Thank you Kiddo, updated!
Kiddo-Kun wrote:Oh you, those captions!
• Inconsistent tags on oTo. Please fix that~ Oh, I didn't notice. Fixed o3o
• 00:27:146 (1) - This can match the music better if it was something like this. I'm not sure, I think I'll keep the original pattern for this diff.
• 01:00:217 (1) - Remove the new combo here to match 00:56:438 (3,4). Oh, it's been suggested twice. Fixed!
• 01:09:666 (1,2) - I think this would flow a little better if you did this instead. Hm, I did something similar for the next chorus and I really like this pattern, I think I'll keep it.
• 01:23:603 (2,3,4) - This will trip some players up, in my opinion. It's a tad hard to follow. It would be much better to follow the lyrics at this point. So, I would do something like this.
• 00:12:737 - Add a note here, it feels a tad empty without one. I wanted to re-mark the startint point of that sound on 00:12:973 - that's why I'd like to have a little blank previously
• 00:30:926 - Add a note here with a whistle to match 00:29:036 (19) . Done
• 00:58:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - To make it consistent with the last part. Make it like this.Done, sort of.