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supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size)

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AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
AstroniX_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月22日 at 8:42:08

Artist: supercell
Title: Kokuhaku (TV Size)
Source: GUILTY CROWN
Tags: ending
BPM: 180
Filesize: 10051kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.82 stars, 193 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 281 notes)
  3. Normal (2.98 stars, 110 notes)
Download: supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first beatmap,please mod it.

song : kokuhaku---guilty crown ED 2
artist : supercell
[progress]
Insane-----Done
Hard-----Done
Normal-----Done

7/23
fixed lyric
add new skin

Waiting for MOD/MAT/BAT....
Waiting for Taiko Mod~[/color]

RESURRECTED!!!

thanks for mod! >.<
Last edited by AstroniX_old , edited 89 times in total.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
你好，新人做圖值得鼓勵
不過希望你在刷modding queue時留意一下queue是不是開放中
一般modding queue都會在標題，或者最後一個回帖中寫上queue的狀態(開放 暫時關閉 永久關閉等等)
以及注意看Rules，確保合符條件再回帖
這樣是對modders們的尊重

以及你只有單個難度完成了，嚴格說並不算一張已經完成的圖 (一張圖應該具備簡單, 中等及最高難度)
而大部份modder都沒有看未完成圖的習慣，最多只能給些意見
所以請在你確定圖完成後再找modding比較好…

那麼請加油
有什麼不明白可以PM我，或者貼吧的置頂帖問> http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kw=osu
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Random mod OwO
Love this song!!! >w<~ Star!!

[General]

Set preview point
Since this is a TV Size, I suggest you to not have a break time
Decrease volume a bit?
Add "Guilty Crown" to the source and add "opening" to the tags.
Maybe the title should be "Kohaku (TV Size)" ?

[Void]

HP drain +2 & Overall Difficulty + 4 or +3?(since its Insane diff)
00:03:726 (9) - Maybe add new combo?
00:05:059 (10) - I like this slider form,but i think it'll confuse the player with this slider form
00:06:726 (1) - Delete whistle?
01:14:392 (9) - New combo?
01:27:887 (1) - Maybe lengthen the spinner until 01:29:721?

That's all
Nice map~
Ranked this please!
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Typo xAx
I mean the title should be Kokuhaku (TV Size)
Sorry ;A;
AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
AstroniX_old
ThX for your mod,I have taken your suggestion,other difficulty is editing.(my English is poor~~)
:)
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue. :)

[General]
-lol wtf? Is this map really your first one? It's very good. O_O

[Void]
- 01:21:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol I always fail at this part when I play your map XD.
- 01:22:392 (1) - Reverse selection?

Very good map overall. Especially for your first time. Your map definitely deserves a star. Good job. :)
Mitiai
138 posts
Joined December 2010
Mitiai
[General]

  1. There are a lot of files in map folder which aren't getting used in your map. You should remove them, or have I missed something?
  2. Cut lyrics images. Map won't be ranked cuz there are too much free space in your images.
  3. Background size MUST be 1024x768 or 800x600
  4. I think you should remove countdown. (Song setup > Storyboarding > Enable Countdown - no)
[Hard]

00:54:558 (7) - maybe make this slider reverse? Then remove 00:55:225 (1) and add note at 00:55:558 .
00:58:225 (1) - remove new combo o_o
01:03:725 - Timings Points. My ears are crying ._. make volume lower. 60% is nice
01:17:058 (2) - make add whistle and finish on start of the slider? Like here 01:14:392
01:27:725 (1) - why new combo here? remove it

[Void]

00:15:551 (5) - New combo
00:43:392 (5) - New Combo
00:46:059 (6) - ^
00:55:725 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:57:059 (3) - New combo here
01:03:725 - Timing Point. PLEASE make volume lower cuz my ears gonna die >.<. I think 60% is nice.
01:23:558 (6) - remove slider
01:23:892 (7) - remove note
01:23:558 - add note
01:23:725 - add 3 ticks slider with new combo. Screen if you dont understand:
SPOILER

My mod... is my mod. You can ignore everything except General .
Also I wasn't saying anything about easy\normal diffs cuz your map is WIP (Work in Progress) but map can't get ranked without at least one easy diff (Easy diff - diff with 3 or less star difficult)

Have a nice day and good luck in rank!
hillaryzx
363 posts
Joined October 2010
hillaryzx
Hi, requested in this queue

General

- resnap all slider in both diff.
- some RED timing section and GREEN timing section are not snapped and inconsistent.

ok, modding continue...

Hard

00:02:393 - add whislte.
00:03:726 - ^ ( only at the beginning of this slider )
00:14:718 - remove finish...
00:24:225 - add a circle here
00:25:225 - ^
00:50:392 - add finish (only at the beginning of the slider )
00:53:058 - ^
00:55:392 - add circle here

Void

00:03:726 - add whistle
(Suggestion) - can reduce volume to 45~50% on Kiai time?

that's all.
now, I take my leave...
M a n a
171 posts
Joined July 2011
M a n a
[General]

SPOILER
There's some unsnapped inherited timing point. Please check it,especially at KIAI time part.
At 01:26:892,the sounds is too loud D: please decrease the sound.

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:03:726 (2) - Distance
00:11:718 (1) - Too far from spinner >< It's hard to catch for beginer
00:18:392 (1) - ^
00:39:725 (1) - Add finish or add whistle?
00:42:392 (1) - ^
00:45:058 (2) - ^In the begining
01:01:058 (1) - Too far from spinner
01:19:725 (1) - ^
01:23:392 (1,2,3) - Stack it please
01:24:725 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

SPOILER
00:13:718 (2) - Add finish?
00:25:058 (4,5,6) - Confunsing placement. Just use normal spacing
00:28:225 (5,6) - ^
01:13:725 (1) - This stream anoy me. Idk why D;
01:20:392 (1,1) - Remove new combo? Because there's no jump and it just make new combo spam
01:27:887 (1) - End this spinner at 01:29:721

[Insane]

SPOILER
Nice!

That's all
I love this anime and song sooo much! ><
Good luck :D
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


General

  1. letterbox去掉 加了SB一般要去的
Skin

  1. 加上这句代码, 可以有效减小SB load
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"background.jpg",320,240
     M,0,39721,,320,240
  2. 00:29:505 - 这里SB里没消完
  3. 01:26:892 (1) - 这里SB load过5x了... 不过只有一秒orz
Orignal Sin

  1. diff name拼错了 应该是 Original
  2. 00:03:726 (2) - = = 00:05:393 end here
  3. 最低难度要3星以下 这都4星了 note删一些吧。。
Hard

  1. 00:54:558 (7) - 开始的点拉到(160,296) 第二个(200,232) 第三个(288,256)
  2. 00:55:225 (1) - 往左一格
  3. 00:55:725 (1) - 去掉new combo
  4. 01:13:725 (1) - 没叠好
  5. 01:15:725 (1) - 这转盘太瞎了... hard玩家没几个能转300的目测
Void

  1. 00:03:726 (9) - new combo
  2. 00:05:059 (10) - 明显放偏了... = = 建议加绿线滑条速度
  3. 00:16:134 - add note
  4. 00:43:225 - add note
  5. 00:55:725 (3) - 坑爹
  6. 01:04:225 (5) - 摆对称好点
  7. 01:13:809 (2,3,4,5) - SB load红了
  8. 01:22:725 (2) - 这个滑条按ctrl+r转向
nice map, fight~

Good luck~
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hello, sorry I was lazy on the weekend >v<

General Information

- You need an easiest diff, since your [Normal] is over 3,00 star rating. You can make a [Easy] diff, ask for a guest or make your [Normal] on a easiest way, move to WIP untill you have your mapset fixed.
- Using red timings with different BPM for control the slider velocity is absolutelly unrankable, use just inherited with slider multiplier values.

Timing

- since having useless extra red timing lines and since your timing is wrong, use this unique red timing:
BPM: 180,000 (Current)
Offset: 1075 (< this offset is the correct since you have putted the big white tick (downbeat) on the wrong place

Im not pointing your normal since Im not sure what you gonna do.

[SB]

- yeah all nice, but try to dont overload the SB see > http://puu.sh/gLxI
even there are 6,49 sb load on some parts

[Hard]

00:03:726 (5) - whistle on repeat and end of slider, just for keep your pattern
00:23:058 (7,1) - excesive jump between this 2, on [Hard] diffs keep your jumps under 1,7 spacing
00:54:059 (3) - dont stack this on previous slider's end, is so confusing even on [Insane] difficulties, the follow circle of previous slider hiddens the approach circle, and combo break, plce it between the 2 sliders you have here, it would better and looks nice.
01:14:392 (3,4,1,2) - remove the whistle from slider bodies, sounds so bad here

[Insane]

00:05:059 (10) - whistle on start/end of slider
protoss_probe
30 posts
Joined August 2011
protoss_probe
不错的MAP 希望能早日RANK
protoss_probe
30 posts
Joined August 2011
protoss_probe
感觉声音可能有点小，与其他的MAP相比
AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
AstroniX_old
是前面小还是后面？
Ruuuuko
2 posts
Joined May 2011
Ruuuuko
Hi :)

[General]

- Source: Guility Crown > GUILTY CROWN

- Add to the difficulty of all the Preview Point. (Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point) I think it is good to add to the 01:03:308.


That's all.
I'm sorry this is only...
Good luck ;)
Last edited by Ruuuuko , edited 1 time in total.
AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
AstroniX_old

Ruuuuko wrote:

Hi :)

[General]

- Source: Guility Crown > Guilty Crown

- Add to the difficulty of all the Preview Point. (Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point) I think it is good to add to the 01:03:308.


That's all.
I'm sorry this is only...
Good luck ;)
fixed
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
~Normal~

01:27:721 (2) - Move this to x:441 y:290

~Hard~

00:46:892 (8) - Move this to x:25 y:334

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Recheck for M4M~

[General]

Easiest diff should have 3 star or less if you want to rank your map My bad :o
At 00:00:060 maybe decrease the volume? More fit IMO
At 00:29:225,like I said before. I think it looks more good if you map this part
At 01:26:892 like 00:00:060,it's too noisy ><"

[Normal]

00:05:726 (3) - Delete whistle from slider slide >< It's really annoy me
00:14:051 (4) - Maybe add whistle here?
00:18:392 (1) - Too far from spinner,it's hard to catch for beginner
00:52:725 (5) - New combo
01:01:058 (1) - Same as 00:18:392
01:03:558 (3,4) - Overlap by 01:02:058,put this note to another place to make more clean
01:17:058 (5) - Maybe add new combo?
01:22:392 (5) - New combo start here?

[Hard]

00:34:058 (8) - New combo
00:55:725 (2) - Maybe remove new combo?
Nice!

[Insane]

00:03:726 (9) - New combo? because there's jump suddenly oAo;
Like I said before~ Nice diff x33

That's all
NO KDS
AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
AstroniX_old

athiota33 wrote:

Recheck for M4M~

[General]

Easiest diff should have 3 star or less if you want to rank your map My bad :o
At 00:00:060 maybe decrease the volume? More fit IMO fixed
At 00:29:225,like I said before. I think it looks more good if you map this part pending
At 01:26:892 like 00:00:060,it's too noisy ><" fixed

[Normal]

00:05:726 (3) - Delete whistle from slider slide >< It's really annoy me delete fixed
00:14:051 (4) - Maybe add whistle here? add finish,to keeps pace with other diffs
00:18:392 (1) - Too far from spinner,it's hard to catch for beginner fixed
00:52:725 (5) - New combo fixed
01:01:058 (1) - Same as 00:18:392 is it too far from spinner
01:03:558 (3,4) - Overlap by 01:02:058,put this note to another place to make more clean fixed
01:17:058 (5) - Maybe add new combo? fixed
01:22:392 (5) - New combo start here? fixed

[Hard]

00:34:058 (8) - New combo fixed
00:55:725 (2) - Maybe remove new combo? fixed
Nice!

[Insane]

00:03:726 (9) - New combo? because there's jump suddenly oAo; fixed
Like I said before~ Nice diff x33

That's all
NO KDS
Thanks~
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO


[Normal]
normal不應該有spcing?!不過我看的時候也覺得怪怪的 距離明明一樣...先不管它吧~

00:15:051 (3) - 這裡感覺怪怪的!?改成這樣的節奏?! http://puu.sh/iavt

[Hard]
00:14:385 (5) - NC?!

[Insane]
01:08:392 (3,4,5) - 這有點危險 快碰到血條了~.
01:21:725 (1,2,3,4) - 這讓我產生了些幻影.要不要改一下呢?!

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
加油!
Good song and SB!

Star for SB
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