he's got a pointNifty wrote:
and I pointed out the spread issue too, I even gave you the correct metadata.
also if you planned on giving him kds sorry, he kept bringing it up so i was like okay i'll look
he's got a pointNifty wrote:
and I pointed out the spread issue too, I even gave you the correct metadata.
thanks tks!TKS wrote:
inner
00:00:082 (1) - there is no big point having don when compared to these notes 00:01:379 (13) - 00:02:676 (23) - 00:03:973 (34) - . hm i see your point but i like the way the first notes of the bars are done right now - having the first note of each four bar phrase be a d sort of shapes the phrase if that makes sense
00:05:190 (46,47) - ^ also you could swap them. if you want to emphasize such a calm part, placing kat sound on barline makes sense absolutely. well up to you. same response, see above
00:12:892 (109,110) - 00:14:189 (120,121) - 00:18:081 (157,158) - on the contrary, you could emphasize this kiai part by swapping them. for the first two kiais the structure formed by the first notes is d d k k (with the exception of the second half of the second kiai). since the structure in the beginning is d k k k, the additional d compared to the intro already emphasizes the kiai imo
00:46:297 (388,389) - should be removed them then add don to 00:46:135 - . i guess that you just made a similar pattern the same way as 00:41:108 - but they have different sound clearly. yeah that's something i noticed while mapping, but i decided to stick with the same rhythmic structure at all those parts regardless of the drum beat in the back because i wanted to emphasize the synth melody and sticking a note right after it would detract from said emphasis
01:27:810 (739,740) - ^ same. ^
here's a concept: mapping exactly to the song doesn't always produce good resultsNifty wrote:
I still think the inner need to be brought to attention, the "emphasis" at 00:14:514 - is not fitting for such a small occurrence in the music.
The 1/6 at 00:19:541 - and the corresponding patterns is not appropriate since it's aligned to a pattern that is 1) not exactly what it is mapped as and 2) instantly switches to essentially a 1/4 improv pattern over the bass+snare background. This is extremely misleading, as for the first 4 notes you are playing to the high pitched trill that slows down, but for the rest of the pattern it isn't necessarily mapped to anything in the music that is important at the time. This forces the player to play it just by reading, which may not be difficult, but it's something that shouldn't happen when there are alternative solutions, like using sliders.
tl;dr for some reason: mapping the first 4 notes of the trill and instantly switching to a layer that you can hardly here isn't okay.
here's another concept: they didn't need any touch-upNifty wrote:
Also were the kantan and oni even touched?
That's my point, that's exactly what the song doesn't do. It's... that word that is used when something isn't aligned to a metronome. It's random, you can't map it exactly unless you used, like, 1/16. That's why it's not appropriate for things to be mapped "not exactly" to it, the method you're using it not helping the players rather than hurting them.hikikochan wrote:
if i were to "map to the music," i'd be pulling some shit like (kdkdkdk)dkdk because that's literally what the song does.
"unsnapped?" lol that's the word you're looking forNifty wrote:
That's my point, that's exactly what the song doesn't do. It's... that word that is used when something isn't aligned to a metronome. It's random, you can't map it exactly unless you used, like, 1/16. That's why it's not appropriate for things to be mapped "not exactly" to it, the method you're using it not helping the players rather than hurting them.
Monstrata wrote:
Kantan
00:13:054 (19,20,21) - d k d here? I think the color change here would fit pretty well with the change in pitch (down/up/down) ok,
makes sense
00:18:243 (27,28,29) - Same idea here, except use k d k instead? i think you have the wrong time stamp because it's already k d k...
00:29:919 (46,47,48) - Make this k k k for consistency with what you did on 00:09:162 (12,13,14) - ? They both map to the trill sound and I think you have a good amount of variation elsewhere anyways. This sound is quite unique so using the same rhythm creates a better sense of consistency that ties in the rest of the sections. sure. also changed 00:29:270 (45) - to d to set up the pattern better, pls check
00:40:297 (60,61,62) - First of all, not really sure why 00:40:784 (61) - is a d, maybe change it to k instead so you get some color alternation going into the start of 00:41:594 (62) - for better emphasis? Second, 00:40:297 (60) - could also be k, I think this rhythm would flow pretty well but feel free to disagree. makes sense, fixed
00:50:675 (72,73,74) - k k k instead? Because who doesn't love white supremacists? (I wonder how old this joke is, I'm new to taiko pls let me have my fun). Also cuz you use d k d for 00:54:567 (79,80,81) - so it would be nice if you used a different rhythm to help distinguish the two rhythms a bit better. LOL but yea, that's a good idea
01:27:485 (128) - Not really sure why this is a d either. I think k is better for the pitch? done
Oni
00:04:135 (22,23,24) - ddk sounds pretty cool here. kdk felt kinda uh, idk not necessary? Stick with a simpler rhythm since this is the intro? changed
00:18:406 (111,112) - k d instead of d k? I think it flows better like that. i think both work equally well in this pattern, but since i used d k for an earlier rhythm i'll switch to k d for some variation
00:31:540 (204,205) - Imo better to put the k on 00:31:540 - for the snare. I understand that putting a k on 00:31:703 (205) - also makes sense for the high note, but since you've been using color changes like 00:32:027 (206,207) - on snares, i think it's better to use the k for the snare sound here too. done
01:21:810 (554,555,556,557) - k d d k instead of k k d k? There's an extra drum hit on 01:21:972 - that you could embellish with a d instead of keeping it k. done
Monstrata wrote:
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frukoyurdakul wrote:
Hello there, sorry for this late mod but I have a concern about some things on Inner Oni. If you have better explanations, please explain.I think these issues are important hence I need some clarifications on these usages. My intention is not starting a drama or something, I wrote to the thread because I couldn't find you in game. Sorry for the inconvenience. no problem, thanks for taking a look!
- 00:09:162 - I consider you created this stream as flat 1/4 because it's the intro section and should be calm. If you follow the 1/6 keyboard sound, it should start or contain at least one 1/6 4-plet like you did on 00:19:541 - this for example. yes your explanation is correct - i avoided using 1/6 here because it's still in the calmer intro
- 00:14:514 - Well, just because it feels or flows good I don't think a 1/6 dddk is neccessary there because it emphasizes nothing. And it also triggered me a bit since you haven't use any 1/6 that I mentioned above, not using where the sound exists and using where the sound doesn't exist is... not good for me. Same applies on 00:56:027 - this as well. as established in the previous point, i didn't use 1/6 in the intro because of the song's calmness. here in the more upbeat sections (with pounding bass beats, higher synth melodies, etc you get the gist) i use 1/6 where there exists 1/6 in the song, just not necessarily exactly how the song does it. at 00:14:514 - there are some faint grace notes in the melody leading to the following note that don't appear anywhere else in the song other than 00:56:027 -, so i chose to emphasize that with (dddk), which works because the only note emphasized by that patterning is the more audible last note. for the parts of the song correlating to 00:19:541 (163,164,165,166) - i've explained my logic in previous mod responses
- 00:48:081 - I think you should've started the 1/3 patterns here because it's hard to follow what the patterns are written of, especially a start on off-beat 1/3 makes it even harder to understand, but if you have thought of following the D kkd K ddk sequence twice (which is not twice, the 2nd K ddk doesn't exist) I can suggest changing 00:48:243 ~ 00:48:567 - to K ddk (dddkkkd) (bracket means 1/3) to follow the background rhythm fully and switch to keyboard afterwards. What I mean is more clear on the image (the point is at 00:48:567 - ) i've actually considered this patterning before but decided against it because playing the K ddk rhythm while the synth melody is clearly in 1/3 feels off. while you could argue that the X xxx X xxx etc rhythm scheme adheres to the percussion layer only and thus this section is a bout of confusing layer switching, i'd argue that it follows the synth melody as well (finishers landing on a new group of 3 1/2s), so this patterning isn't a problem
- 01:01:053 - This one's structure conflicts with the other ones, considering you are following the 1/6 1/4 keyboard foreground sound, I expected a stream like others such as 00:29:919 - this one. Why doesn't this have one while the others have? Couldn't understand. the emphasis in this section is on the pounding 1/1 bass kick so in order to continue that emphasis i avoid mapping a stream here. the patterning clearly allows for ds on the beats and the lack of a stream actually allows these notes at 01:01:378 (521,522,523) - to have more impact in the context of the instrumental background
Umm, the pattern actually conflicts what you say there. It actually is not following the synth at 00:48:081 - this spot where the 1/3 started, and 00:48:243 (400) - this note is currently emphasizing the main melody. An instrument switch at that point plus a SV change at the middle of the 1/3 synth makes me confused, because you are correct on 00:46:783 - 00:47:270 - 00:47:756 - these about following the pitch itself but 00:48:243 - this one conflicts with them. Because of the 1/3 synth start there is actually not a specific synth sound that starts at the note's time but exists on 1/3 snapping around, which makes it harder to follow.hikikochan wrote:
[*]00:48:081 - I think you should've started the 1/3 patterns here because it's hard to follow what the patterns are written of, especially a start on off-beat 1/3 makes it even harder to understand, but if you have thought of following the D kkd K ddk sequence twice (which is not twice, the 2nd K ddk doesn't exist) I can suggest changing 00:48:243 ~ 00:48:567 - to K ddk (dddkkkd) (bracket means 1/3) to follow the background rhythm fully and switch to keyboard afterwards. What I mean is more clear on the image (the point is at 00:48:567 - ) i've actually considered this patterning before but decided against it because playing the K ddk rhythm while the synth melody is clearly in 1/3 feels off. while you could argue that the X xxx X xxx etc rhythm scheme adheres to the percussion layer only and thus this section is a bout of confusing layer switching, i'd argue that it follows the synth melody as well (finishers landing on a new group of 3 1/2s), so this patterning isn't a problem
i think the way to map the transition into the heavy 1/3 part is up to interpretation, and i personally enjoy the way this part is structured as the beginning of the 1/3 synth is to me, very faint, and becomes most clear at 00:48:405 (401) - . it plays quite nicely as well, so yes i do believe this transition is open to interpretation.frukoyurdakul wrote:
Umm, the pattern actually conflicts what you say there. It actually is not following the synth at 00:48:081 - this spot where the 1/3 started, and 00:48:243 (400) - this note is currently emphasizing the main melody. An instrument switch at that point plus a SV change at the middle of the 1/3 synth makes me confused, because you are correct on 00:46:783 - 00:47:270 - 00:47:756 - these about following the pitch itself but 00:48:243 - this one conflicts with them. Because of the 1/3 synth start there is actually not a specific synth sound that starts at the note's time but exists on 1/3 snapping around, which makes it harder to follow.hikikochan wrote:
[*]00:48:081 - I think you should've started the 1/3 patterns here because it's hard to follow what the patterns are written of, especially a start on off-beat 1/3 makes it even harder to understand, but if you have thought of following the D kkd K ddk sequence twice (which is not twice, the 2nd K ddk doesn't exist) I can suggest changing 00:48:243 ~ 00:48:567 - to K ddk (dddkkkd) (bracket means 1/3) to follow the background rhythm fully and switch to keyboard afterwards. What I mean is more clear on the image (the point is at 00:48:567 - ) i've actually considered this patterning before but decided against it because playing the K ddk rhythm while the synth melody is clearly in 1/3 feels off. while you could argue that the X xxx X xxx etc rhythm scheme adheres to the percussion layer only and thus this section is a bout of confusing layer switching, i'd argue that it follows the synth melody as well (finishers landing on a new group of 3 1/2s), so this patterning isn't a problem
The other explanations are fine for me, but I think you should really change this one.
here okay allow me to go full extra for a bit to explain thisfrukoyurdakul wrote:
Umm, the pattern actually conflicts what you say there. It actually is not following the synth at 00:48:081 - this spot where the 1/3 started, and 00:48:243 (400) - this note is currently emphasizing the main melody. An instrument switch at that point plus a SV change at the middle of the 1/3 synth makes me confused, because you are correct on 00:46:783 - 00:47:270 - 00:47:756 - these about following the pitch itself but 00:48:243 - this one conflicts with them. Because of the 1/3 synth start there is actually not a specific synth sound that starts at the note's time but exists on 1/3 snapping around, which makes it harder to follow.
The other explanations are fine for me, but I think you should really change this one.