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Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short Ver.)

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phonic
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Topic Starter
phonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月6日 at 18:03:35

Artist: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu
Title: PONPONPON (Short Ver.)
Tags: bless thite kawaii cute
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2459kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bless' Normal (2.98 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 427 notes)
  3. Thite's Hard (4.66 stars, 238 notes)
Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

PON PON ♫ WAY WAY WAY ♫
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON
Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - Tsukema Tsukeru
Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - CANDY CANDY
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Mapset:

[Bless' Normal] - 100% by Bless
[Thite's Hard] - 100% by Thite
[Insane] - 100% by Me
Last edited by phonic , edited 155 times in total.
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
Hi~ phonic ;)
<3 this map
BPM should be 127.98
offset no change
I'll give you my GD later~ :P

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Insane].osu
yintama
15 posts
Joined August 2010
yintama
妹纸加油做~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
BPM : 128
Offset : 1078
Cute song :3
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Bless wrote:

Hi~ phonic ;)
<3 this map
BPM should be 127.98
offset no change
I'll give you my GD later~ :P

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 128
Offset : 1078
Cute song :3

thank you for mod
breeeeeeze!!

thank you for Guest diff
blesssssss!!
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 128
Offset : 1078
Cute song :3
sounds this is the correct BPM and Offset
sorry for my fault :o
and thank you Breeze :)
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Bless wrote:

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 128
Offset : 1078
Cute song :3
sounds this is the correct BPM and Offset
sorry for my fault :o
and thank you Breeze :)
Do not mind it ;)
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
Finished~ :)
PONPON way way way~
PONPON way PON way PONPON~
;)

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
update~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
finished~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Hard].osu
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Thite wrote:

finished~
お疲れ様～！！！
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
hi~ from osu chat <3

[Bless' Normal]

00:11:859 (2) - remove whistel starting slider and add a whistel end of slider
00:15:140 (1) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:09:046 (1,2) - 1 grid right
01:57:328 (1,2,3,4) - a little gap for DS

[Thite's Hard]

can't find the ploblems ,but one
01:42:093 (6) - 　other Pattern,not clap for this timing red rine, I felt it might be better unified

[Insane]
00:28:265 (4) - add finish
00:28:968 (1) - add whistel?
00:34:360 (9) - add a clap starting slider
01:12:803 (3) - remove clap?

but english sorry... fight!
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

SakiK wrote:

[Insane]
00:28:265 (4) - add finish
00:28:968 (1) - add whistel?
00:34:360 (9) - add a clap starting slider
01:12:803 (3) - remove clap?

all ok

お星さま　ありがとーう！
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi- :)

request from game

[General]

●source探してみたけどありませんね　たぶん
●lead-in 1500 ⇒ 2000 change?

All suggestions

[Bless's Normal]

●00:07:640 (1,2,3) - try this
456,192,7640,5,0
356,296,8109,1,8
256,192,8578,1,2
●00:34:828 (1) - Move (x:312 y:144)
●01:14:203 (1,2,3) - try this
256,40,74203,5,4
328,160,74671,1,0
184,160,75140,1,0


[Thite's Hard]

●00:36:703 (1,3,5) - 左に1gridずれている？　なので、右に1grid 移動？
●00:55:218 (4) - x:384 y:256に移動させるのはどうでしょうか

[Insane]

●えｗ　なにも指摘するとこないｗｗ

Good map!!!!!!

少なくてごめんなさい

これくらいしかありませんでした

EDIT: ☆
Last edited by Gamu , edited 1 time in total.
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

-Gamu- wrote:

[General]

●source探してみたけどありませんね　たぶん
●lead-in 1500 ⇒ 2000 change?　no change

[Insane]

●えｗ　なにも指摘するとこないｗｗ lol

お星さま　ありがとーう！！
Last edited by phonic , edited 2 times in total.
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
thanks mod fixed~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless

SakiK wrote:

[Bless' Normal]

00:11:859 (2) - remove whistel starting slider and add a whistel end of slider not change
00:15:140 (1) - suggestion not change
SPOILER
01:09:046 (1,2) - 1 grid right ok
01:57:328 (1,2,3,4) - a little gap for DS ok

-Gamu- wrote:

[Bless's Normal]

●00:07:640 (1,2,3) - try this ok
456,192,7640,5,0
356,296,8109,1,8
256,192,8578,1,2
●00:34:828 (1) - Move (x:312 y:144) ok
●01:14:203 (1,2,3) - try this ok
256,40,74203,5,4
328,160,74671,1,0
184,160,75140,1,0
thanks~ :)

edit:opps~forgot upload :?

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Bless wrote:

SakiK wrote:

[Bless' Normal]

00:11:859 (2) - remove whistel starting slider and add a whistel end of slider not change
00:15:140 (1) - suggestion not change
SPOILER
01:09:046 (1,2) - 1 grid right ok
01:57:328 (1,2,3,4) - a little gap for DS ok

-Gamu- wrote:

[Bless's Normal]

●00:07:640 (1,2,3) - try this ok
456,192,7640,5,0
356,296,8109,1,8
256,192,8578,1,2
●00:34:828 (1) - Move (x:312 y:144) ok
●01:14:203 (1,2,3) - try this ok
256,40,74203,5,4
328,160,74671,1,0
184,160,75140,1,0
thanks~ :)

edit:opps~forgot upload :?

Thite wrote:

thanks mod fixed~

upload
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
irc modded

SPOILER
20:26 <Muya> : Insane
20:27 <Muya> : 00:14:904 (1) - 2grid upにするとより綺麗な星型になると思います
20:34 <Muya> : 00:28:968 (1,1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/bVTP http://puu.sh/bVTT
20:38 <Muya> : 01:29:681 (3,4) - 1gird down
20:39 <Muya> : 01:38:589 (1,2,3) - 2grid down
20:42 <Muya> : 02:01:078 - ここから手拍子で音を取るようにしてノートを配置してください
20:46 <Muya> : hard
20:46 <Muya> : 00:51:703 (1) - 1 grid right
20:48 <Muya> : 01:58:968 (4) - clap追加
20:48 <Muya> : 02:01:078 - Insaneと同じ
20:50 <Muya> : normal
20:50 <Muya> : 01:19:124 - ノート追加
20:51 <Muya> : 01:31:078 - 01:38:343
20:52 <Muya> : この音取りは難しいと思います
20:53 <Muya> : 02:01:078 - Hard,Insaneと同じ
phonic
1,068 posts
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Topic Starter
phonic
I translate it into English


Normal

01:19:124 - add note I added it
01:31:078 - I think that this introduction is difficult I repaired it
01:38:343 - ^ ^
02:01:078 - I am the same as Hard, Insane (Please locate a note as if taking the sound by beating time with hands from here)
^Please send Blees to only this
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
thanks mod fixed~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
fixed~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Thite wrote:

thanks mod fixed~

Bless wrote:

fixed~

Upload
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
omg, in-game pm.
pon pon pon
here we go


Normal
ne 以下都是建议 按简单化来改动。如果之后MAT说这个难度难了点的话可以这么改。 如果保持这个难度 那么完全可以无视 因为改动的话相当于要Remap一遍 ;_;
00:11:624 (1) - 这里对于很新的新手有点坑了啊 而且突然这里来一个1/4也不是很好 可以选择删掉然后这样
SPOILER
记得在折返中间加clap and..之后的note和slider都要稍微作点调整 以免ai mod看出问题
00:17:015 (1) - 让1把之前的3包起来看起来完美些。。 你可以无视。 as I said,如果选择改变 之后的note和slider都要稍微作点调整 以免ai mod看出问题 其实这样改以后之后的NOTE和00:18:890 (1,2,3) 就可以摆成一个相对完美的三角形。
SPOILER
00:41:859 (1) - 为毛不像之前那样摆成NOTE？这里跟vocal打起来感觉不太好
SPOILER
00:56:624 (3) - 改NOTE？
01:28:499 (3) - ^
01:29:671 (2) - x 01:29:906 (2) 提前到这里 结束位置不变
01:32:015 (2) - 给一个折返 01:32:484 (3) - x掉 在01:32:953 (3)给NOTE 于是后面01:33:421 (1)加NOTE 云云。。
01:39:046 (2) - 这种slider最好不出现。
总之红线开始的Slider比较多， 如果是有鼓点或者vocal最好用折返或者slider结尾来表示。



Hard
00:01:546 (2) - make slider looks better like this?
SPOILER
00:04:828 (2) -
SPOILER
00:05:999 (3) - ^ you can cancel grid snap and make these sliders nicely. a very little change will make your map looks better :D you can check all sliders in this way. so i won't list these sliders below
01:24:749 (2) - move down slider a bit or change direction? it's over screen.


Insane
00:09:043 (1) - new combo?
01:14:210 (3) - insert break time after this note? i'm not sure this will help.so it's up to you.
looks fine to me so..
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
hi~ :) reqされたのでModします。

・・・が指摘するような場所が見つからないので細かい提案など書いていきます。


　[Bless's Normal]

　●　00:11:390 (x) note追加? もしくは00:11:624(1)を移動?
　●　01:35:765 (x) note追加?

　[Thite's Hard]

　●　00:49:593 (x) note追加?

　[Insane]

　●　01:14:203 (3) x:408,y:88

少なくてすみません :o
ranked期待してます！　　
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
こんにちわ(・∀・)ﾉ

Normal

00:28:734 (2) - DS
01:16:078 (2) - new combo?

Hard

00:31:078 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰのはじめにfinish
01:32:015 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの最後のfinishなし
02:08:109 (3) - ﾎｲｯｽﾙ追加？

Insane

01:14:203 (3) - 前の(2)と一直線になるように置く
01:23:578 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰのはじめにfinish
01:38:578 (1) - finish追加
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

S h i a wrote:

omg, in-game pm.
pon pon pon
here we go

Insane
00:09:043 (1) - new combo? added
01:14:210 (3) - insert break time after this note? i'm not sure this will help.so it's up to you.
looks fine to me so.. I added note.
You do Mod to be tired, and thank you very much :D

Guy wrote:

hi~ :) reqされたのでModします。

・・・が指摘するような場所が見つからないので細かい提案など書いていきます。


　[Insane]

　●　01:14:203 (3) x:408,y:88 okay

少なくてすみません :o
ranked期待してます！　　
お星さま　ありがとー！！！

y u c a wrote:

こんにちわ(・∀・)ﾉ
Insane

01:14:203 (3) - 前の(2)と一直線になるように置く okay
01:23:578 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰのはじめにfinish added
01:38:578 (1) - finish追加　^
ありがとーう！
Last edited by phonic , edited 1 time in total.
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
thanks mods almost all fixed~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
since phonic was ok with me being drunk, i try:

[Bless' Normal]
Did you left some of the notes without claps intentionally? like 00:18:890 (1,2,3) or 00:24:515 (2,2) etc.
Also, song sounds kinda plain without any hitsounds in the main part. maybe add some rhythm pattern?

[Thite's Hard]
00:16:078 (1) - remove finish from end?
00:23:578 (1) - finish at start?
01:22:874 (6) - curve it a bit, eg: http://puu.sh/c0n1 ?
01:59:203 (1) - add circle here, move spinner 1/2 to the right and make it 1/2 shorter?

[Insane]
You have unsnapped objects.
00:04:121 (2) - remove the red joint? i think it looks better when curved
00:20:061 (1,2,3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/c0pV ?
01:59:203 (1) - add circle here, move spinner 1/2 to the right and make it 1/2 shorter?
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

senaya wrote:

since phonic was ok with me being drunk, i try:


[Insane]
You have unsnapped objects.
00:04:121 (2) - remove the red joint? i think it looks better when curved
00:20:061 (1,2,3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/c0pV ?
01:59:203 (1) - add circle here, move spinner 1/2 to the right and make it 1/2 shorter?
all ok

thank you~
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
S h i a, Guy, y u c a, senaya
thanks mod~ fix a lot :D

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Insane]
00:31:078 (1) - I'd like to use 3/4 instead of 1/2 tho...just personal opinion xD , if you will change this, also dont forget change this 00:34:829 (1)
00:39:283 (4) - how about this
SPOILER
01:04:247 (5) - spacing
01:21:594 (7) - ^

[Thite]
00:22:171 (4) - too far from 00:22:406 (1)?
00:58:968 (3) - move it a bit right ,
SPOILER
01:24:749 (2) - how about add clap at the begin?

good map :D~

PONPON waywayway~
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

goodbye wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:078 (1) - I'd like to use 3/4 instead of 1/2 tho...just personal opinion xD , if you will change this, also dont forget change this 00:34:829 (1) hmm, no change >.<
00:39:283 (4) - how about this changed
SPOILER
01:04:247 (5) - spacing ok
01:21:594 (7) - ^ ^

thank you~ :3
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
quick mod.

[genenal]

tag:
Insane: blees thite kawaii cute pon ponpon

[Insane]
need resnap all note!


just quick mod
so I can't find other problem lol

good lucky!!
star!!
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

spboxer3 wrote:

quick mod.

[genenal]

tag:
Insane: blees thite kawaii cute pon ponpon

[Insane]
need resnap all note!


just quick mod
so I can't find other problem lol

good lucky!!
star!!
fixed
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ phonic ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

[General]

Read in time : 1000


[Insane]

00:58:504 (2,3,4,5) - Try change this rhythm.
SPOILER
01:35:893 (4) - Remove Note.
01:59:203 (1) - Remove NC.


[Thite' Hard]

00:04:828 (2) - Try make this slider?
40,248,4828,2,0,B|88:224|160:272|152:336,2,160,0|8|0
00:32:015 (3,4) - End point Remove Clap.
00:32:953 (1,2) - ^
00:32:484 (4,2) - Start point Add Clap.
01:23:578 (1) - Start point Add Finish.
01:31:078 (1) - ^
02:08:109 (3,4) - Change a slider good with me.


[Bless's Normal]

AR+1 with more fun.
I think this diff Add some clap hitsound in kiai time note will be better.
00:25:453 (1,2) - Sudden note with novice hard too this,so suggestion change a 1/2 repeat slider.
01:32:484 (3,1) - Try change this rhythm.
SPOILER
01:51:468 (1) - This note should be to here 01:51:234.


OK,kawaii song and nice mapset ~ I like it ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck And happy new year ~ ;)
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ phonic ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

[General]

Read in time : 1000 ok, changed


[Insane]

00:58:504 (2,3,4,5) - Try change this rhythm. changed
SPOILER
01:35:893 (4) - Remove Note. removed
01:59:203 (1) - Remove NC. ^



OK,kawaii song and nice mapset ~ I like it ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck And happy new year ~ ;)

Thank you for star and Mod <3

happy new year Rika ~ :3
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Bless's Normal]

AR+1 with more fun. ok
I think this diff Add some clap hitsound in kiai time note will be better. ok
00:25:453 (1,2) - Sudden note with novice hard too this,so suggestion change a 1/2 repeat slider. ok
01:32:484 (3,1) - Try change this rhythm. sorry
SPOILER
01:51:468 (1) - This note should be to here 01:51:234. 01:51:468 (1) - same as 01:47:718 (1) -, so not change
thanks mod

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
Last edited by Bless , edited 1 time in total.
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
thanks mod fixed~!

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
phonicさん あけましておめでとございます～ :)

thank you for the request ~

here my PON PON PON ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - tags - blees ⇒　change bless in all diff !
[Bless' Normal] ⇒ 名前はわざとでしょうか？ Bless's Normal ?
  1. 00:04:828 (3) - add NC
  2. 00:09:046 (4) - why? DS1.33x? grid move. x156,y88 ( and plz follow after )
  3. 00:26:859 (1) - remove NC and 00:27:328 (2) - add NC ?
  4. 00:28:968 (3) - add NC and 00:30:609 (1) - remove NC and 00:31:078 (3) - add NC ?
  5. 00:16:078 (3) - add NC and 00:17:015 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:25:453 (1) - remove NC ?
  7. 00:35:765 (2) - spacing too close (1.11x) ?
  8. 00:40:921 (2) - one grid right. ( because 00:41:390 (1,2) - 1.20x. but 00:40:453 (1,2) - 1.14x >< )
  9. 01:15:609 (1) - remove NC
  10. 01:23:109 (3) - one grid left
  11. 01:33:656 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:124 (2) - add NC ?
  12. 01:58:734 (4) - two grid right. x160,y160
  13. 02:01:078 (1) - change slider. 02:00:843~02:01:078
  14. 02:02:249 (3) - slider start 02:02:015 and add one repeat
  15. 02:05:999 (2,3) - change repeat slider ? 02:05:765~02:06:234 ( repeat part 02:05:999 )
[Thite's Hard]
  1. 00:01:546 (2) - リピート部のclapを削除して、スライダー頭にclap追加？
  2. 00:04:593 (1) - remove NC and 00:04:828 (2) - add NC
  3. 00:27:328 (3) - add NC ?
  4. 01:14:671 (3) - ^
  5. 02:08:109 (3) - 私の好みですが、上方向のスライダーにしてもよいかもです
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:999 (4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/c7c0
  2. 00:53:109 (4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/c7cc
very good map ~ :) two star ☆☆ ~

頑張ってください～ :oops:
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

kosiga wrote:

phonicさん あけましておめでとございます～ :) あけおめですー！

thank you for the request ~

here my PON PON PON ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - tags - blees ⇒　change bless in all diff ! ok
[Bless' Normal] ⇒ 名前はわざとでしょうか？ Bless's Normal ?　はい。 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41216 / http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39108

[Insane]
  1. 00:50:999 (4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/c7c0 ok, changed
  2. 00:53:109 (4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/c7cc ^
　

very good map ~ :) two star ☆☆ ~

頑張ってください～ :oops:

貴重なお星さまとModありがとうございました！
Thite
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Thite
thanks mod fixed~!

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
Bless
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Joined January 2010
Bless

kosiga wrote:

[Bless' Normal] ⇒ 名前はわざとでしょうか？ Bless's Normal ?
  1. 00:04:828 (3) - add NC
  2. 00:09:046 (4) - why? DS1.33x? grid move. x156,y88 ( and plz follow after )
  3. 00:26:859 (1) - remove NC and 00:27:328 (2) - add NC ?
  4. 00:28:968 (3) - add NC and 00:30:609 (1) - remove NC and 00:31:078 (3) - add NC ?
  5. 00:16:078 (3) - add NC and 00:17:015 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:25:453 (1) - remove NC ?
  7. 00:35:765 (2) - spacing too close (1.11x) ?
  8. 00:40:921 (2) - one grid right. ( because 00:41:390 (1,2) - 1.20x. but 00:40:453 (1,2) - 1.14x >< )
  9. 01:15:609 (1) - remove NC
  10. 01:23:109 (3) - one grid left
  11. 01:33:656 (1) - remove NC and 01:34:124 (2) - add NC ?
  12. 01:58:734 (4) - two grid right. x160,y160
  13. 02:01:078 (1) - change slider. 02:00:843~02:01:078
  14. 02:02:249 (3) - slider start 02:02:015 and add one repeat
  15. 02:05:999 (2,3) - change repeat slider ? 02:05:765~02:06:234 ( repeat part 02:05:999 )
all fixed
thanks~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
NewRulerNA
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Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
[Bless' Normal]

特に問題点・気になった場所はありませんでした

[Thite's Hard]

00:22:171 (4) - Newcombo? これをしないなら下のremove newcomboは無視
00:22:406 (1) - Remove Newcombo
00:30:374 (3) - Insaneと全く同じ音取りなのでInsaneと同じようにスライダーのリバース部分以外にFinishを入れてみては？
01:53:578 (1) - 01:52:171 (2) - と完全にスタックしていません　もしスタックをあえてさせていないのならば、スライダーが微妙に斜めになっているのでスライダーの終点を修正
01:54:515 (3) - これもスライダーが微妙に斜めになっているのが気になりました

[Insane]

00:14:437 (4) - DS
00:14:671 (5) - DSが大きく変わっているのにスライダーの下にサークルが置かれているのが個人的に見にくいと思いました
00:44:437 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1gird up
02:08:109 (1) - スライダーの終わりのwhistleを外してもいいのでは？

どの難易度も譜面として問題点は全くないと思います
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Insane]

00:14:437 (4) - DS no, change
00:14:671 (5) - DSが大きく変わっているのにスライダーの下にサークルが置かれているのが個人的に見にくいと思いました ^
00:44:437 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1gird up 1gird上げるとずれるので、 no, change
02:08:109 (1) - スライダーの終わりのwhistleを外してもいいのでは？ okay

ありがとう！
DJPop
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DJPop
かわいい歌♥

You should put something in source, such as album name.


~Bless' Normal~
02:06:703 (1) - use custom soft-hitsound 2

~Thite's Hard~
Claps should be on the white ticks, not red ticks.
00:07:171 (5) - add new combo
00:07:406 (1) - remove new combo
00:14:671 (5) - add new combo
00:14:906 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:171 (4) - add new combo
00:22:406 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:703 (3) - add new combo
01:14:671 (3) - ^
01:39:281 (2) - place on the end of slider
01:48:890 (4) - add new combo
01:52:640 (4) - ^
01:56:390 (4) - ^

~Insane~
00:51:117 (5) - wrong clap
phonic
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
phonic

DJPop wrote:

かわいい歌♥ I think that it is a cute song <3

You should put something in source, such as album name.

~Bless' Normal~
02:06:703 (1) - use custom soft-hitsound 2 added

~Insane~
00:51:117 (5) - wrong clap removed

thank youuuuuuuu!!
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Breeze
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Breeze

DJPop wrote:

You should put something in source, such as album name.
Just sayin, ablum name shouldn't belongs to source long time ago :(
Thite
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Joined April 2010
Thite
thanks mod fixed~

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short ver.) (phonic) [Thite's Hard].osu
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