Yasuda Rei - Mirror -TV edit- [Taiko]

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Chromoxx
hi

Oni
00:00:406 (1,2) - i'd suggest either deleting these notes or making a spinner until 00:02:059 - to start the map off at 00:02:295 - since the part here is more of a play in
00:35:839 - maybe change this 5plet to kkdkd since the vocals are pretty different from the last kkddk things you used
00:45:524 - i don't feel like the cymbal here warrants a finisher tbh.. since it's not a strong crash and comes pretty unexpectedly
01:00:287 - add a note here to make more rhythmic diversity and better pacing
01:15:406 - ^
01:19:303 - i feel like the cymbal here is too faint to warrant a finisher... feels kinda sudden and out of place when playing imo
01:24:972 - ^
01:26:390 - remove the finisher to add more emphasis on the final crash at 01:27:335 -
01:27:571 - you could make an extra green line on the spinner here to lower the hitsound volume to 30% or something for a more quiet fadeout.. you could also make the volume transition progressive towards the end of the spinner if you want

Muzu
00:00:406 - same as in oni
00:11:744 (6,7,8) - for this part the d k d pattern is repeated way too often and becomes very repetitive imo, maybe mix things up a bit?
00:24:986 - somewhat the same for d d k here

the diff uses a lot of pretty complicated rhythms which may be a bit hard for a muzu but it should be fine i guess

Futsuu
00:00:406 - same here as other diffs
- the diff is kinda lacking 2/1 and 4/1 breaks, specially in the calmer parts, so try to implement a few more rest moments. The rhythms look fine though

Kantan
00:00:406 - same as in other diffs
00:08:909 - add a note for buildup?
00:12:453 - change to d for variety and pitch emphasis relative to 00:10:563 - and 00:14:343 - ?
00:22:610 - delete this note? as it is now it kinda takes emphasis away from 00:23:791 -
00:37:020 - change to k for variety and better pitch emphasis when comparing with 00:38:909 -
00:40:091 - to 00:47:650 - is kinda mapped weirdly inconsistent imo
01:27:571 - start the spinner at 01:27:335 - ? better than having it on the red tick in a kantan imo
Topic Starter
Lasse

Chromoxx wrote:

hi 👀

Oni
00:00:406 (1,2) - i'd suggest either deleting these notes or making a spinner until 00:02:059 - to start the map off at 00:02:295 - since the part here is more of a play in makes sense, removed since spinner for piano intro feels weird
00:35:839 - maybe change this 5plet to kkdkd since the vocals are pretty different from the last kkddk things you used yea changing this is nice since the kkddk ones before and after are only on drums
00:45:524 - i don't feel like the cymbal here warrants a finisher tbh.. since it's not a strong crash and comes pretty unexpectedly true, removed finish but changed to k
01:00:287 - add a note here to make more rhythmic diversity and better pacing
01:15:406 - ^ nice
01:19:303 - i feel like the cymbal here is too faint to warrant a finisher... feels kinda sudden and out of place when playing imo
01:24:972 - ^ yea I'm still kinda figuring out how to proprerly utilize them lol
01:26:390 - remove the finisher to add more emphasis on the final crash at 01:27:335 - i think this one works well enough and fits so nicely here with the song suddenly using so many more cymbals
01:27:571 - you could make an extra green line on the spinner here to lower the hitsound volume to 30% or something for a more quiet fadeout.. you could also make the volume transition progressive towards the end of the spinner if you want yea did progressive volume on all diffs
also adjusted finishers on low diffs in a similar way

Muzu
00:00:406 - same as in oni
00:11:744 (6,7,8) - for this part the d k d pattern is repeated way too often and becomes very repetitive imo, maybe mix things up a bit? yea made it alternate between dkk an dkd now
00:24:986 - somewhat the same for d d k here tried some things here too

the diff uses a lot of pretty complicated rhythms which may be a bit hard for a muzu but it should be fine i guess yea I mean the song is built around these less usual rhythms, like lots of 3/4 emphasis stuff and this is as simplified as it can get without ignoring it too much I think

Futsuu
00:00:406 - same here as other diffs
- the diff is kinda lacking 2/1 and 4/1 breaks, specially in the calmer parts, so try to implement a few more rest moments. The rhythms look fine though
really hard to add such breaks with the rhythm of the song since that tends to make for some really big breaks, but I tried some things:
00:16:705 (17,18) - removed
00:31:823 (18,19) - ^
00:39:382 (19,20) - ^
00:24:264 (18) - removed, it's only a 3/2 gap but better than nothing I guess and ignoring 00:24:500 - too seems a bit too undermapped for the transition here
no idea how do have them in the buildup part without ruining the whole feeling but things like 00:47:650 (1,2,3) - already provide lots of rest

01:11:508 (18,19) - removed since it's pretty long without any, mapped 01:11:272 - instead to not completely kill intensity

Kantan
00:00:406 - same as in other diffs
00:08:909 - add a note for buildup? yes
00:12:453 - change to d for variety and pitch emphasis relative to 00:10:563 - and 00:14:343 - ? pitch stuff doesn't seem too different to me,
but using the same pattern 3 times is a bit boring so I changed it

00:22:610 - delete this note? as it is now it kinda takes emphasis away from 00:23:791 - makes sense
00:37:020 - change to k for variety and better pitch emphasis when comparing with 00:38:909 - sure
00:40:091 - to 00:47:650 - is kinda mapped weirdly inconsistent imo changed some things so the density is less varied
01:27:571 - start the spinner at 01:27:335 - ? better than having it on the red tick in a kantan imo yea, made 01:26:390 - into finisher since having none after changing this seemed a bit weird

thanks!
Chromoxx
recheck

oni
01:07:256 - ddd ddd feels a bit weird for really strong vocals here, something like ddk kkd might be better

the stuff you did in the futsuu is sufficient so no other worries here :D

12sp?
Topic Starter
Lasse
true, changed that
Chromoxx
looks good, bubbled :3
Mir
pogchamp
defiance
lasse mapping taiko


wot
lit120
taiko set from lasse hmmmmmm
Arrival
oni

00:46:705 (25,26,27) - lack of k sounds and plays a bit weird to me i'd suggest changing this to kdk for exemple, ddk can also fit
01:08:083 - consider adding a k here to further emphasize the d that is on a strong vocal. currently going d -> d doesn't reflect enough the increasing vocal intensity atm
01:25:445 - I think your SVs here are a bit too stack, most of all this doublet 01:25:799 (2,3) -
try -> 01:25:917 - 0.97
01:26:390 - 0.92
01:27:098 - 0.86
01:27:335 - 0.83
this will unstack quite a bit the first doublet and the last two notes of the section

muzukashii

there's a lack of 2/1 break in the map, one is enough considering the length of the song.
good spot could be here 00:39:146 - by removing 00:39:382 (24,25,26,27) -
or better here 00:55:209 - by removing 00:55:681 (9,10) -

00:59:224 (9) - considering the structures following i do think this note is too much, deleting would make a better emphasis on the downbeat although
01:14:343 - here it actually sounds great

futsuu

00:38:909 (18) - please K here :(
01:11:272 (18) - i think i would remove this note considering the previous matches the vocals well and this one is more instrumental related... but it works too so do as you want

kantan is oké
call bak
Topic Starter
Lasse

Arrival wrote:

oni

00:46:705 (25,26,27) - lack of k sounds and plays a bit weird to me i'd suggest changing this to kdk for exemple, ddk can also fit did kdk
01:08:083 - consider adding a k here to further emphasize the d that is on a strong vocal. currently going d -> d doesn't reflect enough the increasing vocal intensity atm makes sense
01:25:445 - I think your SVs here are a bit too stack, most of all this doublet 01:25:799 (2,3) -
try -> 01:25:917 - 0.97
01:26:390 - 0.92
01:27:098 - 0.86
01:27:335 - 0.83
this will unstack quite a bit the first doublet and the last two notes of the section
did sth like that and reduced slowdown in general a little since it felt a bit awkward to me

muzukashii

there's a lack of 2/1 break in the map, one is enough considering the length of the song.
good spot could be here 00:39:146 - by removing 00:39:382 (24,25,26,27) -
or better here 00:55:209 - by removing 00:55:681 (9,10) -
did second one

00:59:224 (9) - considering the structures following i do think this note is too much, deleting would make a better emphasis on the downbeat although
01:14:343 - here it actually sounds great
was supposed to follow vocals, but 00:58:516 - 01:13:634 - made it unclear cause vocals are on blue before, I changed rhythm here a bit to be more clear on vocals so it should be better now I think

futsuu

00:38:909 (18) - please K here :(
01:11:272 (18) - i think i would remove this note considering the previous matches the vocals well and this one is more instrumental related... but it works too so do as you want

applied both

kantan is oké
call bak
thanks!
Arrival
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