1. Easy (2 stars, 219 notes)
2. Hard (4,98 stars, 592 notes)
3. Normal (4,65 stars, 374 notes)

Natteke wrote:

omg tieff have my babies

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

omg 3rd bod.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Source: Touhou.
Don't get the reason to use tick rate 2, especially in Hard, it sounds just poor. (and you didn't use tick sounds as always, also if you reduce tick rate, scores would be lower and you could create more thing in that diff.) It sounds just fine

[Easy]
01:03:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it curve better? http://puu.sh/euaD ]changed, looks more beautiful now
01:49:967 (2) - as it's the easiest diff i still hope only 1/2 here. yes it's still just hold there, but i don't think a massive 1/4 strike during lots of 1/1 or longer notes is a good idea. 1/2 sounds horrible here
02:03:280 (1) - a suggestion here: add another reversed 1/2 slider at 02:05:155, then a 3/2 reversed slider at 02:06:280. now it sounds/plays kinda boring. yeah, changed
02:17:530 - add a note?
02:18:280 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as 01:03:280 (1,2,3,4,5)
03:09:280 (1) - no. i guess you just want to make the break not that long, but the spinner here itself is tiring enough. map something until 03:15:280 (as there's an obvious sound) then start the spinner plz? i'll just remove the spinner
04:00:280 (1,2,3,4) - same thing again.
04:24:280 - give a stop line for the kiai.

[Normal]
AR+1 if possible.
00:50:155 (4) - move it 1/2 later? (whistle, as you did in other parts.) Listen to the drums.
00:59:342 & 00:59:905 - just to make sure you don't like the beats here.
01:12:655 (3) - whistle at the reverse? (it won't blend with the clap much?) Don't want to
02:06:280 (1,2,3) - feel a little boring here, http://puu.sh/eugX ? Don't wanna
02:14:342 (4,5,6) - seems more consistent to me. http://puu.sh/euht
02:27:655 (3) - same whistle.
03:09:280 (1) - same as Easy.
03:45:092 (1) - ...could you draw it better..? i noticed you tend to use 3-point sliders. it curves not that good in some situation like this (at least to me, won't mention this again.)
04:09:655 (3) - whistle at the reverse.
04:24:280 - end of kiai.

[Hard]
i don't get why AR9 is used here. it doesn't fit at all imo. (160BPM, not so fast map) It's more fun like that
01:22:405 (5) - touches HP bar. agree, changed
02:06:280 (1) - still feels boring here but in such a diff don't know a way to change. huh?
02:29:155 (2) - http://puu.sh/eul1 ? don't like current beats. too bad, 'cos I like it
02:10:030 (2,3,4,5) - maybe try to avoid patterns like this (large spacing notes in a line), i'm pretty sure most of the players don't like this and it could easily change to other placements. (won't mention again) you're right, changed
02:39:280 (1) - auto can only get 1000 on this spinner and in this point i don't think it's really needed to add such a short spinner. consider a slider or something else (or at least, make the spinner start 1/4 earlier and auto can get 2000) changed to slider
03:58:967 (1,2) - switch the place of circle-slider. reason is quite obvious i think. my bad, changed
04:11:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same thing. don't get it. Won't change it, sorry.

literally, get some more mods then call me to recheck.

1. 04:09:280 ~ 04:12:280 — можно временно понизить громкость
   А вообще, её лучше убавить ещё и около начала, там, где на харде куча финишей

1. 00:49:780 (2) - лучше продлить вместо ноты
2. 00:51:280 (1) - три финиша подряд? Первые два можно на свистки поменять
3. 01:39:280 (1) - немного несимметричен
4. 01:49:967 (2) - не советовал бы такое на изи делать, неясно, когда его отпускать. Другое дело, если бы полноценные холдеры были
5. 01:54:280 (1) - опять три финиша
6. 02:03:280 (1,1,1) - ну блин, это же изи, зачем издеваться? И кстати, зачем тут столько полосок с (N), громкость-то не меняется
7. 02:36:280 (1) - чуть подальше конец отодвинь от следующего
8. 04:18:280 (1) - аналогично

1. 03:04:030 (3) - криво согнут, как будто сломан
2. 04:02:155 (5) - аналогично

1. 00:36:842 (4) - всё-таки слишком резко согнут. Можно добавить 2 точки по бокам от центральной, и будет мягче: http://puu.sh/ex8s
2. 00:58:780 (1) - НК, он же медленный
3. 01:03:280 (1) - свисток на начало?
4. 01:58:405 (5,6,1) - не слишком большой спейсинг для 1/4?
5. 02:29:623 (3) - выбивается из ряда
6. 02:55:405 (3) - перекошен в левую сторону
7. 04:00:092 (5) - запихни под конец слайдера, чтобы стек был
8. 04:12:186 (7) - хлопок не звучит
9. 04:11:623 (3) - опять выбивается

1. uncheck Letterbox During Breaks if it is unnecessary to u
2. add a sliderslide to silent the slide sound in soft samples?

1. 00:30:092 - remove this clap? heard wierd

1. 00:30:842 - add a note here?
2. 00:48:655 - add a note here and then remove the clap on 00:49:030 - ?
3. 00:59:342 - & 00:59:905 - , add notes and make an anti-stream with the end of 00:58:405 (3) - ?
4. 01:57:842 - & 01:59:342 - add a notes?
5. 02:16:592 - add a break and set the hp-bar vanish time here?
6. 02:50:155 - remove finish here? heard weird now
7. 03:51:092 - add a note here and stack with (1)?
8. 03:52:217 (2) - move to next white line?

1. OD9 and AR9....are u sure it is a Hard diff?...and more, the max score has over 18M so i highly recommend u to reduce OD by 1. And tell the truth, imo this diff ought to be renamed to insane......
2. 00:48:092 (11) - stack to end of 00:47:717 (10) - ? i suppose it's better
3. 01:12:467 (2) - remove it or make a triplet with (3) ?
4. 01:18:092 (1) - ctrl+r?
5. 01:51:842 (3) - i suppose it's better to use a soft-whistle here
6. 01:52:217 (4) - ^
7. 01:53:342 (7) - ^
8. 01:57:467 (2) - remove whistle? heard wierd
9. 02:16:592 - add a note here stack with 02:16:967 (1) - ?
10. 02:17:342 - add a note?
11. 02:41:342 (6) - move to 352:304 or 352:312?
12. 03:09:092 - break begin here?
13. 04:02:905 (7,8) - ctrl+r?
14. 04:11:623 (3) - i'd like to make a stream from here to 04:12:280 (1) -

1. The MP3 bitrate is 218 kbps which is unrankable,please change it to 192 kbps at least.
2. Probably add a slient slider?I can heard some places were too noisy when the slider was sliding.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP +1~2?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:47:530 , 00:47:905 (x) - Maybe add a note on this two place because I can hear there are some drum sound and there are high pitch place.
   2. 01:45:280 (1) - (design) I would suggest to make this slider more "smooth" and it will be more beautiful.
      
      sth like this

      

      112,304,105280,6,0,B|24:224|208:156|68:56,2,260,4|0|0

   3. 01:49:967 (2) - Same as natsumerin, I think massive 1/4 repeat should be avoided in the easiest diff.If you really don't want to change it to 1/2.I would recommend changing it to a spinner.Then it is totally fair.
   4. 03:43:405 (4) - Would you put a new combo here to fit your combo setting (123,123,123)
   5. 03:56:155 (5) - ^similar to this.
   6. 04:00:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have seen this pattern before,could you make an another pattern.Just to make sure that the newbie will not feel boring to the same pattern.
   7. 04:12:655 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:24:280 (1) - Probably add a finish sound here because this is the first accent point of the song and it fits the music quite well.
   2. 02:09:280 (1,1,1) - I think that there should be a soft finish at the beginning of the slider.
   3. 03:06:280 (1) - That would be much better if you put a finish at the end of the slider?

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR-1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:59:342 , 00:59:905 (x) - I think you should add something here because I can see you map this part in easy diff so just map it for consistency?
   2. 01:18:092 (1) - This new combo is not that necessary?At least I can't find a reason that it's needed.
   3. 02:39:092 (1) - ^
   4. 02:57:655 (3) - (design) That would be nice if you can make this slider more symmetry like this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   5. 03:02:155 (4) - Similar with previous.
   6. 03:09:280 (x) - Making loooooooooong spinner in [Normal] is not a good choice.I highly recommend to remove that and make the break start from here just like [easy].
   7. 03:41:530 (7) - Would you add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer than others.
   8. 04:21:092 (1) - Same as 01:18:092 (1).
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:18:092 (1) - Probably remove the finish sound at the beginning of the slider?
   2. 02:09:280 (1) - Same as easy.About the finish.(won't mention this again)

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I don't know why you need to use AR and OD9.That's absurdity things.At least you should change the OD to 7/8.Otherwise it doesn't fit at all imo.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:34:780 (7) - Consider a new combo here because this combo is too long so just cut it to the half and make it consistent with the overall combo setting.
   2. 01:14:155 (3,4) - This is a nonsensical jump imo,I can't hear any thing(drum/vocal) to support this jump.Well,let you decide it.
   3. 01:42:842 (2,3) - The distance of this jump is .__. I guess I can call it "awful" I know it works.However it's really showing a good effect on a hard diff?You need to consider it.
   4. 01:55:405 (1) - I just think this should be a jump to fit the pattern you have.
   5. 02:40:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) This is not a perfect pentagon.You might need to adjust the position of (4.5)- to make it more beautiful.
   6. 03:48:280 (1) - I think this place may make confuse to player because this diff is mainly made by jump and you reduce the spacing suddenly the player might not adapt them in just a few second.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 02:09:280 (1) - finish stuff.Same as Easy.
   2. 04:10:030 (3) - Would you remove the finish here?It doesn't fit the music imo.

narakucrimson wrote:

Also, please update since I needed to update when I downloaded it.