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yanaginagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
terametis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月24日 at 17:51:32

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Killer Song (Short Ver.)
Tags: owari no hoshi no love song Maeda Jun Takahiro Furukawa flaming-june Yanagi Nagi winber1 nold_1702
BPM: 166
Filesize: 4337kb
Play Time: 02:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.79 stars, 169 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 510 notes)
  3. Nloldmal (4.19 stars, 181 notes)
  4. Winber1's Hard (4.9 stars, 307 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane:100%
Winber1's Hard:100%
Nololdmal(Normal):100%
Easy:100%

try hidden lol
winber1
lol. I told you i would be done soon.

Hope you like the diff. Good luck on this mapset :3 ~

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.) (terametis) [Winber1's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
terametis
thank you~~~~
really nice hard :)
uplord
winber1
I just suddenly realized you have Normal now, but before you go any further... it seems you are using a lot of red tick notes ._. I would be a little more careful with all those red tick notes since they can make the map a lot harder than you planned. I mean the BPM is 166, so it's kinda fast for more unexperience players i think. It's just something to think about.

Maybe you already realize that, and you do things differently than me, but i couldn't help but just say this.
Topic Starter
terametis
I see, will reduce red tick notes :)
kazenotama
なぎ!!
Taiko diff作ってもいいかな?
Topic Starter
terametis
すみません、太鼓diffは追加しない予定です。
Ulysses
Hello :D

From my Guest Diffculty ,here's my "Normal"^^

Hope you like it.

*For Kiai time,I'm a big fan of short kiai time and a hater of long kiai time.I won't change them to long kiai time since they really make me blind.

*For New Combo problem,I 'm a noob of it,please remind me if I'm wrong in it.(I know I have any problems about NC xp)

Here's my diff.You may reject it if you don't like it :33

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.) (terametis) [Nloldmal].osu
Topic Starter
terametis
Thank you for very good diff~~~
Add you diff :)
Melophobia
こんばんわ

from #modreqs~

[General]
-disable countdown

Folder:
osbが2個あるので削除~
offset:
369
adjustment downbeat
Timingは変わりません
offset in winber's diff is different from the others diffs
Artist:
RankedがYanaginagiになってるんですがどうなんでしょ
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34229

すずりさんの方のスレッドで

Colin Hou wrote:

Artist seems to be yanaginagi, this is a mistake but graved :P
こんな事も書いてあったので参考に。

知ってると思うけど一応
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change -- Mistakes

Kiai:
AIBatから
http://puu.sh/fNoR

Tags:
add "supercell" to tags. たぶん。



[Easy]
音量がずっと50%だからKIAIとかはちょっと上げてみるといいかもね!

00:08:863 (1) - この赤線は難しいかもわからんw
01:01:815 (2) - 1grid 上
01:32:176 (2,3,4) - spacing!
01:43:020 (3,4) - ^


[Nloldmal]

00:19:164 (1,2) - it would be better not to stack them, i think :3
00:20:249 - add a note here
01:02:538 (1) - same as 00:19:164 (1,2)
01:43:200 (4,5) - change them to a slider? it would be easy for beginner imo.
01:59:285 (2,3) - ^
02:00:008 (5) - delete this?
02:09:224 (5,6) - change them to a slider?

hmm, i found some spacing error, generally, need to make spacing constant for Normal and Easy
listed up where it happens below, though its not big error. lol


00:30:730 (1,2) -
00:32:899 (4,5,1) -
00:41:935 (3,1) -
00:52:598 (1,2) -
01:00:008 (6) -
01:30:730 (4,5,1) -
01:42:296 (2,3) -
01:43:200 (4,5) -
01:48:261 (5) -
01:50:429 (1,2) -
01:57:839 (6) -
02:01:995 (1,2) -


[Winber1's Hard]
OD-1
from AIBat.


looks very good, so some suggestion :3

00:10:492 (1,2) - try this?

00:22:058 (3,4,5) - continuity of slider with a repeat makes kinda boring, i think
try another pattern or increase spacing?
00:33:624 (3,4,5) - ^
00:50:250 (1) - no need to add newcombo here




[Insane]

Easyに同じ!

00:00:730 (1) - 音量ちょいちょい上げてみるとかどうでしょ
00:08:682 - コンスタントにclap置くためにnote追加?
00:22:598 (3) - whistle
00:54:044 (8) - Hidden reverse arrow
00:50:791 (1) - downbeatなのでnoteあるといいかな
01:17:357 (1) - remove newcombo
01:31:996 (3) - whistle?
01:32:718 (3) - ^
01:33:441 (3) - ^

短いけどおしまいw
神曲!!
Topic Starter
terametis

Melophobia wrote:

こんばんわ

from #modreqs~

[General]
-disable countdown

変更しました!

Folder:
osbが2個あるので削除~

削除しました

offset:
369
adjustment downbeat
Timingは変わりません

変更!
offset in winber's diff is different from the others diffs
Artist:
RankedがYanaginagiになってるんですがどうなんでしょ
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34229

すずりさんの方のスレッドで

Colin Hou wrote:

Artist seems to be yanaginagi, this is a mistake but graved :P
こんな事も書いてあったので参考に。

知ってると思うけど一応
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change -- Mistakes


Yanginagi に変更!ありがとうございます!

Kiai:
AIBatから
http://puu.sh/fNoR    

noldさんのはこのままで
winberさんのはoffsetを話し合ってどちらかに修正します!


Tags:
add "supercell" to tags. たぶん。 あれ、supercell関係あるの・・・?分からないから保留で!!追加しましたーーー



[Easy]
音量がずっと50%だからKIAIとかはちょっと上げてみるといいかもね!

00:08:863 (1) - この赤線は難しいかもわからんw  スライダーに変更
01:01:815 (2) - 1grid 上  修正
01:32:176 (2,3,4) - spacing!  ギャーーーなんか変なスペーシングになってる修正
01:43:020 (3,4) - ^         Gyaaaa


[
[Insane]

00:08:682 - コンスタントにclap置くためにnote追加?
00:50:791 (1) - downbeatなのでnoteあるといいかな

この二つ以外修正しました!
自分リズム(苦笑)なので指摘が多かったら修正するかも・・・
mod & star ありがとうございました!!!!!!!!
Melophobia
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%84%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8E%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8E

:3


自分で読んでみたけどそんなに関係ない気がしてきた!!ウワアアア
Cirno
Hi there, from my queue

[General]
Need a 1.5s leadin on all diffs.
Letterbox is probably unnecessary.

[Easy]
00:13:020 (2,3) - make equilateral triangle?
00:27:477 (5) - this curve is too hard to notice. Either make it curve more or just make it straight.
00:30:369 (5) - 2 grids down looks better
00:37:237 (2,4) - are those supposed to be straight? if not imo just make (2) from flipping 00:35:791 (3) horizontally

[Nold]
00:09:947 - add circle here
00:22:056 (1) - make this curve more, preferably copy 00:19:164 (1) and rotate
00:45:911 - add circle here?
00:49:526 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and add circle at 00:49:706 , this sounds better and is easier for beginners as well
00:52:236 - add note here
01:02:538 (1) - why new combo? remove nc
01:40:670 - add note here
01:47:357 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and add circle at 00:49:706 , this sounds better and is easier for beginners as well
chorus repeat 1: the same
01:59:827 (4,1) - swap combo
02:09:767 (1) - why new combo? remove nc
this ends at 02:12:658 but others end at 02:13:382 . Shorten the spinner or lenthen the spinners in others.

[Winber1]
fine so just some minor things
OD -1?
00:08:683 (5,1) - swap combo here?
00:13:202 (5,1) - ^
00:43:745 (2) - this touched the hp bar a little bit, might get picked
02:00:007 (6,1) - swap combo here again?
02:11:575 - add note here?

[Insane]
Please, don't use variable spacing just for the sake of adding difficulty. The spacing changes (or known as random jumps) in this diff make literally no sense to me. When you jump, please make them fit the feel of the song, or if you can't map jumps that make sense, just don't do it. (You can often find better examples of spacing changes in maps by Shinxyn, fyi.)
I hate to say re-(ry but I'm not modding this diff, sorry.

that's all I can say, good luck
winber1
SPOILER

Melophobia wrote:

[Winber1's Hard]
OD-1
from AIBat.
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. ok fixed

looks very good, so some suggestion :3

00:10:492 (1,2) - try this? sorry. In my opinion, i like it better if combo 1 curved away from combo 2 (00:09:407 (2,1) - ). Idk why but it looks better to me. Also the slider end over laps combo 1.

00:22:058 (3,4,5) - continuity of slider with a repeat makes kinda boring, i think
try another pattern or increase spacing? Oh I would have done somehting more interesting, but it's only a hard :(. I just don't want to make it too complex, so I just stuck with the sliders. I also think these sliders look nice too :3
00:33:624 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:50:250 (1) - no need to add newcombo here some reason i kinda liked that new combo. it just looks cool, but more logically speaking, yes it does make more sense if i removed it, so ok.

Cirno wrote:

[Winber1]
fine so just some minor things
OD -1?
00:08:683 (5,1) - swap combo here? no sorry trying to follow the melody
00:13:202 (5,1) - ^ ^
00:43:745 (2) - this touched the hp bar a little bit, might get picked no? ._. I think it's just your skin. It doesn't touch it on my skin, and my HP bar is at least normal sized, if not a tiny bit bigger.
02:00:007 (6,1) - swap combo here again? sorry, i just like followin the melody. It's just how i put new combos.
02:11:575 - add note here? no sorry, I like that space. It also gives me room for a jump to end the song, which i like :D
fixed the OD. Made some small fixes. Thanks for mod guys! :3

Download: Yanaginagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.) (terametis) [Winber1's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
terametis
[General]
Need a 1.5s leadin on all diffs.       set
Letterbox is probably unnecessary.   set

[Easy]
00:13:020 (2,3) - make equilateral triangle? no change
00:27:477 (5) - this curve is too hard to notice. Either make it curve more or just make it straight. Fixed
00:30:369 (5) - 2 grids down looks better  hum,no changed
00:37:237 (2,4) - are those supposed to be straight? if not imo just make (2) from flipping 00:35:791 (3) horizontally ^


thank you for mod~~ :)
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o

General
• BG needs to be 1024x768, not 1021.

[Easy]
01:18:441 (1) - New combo, maybe. Aesthetics.
I really like this easy.

[Nloldmal]
• The kiai time is missing from the Chorus parts
00:36:514 (1) - Re-make this slider? It looks kind of bad.
00:37:959 (1) - ^
00:39:405 (1) - ^
01:34:345 (1) - ^
01:35:790 (1) - ^
01:37:236 (1) - ^
Also good!

[Winber1's Hard]
01:51:334 (1,1) - Lessen the jump?
Great!

[Insane]
• I think AR 9 suits the map a lot more than 8 does.

I like the overall style of mapping!
Topic Starter
terametis

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod :o

General
• BG needs to be 1024x768, not 1021. oops,,Fixed

[Easy]
01:18:441 (1) - New combo, maybe. Aesthetics.  Fixed
I really like this easy.

[Insane]
• I think AR 9 suits the map a lot more than 8 does.  hmm,,Please give me a little time to think.
thank you for mod~~~ :)
Reiji-RJ
Hello

[General]

  1. Shouldn't the Artist be Maeda Jun x Yanagi Nagi?
  2. If you won't change artist, add Maeda Jun to the tags. You should also add Takahiro Furukawa , since it's arranger. Maybe also add yanaginagi to the tags or change Yanagi Nagi to yanaginagi? D: Source: http://vgmdb.net/artist/5524
  3. Your bg is 1021x768. Resize to 1024x768 and do full submit.
[Easy]

  1. 00:08:682 (5) - no. Don't use kick sliders (1/2 sliders) in Easy.
  2. 00:43:743 (1) - finish
  3. 00:48:080 (3) - ^
  4. 00:50:249 (5) - kick slider, change please
  5. 01:14:104 (1) - finish
  6. 01:16:996 (1) - ^
  7. 01:34:345 (1) - change clap to finish?
  8. 01:41:574 (1) - finish
  9. 01:48:080 (3) - change please..
  10. 01:59:646 (5) - too many reverse. It may be hard for newbies to guess how many reverse it has. I thought it has one, lol D:
[Nloldmal]

  1. You have different kiai times. Maybe make it similar to other diffs?
  2. 00:43:381 (1) - finish to reverse
  3. 01:34:345 (1) - finish
[Winber1's Hard]

  1. Offset in your diff is different from other diffs. It should be 369. Fix it, please.
  2. 00:53:502 (1,1,2,3,4) - I like your jump and then anti-jump, but this is bad idea for Hard, I think..
  3. 01:51:334 (1,1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:02:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
    But I really like it ;~;
[Insane]

  1. 00:56:574 (4) - finish
  2. 00:57:477 (1) - hidden slider
That's it. Good luck!
Topic Starter
terametis

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello

[General]

  1. Shouldn't the Artist be Maeda Jun x Yanagi Nagi?
  2. If you won't change artist, add Maeda Jun to the tags. You should also add Takahiro Furukawa , since it's arranger. Maybe also add yanaginagi to the tags or change Yanagi Nagi to yanaginagi? D: Source: http://vgmdb.net/artist/5524
  3. Your bg is 1021x768. Resize to 1024x768 and do full submit.
add Tags Maeda Jun, Takahiro Furukawa
I'm sorry, but does not change the artist.
BG changed



[Easy]

  1. 00:08:682 (5) - no. Don't use kick sliders (1/2 sliders) in Easy. Hum,, I understand that this slider is difficult,but seriously I want this sound.
  2. 00:43:743 (1) - finish Fixed
  3. 00:48:080 (3) - ^ no
  4. 00:50:249 (5) - kick slider, change please same as reason 00:08:682
  5. 01:14:104 (1) - finish no
  6. 01:16:996 (1) - ^ no
  7. 01:34:345 (1) - change clap to finish? Fixed
  8. 01:41:574 (1) - finish no
  9. 01:48:080 (3) - change please.. same as reason to 00:08:682
  10. 01:59:646 (5) - too many reverse. It may be hard for newbies to guess how many reverse it has. I thought it has one, lol D: Fixed
[Insane]

  1. 00:56:574 (4) - finish  Fixed
  2. 00:57:477 (1) - hidden slider  Fixed
That's it. Good luck!
thank you for mod~~~ :)
jossieP
wow, I love your jumps :D just Ill just star here

Edit: AR is perfect, dont change it

re-Edit: you mind about have a taiko diff? D:
Topic Starter
terametis
thank you for star~~<3

Edit:I'm sorry, I don't plan to add taiko diff ~~
jossieP
ok.gif
Ulysses
Oh..so many mods,begoing to fix it ,soon sorry!
Edit,fixed~
For the distance "error"

:arrow: I think they're not error since make always make distance changing in Easy or Normal,it's able to be read for newbie or beginner.
I just want to make more fun for the map therefore I made duistance change in Normal also it's fit.
I won't fix them.

Here's the update diff:

Download: Yanaginagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.) (terametis) [Nloldmal].osu
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
OFFSET is different in hard diff.

I think you don't need that leadin time in easy? Leadin time don't have to be the same.


Easy:
Issues
00:50:791 - this kiai section is not snapped well.
01:03:803 - same (although only 1ms miss, I think it is better to fix it. Ok and seems all diff green line timing section are not snapped well, it is ok if it didn't hurt your hitsound, but plz check the ones that control the kiai.

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:02:538 (1) - it sound better if the spinner stops at 01:03:983.


Nloldmal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:959 (2) - very nazi but this slider could be more symmetrical and beautiful.
00:34:345 (2) - ^
00:09:947 (4,5) - in a normal diff I'd rather stack the notes like this, cuz I am not sure new players are comfortable with the spacing, but still just personal opinion.
00:16:273 (1) - move this slider farther? it is 1.0 spacing here, but now you are using the 1.0spacing with the 0.75 slider speed, so distance 1.3 maybe better. not a big problem though.
01:02:538 (4) - maybe a kiai fountain here too?

Hitsound
00:00:730 (1) - yeah increasing the volumn is a great idea, but would you please add more sections to make the increasing more slowly and neatly? 5 volumn to 20 volumn still could be heard pretty suddenly.


Winber1's Hard:
no problem for me.


Insane:
I am not a fun of spacing like this.. but I guess it is okey #_#


Ok that is all~
Topic Starter
terametis
General:
I think you don't need that leadin time in easy? Leadin time don't have to be the same.
deleate leadin. thank you~~ :)


Easy:
Issues
00:50:791 - this kiai section is not snapped well.
01:03:803 - same (although only 1ms miss, I think it is better to fix it. Ok and seems all diff green line timing section are not snapped well, it is ok if it didn't hurt your hitsound, but plz check the ones that control the kiai.   All green line fixed

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:02:538 (1) - it sound better if the spinner stops at 01:03:983.  hum,keep my design.
thank you for mod~~ :)
Ulysses
Colin Hou
someone quoted but.. I'd better leave this here: yanaginagi due to the official bannar

Edit: 俺 本物のバカだ ;_;
Topic Starter
terametis
hum,I find a pattern of two.
Anyway, change to yanaginagi.
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue

General:
  1. The artist name in Insane if is not start with capital char, i'm not sure if it may cause some problem or not, but i'd like to change them to same.
  2. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary in Winber's Hard.
Easy:
  1. 00:11:935 - add a note here or start ur slider from here?
  2. 00:27:838 (1) - change to finish?
  3. 01:45:549 (2,1) - is overlap in easy diff a good choice..?
  4. 01:49:525 (2) - add a reverse?
  5. 01:52:597 - slider start from here?
Nloldmal:
  1. 00:31:814 - add a note here?
  2. 00:45:911 - add a note here and stack?
  3. 01:43:200 (4,5) - stack?
Winber1's Hard:
  1. Everything looks fine~~
Insane:
  1. 00:20:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star? and then remove (6)
  2. 00:41:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i really don't like this pattern, consider to make more shapes here? up to u ~
  3. 01:25:670 (1) - add a note here?
that's all ~~ gl~
winber1
SPOILER

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

[Winber1's Hard]
01:51:334 (1,1) - Lessen the jump? it's fine imo
Great!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

[Winber1's Hard]

  1. Offset in your diff is different from other diffs. It should be 369. Fix it, please.
  2. 00:53:502 (1,1,2,3,4) - I like your jump and then anti-jump, but this is bad idea for Hard, I think..
  3. 01:51:334 (1,1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:02:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^ DDDD: IKR? i was thinking about that before i mapped this part, but i still ended up doing it. :S i'm gonna leave it as is unless there are a lot of complaints
    But I really like it ;~;
nothing changed as of now. I may end up thinking of something different for the anti-jumps if i need to, since i know it may not be suitable for a Hard, but i guess i'll see. Might need a few more mods :S

Thanks for checking the map guys! :

oh and i fixed the offset for you:

Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song (Short Ver.) (terametis) [Winber1's Hard].osu
Ulysses
http://puu.sh/ggum Seems that you didn't update my diff yet?~
Therefore,will fix it when you update it :33
Topic Starter
terametis
General:
  1. The artist name in Insane if is not start with capital char, i'm not sure if it may cause some problem or not, but i'd like to change them to same.
  2. Audio Lead-in is unnecessary in Winber's Hard.ok
Easy:
  1. 00:11:935 - add a note here or start ur slider from here?  hum,I prefer now
  2. 00:27:838 (1) - change to finish? no
  3. 01:45:549 (2,1) - is overlap in easy diff a good choice..? I think there is no problem
  4. 01:49:525 (2) - add a reverse?   no
  5. 01:52:597 - slider start from here?  sorry no.
Insane:
  1. 00:20:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a star? and then remove (6)  I keep my design
  2. 00:41:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i really don't like this pattern, consider to make more shapes here? up to u ~  hum,I prefer this pattern. No change I'm sorry.
  3. 01:25:670 (1) - add a note here?   no
thank you for mod~~~ :)
Ulysses
Ranger
Hi~
From my queue

[Easy]
00:13:561 (1) - Add Finish?
00:27:838 (1) - ^
00:35:790 (3) - spacing error a little.How about x:308 y:168?
00:37:959 (3) - If you change ^,put in x:308 y:168
00:56:031 (3) - Add Finish the end?
01:16:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to beginner
01:25:670 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning?
01:35:790 (4) - Add NC or Remove NC 01:37:236 (1)
02:05:067 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:292 y:280

[Nloldmal]
00:39:405 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning?
01:37:236 (1) - ^

[Winber1's Hard]
00:07:147 (7,8) - This note interval is 0.03.Change interval is 0.00
00:35:069 (5) - Just suggestions,How about like this?
01:51:334 (1) - Remove NC

[Insane]
00:49:164 (1) - Add NC?
01:14:103 (1) - Add Finish
01:25:670 (1) - ^

That`s all
Good luck~
Topic Starter
terametis

[Ranger] wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:561 (1) - Add Finish?   sorry,no
00:27:838 (1) - ^          no
00:35:790 (3) - spacing error a little.How about x:308 y:168?  oh,my missed thank you~~ fixed
00:37:959 (3) - If you change ^,put in x:308 y:168         
00:56:031 (3) - Add Finish the end?      sorry,no
01:16:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to beginner    hum,It certainly is difficult but I keep thisFixed
01:25:670 (1) - Add Finish at the beginning?          Fixed
01:35:790 (4) - Add NC or Remove NC 01:37:236 (1)    hum,I keep my setting
02:05:067 (2) - Spacing error a little.put in x:292 y:280   Fixed


[Insane]
00:49:164 (1) - Add NC?   Very nice NC :) Fixed
01:14:103 (1) - Add Finish hum,This is a good idea,but I want to keep now.
01:25:670 (1) - ^       sorry,no change
thank you for mod~~~~ :)
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