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M4M[Inner Oni]
00:03:636 (15,16) - I guess kdk or change to be dkd is can be more follow piano and emphasize
00:21:653 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - change them to ddkkddkkkkd? from the 00:22:156 - I can hear drum sound if you use kkkkd it's can be more emphasize
00:45:284 - if you are trying to make it to be smooth SVs you need to add SV 0.78x here for the new bar
00:45:619 - is it your willfulness? here is can be mapped 1/8 kk
01:37:407 - change to ddkkd? I saw you started using 5-plets on the 01:40:089 and to be more spread I guess you should change to 5-plets
01:59:027 - same,please add SV to make it smoother
02:24:670 ~ 02:29:865 - actually they will be fine but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) is not flow and SVs not fit the part.I understand 02:24:670 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - higher SVs with higher-pitched but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - stroung sound is same and I wanna fix for you(make it more smoother).I suggest you delete SVs 02:30:368 and 02:30:871 or do whatever can make it smoother.also there 02:31:541 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - is problem for now bacause at 1/3 is hard to read. so 02:31:541 - change SV to 1.1x and last 02:31:876 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - you just change SVs start from 1.07x ( 02:31:876 ) to 1.01x ( 02:32:547 )
03:02:044 ~ 03:12:100 -I know you want to keep break but for me overall of the map is following vocals.so here is possiblely to mapping vocals (it's just my opinion you don't need to follow,up to u)
03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - same,sound is no different in my thought (here 03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - ) and please make SVs be more smoother,it's hard to read or you just try to make like 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) what I said before
03:55:759 - add note here? I think make it's longer than other point in last part should be good .else it's feel weird to gap here 03:56:094 - if you dislike to see note close with bignote you just add SVs from 03:55:424 ~ 03:56:178 - use 1.01x~1.1x
the diffi is pretty cool but SVs you should consider and changes them again please
[Nardo's Oni]
00:29:698 - delete here for spread of notes and also 7+ notes in part like this is look weird (because the part is same as 00:17:128 ~ 00:21:150 ) delete please
00:32:547 - how about k ddkkd? kkd kdd is look weird to me idk
00:46:625 ~ 01:18:804 -seem good :3 also even all kiais!
01:22:072 - add k here? to follow+emphasize vocals and I guess it would be better because it will be oppisite here! 01:19:390 -
01:46:290 (543,544,545,546,547,548) - same as before if you would ot change to ddkkd
01:54:083 (580,581,582,583,584,585) - they're weird to me because you follow vocals.even 00:38:580 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - you should delete 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - (instead break by there) and put kkd 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - and add note 01:54:837 - to be more smoother and flow
pretty cool
[Muzukashii]
01:05:396 (241,242,243,244) - why not kkk? I think it's can be more highlight vocals
02:19:139 (223,224,225) - same
02:23:999 - overall of the map you never ignore drum sound so please add kkk and delete 02:23:747 (246) - for spread
03:12:435 (3) - change to k? to follow vocal+top diffi
03:13:441 ~ 03:40:256 - actually it's should have break 3/2 or 1/1 after passed 1/16~1/20 but because it's 179bpm lower than generally bpm .so I guess it can be rankeble but for sure you should delete 03:13:943 or 03:14:278 - and 03:24:670 or 03:25:005 -
yeah,the diffi is seem fine but please cute break at last kiai
[Futsuu]
00:46:625 - you need to add some triplets because before start kiai is have triplets(without kiai should easier than kiai) to make it's balance you need to add some triplets and also second is same! you need to add more triplets(buff them) make kiais balance and only last kiai is harder
I don't have another thing to say,you need to make more triplets in kiais to make more spread and balance,breaks is already relaxly to play
[Kantan]
00:04:725 - the note is improper for kantan or any 3/1 in beginning you should delete it to be proper
00:17:798 - change to dkd ? to emphasize drum:\?(idk) and to make it consistent here 00:28:524 (34,35,36)
00:53:664 - you should add d for spread of notes(again) and here is same 01:04:390 -
01:12:770 (92) - you should delete here because if new player pressed 01:10:591 (89,90,91) may they will be confused (I guess that will happen like I playing std)
02:07:407 - same as first kiai
02:18:133 - and same
02:37:239 (1) - the spinner is very too close the note
you should delete that.can be more easy for new player too
03:56:178 (3) - you should delete the note by the two reasons
1.it too close the spinner...
2.03:46:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - you're not following vocals._.
the diffi is same as futsuu,just too unbalance because without kiai is harder and second kiai is should be buffed
well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both
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Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Oni by Nardoxyribonucleic
Inner Oni by me
- 02/11/18
03/11/18
Snap last spinner ending to 04:04:390 like every other diff.