1. HD - 4Key (3.15 stars, 1796 notes)
2. NM - 4Key (1.99 stars, 1010 notes)

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~
NM req from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

HD

HD
00:19:681 (19681|2) - Why there's LN here ? vocals
00:36:926 (36926|0) - move to 2 k
00:37:286 (37286|1,37406|2) - move to 12 k
00:52:495 (52495|1,52855|3) - I know you mapped this as vocal sound, but that isn't comfortible to play, I suggest you to extend the LN till next note, so that note mapped as fx sound ok, no reply = ok
01:46:028 (106028|1) - move to 1 would prefer 01:46:388 (106388|1) - in different lane and not be same triple as previous patterns
01:46:388 (106388|0) - move to 2
01:49:980 - same as 00:52:495
01:50:938 (110938|3) - move to 3 would break patterns
02:10:100 (130100|0) - ended this LN at 02:10:340 - nah, too much rhythm for low intensity part
02:10:819 - add note here above
03:03:513 (183513|1) - move to 1

Hope that's help~
What a cute song :3
Good luck~

Litharrale wrote:

ho ho ho your bg sucks and merry christmas

1|2|3|4

use this bg https://i.imgur.com/eZCDark.jpg its your present from santa lith ty

I know you're not done hitsounding but dont forget to add a hitnormal done

nerf your lower diff so it falls within the RC (need one diff below 2*) done

a lot of the things i mention repeat a bunch but i didnt want my mod to be too long

HD

00:02:555 (2555|2,2675|1,2795|2) - make this map 4k+1 and put these on the scratch column fixed, also ctrl-h'd my map 38 times

00:17:166 (17166|3,17286|3) - This map is fun and light and so I dont think you should include uncomfortable patterns like this even if the bpm is low. 00:17:166 (17166|3) - removing this would be sufficient If you can provide a solution that can still emphasise the finish then I'll accept it. Currently,
a map of this SR would be a good farm for me and it's really easy for me to hit this.

00:20:519 (20519|2) - Did you forget a note no i deleted one

00:42:795 (42795|2) - it sounds like this stream keeps going, i know its an "echo" but its still very prominent. My mapping in all modes only follows the main melody of a song

01:14:651 (74651|1,75130|2) - I think this would work better as 4 sliders instead of 2 to match the vocals better

01:39:920 (99920|3,99980|2,100040|1,100100|0,100160|2,100160|3,100220|1,100280|0,100280|3) - that col 4 is pretty awkward, i cant think of a better way to do it though because of the structure. Still mess around and try to make it a little more comfy because this really stuck out while playing

01:45:669 (105669|1) - Having bass hits as triples and snares as doubles 01:46:028 (106028|3) - is a bold strategy cotton and i dont think it'll pay off i've used a triple on every single bell in the song you numpty

01:54:651 (114651|2) - you should make this a jumptrill because its a creative pattern that's underused thanks

02:09:621 (129621|2,130100|0,130459|1,130699|3) - not really seeing what this is mapped to The wub sound becomes prominent on this tick

02:24:711 (144711|0,144831|3,144831|1,144920|2,145010|3,145010|1,145100|2,145190|1,145190|3,145190|0) - https://i.imgur.com/WlHXeN5.png no u

02:35:609 (155609|0) - seems like this LN extends an extra 1/3 ok

02:36:687 (156687|0) - cant hear a synth here ok
>its mapped to the vocals
remove if mapped to vocals

NM

This diff is fine. A bit repetitive though which is why i didn't really find anything.

nerf it to fit RC and let me know what you change to get this done, nerfed all streams after chorus 01:16:687 (76687|1) - 02:13:693 (133693|3) - etc

eyes wrote:

Setup: 02:56:807 - very weird point for kiai time.
You can add tags: Xmas new year 2018 really love! don't think anyone is going to search for the song with those tags
// "really" and "love" are for possibility of searching the english song title "Love! Snow! Really Magic"

1-9 / S+1-8

HD
00:09:022 (9022|0) - you can move it to 3 to avoid 1/2 jack 00:08:843 (8843|0,9022|0) (make sure to rearrange the next note 00:09:262 (9262|1) - if you accept this) that creates a 1/4 jack :blobsweats:
00:11:537 (11537|2,11777|2,11897|3,12136|3) - kinda unneeded what is?
00:35:729 (35729|1,35849|0,35968|1) - you can swap columns to avoid 00:35:489 (35489|1,35729|1,35968|1) not exactly sure what "avoiding" helps with
00:43:034 (43034|3) - move it to 1, column4 is already overloaded by this 00:42:076 (42076|3,42316|3,42555|3,42795|3) yes
00:49:861 - it doesn't seem to be double noteforgot my hitsound xP
00:56:447 (56447|1,56687|1,56926|1,57166|1,57406|1) - eh it is avoidable what is
01:38:962 (98962|2,98962|3) - this and 00:35:729 (35729|1) - are the same sounds, you might want to make it 00:35:729 - a double note ok
01:59:322 (119322|3,119501|3) - it's inconsistent with other 1/4 rolls: 01:01:837 - 01:13:334 pattern variety
02:04:352 (124352|2,124531|2,124621|3,124801|3,124891|2,125070|2) - very uncomfortable pattern and inconsistency difficult the pattern looks like shit but plays better
02:13:693 - should be double, it's much weaker than 02:13:334 yes


NM
00:08:663 - should be double for the bell Don't want to make these too hard since there's a stream
00:12:855 - maybe a note here I follow this structure the whole map
00:24:471 - double for the bell ye
00:27:346 - ^ nah
00:55:010 (55010|2,55370|2,55729|3,56088|3,56807|2,57166|2,57525|2) - you overload right hand in this part looks balanced to me
01:01:837 - double for the bell same as above
01:09:741 (69741|2,69980|2,70220|2) - I'd recommend to avoid such anchors seems fine playability wise
01:13:334 - double for the bell same

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

1. 00:17:166 (17166|3,17286|3,20519|2) - actually i accept lith's suggestion to remove this but if you not insist to remove this one, what if you remove this one 00:17:166 (17166|3) - that's not the issue since you using only one hitsound.
2. 01:02:106 (62106|2,62196|1,62196|3) - i think these notes are unconfortable to press. much better to move this one 01:02:196 (62196|3) - to column 1 for a better flow.
3. 01:06:867 (66867|2,67046|2,67226|2,67406|2,67585|2) - this is really a hard imo since it's 5 stack notes, well 3 stack notes are fine but 5 stack notes in hard diff is not good. Try this pattern.
4. 01:10:340 (70340|0,70340|1,70459|0) - as suggested in first list, remove this note 01:10:340 (70340|0) - .
5. 02:07:825 (127825|0,127825|1,127944|0) - ^
6. 02:13:693 (133693|2,133932|2,134172|2,134412|2,134651|2,134891|2) - 5 stack notes again. Suggested pattern.
7. 02:29:861 (149861|2,150100|2,150340|2,150579|2,150819|2) - ^. Suggested pattern.
8. 02:56:687 (176687|2,176687|3,176807|3) - as suggested in first list, 02:56:687 (176687|3) - remove this note.

Good luck and Advance Merry Christmas

- Aries - wrote:

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[HD]

1. 00:17:166 (17166|3,17286|3,20519|2) - actually i accept lith's suggestion to remove this but if you not insist to remove this one, what if you remove this one 00:17:166 (17166|3) - that's not the issue since you using only one hitsound. That breaks the consistent pattern of two notes on each snare, prefer avoiding
2. 01:02:106 (62106|2,62196|1,62196|3) - i think these notes are uncomfortable to press. much better to move this one 01:02:196 (62196|3) - to column 1 for a better flow. I prefer the way this plays, and has better hand balance
3. 01:06:867 (66867|2,67046|2,67226|2,67406|2,67585|2) - this is really a hard imo since it's 5 stack notes, well 3 stack notes are fine but 5 stack notes in hard diff is not good. Try this pattern. looks nice on paper, but feels really bad to play. used a different pattern that removes the 5 stack though
4. 01:10:340 (70340|0,70340|1,70459|0) - as suggested in first list, remove this note 01:10:340 (70340|0) - .
5. 02:07:825 (127825|0,127825|1,127944|0) - ^
6. 02:13:693 (133693|2,133932|2,134172|2,134412|2,134651|2,134891|2) - 5 stack notes again. Suggested pattern. applied
7. 02:29:861 (149861|2,150100|2,150340|2,150579|2,150819|2) - ^. Suggested pattern. applied
8. 02:56:687 (176687|2,176687|3,176807|3) - as suggested in first list, 02:56:687 (176687|3) - remove this note.

Good luck and Advance Merry Christmas

error_exe777 wrote:

hello here i am

General

Difficulties: eeeeeeeeeeeee the normal is very close to being above 2*. this is bound to change and if i were you i would save the pain of keeping it under and just make an Easy diff. though tbh its up to you I'll keep an eye on it, already did lots of nerfing to get here
Spread: looks okay
Hitsounds: done i think
Metadata: good
AiMod: check aimod for hard fixed
Other:nothing

HD

00:04:950 (4950|1,5429|1) - any reason for these being in the same column? they're not representing the same sound I like to use jacks on unexpected sounds, since they're generally unexpected. Doesn't have to be the same sound for jacks to be used.

00:09:980 (9980|1,10100|0,10340|0,10459|1,10699|1,10819|0,10938|1,11178|1,11178|0,11417|1,11537|0) - this column is pretty overused looks pretty balanced, it's just there's LNs.

00:14:322 (14322|3,14322|0) - unfortunately the drum is on the 1/3rd so idk what you'll do about that at least make what i selected a single to show you're not charting the drum Best to just follow the synth and ignore drum for playability, but keep emphasis to show general tone.

00:25:070 (25070|0,25190|1,25280|0,25370|1) - whats this weird trill for? makes everything odd to play honestly. i dont see any intention behind it either, like PR or whatever 00:25:190 (25190|1) - moved to lane 3

00:29:861 (29861|0,29980|1,30100|0,30220|1) - right hand bias ; ))) no bias on the right

add a note 00:42:914 - here and 00:42:974 - here since the 1/6th sound carries on till there i guess The sound reaches the highest point at 00:42:795 (42795|2) - , so fitting to stop there.

00:45:789 - 00:45:789 - ^^

01:20:519 (80519|1,80519|3,80519|2,80519|0) - honestly a quad seems a bit silly lmao since the sounds before it are stronger. i understand it could be there for emphasis but just feels out of place Good idea, changed to a double

01:40:280 - again maybe add the rest of the 1/6th

01:43:154 - ^^

01:56:447 (116447|0,116447|3,116447|2) - tbh i think a triple is too much agree

02:16:208 - tbh i would chart the 1/4th over the drum but up to you prefer as is, too much if I mapped 1/4

03:09:741 (189741|0,189741|2,189741|1,189741|3) - same concerns yup

NM

00:08:663 - add one for piano chime thing? didn't to keep lower density

00:16:807 (16807|0,16926|1) - CTRL+G ing this makes more sense to me since the direction of flow doesnt change and because the drums are the same the change can seem odd I'm just doing a weber pattern, they're generally easier imo.

00:58:244 (58244|1,58364|2,58483|3,58603|0,58723|1,58843|2) - making these flow in the same direction is odd since the drums change halfway through. maybe find a way to show that with bursts or trills or something this is NM lol, going from lane 4 to 1 is fine for emphasis.

01:09:621 (69621|1,69741|2,69861|3,69980|2,70100|1,70220|2,70340|3) - damn first column dead that's just the nature of the pattern tbh, is fine

01:16:208 - again column 1 dead reworked the whole pattern

02:09:382 (129382|0,129741|3,130100|1,130459|2) - this pattern is questionable for a NM diff. imo it's fine

03:01:118 (181118|3,181118|0) - i think a double is too much tbh. not really any sound strong enough there is a bell here

03:16:567 - i highly recommend adding an LN like in HD done

good luck!

Weber wrote:

Unfortunately I have to pop this due to some sections being mapped in 1/3 in the NM, despite being mapped as 1/4th in the HD (correctly).

NM

The sections in need of fixing snaps for are: 00:08:663 - 00:13:693 - 01:01:837 - 01:06:867 - 01:13:334 - 01:59:322 - 02:04:352 - 03:02:555. Please change these to 1/4th streams or 1/2 notes. discussed that there are sounds on every 1/3 tick in the song, I am using these patterns to convey the general feeling of the song while still keeping the object density of a NM. (that + it would make the diff go over 2*)

This isn't necessary, but consider changing 00:13:334 (13334|2) - into a 2/3 LN or adding a note on col 1 to 00:13:573, just because of the slight vocal that I think feels a bit off without anything there. 01:06:747 - Same here. nah, vocals aren't mapped to LNs much unless it's super unique
00:13:693 (13693|1,13813|2,13932|3,14052|2,14172|1,14292|0) - Consider making this 1,2,3,4,3,2 for pitch, and adjust the double's position however you see fit. 1234 21
01:01:717 - Add a note here on col 3. 01:13:214 - Same here. 01:59:202 - and here (col 4). 02:04:232 - (col 4) sure
01:09:741 (69741|2,69980|2,70220|2) - Density is a little too much here, try this alternative: https://i.imgur.com/AzKVqhL.png sure
03:14:771 (194771|3,196088|2) - First note should be on a lower column than the 3rd one. Pitch relevance GRRRRRRRRRRR. Consider 3,2,4 and then (3,1) for the final notes. lol sure


HD

01:14:771 (74771|2) - Not really a sound here, remove this note. This is more of a filler rhythm to keep all patterns to either 1/3 or 2/3, having a random 1/1 isn't good for flow.
02:24:831 (144831|1,144831|3,144920|2,145010|3,145010|1,145100|2,145190|0,145190|3,145190|1) - Pattern feels like it could be improved on visually, consider changing to: https://i.imgur.com/LIN43Up.png Jacks follow the song better

Really like this HD.

Call me back.

JBHyperion wrote:

Reverting to bubble until Lith realises what a colossal lemon he's been >_>

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

There is something I want to say about.
Just few.

About offset, it's kind of too early, don't you think? Around 2935 (+20) is more accurate. I just noticed this since you said the same thing last time you modded my map, but your computer has an offset issue. I've gone through some of your maps, and all of them have a late offset. I'd highly suggest that you use a different computer when checking if something is timed correctly. (This is timed correctly)
Don't forget to resnap the timings, notes and storyboard hitsounds.

Overall the map is nice, but I want to clarify something:
(The mod is under the new offset)

[NM]
00:35:270 (35270|3) - comparing to 00:34:551 (34551|1,34911|2) - , if you're mapping to the vocal on here, this part is longer "boh boh boh" than 00:34:551 (34551|1,34911|2) - , i have no ideas why it should be shorter, but imo, either you make 3 of them being the same length like on HD or extend the long of 00:35:270 (35270|3) - to 00:35:629 - it would be more accurate. It's much easier to end an LN and press another key at the same time. I kept it like this just to simplify for playability, I really can't make it more technical than it already is
00:40:300 (40300|2,40659|0,41018|3) - 01:37:785 (97785|0,98144|3,98503|0) - same.

01:01:976 (61976|1,62096|2) - Well, I know it have 1/3 hihat here, but are you intended to follow 1/4 background sound or 1/3 hihat? If you did it for 1/4 bg sound, imo change to 1/4 is much more better. This was already discussed in Weber's bubble pop on page 1.
01:07:006 (67006|1,67126|0,67366|2) - I guess applied to this one too.
01:13:473 (73473|1,73593|2) - 01:59:461 (119461|0,119581|2) - 02:04:491 (124491|1,124611|2,124851|2) - 03:02:695 (182695|1,182815|2) - 00:08:803 (8803|1,8923|2) - 00:13:833 (13833|1,13952|2,14192|1) - .

01:16:228 - On this part hmm, I will just suggest you to follow the basic 1/3 kick to make your ideas be more clear, tbh, I know you are following the harp sound right here but it just feels missing, suggestion: ignores it would be better https://puu.sh/yxGxe/0e7682740a.png. This would create a huge gap in spread, both ways of mapping this are fine.
02:13:713 (133713|3,133713|0,133833|1,133952|2,134072|3,134432|1,134551|2,134671|1,134791|0,135150|3,135270|2,135390|1,135509|2) - 03:05:449 (185449|3,185449|0,185569|1,185689|2,185809|1,186168|3,186288|2,186408|1,186527|2,186887|0,187006|1,187126|2,187246|3) - .

02:35:150 (155150|3,155270|1,155270|0) - comparing 02:35:150 - to 02:35:270 -. On 02:35:150 - got kick but on 02:35:270 - is hihat, why 2 notes on 02:35:270 - instead of 02:35:150 - ? this part is similar too ( 02:32:276 - ). fair point, but I'm not gonna dq to change one double. Doesn't have that much of an effect on gameplay since that's how the pattern is usually played.

It's fine for a normal but it's still kinda hard even tho it's around 167BPM plus 1/3 for 95% of the map

[HD]
HD is all fine but some parts like 00:14:342 (14342|3,14342|0) - 00:14:342 (14342|3,14342|0,67515|2,67515|3) - 02:05:000 (125000|1,125000|0) - while there is a drum on 1/3 but you put 2 notes (I think you're following the drum on here).
It should be on 1/3 for a better snap, I just feel off on here you put 2 notes on 1/4, it's kind of delay. This was considered while mapping, but it's not possible to both map the 1/4 synth and 1/3 drums at the same time. I felt it was better to map the more unique part of the song here, as drums are pretty much everywhere else. The doubles are there to keep the general feeling of the drums + keep consistent object density, else it just feels weird to play.

That's all! The map overall is nice too!

Sinnoh wrote:

changed it to 2929 since 2930 makes NM 2.00 stars