1. Masterpiece (4,89 stars, 435 notes)
2. Simple Art (3,01 stars, 137 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from your queue

Simple Art:

00:01:904 (1) - move the end point to (200,160) it looks better with the pattern ~Fixed
00:04:285 (2) - not stacked perfectly with previous combo ~Fixed
00:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - form a pentagon (small) here ~Fixed, but not a pentagon
00:31:428 (2) - move middle point 2 grids up ~Fixed
00:56:190 (2,3,4) - line ~Fixed
01:36:666 (3) - 1 grid down ~Fixed

Masterpiece:

00:04:523 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right to look better with (2) ~Fixed
00:13:809 (3) - not perfect blanket ~Fixed
00:23:809 (3,4) - move 3 a little down, 4 a little up, feels better ~Fixed
00:44:761 (5) - new combo ~Fixed

that's all

Good luck~

kikoredog wrote:

yo i am posting from your modding que! viewtopic.php?f=60&t=72214

Simple Art:
00:39:523 (2) - Consider flipping this vertically so the curve is more inline with the previous and future (2 beats furthur) sliders No, I like this
01:22:857 (5) - Try moving this to x328 y288 ~Fixed
01:22:857 (6) - Try moving this to x400 y216 ~Fixed
Moving those 2 like that seems to give better flow than just having them all on top

I found very little to change on this one, I am a novice beatmapper but it looks really good so far! Keep it up!

Masterpiece:
First, I played and passed this with a 92% (first try). So very nice job! There were only a few spots where I felt like it didn't "feel perfect".

00:07:261 (5) - Consider moving this slider to x440 y 272 using the beat snap advisor as a guideline. IMO putting it directly on top like that doesn't fit so well No, but if next mod will mention it, i will do it

01:21:904 (2) - Try moving this beat to x88 y272~Fixed
01:22:857 (3) - Try moving this beat to x240 y352~Fixed
01:23:333 (4) - Try moving this beat to x400 y272~Fixed
These 3 movements feel better than having them all stacked, it should lead in nicely to the next beat

01:24:642 (4) - Consider moving this to x232 y288. This slight movement gives it the feel of the beats at [01:26:428] and seems to work nicely! ~Fixed

The streams you created are very good, I didn't miss any of them.


That is all that I could find, as I said I am a novice! I really enjoyed modding this! Fun beatmap to play, very intuitive!

athiota33 wrote:

M4M!~

[General]

Change BG format from PNG to JPEG? No
Your mp3 file is en-coded in 232kbps. Its unrankable. Change to 192kbps or 128kbps Kidding me? No way

[Simple]

00:25:714 (1) - Remove new combo? ~Fixed
00:25:714 (3,4,5,6) - I think it looks good if you not stack them ~Fixed
00:26:666 (7) - New combo ~Fixed
00:59:047 (3) - ^ ~Fixed
01:00:476 (6) - Make this note into a slider and end it at 01:00:952 ~Fixed
01:14:285 (1) - RNC? ~Fixed
01:21:904 (4) - NC? ~Fixed
01:23:809 (1) - Add finish in the begining? ~Fixed, how can I forget about it?
01:31:428 (1) - ^ ~Fixed

[Masterpiece]

Nice!

That's all
Good luck!

M a n a wrote:

M4M

[Simple Art]

SPOILER

01:00:714 - Start break at 01:00:952 or add note at 01:00:952 ~Fixed
01:18:095 (1) - It looks more good if you stack with (4) ~Fixed
01:35:714 (1,2) - It looks good if you not stack them No, I'll keep it

[Master Piece]

SPOILER

This is Hard or Insane diff? OAO If this insane diff you have to make Hard diff. Look this -> viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528 . If this hard diff,OD -1. :D It's Hard but I don't change anything
00:17:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe make it like this? No, I like it[attachment=0:d5d11]screenshot282.jpg[/attachment:d5d11]
01:23:333 (4) - This clap really anoy me ><" Maybe remove it? No, It's good
01:23:809 (1) - Add finish in the begining? No, It's good
01:31:904 (2) - Ad clap in the end? No, It's good

That's all
Good luck~

LunarSakuya wrote:

hii!i ^^

General:
Max mp3 bitrate is 192kbps Please reencode..Trust me. I'll check it

Simple Art

00:05:238 (4) - Spacing ~Fixed
00:11:428 (1) - Minus one repeat ~No
00:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream starting at 00:14:285 (5), might fit song better ~No
00:32:380 (1,2) - Make similar to 00:30:476 (1,2) ~Fixed, but I make something different
00:48:571 - Add note ~Fixed
00:47:857 (3,5) - Delete these? Might be hard for beginners ~Fixed
00:49:285 (2) - Delete ~Fixed
00:55:238 (1) - Make a curvy slider to blanket (2) ~Fixed
01:32:380 (2) - Line this up with 01:30:476 (4)? A bit minor lol ~Fixed

Masterpiece

00:00:595 - Add note? triplets are sexy ~No
00:08:333 (3,4,5,6) - Make these pairs the same, either stack them like the 1st pair or stream them like the 2nd ~No
..........01:39:761 (3,4,5,6) ^ ~No
01:08:214 - Add note, matches song ~No
..........^Also, there are several other spots like this, but its up to you of course lol
01:19:404 - Add note ~Fixed
01:19:523 (6) - Delete ~Fixed
01:19:642 - Add note ~Fixed
01:31:666 (2) - Clap at end? ~Fixed
01:55:357 (5) - Ctrl + R ~No
02:07:023 - Add note? ~Fixed

Nice diff

Good luck!
And I've heard good things about this game...i'll probably try it later lol

kokoroanime wrote:

~Simple Art~

Finish the whole diff if you want to. ~I'm to lazy xD

00:04:761 (3) - Move one grid up... If I'm right about the nazi. ~Fixed, in previous mod

~Masterpiece~

00:35:476 (6) - x:124 y:279 and fix that slider a little bit. ~Fixed
00:40:357 (5) - x:384 y:223. ~Fixed

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.

M O YA wrote:

Hello ~ ;3

[General]

mp3 file 232kbps => 192kbps GRRRRRRRR


[Simple Art]

00:11:904 (1) => add clap ~Fixed


[Masterpiece]

02:09:523 (1) => delete finish No