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Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.)

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Melophobia
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Melophobia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月6日 at 20:29:33

Artist: Marie
Title: Triptych (Short Ver.)
Source: Triptych
Tags: Alcot milu ryafuka Shimotsuki Haruka hentai eroge game visual novel opening
BPM: 161
Filesize: 17951kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.3 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Insane (4.99 stars, 240 notes)
  3. MiLu (4.93 stars, 206 notes)
  4. Ryafuka (3.51 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.)
Download: Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Jan. 6, 2012 Added a video!

Hard by MiLu
Normal by Ryafuka
Last edited by Melophobia , edited 5 times in total.
MiLu
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MiLu
アｗ
Masquerade
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Masquerade
ンンン
Amule
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Amule
oops.
h3k1ru
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h3k1ru
><

SPOILER
19:22 <h3k1ru> : hi :o
19:22 *h3k1ru is editing Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.)
19:22 <Melophobia> : hi
19:22 <h3k1ru> : do u still need timing?
19:22 <Melophobia> : yes
19:22 <h3k1ru> : alright, i finished checking it
19:22 <h3k1ru> : http://puu.sh/bgBO
19:22 <Melophobia> : oh, thank you><
19:23 <h3k1ru> : here the diff
19:23 <h3k1ru> : there fixed bpm and offset
19:23 <Melophobia> : please post in thread, and i give kds :3
19:24 <h3k1ru> : alright, i hope it ll help u to finish this cute song ^^
19:24 <Melophobia> : thank you :)
Melophobia
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Melophobia
>h3k1ru
thanks >w<
Ryafuka
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Ryafuka
開け三面鏡
S h i o n
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S h i o n
Hi. :)

From my M4M Queue.

Easy
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 <-- Make it 0.9 in the notepad.
  2. 01:30:428 (1) - RNC here and NC for 01:30:800 (2)
  3. 01:32:012 (1) - Two spinners to end ? It doen't fit the music. Consider removing the first spinner to map sth.
Ryafuka
  1. 00:16:266 (1) - The end of this slider looks ugly, so try this ?
    120,136,16266,6,0,B|120:180|216:232|316:180|308:124,1,240,0|0
  2. 01:03:968 (1) - Combo color orange is alike spinner's , so just use blue ?
Milu
  1. 00:23:533 (1,1) - The spinner is kinda soon and the note followed is on the red line. This will be very confusing... I'd advise you to make the spinner 1/2 longer and delete that note.
  2. 01:03:409 (3) - Add two more repeats ? Just a suggestion.
  3. 01:08:627 (3) - Not curve but straight ? Feels better flow imo.
  4. 01:10:117 (8) - How about add one note here
Insane
  1. 01:10:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Try this to have better flow.
  2. 01:34:993 (5) - Removing this note sounds better to me.
  3. 01:30:241 (x) - Adding one note sounds better and gives a better flow. Form a triangle among 01:30:055 (4,5,1) Like this.
That's all.
Star for this nice song ~
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 1 time in total.
Ryafuka
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Ryafuka

S h i o n wrote:

Ryafuka
  1. 00:16:266 (1) - The end of this slider looks ugly, so try this ?
    120,136,16266,6,0,B|120:180|216:232|316:180|308:124,1,240,0|0
    it changed reference about your suggestion ;)
  2. 01:03:968 (1) - Combo color orange is alike spinner's , so just use blue ?
okay,add new color and change combo :)
thank you modding~

Download: Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [Ryafuka].osu
Melophobia
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Melophobia
Hi, S h i o n!

S h i o n wrote:

Hi. :)

From my M4M Queue.

Easy
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 <-- Make it 0.9 in the notepad. fixed!
  2. 01:30:428 (1) - RNC here and NC for 01:30:800 (2) ^
  3. 01:32:012 (1) - Two spinners to end ? It doen't fit the music. Consider removing the first spinner to map sth. its fine imo, i ll keep it for now


Insane
  1. 01:10:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Try this to have better flow. no change~
  2. 01:34:993 (5) - Removing this note sounds better to me. fixed
  3. 01:30:241 (x) - Adding one note sounds better and gives a better flow. Form a triangle among 01:30:055 (4,5,1) Like this. no change><
That's all.
Star for this nice song ~
thank you for modding and star! :)
MiLu
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MiLu
thanks :)

Download: Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu
Melophobia
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Melophobia
> MiLu
thanks~

updated,
Faust
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Faust
star star star

rank faster :oops:
Melophobia
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Melophobia

Faust wrote:

star star star

rank faster :oops:
!

thank you stars >w<
Armin
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Armin
Here you are 2 shiny stars on Faust's recommendation. The map itself is great and it deserves to be ranked. Good luck!
Melophobia
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Melophobia
thank you Armin! >w<
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[MiLu]
01:03:409 (3) - end at 01:03:875
01:09:745 (6) - spacing too large
--------------------------------------------------
great mapset.
that's all..
SakiK
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SakiK
hi- from modque

[Ryafuka]
00:46:080 (3,4) - スライダーの始点はwhistelのほうがいい気がしました　clapの場合は音量さげた方がいいかと

[MiLu]
00:34:155 (5) - 始点にwhistel
00:47:384 (7) - NC and 00:48:689 (1) - Rm NC
00:59:310 (1) - NC?
01:31:919 (1) - RmNC and 01:32:664 (3) - NC?
01:33:782 (9) - この後何もないのは少しもったいない気がします　なしならスピンを01:34:900 に移動？

[Insane]
00:17:571 (4) - 1.1DS?（他の同じタイミングが1.1で置いていたので）
00:47:571 (4,5,7) - clap追加？
01:15:953 - 提案
SPOILER
01:17:944 (2) - 始点のFinish削除?

すいません問題全然見つからなくて短くなっちゃいました・・・

すごいいいmapだと思います！Fight~
Melophobia
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SakiK wrote:

[Insane]
00:17:571 (4) - 1.1DS?（他の同じタイミングが1.1で置いていたので）fixed
00:47:571 (4,5,7) - clap追加？合わないと思ったので入れてませんでした>w<
01:15:953 - 提案
SPOILER
no change~
01:17:944 (2) - 始点のFinish削除? ok~
ありがとーう！
Tony
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Tony
Hai there! You request a mod in my queue. so here I am :P

[General]
The kiai should be same in all difficulties. In all diffs except [easy], the kiai ends on 01:33:409 - but in [easy] it ends on 01:35:273 -.
I suggest that you should end it in all diffs here: 01:33:782 - on the downbeat
everything else looks good

[Easy]
00:34:155 (4) - New Combo to split that long pattern
00:55:024 (3) - ^

[Ryafuka]
AR5 it's too much for a Normal diff. I suggest to change to AR4

[MiLu]
00:56:142 (5) - I don't hear cymbal sound in the song. I suggest to remove that finish from start, and add clap or whistle?
01:32:664 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try your best make it symmetrical. It looks better imo ♥

[Insane]
01:10:304 (1) - Remove NC. It has no usage
01:33:037 (1) - ^

the mapset turned out great. The song is lovely. Great job
Good luck on ranking :3
hoLysoup
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hoLysoup
/me eats Melophobia
:>!
all suggestions here~
no video for this song? :O

[Insane]
00:31:173 (5) - remove whistle from slider head?

These 3 claps is to follow the drums in the song if you would like :D:
00:47:571 (4) - add clap on slider head?
00:47:943 (5) - add clap on slider tail
00:48:689 (7) - add clap

01:16:640 (4) - remove finish from slider head?
01:15:708 (1,2) - This will be better if you put the circle at 01:15:707, and then make a slider from: 01:15:894~01:16:266 :D! follows the vocals better like this: http://puu.sh/ce8I
01:16:640 (4) - use whistle instead of finish on slider head?
01:17:944 (2) - ^
Very very nice :D

[MiLu]
http://puu.sh/ce1e I was very happy when I saw this. :D!
00:13:285~00:23:347 - How come you don't use claps on 2, 4 beats like in Insane? I think it sounds very nice with claps :<
00:34:155 (5) - add whistle on slider head
00:46:080 (4) - remove the finish on the repeat? I think it sounds strange
01:03:968 - 50% volume on kiai is too quiet. At least use 60% volume
01:33:968~01:34:900 - add some objects in this section?
Very nice difficulty~

Normal and Easy are perfect.... :>
I can't find anything
☆~~
Very Nice mapset :D
Melophobia
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Melophobia
> hoLysoup, Tony

Fixed all ~ =w=

thanks!
Ryafuka
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Ryafuka

SakiK wrote:

[Ryafuka]
00:46:080 (3,4) - スライダーの始点はwhistelのほうがいい気がしました　clapの場合は音量さげた方がいいかと clapを消して00:45:148 (2) - ここの音に合わせてそれぞれの終端にwhistleを追加しましたー。

Tony wrote:

[Ryafuka]
AR5 it's too much for a Normal diff. I suggest to change to AR4 okay, changed~
thank you modding :)

Download: Marie - Triptych (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [Ryafuka].osu
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