1. Collab Zone (5 stars, 607 notes)
2. Easy Collab (2,89 stars, 202 notes)
3. Hard (4,87 stars, 382 notes)
4. Normal (4,17 stars, 253 notes)

gonna do some major remapping of all diffs..... these map just suck

Mods

thanks to all those who modded/tested the maps -

CDFA
elly-chan
Fenya
Hinsvar
hitmefast
Kurai - btw: gz on BAT now was still MAT when modding this
Leorda
MathiasXII
Nagisawa
nanda2009
Philippines
SuperMICrophone
Sync
TicClick

1. Use distance snapping most of the time until you have a good grasp on spacing, jumps, and flow.
2. Make sure ALL of the notes fit to the music, no matter what. This is VERY important. Beat placement is a HUGE part of mapping. Make sure it's perfect.
3. Remember that combos are based off the music, not the patterns.
4. If you feel that something is weird and doesn't make much sense, fix it yourself before modders have a chance to point it out. Not only is it tedious for modders to point out the same mistake over and over again, you should know that if you feel that something is weird, then modders will definitely feel that it is weird.

When playing the hard, the spacing was very awkward and inconsistent. It appears that you did use distance snap, but only for a short period of time. Notes like 00:26:311 (4) should not be so close to the previous note -- it should be spaced further away. checked spacing on all notes, should be fixed (check manually, then checked AIMod->nothing found)

00:28:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is really mushed up in the middle and hard to read reworked/rearranged notes so they are better visible -> makes it easier to read

00:31:513 (9) - This doesn't make very much sense -- why does it land on an offbeat? Extend it by one tick and do something about (10). I'd suggest removing the repeat. changed this part, should be better now

01:03:247 (5) - There should be a new combo here, as the transition in the music calls for one done

01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - Overmapping like this is generally frowned upon; however, not all overmapping is frowned upon. If you do overmap (don't consider this until you're more experienced), it should, in every circumstance, make sense and be consistent. i dont see how it is overmapped there, follows the vocals

02:20:935 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This just doesn't make sense, really. Why are there notes on the offbeat? fixed/removed offbeats

Here's a Full Mod for a friend's map. (:

GUIDELINES

1. RED means unrankable.
   
   
2. BLUE means a suggestion that you really should follow for better gameplay.
   
   
3. BLACK means suggestion it's up to you if you follow it.

GENERAL

1. Your hit sounds are quite too loud imo. I'd suggest you turn them down to 70 - 85%.
   
   
2. It would be quite more fun and better if you added more diffs.

NORMAL

1. Overall Difficulty +1
   
   
2. 00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song.
   
   00:23:016 - I suggest you to align this slider and the next note vertically with 4. Here's a Preview.
   
   
3. 00:44:692 - Add one more reverse slider for this note. If you don't agree, I suggest you add a note at 00:45:213.
   
   
4. 00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698.
   
   
5. 01:16:253 - The end of the slider doesn't really come along with the song imo. I suggest you end this slider at 01:16:600.
   
   
6. 01:19:895 - The break should start on this point.
   
   
7. 01:34:981 - No need for a new combo imo for this slider.
   
   
8. 01:50:415 - This spinner should end at 01:53:189.
   
   
9. 02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675.
   
   
10. 02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259
    
    
11. 02:51:282 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455.
    
    
12. 02:52:843 - This spinner should end at 02:54:924. But you can keep this.
    
    
13. 03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241.

HARD

1. 00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song.
   
   
2. 00:29:606 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song, end slider should be at 00:29:779.
   
   
3. 00:32:207 - Add a note on this part.
   
   
4. 00:35:155 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song too, end slider should be at 00:35:328.
   
   
5. 00:41:051 - Try to make a slider that looks like [ (5) ; 00:40:357 ]. This way, it would like a slider bed.
   
   
6. 00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698.
   
   
7. 01:18:334 - Add a note here.
   
   
8. 01:19:895 - The break should start on this point.
   
   
9. 01:33:767 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:34:114.
   
   
10. 01:37:062 - Add a note here.
    
    
11. 01:48:334 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:48:681. So therefore, you're gonna have to remove note [6].
    
    
12. 01:51:455 - This slider should start at 01:51:629.
    
    
13. 02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675.
    
    
14. 02:07:236 - Instead of using this note pattern, try this new pattern.
    
    
15. 02:11:224 - You're missing a new combo here.
    
    
16. 02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259.
    
    
17. 02:51:109 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455.
    
    
18. 03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241.

Very nice map Zurrrr! Hope this gets ranked asap. I'm sorry If my modding sucks, i'm not a BAT, but I hope it's helpful. :3

NORMAL

Overall Difficulty +1 - OD is fine as it is for a normal imo

00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song. done

00:23:016 - I suggest you to align this slider and the next note vertically with 4. Here's a Preview. would require huge rework on following note spacing, plays fine as it is

00:44:692 - Add one more reverse slider for this note. If you don't agree, I suggest you add a note at 00:45:213. doesnt fit in with the overall mapping

00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698. done

01:16:253 - The end of the slider doesn't really come along with the song imo. I suggest you end this slider at 01:16:600. fits the vocals perfectly, wont change

01:19:895 - The break should start on this point. wouldnt change anything?

01:34:981 - No need for a new combo imo for this slider. true, fixed

01:50:415 - This spinner should end at 01:53:189. was at it before, made it longer so i have same break+playtime on both diffs since adding 3hits for the drums after the spinner wouldve been to hard for a normal diff - stays like this

02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675. done

02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259 that would be overmapping since there are no elements in the song that should have a note in this mapstyle

02:51:282 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455. done

02:52:843 - This spinner should end at 02:54:924. But you can keep this. keeping it like this, reason is same as on the spinner @ 01:50:415

03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241. fits the vocals, same spinner is on hard diff->exact same endtime on both diffs, stays like this


HARD

00:23:016 - New combo for this because this is the main starting part of the song. done

00:29:606 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song, end slider should be at 00:29:779. slider is perfectly right in that place, check song on 25% speed, fits vocals perfectly

00:32:207 - Add a note on this part. tried this already before your mod, awkward to play

00:35:155 - This doesn't really make any sense on the song too, end slider should be at 00:35:328. check on 25%, fits vocals+plays fine

00:41:051 - Try to make a slider that looks like [ (5) ; 00:40:357 ]. This way, it would like a slider bed. did some remodeling (but on (5) instead of (6)), should look better now

00:56:311 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 00:57:698. done

01:18:334 - Add a note here. done

01:19:895 - The break should start on this point. see normal

01:33:767 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:34:114. fixed

01:37:062 - Add a note here. plays bad, stays like this

01:48:334 - Stretch this slider 'til 01:48:681. So therefore, you're gonna have to remove note [6]. why should i stretch the slider? fits the vocals perfectly, check on 25%

01:51:455 - This slider should start at 01:51:629. fits vocals, wont change

02:04:288 - Turn off Kiai on this section. Move Kiai at 02:05:675. done

02:07:236 - Instead of using this note pattern, try this new pattern. nope

02:11:224 - You're missing a new combo here. done

02:27:525 - The break on this part kinda bothers me, this break should start basically at 02:29:259. You better add some notes on 02:27:525 - 02:29:259. not gonna happen, chorus end->break starts, simple as that

02:51:109 - This spinner should start at 02:51:455. would fit the vocal, but plays better like this, dont wanna make the spinner to short because of OD

03:19:201 - The ending of this spinner kind of bothers me, I don't know where the ending you be placed but I suggest you just end this slider at 03:20:241. same as on normal diff derp

1. Open every diff in Notepad, round slider velocity, then save it with CTRL+S and reload in editor if you have it opened (CTRL+L). For example, SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046 on Normal will turn into 1.2, and so on
2. Add some tags: Ten Desires and Futatsuiwa from Sado (original title), Ayumi Nomiya (vocals), Ghost Region (album), REDALiCE itself (arrangement) and maybe Mamizou Futatsuiwa (character name). Make sure that tagset is the same on all the diffs

• 
  Well, I see it has 4+ stars, consider making Easy diff.

1. 00:23:016 (1) - add finish to beginning
2. 00:27:178 (6) - too short to see that it has 2 repeats, not the single one. Remove one repeat or divide it into 2 1/2 sliders
3. 00:28:565 (1) - add finish to its beginning
   In fact, I see bad combo placement. 00:25:791 (3,1) - there should be NCs, on every 1st/2nd big white tick.
   
   One more note: do you hear these claps in music? If you take a closer look, you'll notice that they appear on 2nd and 4th white ticks, so I highly recommend you to add them (make constant rhythm). Ok, now back to modding:
4. 00:32:727 (6) - finish!
5. 00:34:114 (2) - the same as above. I won't mention it, just check finishes!
6. 00:40:010 (3) - end 1/2 earlier? Sounds better for me
7. 00:56:311 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier, when singer starts to drawl the last word. Also, add whistle
8. 01:05:328 (5) - sounds off because it has repeat on blue tick. There's nothing in music at this moment, only before and after
9. 01:07:409 (3) - the same note about 2 repeats. It's kinda short, so you better use something more simple, like 2 sliders or note&slider with 1 repeat. Use it, for example, twice, then use two repeats because player will expect them (since they will appear in similar parts of song)
10. 01:16:253 (6) - I see this and put short note about style: avoid straight lines, don't use them too often. You might want re-do parts like 01:17:120 (1,2,3) and some others after it
11. 01:19:895 — start break here. How to do it? Put cursor on timeline before B in "Break", and you'll see that it changed its shape to double-sided arrow (<—>). Drag it to big white tick and part of break will change its colour to turquoise. To see what it does, play part before it in testmode
12. 01:34:981 (7) - too many repeats lol, btw you lost this good clap at 01:36:022 and 2 more after it
13. 01:38:970 (1,2) - I don't know why, but I don't like it, maybe because of visual disbalance
14. 01:48:334 (2) - should be ended 1/2 earlier
15. 02:04:288 (1) - start 1/2 earlier and add whistle (the same reason as with previous spinner)
16. 02:13:305 (5) - the same as with 01:05:328 (5)
17. 02:25:617 (2) - clap sounds bad, better remove it
18. 02:27:525 (2) - the same thing as with previous break, the only difference is that you should drag it to 02:29:259 (next big white tick)
19. 02:43:132 (2) - 1 grid right, and you get some space between these sliders. Do it to next ones and don't forget to fix spacing between 02:44:519 (3,4)
20. 02:49:721 (6) - move it 1/2 forward and make 1/2 shorter, then make 02:49:201 (5) 1/2 longer. It plays much better!
21. 02:57:178 (3) - remove clap, sounds bad
22. 03:02:727 (3) - finish sounds odd here, remove please
23. 03:08:276 (3) - remove clap. Here's a little explanation why: there are vocals in music at this moment, and clap is too harsh for them. Use it to follow drums and other stuff on background, but better don't try to mix it with vocals
24. 03:19:201 (1) - add section with soft sampleset to its end

1. 00:23:710 (3) - there's nothing on blue tick, better change it
2. 00:31:340 (10,11) - uh-h, I would follow vocals here, not main rhythm
3. 00:35:588 (9) - useless one, better add it on 00:34:374
4. 01:16:253 (4,5,6) - a) too many finishes in a row sound like an usual hitsound spam and b) they don't exist in music & there are no finishes before and after. Please, remove them
5. 01:30:993 (1) - don't start it with clap, use finish
   Also, I remind you to fix all this stuff (spinners, breaks, new combos and clap rhythm) here too
6. 01:34:981 (5,6,7,8,9) - finish spam
7. 01:37:062 — ahh, add a note here, please
8. 01:37:236 (5) - make 1/4 longer
9. 01:38:970 (1) - but make this 1/4 shorter!
10. 01:42:178 (2) - remove it? Not sure, though, since you have them all stacked
11. 01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - I don't hear anything "streamy" in music, so there's no need to overmap
12. 02:10:183 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
13. 02:44:519 (1,3) - ^
14. 02:47:640 (3) - ^
15. 02:51:109 (1) - start it 1/1 later, pwease
16. 02:55:270 (1) - add whistle
17. 03:11:224 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
18. Move 03:15:559 (2) 1/2 later and add a note on 03:15:559
19. 03:17:814 (1,1) - boring, make something similar to what you made before on these moments

General

Open every diff in Notepad, round slider velocity, then save it with CTRL+S and reload in editor if you have it opened (CTRL+L). For example, SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046 on Normal will turn into 1.2, and so on done
Add some tags: Ten Desires and Futatsuiwa from Sado (original title), Ayumi Nomiya (vocals), Ghost Region (album), REDALiCE itself (arrangement) and maybe Mamizou Futatsuiwa (character name). Make sure that tagset is the same on all the diffs done


Normal

Well, I see it has 4+ stars, consider making Easy diff. easy diff is already on the way
00:23:016 (1) - add finish to beginning done
00:27:178 (6) - too short to see that it has 2 repeats, not the single one. Remove one repeat or divide it into 2 1/2 sliders you can see it from next notes placement, dont see a reason to change
00:28:565 (1) - add finish to its beginning done
In fact, I see bad combo placement. 00:25:791 (3,1) - there should be NCs, on every 1st/2nd big white tick.

One more note: do you hear these claps in music? If you take a closer look, you'll notice that they appear on 2nd and 4th white ticks, so I highly recommend you to add them (make constant rhythm). Ok, now back to modding:
00:32:727 (6) - finish! done
00:34:114 (2) - the same as above. I won't mention it, just check finishes!
00:40:010 (3) - end 1/2 earlier? Sounds better for me follows vocals and plays well imo
00:56:311 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier, when singer starts to drawl the last word. Also, add whistle done
01:05:328 (5) - sounds off because it has repeat on blue tick. There's nothing in music at this moment, only before and after done
01:07:409 (3) - the same note about 2 repeats. It's kinda short, so you better use something more simple, like 2 sliders or note&slider with 1 repeat. Use it, for example, twice, then use two repeats because player will expect them (since they will appear in similar parts of song) follows vocal, difficulty of it is just about right for a normal i think
01:16:253 (6) - I see this and put short note about style: avoid straight lines, don't use them too often. You might want re-do parts like 01:17:120 (1,2,3) and some others after it Oo i thjink straight+bend sliders are pretty balanced overall, dont actually see a reason to change
01:19:895 — start break here. How to do it? Put cursor on timeline before B in "Break", and you'll see that it changed its shape to double-sided arrow (<—>). Drag it to big white tick and part of break will change its colour to turquoise. To see what it does, play part before it in testmode done
01:34:981 (7) - too many repeats lol, btw you lost this good clap at 01:36:022 and 2 more after it fits the vocals
01:38:970 (1,2) - I don't know why, but I don't like it, maybe because of visual disbalance done/remade sliders
01:48:334 (2) - should be ended 1/2 earlier dont see why, fits the vocals
02:04:288 (1) - start 1/2 earlier and add whistle (the same reason as with previous spinner) done/no whistle
02:13:305 (5) - the same as with 01:05:328 (5) done
02:25:617 (2) - clap sounds bad, better remove it done
02:27:525 (2) - the same thing as with previous break, the only difference is that you should drag it to 02:29:259 (next big white tick) done/but on next white instead of big white
02:43:132 (2) - 1 grid right, and you get some space between these sliders. Do it to next ones and don't forget to fix spacing between 02:44:519 (3,4) done
02:49:721 (6) - move it 1/2 forward and make 1/2 shorter, then make 02:49:201 (5) 1/2 longer. It plays much better! done
02:57:178 (3) - remove clap, sounds bad done
03:02:727 (3) - finish sounds odd here, remove please done
03:08:276 (3) - remove clap. Here's a little explanation why: there are vocals in music at this moment, and clap is too harsh for them. Use it to follow drums and other stuff on background, but better don't try to mix it with vocals done
03:19:201 (1) - add section with soft sampleset to its end done


Hard
Ok, I explained most of the stuff in previous mod, so I hope you don't heed extra wall of text, eh?

00:23:710 (3) - there's nothing on blue tick, better change it exactly, there is nothing Oo maybe you move the slider by accident? it starts on red tick not blue
00:31:340 (10,11) - uh-h, I would follow vocals here, not main rhythm remapped/changed the part
00:35:588 (9) - useless one, better add it on 00:34:374 would make no sense at 00:34:374 and plays fine as it is imo
01:16:253 (4,5,6) - a) too many finishes in a row sound like an usual hitsound spam and b) they don't exist in music & there are no finishes before and after. Please, remove them done
01:30:993 (1) - don't start it with clap, use finish done
Also, I remind you to fix all this stuff (spinners, breaks, new combos and clap rhythm) here too
01:34:981 (5,6,7,8,9) - finish spam done
01:37:062 — ahh, add a note here, please had one before, feels awkward to play imo thus removed
01:37:236 (5) - make 1/4 longer dont see a reason for that, follows vocal
01:38:970 (1) - but make this 1/4 shorter!^
01:42:178 (2) - remove it? Not sure, though, since you have them all stacked plays well imo
01:48:681 (6,7,8,9) - I don't hear anything "streamy" in music, so there's no need to overmap vibrato in voice shouldnt be mapped?
02:10:183 (2,3,4) - remove finishes done
02:44:519 (1,3) - ^ done
02:47:640 (3) - ^ done
02:51:109 (1) - start it 1/1 later, pwease done
02:55:270 (1) - add whistle if i could i would kill the whistle sound... i mean it, thats just how much i hate it -> no
03:11:224 (2,3,4) - remove finishes
Move 03:15:559 (2) 1/2 later and add a note on 03:15:559 done
03:17:814 (1,1) - boring, make something similar to what you made before on these moments huh did that because songs ends there->anticlimatic