1. Astral Highway!! (5.85 stars, 1489 notes)

-Luminate wrote:

Hi! From my queue

Astral Highway

1. 00:19:799 (4) - this one could be more vertical due to antiflow hdash would make it too tense to dash
   
   💭: If you make it vertical I think it kinda kills the movement so I will just leave it ! ❌
   
   
2. 00:30:999 (5) - I prefer x:280 for smoothier movement
   
   💭: I agree! Moved it. ⭕
   
   
3. 01:02:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the "< >" pattern would make the pattern more comfortable to play
   
   💭: I think it would not have really mattered but after changing it, it felt better so I changed it! Dropped the SR by 0.2 by changing that pattern lol ⭕
   
   
4. 01:07:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really like this part idk why xD
   
   💭: Thank you xoxo 💖
   
   
5. 01:09:666 (5,6,7) - this one is too undermapped comparing to previous electronic sounds pattern
   
   💭: Hearing it really closely it felt less intense than others so I will just keep it ❌
   
   
6. 01:16:999 (2,3) - these two should be seperated from (1) and make (1) hyper to emphasize the downbeat
   
   💭: 01:15:266 (1) is louder than the section you just mentioned so leaving it non-hyper will be the best option ❌
   
   
7. 01:23:532 (4,5,1) - the spacing here is too close for an intense part consider making it more interesting
   
   💭: Fixed by making 01:24:066 (1) a HF ⭕
   
   
8. 01:28:866 (5) - (4) should be a (hyper)dash to (5) to emphasize the drum sounds and to make the distance to the next note more obvious
   
   💭: Instead of making it a hyperdash I spaced it out a bit more so you can notice the drum. ⭕
   
   
9. 01:30:866 - missing a note?
   
   💭: I see what you mean by a missing note but at that section I focused on the more louder drum sound than the smaller drum sound at the background so no its not a missing note ❌
   
   
10. 01:59:799 (2) - sliderend should be hyper?
    
    💭: The whole entire beat is smaller than 02:00:066 (3) and to emphasize 02:00:066 (3) I think a non-hyper will fit better ❌
    
    
11. 02:08:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is this jumps spacing increase? not decreasing it as the beat is stable
    
    💭: 02:08:066 (1,2,3) is higher than 02:08:866 (4,5,6). Its not the volume of the sound its the pitch that I'm going with so the decreasing pattern will fit better ❌
    
    
    
12. 02:18:999 (9) - in similar hitsound follows does have hyper between these beats, I suggest moving this to x:392
    
    💭:Applied ooooo makes it like 10x more fun to play ⭕
    
    
13. 02:31:933 (7,1) - hyper to emphasize the downbeat
    
    💭: I don't think you should hyper downbeats imo. I downsized it a bit more to show that it is a downbeat ❌
    
    
14. 02:32:866 (3,4) - could be more movable to make it more interesting
    
    💭: Since its not intense I prefer to keep the spacing the same ❌
    
    
15. 02:49:399 - 03:19:266 - Well, some part of this doesn't really following the melody much(some 1/2 beat seems weird) try adding some 1/1 sliders (examples : 02:54:199 (5,6) - 02:57:799 (3,4) - 03:03:266 - 03:03:666 (4,5,6) - 03:14:199 (4) - )
    
    💭: I'm emphasizing the squeaky sounds and little drums burst's and if i add 1/1 sliders it feels like it just kill the beat that I'm going with so I think I will keep it the same. If I get more complains I will fix it! ❌
    
    
16. 02:53:132 - 02:53:266 - missing notes
    
    💭: As I mentioned up there going for squeaky sounds and drum sounds ❌
    
    
17. 02:55:932 - this should be a little sudden hyper to (6) as the melody suggests
    
    💭: Applied! Nice catch ⭕
    
    
18. 02:57:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 17 objects(exceed maximum combo for overdose)
    
    💭: oof that was a really bad mistake. Fixed it! ⭕
    
    
19. 03:01:665 (3,4) - here too, same case as 02:55:932
    
    💭: Very good catch oooo ⭕
    
    
20. 03:19:266 (7,1) - 1/1 spacing here should be more further, very sluggish flow
    
    💭: Spaced! ⭕
    
    
21. 03:29:132 (1) - this one could be more spacious as the strong note is on here
    
    💭: Spaced! ⭕
    
    
22. 03:37:132 (1) - hitfinish here sounds weird, pls change to other hs or remove the hs
    
    💭: Sounds fine to me with the custom hitsounds... If i get more complaints I will change ❌
    
    
23. 03:38:332 (5) - the spacing should be like 03:36:732 (5) -
    
    💭: I don't know why I didn't space it... Thanks for the nice catch ⭕
    
    
24. 03:47:566 (5) - hmmm? 1/8 hyperdash? doesn't make sense as the sound should be on white tick, the Ranking criteria also don't recommend this
    
    💭: Oh my I suck at mapping AAAAAAAAAA I fixed thanks for the good catch ⭕
    
    
25. 03:48:866 (2,3) - make the spacing between these two notes more obvious, the song isn't that weak
    
    💭: Spaced it ⭕
    
    
26. 04:13:932 (1,2,3) - same case as above
    
    
27. 04:33:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the spacing can be more further as the hype is gradually increasing, this seems too walkable
    
    💭: When not dashing those become edge jumps and turns really hard. So you actually need to dash. So I will keep this. ❌
    
28. 04:52:466 (2,3) - should be hyper
    
    💭: Fixed ⭕
    
    
29. 05:14:732 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - better use variation here, the jumps looks plain to me
    
    💭: Since its just same repeated beats I prefer to keep it the same! ❌
    

The first part of the song is really nice, very good use of pattern. This deserves to be ranked!

Hope this helps! Thanks you really nice words xoxoxoxoxo will mod your map this weekend!