of (3)? Same reason as 00:43:959.
Don't see any real issue, looks good as usual
Slightly worry about difficulty jump from Easy> Normal, but it isn't that bad if the kick sliders are changed.
Starred, good luck on rank.
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But you are right. Fixed
