1. Collab Zone (5 stars, 607 notes)
2. Easy Collab (2,89 stars, 202 notes)
3. Hard (4,87 stars, 382 notes)
4. Normal (4,17 stars, 253 notes)

gonna do some major remapping of all diffs..... these map just suck

Mods

thanks to all those who modded/tested the maps -

CDFA
elly-chan
Fenya
Hinsvar
hitmefast
Kurai - btw: gz on BAT now was still MAT when modding this
Leorda
MathiasXII
Nagisawa
nanda2009
Philippines
SuperMICrophone
Sync
TicClick

1. Use distance snapping most of the time until you have a good grasp on spacing, jumps, and flow.
2. Make sure ALL of the notes fit to the music, no matter what. This is VERY important. Beat placement is a HUGE part of mapping. Make sure it's perfect.
3. Remember that combos are based off the music, not the patterns.
4. If you feel that something is weird and doesn't make much sense, fix it yourself before modders have a chance to point it out. Not only is it tedious for modders to point out the same mistake over and over again, you should know that if you feel that something is weird, then modders will definitely feel that it is weird.

When playing the hard, the spacing was very awkward and inconsistent. It appears that you did use distance snap, but only for a short period of time. Notes like 00:26:311 (4) should not be so close to the previous note -- it should be spaced further away. checked spacing on all notes, should be fixed (check manually, then checked AIMod->nothing found)

00:28:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is really mushed up in the middle and hard to read reworked/rearranged notes so they are better visible -> makes it easier to read

00:31:513 (9) - This doesn't make very much sense -- why does it land on an offbeat? Extend it by one tick and do something about (10). I'd suggest removing the repeat. changed this part, should be better now

01:03:247 (5) - There should be a new combo here, as the transition in the music calls for one done

01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - Overmapping like this is generally frowned upon; however, not all overmapping is frowned upon. If you do overmap (don't consider this until you're more experienced), it should, in every circumstance, make sense and be consistent. i dont see how it is overmapped there, follows the vocals

02:20:935 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This just doesn't make sense, really. Why are there notes on the offbeat? fixed/removed offbeats

Here's a Full Mod for a friend's map. (:

GUIDELINES

1. RED means unrankable.
   
   
2. BLUE means a suggestion that you really should follow for better gameplay.
   
   
3. BLACK means suggestion it's up to you if you follow it.

GENERAL

1. Your hit sounds are quite too loud imo. I'd suggest you turn them down to 70 - 85%.
   
   
2. It would be quite more fun and better if you added more diffs.

NORMAL

1. Overall Difficulty +1
   
   
2. 00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song.
   
   00:23:016 - I suggest you to align this slider and the next note vertically with 4. Here's a Preview.
   
   
3. 00:44:692 - Add one more reverse slider for this note. If you don't agree, I suggest you add a note at 00:45:213.
   
   
4. 00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698.
   
   
5. 01:16:253 - The end of the slider doesn't really come along with the song imo. I suggest you end this slider at 01:16:600.
   
   
6. 01:19:895 - The break should start on this point.
   
   
7. 01:34:981 - No need for a new combo imo for this slider.
   
   
8. 01:50:415 - This spinner should end at 01:53:189.
   
   
9. 02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675.
   
   
10. 02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259
    
    
11. 02:51:282 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455.
    
    
12. 02:52:843 - This spinner should end at 02:54:924. But you can keep this.
    
    
13. 03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241.

HARD

1. 00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song.
   
   
2. 00:29:606 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song, end slider should be at 00:29:779.
   
   
3. 00:32:207 - Add a note on this part.
   
   
4. 00:35:155 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song too, end slider should be at 00:35:328.
   
   
5. 00:41:051 - Try to make a slider that looks like [ (5) ; 00:40:357 ]. This way, it would like a slider bed.
   
   
6. 00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698.
   
   
7. 01:18:334 - Add a note here.
   
   
8. 01:19:895 - The break should start on this point.
   
   
9. 01:33:767 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:34:114.
   
   
10. 01:37:062 - Add a note here.
    
    
11. 01:48:334 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:48:681. So therefore, you're gonna have to remove note [6].
    
    
12. 01:51:455 - This slider should start at 01:51:629.
    
    
13. 02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675.
    
    
14. 02:07:236 - Instead of using this note pattern, try this new pattern.
    
    
15. 02:11:224 - You're missing a new combo here.
    
    
16. 02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259.
    
    
17. 02:51:109 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455.
    
    
18. 03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241.

Very nice map Zurrrr! Hope this gets ranked asap. I'm sorry If my modding sucks, i'm not a BAT, but I hope it's helpful. :3

NORMAL

Overall Difficulty +1 - OD is fine as it is for a normal imo

00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song. done

00:23:016 - I suggest you to align this slider and the next note vertically with 4. Here's a Preview. would require huge rework on following note spacing, plays fine as it is

00:44:692 - Add one more reverse slider for this note. If you don't agree, I suggest you add a note at 00:45:213. doesnt fit in with the overall mapping

00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698. done

01:16:253 - The end of the slider doesn't really come along with the song imo. I suggest you end this slider at 01:16:600. fits the vocals perfectly, wont change

01:19:895 - The break should start on this point. wouldnt change anything?

01:34:981 - No need for a new combo imo for this slider. true, fixed

01:50:415 - This spinner should end at 01:53:189. was at it before, made it longer so i have same break+playtime on both diffs since adding 3hits for the drums after the spinner wouldve been to hard for a normal diff - stays like this

02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675. done

02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259 that would be overmapping since there are no elements in the song that should have a note in this mapstyle

02:51:282 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455. done

02:52:843 - This spinner should end at 02:54:924. But you can keep this. keeping it like this, reason is same as on the spinner @ 01:50:415

03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241. fits the vocals, same spinner is on hard diff->exact same endtime on both diffs, stays like this


HARD

00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song. done

00:29:606 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song, end slider should be at 00:29:779. slider is perfectly right in that place, check song on 25% speed, fits vocals perfectly

00:32:207 - Add a note on this part. tried this already before your mod, awkward to play

00:35:155 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song too, end slider should be at 00:35:328. check on 25%, fits vocals+plays fine

00:41:051 - Try to make a slider that looks like [ (5) ; 00:40:357 ]. This way, it would like a slider bed. did some remodeling (but on (5) instead of (6)), should look better now

00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698. done

01:18:334 - Add a note here. done

01:19:895 - The break should start on this point. see normal

01:33:767 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:34:114. fixed

01:37:062 - Add a note here. plays bad, stays like this

01:48:334 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:48:681. So therefore, you're gonna have to remove note [6]. why should i stretch the slider? fits the vocals perfectly, check on 25%

01:51:455 - This slider should start at 01:51:629. fits vocals, wont change

02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675. done

02:07:236 - Instead of using this note pattern, try this new pattern. nope

02:11:224 - You're missing a new combo here. done

02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259. not gonna happen, chorus end->break starts, simple as that

02:51:109 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455. would fit the vocal, but plays better like this, dont wanna make the spinner to short because of OD

03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241. same as on normal diff derp

1. Open every diff in Notepad, round slider velocity, then save it with CTRL+S and reload in editor if you have it opened (CTRL+L). For example, SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046 on Normal will turn into 1.2, and so on
2. Add some tags: Ten Desires and Futatsuiwa from Sado (original title), Ayumi Nomiya (vocals), Ghost Region (album), REDALiCE itself (arrangement) and maybe Mamizou Futatsuiwa (character name). Make sure that tagset is the same on all the diffs

• 
  Well, I see it has 4+ stars, consider making Easy diff.

1. 00:23:016 (1) - add finish to beginning
2. 00:27:178 (6) - too short to see that it has 2 repeats, not the single one. Remove one repeat or divide it into 2 1/2 sliders
3. 00:28:565 (1) - add finish to its beginning
   In fact, I see bad combo placement. 00:25:791 (3,1) - there should be NCs, on every 1st/2nd big white tick.
   
   One more note: do you hear these claps in music? If you take a closer look, you'll notice that they appear on 2nd and 4th white ticks, so I highly recommend you to add them (make constant rhythm). Ok, now back to modding:
4. 00:32:727 (6) - finish!
5. 00:34:114 (2) - the same as above. I won't mention it, just check finishes!
6. 00:40:010 (3) - end 1/2 earlier? Sounds better for me
7. 00:56:311 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier, when singer starts to drawl the last word. Also, add whistle
8. 01:05:328 (5) - sounds off because it has repeat on blue tick. There's nothing in music at this moment, only before and after
9. 01:07:409 (3) - the same note about 2 repeats. It's kinda short, so you better use something more simple, like 2 sliders or note&slider with 1 repeat. Use it, for example, twice, then use two repeats because player will expect them (since they will appear in similar parts of song)
10. 01:16:253 (6) - I see this and put short note about style: avoid straight lines, don't use them too often. You might want re-do parts like 01:17:120 (1,2,3) and some others after it
11. 01:19:895 — start break here. How to do it? Put cursor on timeline before B in "Break", and you'll see that it changed its shape to double-sided arrow (<—>). Drag it to big white tick and part of break will change its colour to turquoise. To see what it does, play part before it in testmode
12. 01:34:981 (7) - too many repeats lol, btw you lost this good clap at 01:36:022 and 2 more after it
13. 01:38:970 (1,2) - I don't know why, but I don't like it, maybe because of visual disbalance
14. 01:48:334 (2) - should be ended 1/2 earlier
15. 02:04:288 (1) - start 1/2 earlier and add whistle (the same reason as with previous spinner)
16. 02:13:305 (5) - the same as with 01:05:328 (5)
17. 02:25:617 (2) - clap sounds bad, better remove it
18. 02:27:525 (2) - the same thing as with previous break, the only difference is that you should drag it to 02:29:259 (next big white tick)
19. 02:43:132 (2) - 1 grid right, and you get some space between these sliders. Do it to next ones and don't forget to fix spacing between 02:44:519 (3,4)
20. 02:49:721 (6) - move it 1/2 forward and make 1/2 shorter, then make 02:49:201 (5) 1/2 longer. It plays much better!
21. 02:57:178 (3) - remove clap, sounds bad
22. 03:02:727 (3) - finish sounds odd here, remove please
23. 03:08:276 (3) - remove clap. Here's a little explanation why: there are vocals in music at this moment, and clap is too harsh for them. Use it to follow drums and other stuff on background, but better don't try to mix it with vocals
24. 03:19:201 (1) - add section with soft sampleset to its end

1. 00:23:710 (3) - there's nothing on blue tick, better change it
2. 00:31:340 (10,11) - uh-h, I would follow vocals here, not main rhythm
3. 00:35:588 (9) - useless one, better add it on 00:34:374
4. 01:16:253 (4,5,6) - a) too many finishes in a row sound like an usual hitsound spam and b) they don't exist in music & there are no finishes before and after. Please, remove them
5. 01:30:993 (1) - don't start it with clap, use finish
   Also, I remind you to fix all this stuff (spinners, breaks, new combos and clap rhythm) here too
6. 01:34:981 (5,6,7,8,9) - finish spam
7. 01:37:062 — ahh, add a note here, please
8. 01:37:236 (5) - make 1/4 longer
9. 01:38:970 (1) - but make this 1/4 shorter!
10. 01:42:178 (2) - remove it? Not sure, though, since you have them all stacked
11. 01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - I don't hear anything "streamy" in music, so there's no need to overmap
12. 02:10:183 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
13. 02:44:519 (1,3) - ^
14. 02:47:640 (3) - ^
15. 02:51:109 (1) - start it 1/1 later, pwease
16. 02:55:270 (1) - add whistle
17. 03:11:224 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
18. Move 03:15:559 (2) 1/2 later and add a note on 03:15:559
19. 03:17:814 (1,1) - boring, make something similar to what you made before on these moments

General

Open every diff in Notepad, round slider velocity, then save it with CTRL+S and reload in editor if you have it opened (CTRL+L). For example, SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046 on Normal will turn into 1.2, and so on done
Add some tags: Ten Desires and Futatsuiwa from Sado (original title), Ayumi Nomiya (vocals), Ghost Region (album), REDALiCE itself (arrangement) and maybe Mamizou Futatsuiwa (character name). Make sure that tagset is the same on all the diffs done


Normal

Well, I see it has 4+ stars, consider making Easy diff. easy diff is already on the way
00:23:016 (1) - add finish to beginning done
00:27:178 (6) - too short to see that it has 2 repeats, not the single one. Remove one repeat or divide it into 2 1/2 sliders you can see it from next notes placement, dont see a reason to change
00:28:565 (1) - add finish to its beginning done
In fact, I see bad combo placement. 00:25:791 (3,1) - there should be NCs, on every 1st/2nd big white tick.

One more note: do you hear these claps in music? If you take a closer look, you'll notice that they appear on 2nd and 4th white ticks, so I highly recommend you to add them (make constant rhythm). Ok, now back to modding:
00:32:727 (6) - finish! done
00:34:114 (2) - the same as above. I won't mention it, just check finishes!
00:40:010 (3) - end 1/2 earlier? Sounds better for me follows vocals and plays well imo
00:56:311 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier, when singer starts to drawl the last word. Also, add whistle done
01:05:328 (5) - sounds off because it has repeat on blue tick. There's nothing in music at this moment, only before and after done
01:07:409 (3) - the same note about 2 repeats. It's kinda short, so you better use something more simple, like 2 sliders or note&slider with 1 repeat. Use it, for example, twice, then use two repeats because player will expect them (since they will appear in similar parts of song) follows vocal, difficulty of it is just about right for a normal i think
01:16:253 (6) - I see this and put short note about style: avoid straight lines, don't use them too often. You might want re-do parts like 01:17:120 (1,2,3) and some others after it Oo i thjink straight+bend sliders are pretty balanced overall, dont actually see a reason to change
01:19:895 — start break here. How to do it? Put cursor on timeline before B in "Break", and you'll see that it changed its shape to double-sided arrow (<—>). Drag it to big white tick and part of break will change its colour to turquoise. To see what it does, play part before it in testmode done
01:34:981 (7) - too many repeats lol, btw you lost this good clap at 01:36:022 and 2 more after it fits the vocals
01:38:970 (1,2) - I don't know why, but I don't like it, maybe because of visual disbalance done/remade sliders
01:48:334 (2) - should be ended 1/2 earlier dont see why, fits the vocals
02:04:288 (1) - start 1/2 earlier and add whistle (the same reason as with previous spinner) done/no whistle
02:13:305 (5) - the same as with 01:05:328 (5) done
02:25:617 (2) - clap sounds bad, better remove it done
02:27:525 (2) - the same thing as with previous break, the only difference is that you should drag it to 02:29:259 (next big white tick) done/but on next white instead of big white
02:43:132 (2) - 1 grid right, and you get some space between these sliders. Do it to next ones and don't forget to fix spacing between 02:44:519 (3,4) done
02:49:721 (6) - move it 1/2 forward and make 1/2 shorter, then make 02:49:201 (5) 1/2 longer. It plays much better! done
02:57:178 (3) - remove clap, sounds bad done
03:02:727 (3) - finish sounds odd here, remove please done
03:08:276 (3) - remove clap. Here's a little explanation why: there are vocals in music at this moment, and clap is too harsh for them. Use it to follow drums and other stuff on background, but better don't try to mix it with vocals done
03:19:201 (1) - add section with soft sampleset to its end done


Hard
Ok, I explained most of the stuff in previous mod, so I hope you don't heed extra wall of text, eh?

00:23:710 (3) - there's nothing on blue tick, better change it exactly, there is nothing Oo maybe you move the slider by accident? it starts on red tick not blue
00:31:340 (10,11) - uh-h, I would follow vocals here, not main rhythm remapped/changed the part
00:35:588 (9) - useless one, better add it on 00:34:374 would make no sense at 00:34:374 and plays fine as it is imo
01:16:253 (4,5,6) - a) too many finishes in a row sound like an usual hitsound spam and b) they don't exist in music & there are no finishes before and after. Please, remove them done
01:30:993 (1) - don't start it with clap, use finish done
Also, I remind you to fix all this stuff (spinners, breaks, new combos and clap rhythm) here too
01:34:981 (5,6,7,8,9) - finish spam done
01:37:062 — ahh, add a note here, please had one before, feels awkward to play imo thus removed
01:37:236 (5) - make 1/4 longer dont see a reason for that, follows vocal
01:38:970 (1) - but make this 1/4 shorter!^
01:42:178 (2) - remove it? Not sure, though, since you have them all stacked plays well imo
01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - I don't hear anything "streamy" in music, so there's no need to overmap vibrato in voice shouldnt be mapped?
02:10:183 (2,3,4) - remove finishes done
02:44:519 (1,3) - ^ done
02:47:640 (3) - ^ done
02:51:109 (1) - start it 1/1 later, pwease done
02:55:270 (1) - add whistle if i could i would kill the whistle sound... i mean it, thats just how much i hate it -> no
03:11:224 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
Move 03:15:559 (2) 1/2 later and add a note on 03:15:559 done
03:17:814 (1,1) - boring, make something similar to what you made before on these moments huh did that because songs ends there->anticlimatic

1. Add the names of all the mappers who have collaborated for this map into the tags please.

1. I don't really understand the difficulty's name. I mean this difficulty is actually a normal, not a hard. Besides the "Insanely" is confusing (because the hardest difficulties are mainly called "Insane"). Rename it into "Normal collab" ? because you already have a Normal which is harder than this one, so for the sake of consistency throughout the difficulty names, you should rename your current normal as "Hard", your current Hard as "Insane" and your current insane as "Extra" or "Expert").
2. The approach rate is low regarding the pace of the song, that makes the map boring actually. You should consider increasing it by 2, It won't make it harder (on the contrary it would make it easier to read) and that'd fit the pace of the song better.
3. Even if it is the easiest difficulty, you're not forced to put all the difficulty settings to 0 (In my opinion 0 is senseless). I would increase the HP drain rate and the overall difficulty to 2.
4. Zurrrr's parts :
   1. 00:27:525 (7) - There is nothing in the music which justify this slider to end at 00:27:872. It sounds pretty bad. Reduce it by 1/2 to be in the music's rhythm please ?
   2. 00:32:727 (3) - That'd be better to end the slider on the beginning of the claps. Reduce it by 1/2 then ?
   3. 00:38:276 (2) - Same as before, there is nothing in the music a the spot where this slder ends. You need to follow something consistent, and the better here would be the vocals, so reduce this slider by 1/2 ?
   4. 00:43:825 (1) - Same thing again, extend it by 1/2 to end it on the drum.
   5. 00:43:825 (1,2) - It would be more logical to have the new combo on (2) instead of (1).
   6. 00:58:045 - It looks awkward to have nothing after the spinner, maybe add a circle at 00:58:392 ? (or do something else, but you need to have something!).
   7. 02:55:270 (1) - Don't put it at the center of the screen because it is hidden by the spinner's hitburst which make this circle harder to read.
   8. 03:03:941 (1) - I think you want to follow the vocals here, riht? So extend it by 1/4.
   9. 03:06:195 (3,4) - Make them a slider, it would be more obvious to read for novices in my opinion.
   10. 03:17:293 (4,5) - ^
   11. 03:18:681 (2,3) - ^
5. Philippines's parts :
   
   1. 01:39:317 (1) - Don't put it's track under the previous slider's track, that's harder to read for beginners and that's ugly. :/
   2. 02:05:675 - It looks awkward to have nothing after the spinner, maybe add a circle at 00:58:392 ? (or do something else, but you need to have something!).
   3. 02:08:103 (4,1,2) - Don't put these notes underneath the previous pattern, they are hidden by the hitbursts so it's hard to read.
   4. 02:15:386 (1,2,3,4) - Look at this pattern in testplay mode. See, they overlaps 02:15:039 (4) because of the stacking. That's why you should put them a bit farther to have a better spacing ad avoid that overlap.
   5. 02:27:351 (1,2) - Make them a slider, it would be more obvious to read for novices in my opinion.
   6. 02:42:437 (2) - Don't stack them please. That's awkard and very hard to read (it even surprised me).
   7. 02:42:437 (2) - This slider should end on a 1/3 tick (02:42:669). But it would make it too short, so I suggest you to change (1) and (2) into a sngle slider.
   8. 02:43:131 (1) - This slider should end at 02:43:999.
   9. 02:44:518 (2) - This slider should end at 02:45:386.
   10. 02:45:906 (1) - This slider should end at 02:46:426.
   11. 02:47:987 (3,4) - Make them a slider, it would be more obvious to read for novices in my opinion.

1. 00:22:496 (1) - I don't see the need to have a new combo on this note, this slider is a part of the previous pattern so remove the new combo mark.
2. 00:28:045 (1) - ^
3. 00:31:340 (4,5) - Not that this pattern sounds bad, but it could sound much better like this I think :
   
   SPOILER

   
   
4. 00:38:276 (3) - A new combo should be on this note and not on 00:39:143 (1). 00:39:663 (2) needs a new combo too.
5. 00:43:652 (7) - New combo too.
6. 01:01:687 - As at the previous identic pattern there was something here, for consistency you need something here. I would suggest to add a reverse at 01:01:166 (3). (Don't forget to fix the spacing after changes).
7. 01:01:860 (4) - Because of the frantic change in the tons of the vocalist voice, you sould add a new combo on this circle.
8. 01:10:877 (5) - Reduce i by 1/2 ? Sounds better according to me.
9. 01:44:519 (5) - You need a new combo here.
10. 02:13:999 (1) - Stack it correctly with (3) please.
11. 03:03:941 (6) - You really need a new combo here!

1. 00:40:010 (2,3,4) - This triple sounds out of place.. It looks like you only add it for increasing difficulty, right ? Remove (3) please.
2. 01:05:241 (2) - Same for this one,it is not justified by anything. just remove it.
3. 01:40:704 (5,6,7,8) - 4-circles streams rarely fit in a map, and in this case it doesn't fit. Do it like this :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. AR8 for a hard is very high. Most of the players who play this knid of difficulty are still not able to read it. Decrease it to AR7 please.
2. 00:16:600 - Maybe add a note here, it sounds well imo.
3. 00:18:161 (6) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick ? It follows nothing in the music and that's why it sounds awkward. End it on the drum instead (00:18:334).
4. 00:18:507 (7) - Same thing here, end it at 00:18:681.
5. 00:19:374 - Add a note ? :3
6. 00:21:976 (4) - There is no sound at the spot where this slider ends. It would be much better to end it at 00:22:149.
7. 00:24:403 (4) - Remove the clap at the end, it is out of place actually.
8. 00:25:964 (3) - Don't put it under (4)'s track and end. It hides this circle and it isn't really aesthetic. Maybe do something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:29:259 (6,7) - Same as before about the sliders ending on blue ticks.
10. 00:35:155 (6) - ^
11. 00:36:542 (1) - The spacing is wrong here. The slider is too close from the ^previous note which may be confusing for the player who mays hit it earlier than he should.
12. 00:38:450 (7) - Don't put it so close from the slider, that doesn't look good. I know it is only 2~3 grids, but something like this looks nicer :
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:39:663 (1) - Same as before.
14. 00:42:265 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't stay at the same area of the screen to long, that's boring and kinda annoying (because there are too much hitburst which decrease the readability).
15. 00:57:698 (1) - Don't put it at the center of the screen, because it is hidden by the spinner's hitburst and because its approach circle merges with the spinner's one. That confusing.
16. 01:00:472 (6) - As a new phrase starts here, this slider should have a new combo.
17. 01:03:247 (1,3) - Same as before about the sliders ending on blue ticks.
18. 01:06:021 (3) - New combo for the same reason as before.
19. 01:11:570 (6) - ^
20. 01:34:288 (1) -
    1. There is no need to have a new combo on this slider.
    2. I don't like how this slider plays. I mean it's end feels too late even if it fiits the music. That's why I would reduce it by 1/2 and add a circle at the spot where it ended.
21. 01:37:062 - Add a note ? :3
22. 01:38:970 (1) - Same as befooore ~
23. 01:44:866 (3) - hm, I guess you didn't made this slider correctly, it shouldn't end on this blue tick. So extend it by 1/4 or reduce it by 1/4. Both work well.
24. 01:48:334 (5,6) - (5) shouldn't end on a blue tick here (for the same reason as before. I suggest you to change this pattern for this :
    
    SPOILER

    
25. 02:05:675 (1) - Same thing as 00:57:698 (1).
26. 02:08:450 (1,3) - Same thing as before.
27. 02:11:224 (1,3) - ^
28. 02:41:744 (1) - End it 1/4 earlier otherwise it doesn't follow the music.
29. 02:47:987 (5) - ^
30. 02:48:681 (6) - As you are following the vacals in this part, this slider should end at 02:49:201.
31. 02:58:392 (1,3) - Same as before.

1. PNGs with names have too much empty transparent space, I highly recommend you to cut them and do full-submit. That's the first thing.
   The second one is that names don't look good and well-noticeable. You used black simple font without any border and placed names at the corners. Take a look at other collabs and try to make something similar (speaking of names, ofc); for example, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32602

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  Zurrrr
  

1. 00:11:398 (1) - it's hard to catch because it starts on red tick before "real" beginning of music, so I recommend you to use a single note instead
2. 00:24:056 (2) - why don't you add clap on beginning and 2nd repeat?
3. 00:25:791 (4) - new combo
4. 00:28:565 (1) - finish to beginning
5. 00:34:114 (1) - same
6. 00:42:091 (4) - forgot clap?
7. 00:42:438 (5) - also, new combo
8. 00:45:213 (1) - add finish and remove that break delay after it, it's pointless here
9. 01:08:796 (1) - add finish
10. 01:18:507 (3) - add finish because of last part of refrain. If you had note on 01:19:895, you would add finish there instead of this slider, but you need something.. uh, "finishing"?
11. 02:55:617 (2) - add new combo, please. I think it will be suitable here
12. 02:57:178 (4,5) - uh, so you jump to red ticks for a while
13. 02:59:779 (3) - maybe new combo?
14. 03:06:715 (1) - add finish to beginning
15. 03:12:265 (1) - ^
16. 03:16:426 (3) - ^
17. 03:17:293 (1) - it's more logical to put NC on previos slider. You might also want to remove it from this one and from 03:18:681 (1)

1. 01:47:640 (1) - add finish
2. 01:50:415 (5) - add nc
3. 01:53:189 (1) - add finish and remove this break delay, it makes no sense
4. 02:02:900 (1) - add finish
5. 02:06:022 (2) - lost clap
6. 02:11:224 (1) - add finish to beginning
7. 02:16:773 (1) - ^
8. 02:19:548 (1) - add clap to the end
9. 02:22:322 (1) - add finish to beginning
10. 02:23:363 (2,4) - you need claps here, I think
11. 02:26:484 (3) - add finish to beginning?
12. 02:41:744 (1) - add finish to beginning
13. 02:43:131 (1,2) - reduce spacing between these two sliders to 2x (as between (1,1))
14. 02:45:906 (1) - you don't need finish here
15. 02:47:987 (3) - might be really confusing for newbies, way too small and short for usual slider
16. 02:47:293 (2) - add new combo
17. 02:49:028 (2) - it sounds off. Either move 1/2 forward or start it instead of previous note

1. 00:11:398 (1,2,3) - I advice you to remove these notes. Player doesn't know yet song's rhythm, moreover, these 1/2 notes start from 'weak' beat (red tick), so people will easily miss here
2. 00:17:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's a) unsymmetrical and b) too fast for normal
3. 00:18:854 (1,2) - add claps to their ends
4. 00:20:588 (2,4) - add claps
5. 00:23:016 (1) - add finish to beginning
6. 00:27:178 (5) - it's short (1/2), so it's not easy to read that it has two repeats instead of the only one, as usual. Think about it
7. 00:28:045 (6) - add claps?
8. 00:32:727 (7,2) - I would add new combo to these and remove it from 00:33:594 (1) to follow music better
9. 00:36:888 (7) - the same. Here are few lines why you should do it:
   .
   If you take a look at timeline, you will see that metronome shows how music is divided into parts. Every new line of vocals starts from big white tick, kiai also starts from big white ticks. So, we need to mark every new part of music with new combos, that's how they should be used! You might want to recheck your new combo placement according to these words.
   
   Sometimes, when there's a slider's end on big white tick (or slider goes past it), you need to add new combo after slider ends, but it will be better if you re-map it a little and add new note/slider/whatever on big tick, so player can actually "play" it by hitting a note. I hope you understand what I'm talking about, lol
   
   Ok, back to modding.
   .
10. 00:45:213 (9) - add new combo and remove break delay after it.
    .
    Wny remove? Because it's often being used "instead of" note(s), for example, when music is too weak for normal playing, but you feel that it's not the time for a break yet. Look at http://osu.ppy.sh/b/103566 (any diff, break after 2nd kiai) to understand it better.
    
    In your case, last note is placed on big white tick and this part of music is fully completed, so there's no use to delay break.
    .
11. 01:01:860 (1,2,3,4) - too noisy for music, either lower volume down here (by 20 or 30 percent, for example) or remove claps
12. 01:04:808 (3) - remove finish, it doesn't fit music
13. 01:07:409 (3) - it fits here, though
14. 01:12:958 (3,4,5,6) - same about claps
15. 01:18:507 (4,5,6,7) - these notes are the same, so I don't see reason to stack last two
16. 01:31:687 (2) - remove this clap, it sounds off because it doesn't follow previous rhythm (2nd and 4th white ticks). Also, claps often sound bad and harsh with whistles or vocal parts, keep it in mind
17. 01:34:981 (7) - if you really wanna keep it, start it 1/2 later where it should actually be started because of vocals
18. 01:37:236 (3) - remove clap
19. 01:40:704 (3) - uh, it looks almost the same as (1). Add new combo to make it more noticeable
20. 01:42:091 (1) - add finish
21. 01:47:120 (4) - add claps
22. 01:48:334 (2) - it should be ended 1/2 earlier according to vocals
23. 01:50:415 (1) - add finish and remove that break delay, now you know why you need to remove it
24. 02:09:837 (3,4,5,6) - these claps
25. 02:15:386 (3) - add finish to beginning
26. 02:18:854 (5) - remove finish here, too sudden and unfitting
27. 02:20:935 (3,4,5,6)
28. 02:26:484 (4,5,6,7) - these notes are the same, so I don't see reason to stack last two. Also, see that I copy-pasted this line from above and changed only time. Got it? Please, make copy-paste less noticeable
29. 02:47:987 (3) - make it 1/2 shorter?
30. 02:59:779 (3) - add finish (these claps again)
31. 03:03:247 (5) - remove clap from beginning
32. 03:05:328 (3) - add finish
33. 03:06:715 (1) - and add it here
34. 03:08:276 (3) - unexpected 1/2 on Normal, consider re-mapping it a little
35. 03:10:877 (3) - add finish
36. 03:13:825 (5) - remove finish (doesn't fit)

1. 00:23:363 (2) - add clap to beginning? These claps from music don't disappear, they still sound in track
2. 00:24:403 (4) - things like this one look better when they're placed in center
3. 00:28:912 (4,7) - add claps, if you wanna follow that rhythm; don't add, if you don't want. I won't mention them anymore
4. 00:29:952 (8) - remove this clap from the end
5. 00:32:293 (4) - hm, this note on blue tick is readable enough for me, but I can't speak for others. Anyway, there's a slider introducing it, so I think it's okay
6. 00:34:114 (1) - add finish
7. 00:39:663 (1) - ^
8. 00:43:652 (7) - I advice you to put it somewhere else, not on previous slider's position
9. 00:45:213 (4) - remove break delay
10. 01:08:796 (1) - asdfsadgkgkkhbseaefkjul add finish according to new part of music. I wonder why I haven't written it before, lol
11. 01:32:380 (4) - again, better avoid these moments when you need to move back, using the same way, in a short period of time. It's kinda.. unexpected
12. 01:35:675 (7) - remove finish? I'm not sure here, though
13. 01:39:317 (2,3) - no. Map it to blue ticks, as you did it before somewhere on 00:32:293
14. 01:53:189 (4) - remove break delay
15. 02:11:484 (2) - short repeating sliders must be easy to catch. Read it as "start them from white or (sometimes) red ticks"
16. 02:16:773 (1) - finish
17. 02:18:334 (3,4,5) - I see this piece of map again and again and again and again. I think there's something wrong, huh?
18. 02:22:323 (1) - remove finish from its end
19. 02:47:987 (5) - finish it 1/4 earlier
20. 02:53:074 (2) - no, it should be on blue tick, there's no 1/3. The same goes for the 02:53:767 (5,8)
21. 02:53:536 (4) - better remove clap from it and add new combo
22. 02:54:230 (7) - same
23. 02:54:924 (10) - ^
24. 02:55:617 (1) - lol add finish
25. 03:06:715 (1) - add finish here too
26. 03:16:426 (1,2,3,4,5) - I saw it before many times on this diff. Uh. Okay, okay, let it be if you like how does it look
27. 03:17:814 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - better unstack it, looks poor for me

1. SliderMultiplier:1.80000000596046

   Open it in Notepad, change to 1.8, then save and press CTRL+L in editor.
   
   SuperMIC
   
   1. 00:14:519 (11) - what if you delete it? Sudden stack doesn't work well with streams, also this note doesn't exist in music
   2. 00:21:629 (7) - finish
   3. 00:57:698 (1) - ^
   4. 01:00:125 (7) - the same about stack in stream, even if it's 1/2, not 1/4
   5. 01:01:860 (1,2,3,4) - ah, this is a little bit unusual, but definitely one of the best thoughts. Keep these finishes, please!
   6. 01:03:247 (1) - lol, you forgot normal finish after all
   7. 01:08:450 (1) - remove nc
   8. 01:42:091 (1) - add finish
   9. 01:44:606 (7) - you better remove it here and add to 01:44:432
   10. 01:47:640 (1) - finish. Check all the places where it should be, ok? I won't write about it
   11. 01:51:802 (8) - add new combo here, not on next note
   12. 01:53:189 (6) - remove break delay
   13. 02:19:374 (9) - stacked again. If you wanna keep it, why don't you place it somewhere around?
   14. 02:25:530 (2,3,4) - might be a little uncomfortable to play because you don't know when to release or hit keys.
       .
       You might fix it if you start 02:25:530 (2) and 02:26:224 (5) from white tick, not from blue one.
       .
   15. 02:27:872 (1) - remove delay safasdgarawevr or start it from 02:29:259
   16. 02:53:074 (2) - snap to 1/4, not 1/3
   17. 02:57:178 (2) - remove clap from its beginning, doesn't sound well with vocals
   Zurrrr
   
   1. 00:28:565 (1) - add finish
   2. 00:28:999 (5) - better start it 1/4 before to follow actual vocals
   3. 00:31:860 (5,6,7,8) - no. Don't use visually constant spacing here, they're not the same!
   4. 00:32:727 (9) - add new combo because of speed change
   5. 00:34:114 (1) - add finish
   6. 00:35:502 (8) - nc because of speed change, it will make slider more readable
   7. 00:41:051 (9) - ^
   8. 00:45:213 (4) - remove break delay after it
   9. 01:17:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no again for that spacing
   10. 01:32:380 (8) - speed change, guess what do you need to add
   11. 01:33:594 (2,3) - lol. If you gotta keep it, add new combo to slider for better visibility
   12. 01:37:929 (6) - speed change
   13. 01:39:317 (3,4,5,6) - uh, why don't you map it to blue ticks as you did befire?
   14. 01:40:704 (8) - ok I won't remind about it anymore
   15. 02:14:519 (3,4) - no, and you know why. You can make jumps as much retarded as you want, but don't deceive player using incorrect spacing
   16. 03:10:877 (1,2,3) - looks.. ugly for me, make another shape please
   17. 03:15:559 (3,4) - spacing!
   18. 03:19:548 (3) - 2 grid up to place it where previous similar note was (lol, grid mod)
   19. 03:20:241 (2) - I dunno, maybe remove clap?
   20. 03:20:328 (1) - you made it shorter on all other diffs, maybe do it again?