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Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short Ver.)

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lovhin456
Hello ~
Cute song PONPON ~

Song's info:
- Tags >> You can delete both "pon" and "ponpon" because when you search for pon or ponpon the song shows anyways even without the tags

General:
- Disable letterboxing during breaks for all difficulties

Bless' Normal:
- 00:52:640 >> This slider is a little bit too high, it touches the score numbers a little
- 01:59:203 >> Seems like it is a little high too but it barely touches the hp bar so up to you if you want to change
- Really nice

Thite's Hard:
- Good

Insane:
- Also good

* Really good overall, call me back for a bubble when you fix these
Bless

lovhin456 wrote:

Bless' Normal:
- 00:52:640 >> This slider is a little bit too high, it touches the score numbers a little
- 01:59:203 >> Seems like it is a little high too but it barely touches the hp bar so up to you if you want to change
- Really nice
all fixed
thanks

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short Ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
Topic Starter
phonic

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello ~
Cute song PONPON ~

Song's info:
- Tags >> You can delete both "pon" and "ponpon" because when you search for pon or ponpon the song shows anyways even without the tags removed

General:
- Disable letterboxing during breaks for all difficulties ok


* Really good overall, call me back for a bubble when you fix these

Upload

thank you~!!
Kurai
As per your request ~

General
  1. Hitsounds : In the soft hitsounds sections, the volume is too low, I mean, we don't actually hear the hitsounds decentely, you should consider using 80% volume for all soft-hitsounds sections.
  2. Combo colors : Combo color 4 is too bright, Look at this screenshot, we can't barely see the slidertick because in the default-skin (most of the players use it) the slidertick is white. You should change this color or make it darker. The slidertick image needs to be visible on every slider !
  3. Tags : Tags aren't the same throughout the difficulties ("bless thite kawaii cute pon ponpon" in Normal and "blees thite kawaii cute" in Hard and ""bless thite kawaii cute" Insane).
Bless' Normal
  1. 00:17:015 (2,3,4) - This pattern plays weird. I mean, at 00:17:953 you have the end of the slider, however at this spot starts a the *clap, clap, clap*. Because it's a normal difficulty, everything is mapped on the main beats and that's why it play weird here. Every pattern shall be distinct and shall correspond to something particular in the music in this kind of difficulties. That's why you should make something else here. Maybe something like this :
  2. 01:01:078 (3,1) - Switch the new combo please, it has to be on (3) >w<
  3. 01:32:484 (3) - As you are following the vocals everywhere in the map, this slider has to follow them too, reduce this slider by 1/2 then. (Don't forget to rearranged the next pattern).
  4. 01:41:156 (2) - This slider is too close from the previous slider's track. In this case you can disable the distance snap and do something like this :
Thite's Hard
  1. 00:14:671 (5) - You have forgotten to add a clap here (which is really needed, otherwise the rhythm is broken).
  2. 00:33:421 (2) - The clap should be at the beginning, not at the end here :3
  3. 00:35:648 (2) - Actually, there is no need to add this circle, it's not really justified by the music and it would confuse the player a lot (because it's kinda unexpected here :/). So remove it ?
  4. 01:20:648 (2) - ^
Insane
  1. 00:45:374 (6) - This is not 1/8 here, it's 1/6 !
  2. 01:30:374 (6) - ^
PONPONPON <3

(I don't know why, but I think I have missed some issues, I will see when I will recheck)
Topic Starter
phonic

KuraiPettan wrote:

As per your request ~

General
  1. Hitsounds : In the soft hitsounds sections, the volume is too low, I mean, we don't actually hear the hitsounds decentely, you should consider using 80% volume for all soft-hitsounds sections. hmm, Only all difficulty Kiai Time part made volume 80%
  2. Combo colors : Combo color 4 is too bright, Look at this screenshot, we can't barely see the slidertick because in the default-skin (most of the players use it) the slidertick is white. You should change this color or make it darker. The slidertick image needs to be visible on every slider ! ok, changed
  3. Tags : Tags aren't the same throughout the difficulties ("bless thite kawaii cute pon ponpon" in Normal and "blees thite kawaii cute" in Hard and ""bless thite kawaii cute" Insane). (bless thite kawaii cute) changed
Insane
  1. 00:45:374 (6) - This is not 1/8 here, it's 1/6 ! hmm, I quitted it and changed it into 1/6
  2. 01:30:374 (6) - ^ ^
PONPONPON <3

(I don't know why, but I think I have missed some issues, I will see when I will recheck)
thanks!!
After having revised all problems, I call you
Topic Starter
phonic
:D
Bless

KuraiPettan wrote:

Bless' Normal
  1. 00:17:015 (2,3,4) - This pattern plays weird. I mean, at 00:17:953 you have the end of the slider, however at this spot starts a the *clap, clap, clap*. Because it's a normal difficulty, everything is mapped on the main beats and that's why it play weird here. Every pattern shall be distinct and shall correspond to something particular in the music in this kind of difficulties. That's why you should make something else here. Maybe something like this :
  2. 01:01:078 (3,1) - Switch the new combo please, it has to be on (3) >w<
  3. 01:32:484 (3) - As you are following the vocals everywhere in the map, this slider has to follow them too, reduce this slider by 1/2 then. (Don't forget to rearranged the next pattern). all fixed but this, I don't think reduce this slider by 1/2 is a good idea, is this must be changed?
  4. 01:41:156 (2) - This slider is too close from the previous slider's track. In this case you can disable the distance snap and do something like this :
thanks mod

Download: Kyary Pamyu Pamyu - PONPONPON (Short Ver.) (phonic) [Bless' Normal].osu
Thite
Topic Starter
phonic
Upload
Kurai

Bless wrote:

KuraiPettan wrote:

Bless' Normal
  1. 01:32:484 (3) - As you are following the vocals everywhere in the map, this slider has to follow them too, reduce this slider by 1/2 then. (Don't forget to rearranged the next pattern). all fixed but this, I don't think reduce this slider by 1/2 is a good idea, is this must be changed?
About this, don't only reduce the slider by 1/2, you need to change the following pattern to, otherwiose the rhythm will be completely broken.
Try something like this ?


Feel free to fix or not, Call me back and I will bubble :3

Edit : Bubbled ~ :3
Bless

KuraiPettan wrote:

Edit : Bubbled ~ :3
thank you ~
Topic Starter
phonic

KuraiPettan wrote:

Edit : Bubbled ~ :3


thank you <333
Andrea
Looks good!

Ranked~
Bless

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good!

Ranked~
:)
Kotone
PONPONWAYWAYWAY<3
Topic Starter
phonic

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good!

Ranked~


thanks!!

PONPONPON <333
kosiga
PONPONPON ♪♪

:) :)
Laurier
おめ!!!!!!
Laurier
おめ!!!!!!
Kurai
Yay congratz ~
Topic Starter
phonic
kosiga

PON PON PON way way ~


Laurier / KuraiPettan

thank you!!
Breeze
RANKおめでとう
洗脳曲だ
Topic Starter
phonic
Breeze

ありがとう!
洗脳曲だねw
spboxer3
god!! so fast!!
Kawayi Rika
Nice ~ Omedeto phonic ~

really kawaii song ~ ;)
Topic Starter
phonic
spboxer3

did my best : )


Kawayi Rika

arigato~ Rika~
S h i a
congratz!! so fast :D
Thite
おめでとー :D
Topic Starter
phonic
S h i a

hehe


Thite

ありがとおおお!!
D33d
Nice speedrank with an incomplete difficulty spread, a paltry contribution by the uploader and no breaks. Honestly, the maps here are decent, but I don't think that this should've been ranked so hastily.
banvi
oops, I'm late...
Congrats ;)
Topic Starter
phonic
D33d

yes...
thanks

banvi

thank you ~
I waited for you :D
Gabi
Good job phonic :)

Congrats
Backfire
I've never even seen this before.

(10 days ago)

Ohhhhh.

...Well congrats.
Nymph
really cute song=A= congrats~
Topic Starter
phonic
Gabi
Backfire
Nymph


Thank you very much <33333
AIR315
Congratz~

:D
Kite
Oh, I am too late to mod this ;_; Sorry phonic!!!
Congratulations on rank!
Topic Starter
phonic
AIR315

thank you~


Kite

baka -_-
Dino99
Gratz!!~
yeahyeahyeahhh

D33d wrote:

Nice speedrank with an incomplete difficulty spread, a paltry contribution by the uploader and no breaks. Honestly, the maps here are decent, but I don't think that this should've been ranked so hastily.
Dayum son why so butthurt?
Lizzehb

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

D33d wrote:

Nice speedrank with an incomplete difficulty spread, a paltry contribution by the uploader and no breaks. Honestly, the maps here are decent, but I don't think that this should've been ranked so hastily.
Dayum son why so butthurt?
He's trying to get the same song ranked?

I hate it when this shit happens though. Work on a map for so long then someone submits after you and gets it ranked before you.

EDIT: OKAY WOW. 12 days it kinda bull shit. and wait only ONE difficulty was made by the submitter? I thought you had to have at least 2?
Mismagius

D33d wrote:

Nice speedrank with an incomplete difficulty spread, a paltry contribution by the uploader and no breaks. Honestly, the maps here are decent, but I don't think that this should've been ranked so hastily.
As you can see, there are tons of mods (mostly from mod queues) for this map. What matters isn't the time it gets ranked, but the amount of effort put into the map (and into the map in the ranking process) from the mapper. Try to post more in mod queues, you'll notice a great change.

Nice map anyway.
Sakura

D33d wrote:

Nice speedrank with an incomplete difficulty spread, a paltry contribution by the uploader and no breaks. Honestly, the maps here are decent, but I don't think that this should've been ranked so hastily.
Ironically when i was an unknown mapper, half of my maps got ranked within a week and no one complained.
dNextGen
PORNPORNPORN

super kawaii song btw O:
kikoredog
ponponponponpon zomg its stuck in my head lol love this beatmap, grats on ranked!
kirklee_old
HAHAHAH :)
navitsu
ponpon susumuu~
SilverCatalyst
i was playing insane and...
00:16:078 (1) - why is this snapped on a weird 1/8 snap um??
johnmedina999
Dude this is a 2011 map you can't expect the best.
Also this has been ranked for 5 years, it's not like you can change it anymore.
SilverCatalyst

johnmedina999 wrote:

Dude this is a 2011 map you can't expect the best.
Also this has been ranked for 5 years, it's not like you can change it anymore.
it's just a flaw i saw in the map dude chill
there's been a handful of maps pulled out of ranked to fix issues in the past, even really old ones
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