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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 02 de noviembre de 2018 at 4:01:28

Artist: LiSA
Title: crossing field
Source: ソードアート・オンライン
Tags: sword art online opening sao Nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 179
Filesize: 7967kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,23 stars, 526 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4,79 stars, 1439 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,59 stars, 309 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3,28 stars, 869 notes)
  5. Nardo's Oni (4,15 stars, 1247 notes)


Download: LiSA - crossing field
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#7 Ranked
Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Oni by Nardoxyribonucleic
Inner Oni by me
  1. Beatmap uploaded - 09/10/17
  2. Applied 404 AccNotFound's IRC mod - 09/10/17
  3. Added SVs changes - 09/10/17
  4. Added Kantan - 25/10/17
  5. Added Futsuu and Muzukashii - 26/10/17
  6. Added tags and source - 27/10/17
  7. Applied Igor Sprite's mod - 20/11/17
  8. Added Nardo's Oni - 21/11/17
  9. BG changed - 01/04/18
  10. Applied Rhytoly's mod - 18/04/18
  11. Applied Tomoka Rin's mod - 24/04/18
  12. Applied Lyawi's mod - 25/06/18
  13. Added New BG to Inner Oni - 25/06/18
  14. Applied Konkapu Sariel's mod - 22/07/18
  15. Applied qoot8123's mod - 22/07/18
  16. Applied ARGENTINE DREAM's mod - 07/08/18
  17. Applied ARGENTINE DREAM's check - 01/11/18
  18. ARGENTINE DREAM's bubble - 02/11/18
  19. qoot8123's qualify 03/11/18
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11:53 404 AccNotFound: 00:45:619 (245,246) -
11:53 404 AccNotFound: little awkward to me
11:54 gaston_2199: I don't think rank it
11:54 gaston_2199: at leat for now
11:54 404 AccNotFound: yayap
11:54 gaston_2199: but any suggestion is welcome xD
11:54 404 AccNotFound: ok :)
11:54 404 AccNotFound: xD
11:55 gaston_2199: let me see
11:55 gaston_2199: Hmm, maybe added note here 00:45:473 - ?
11:55 404 AccNotFound: add 00:45:452 - circle or move 00:45:787 (246) - to there?
11:55 gaston_2199: I listen a kick there
11:56 404 AccNotFound: same
11:56 gaston_2199: Added
11:56 gaston_2199: Yeah, I though about that before xD
11:56 404 AccNotFound: and this is just ma think,
11:56 404 AccNotFound: 00:45:787 (246) - delete...?
11:57 404 AccNotFound: so can make 00:45:452 (244,245) -
11:57 404 AccNotFound: for more smooth play ya
11:57 404 AccNotFound: but kick sound so loud =v=;;
11:58 gaston_2199: yeah
11:58 gaston_2199: hmm
11:58 gaston_2199: I'll keep dkd for now
11:58 404 AccNotFound: ok think so too
11:58 404 AccNotFound: 00:11:765 (50) - missing finisher?
11:59 gaston_2199: I listen a crash cymbal there
12:00 404 AccNotFound: 00:55:843 (14,15,16) - finisher?
12:00 404 AccNotFound: my taste 100% lololol
12:01 gaston_2199: sounds looks good
12:01 404 AccNotFound: 01:11:597 (45,46,47) - d K d for the various pattern?
12:01 404 AccNotFound: so make kDk dKd kDk
12:02 gaston_2199: finisher in 01:11:765 (47) - ?
12:02 404 AccNotFound: omg
12:02 gaston_2199: the pitch isn't high
12:02 404 AccNotFound: miss
12:02 404 AccNotFound: mosssss
12:02 404 AccNotFound: lolol
12:02 gaston_2199: lol
12:03 404 AccNotFound: dkD kdK
12:03 404 AccNotFound: color like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9276375
12:03 gaston_2199: yeah, now if fince xD
12:04 404 AccNotFound: 01:16:290 (72) - K?
12:04 gaston_2199: fine*
12:05 gaston_2199: Oke, for vocal pitch
12:05 404 AccNotFound: 01:25:508 (124,125,128,129,130) - how about finisher to them?
12:06 gaston_2199: Hmm, im not sure
12:06 404 AccNotFound: ok~
12:06 gaston_2199: the crash cymbal is in 01:25:508 (125) - , but sounds is good with 01:25:675 (126) -
12:06 gaston_2199: for now I'll keep
12:07 404 AccNotFound: 02:31:373 - add d?
12:08 404 AccNotFound: no drum sound, but has bass sound, going up
12:08 404 AccNotFound: so can play bridge to the 02:31:541 (80) - imo
12:09 gaston_2199: Hmm, yeah, also make consistency with 03:44:446 (84) -
12:10 404 AccNotFound: other awesome to me
12:11 gaston_2199: thanks <3
12:11 404 AccNotFound: so long so that cant make other diff lolol
12:11 gaston_2199: you can post savelog
12:11 404 AccNotFound: but wanna this map in ranking page =v=
12:11 404 AccNotFound: oh thanks~
posted
m4m(?)
delete unnecessary inherited points in muzukashii, futsuu and kantan
[Inner Oni]
* 00:10:256 (45) - k and 00:10:089 (44) - d, sounds better
* 00:09:753 (43) - k?
* 01:27:016 (130) - k and 01:27:854 (133,134) - ctrl + g
* 01:32:211 (150) - k, 01:32:547 - d and 01:32:714 (152) - k
* 02:37:239 - fix this part please, like 02:39:586 (13) - delete, 02:39:921 (14,15) - ctrl + g and 02:40:256 (17) - delete

sorry i don't know how mod a inner oni, call me again when you receive the GD oni
[Futsuu]
* 00:44:949 (90) - d
* 00:49:306 (97,98) - ctrl + g
* 01:23:496 (158) - d and add a k 01:23:664 -
* 03:39:921 - add k
* 03:41:765 - add d

uh, i need sleep.
posted

Igor Sprite wrote:

m4m(?)
delete unnecessary inherited points in muzukashii, futsuu and kantan The SVs doens't matter if don't change the playability. I'm going to keep for the volume hitsounds
[Inner Oni]
* 00:10:256 (45) - k and 00:10:089 (44) - d, sounds better Applied
* 00:09:753 (43) - k? I'm following the synth's melody
* 01:27:016 (130) - k and 01:27:854 (133,134) - ctrl + g Applied 01:27:016 (130) - only. 01:27:854 (133,134) - I'm following the vocal and keeping the consistency with 01:25:508 (125,126) -
* 01:32:211 (150) - k, 01:32:547 - d and 01:32:714 (152) - k I applied this but with other pattern to follow the guitar riff
* 02:37:239 - fix this part please, like 02:39:586 (13) - delete, 02:39:921 (14,15) - ctrl + g and 02:40:256 (17) - delete Why fix? I'm following the drum and the piano at the same time. I think it's fine (maybe the offset is bad but I'm going to fix it)

sorry i don't know how mod a inner oni, call me again when you receive the GD oni
[Futsuu]
* 00:44:949 (90) - d There is a snare
* 00:49:306 (97,98) - ctrl + g I'm following the vocal pitch
* 01:23:496 (158) - d and add a k 01:23:664 - Ok, add kat in 01:23:664 - could be a bit hard for now, but I changed 01:23:496 (157) - to don
* 03:39:921 - add k Added
* 03:41:765 - add d There can be fine, added

uh, i need sleep.
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
posted
Here is the Oni as requested :3

https://puu.sh/yqNNt.rar

Please add my name to tags, thank you.
Btw, there are some suggestions as follows:

  • [General]

  1. Try to shift the background a bit down to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40 so the faces could be shown properly.
  2. There are many unused green lines in Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii. Consider removing them.
  3. 03:12:770 - you may add an uninheriting timing point here to omit the unnecessary bar line for all difficulties.


In addition, you may consider making the lower difficulties slightly harder to improve the difficulty curve. Good luck for now~ :D
posted

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here is the Oni as requested :3

https://puu.sh/yqNNt.rar

Please add my name to tags, thank you.
Btw, there are some suggestions as follows:

  • [General]

  1. Try to shift the background a bit down to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40 so the faces could be shown properly. Fixed
  2. There are many unused green lines in Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii. Consider removing them. I used your green lines of your Oni :roll:
  3. 03:12:770 - you may add an uninheriting timing point here to omit the unnecessary bar line for all difficulties. I didn't know how do it and recently I understood it xD


In addition, you may consider making the lower difficulties slightly harder to improve the difficulty curve. Good luck for now~ :DYeah, I was waiting for your diff to make better the spread in lows diff :)
Thanks for your GD and suggestions!

Ok, Nardo's Oni uploaded! I'm going to make some changes on my low diff
Modders are welcome!
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00:44 un-plugged: leeesto
00:44 gaston_2199: quizás hay otro mp3 con un audio mejor
00:44 gaston_2199: pero yo lo escucho bien
00:44 un-plugged: se escucha bien este
00:44 un-plugged: sep
00:44 un-plugged: banca que cambio de skin
00:44 un-plugged: con este no distingo los don de los ka
00:44 un-plugged: ahi estáç
00:45 gaston_2199: yo siempre uso el default cuando mapeo/modeo
00:46 un-plugged: same
00:46 un-plugged: 00:06:401 (25,26,27) - estos tres no suenan igual?
00:46 un-plugged: digo el sonido
00:46 un-plugged: 00:08:077 (31,32) - ka do?
00:46 gaston_2199: estás modeando la de nardo?
00:46 gaston_2199: mirá que no puedo hacerle cambios
00:46 un-plugged: wait
00:46 un-plugged: msi
00:46 un-plugged: si*
00:46 un-plugged: ah
00:46 un-plugged: aah
00:47 un-plugged: listo
00:47 un-plugged: entonces te digo nomas que esta piola
00:47 gaston_2199: es un GD jajaja
00:47 un-plugged: sisi pero pense que se podia igual :c
00:47 un-plugged: o sea
00:47 un-plugged: yo si tuviera una gd y me dicen que hay cosas que estan re mal
00:47 un-plugged: las cambio
00:47 un-plugged: (?
00:47 un-plugged: pasemos al tuyo de una
00:47 gaston_2199: tendría que hablarlo con él en todo caso
00:48 un-plugged: sorry por lo noob
00:48 un-plugged: yo se que duele
00:48 un-plugged: cuando misean en tu mapa
00:48 gaston_2199: jajaja
00:49 gaston_2199: naah, no pasa nada
00:49 un-plugged: pero es porque soy petete
00:49 un-plugged: JAJA
00:49 un-plugged: altos sv changes
00:52 un-plugged: los hr players te van a odiar
00:52 un-plugged: esta buenisima
00:52 un-plugged: no tengo de que quejarme
00:52 un-plugged: a ver
00:52 gaston_2199: jajaja
00:53 un-plugged: vamos a verla en detalle (?
00:53 gaston_2199: no es taan rápido
00:53 gaston_2199: yo me lo podría fcear con hr con un par de intentos
00:53 un-plugged: entonces este monitor es mas pedorro
00:53 un-plugged: de lo que creía
00:53 un-plugged: bah, la falta de costumbre sera
00:53 gaston_2199: aunque si hay algunos svs chagnes que están para el culo
00:54 un-plugged: en la intro
00:54 un-plugged: vos seguis la bateria no?
00:54 gaston_2199: y mas o menos
00:54 gaston_2199: pero en general si
00:54 un-plugged: k d k?
00:54 un-plugged: bah
00:55 un-plugged: imo
00:55 un-plugged: va mas acorde al piano
00:55 un-plugged: lpm
00:55 un-plugged: no se pegó el punto
00:55 gaston_2199: donde?
00:55 gaston_2199: xD
00:55 un-plugged: 00:02:044 (7,8,9) -
00:55 un-plugged: ahi
00:55 gaston_2199: me parecía jajaja
00:55 gaston_2199: justamente lo probé
00:56 un-plugged: queda piola
00:56 gaston_2199: dale, de una
00:56 un-plugged: te la tiro nomas
00:57 un-plugged: 00:06:401 (30,31,32) - igual que en la diff de nardo, me parece que ahi los tres sonidos son iguales
00:58 un-plugged: 00:07:910 (36) - por lo cual esta seria tambien don
00:58 un-plugged: nono
00:58 un-plugged: flashe
00:59 un-plugged: justo esa ultima que marque no es igual
00:59 un-plugged: 00:08:748 (39) - esta tambien me suena mas a kat
01:01 un-plugged: 00:19:055 (79) - no escucho algun sonido ahi
01:02 un-plugged: 00:18:971 (78) - y esta tambien suena mas a kat, siguiendo el piano claro
01:03 gaston_2199: Ah, sorry, justo me llamaron
01:03 gaston_2199: a ver
01:03 un-plugged: np
01:05 gaston_2199: 00:06:401 (30,31,32) - sobre esto estoy siguiendo el tono del bajo
01:05 un-plugged: 00:26:681 (134) - probaste mover esta nota acá? 00:26:681 (134) -
01:06 un-plugged: ah
01:06 un-plugged: aaah
01:06 un-plugged: :o
01:06 un-plugged: en 50% no lo escuchaba casi
01:06 gaston_2199: este también 00:19:055 (79) -
01:06 un-plugged: 00:26:513 -
01:06 un-plugged: ^no se habia copiado
01:06 gaston_2199: si sacás las notas y subís la música se escucha el bajo haciendo un triple
01:06 un-plugged: ahi es donde decia si probaste poner la nota
01:07 un-plugged: ah
01:07 gaston_2199: nah, no un bajo exactamente, pero se escucha algo ahí
01:07 un-plugged: sisi
01:07 un-plugged: se a lo que te referis
01:07 un-plugged: los acordes (?
01:07 gaston_2199: Será eso supongo xD
01:08 gaston_2199: 00:18:971 (78) - esto no estoy seguro si va kat
01:08 un-plugged: 00:21:737 (98) - y aca?
01:08 gaston_2199: porque un kkd para un simple tono de sintetizador suena algo saturado
01:08 un-plugged: seh, yo decia en caso de que quitaras la nota del medio
01:09 gaston_2199: 00:21:737 (98) - esto es por el flow de la vocal y la consistencia con 00:21:066 (92) -
01:09 un-plugged: good
01:10 gaston_2199: Sobre esto 00:26:681 (134) - , no la muevo a 00:26:513 - porque quiero enfatizar el tono fuerte de la vocal en 00:26:346 -
01:10 gaston_2199: y además por consistencia con 00:23:664 (115) - que tiene el mismo ritmo
01:10 un-plugged: entiendo
01:12 un-plugged: claramente yo estoy muy en mi estilo
01:12 un-plugged: por eso me cuesta interpretar las cosas que hacen otros
01:12 un-plugged: jaja
01:12 un-plugged: tengo que abrirme más
01:12 gaston_2199: me pasaba cuando empezaba a modear jajaja
01:12 gaston_2199: aun lo hago si no entiendo el estilo del mapeo
01:13 un-plugged: 00:31:876 (167) - y aca por que don?
01:14 un-plugged: tambien por la vocal no?
01:14 gaston_2199: no sé lol
01:14 gaston_2199: no
01:14 un-plugged: ah
01:14 un-plugged: xD
01:14 gaston_2199: creo que tengo una mania de ir intercambiando cuando empieza un patrón 1/4
01:15 un-plugged: para mi como se destaca mas el TIN
01:15 un-plugged: iria un kat
01:15 gaston_2199: o sea, que siempre sea por ejemplo ddk ddk
01:15 un-plugged: bah
01:15 gaston_2199: y no ddk kkd
01:15 un-plugged: hablando con propiedad
01:15 un-plugged: la nota de piano
01:15 gaston_2199: Claro si, me di cuenta de eso
01:15 un-plugged: ah entiendo
01:15 gaston_2199: Basicamente, es para no andar usando el mismo deo
01:15 gaston_2199: dedo*
01:16 gaston_2199: pero hay algunos que juegan full alt, así que no habría problema
01:16 un-plugged: 00:36:401 (192) - kat?
01:16 gaston_2199: y si fuera por la vocal igual tendría que ser kat porque tiene el mismo tono que 00:31:206 (163) -
01:16 un-plugged: si mal
01:17 gaston_2199: Mmm, no sé
01:17 un-plugged: bah no
01:18 gaston_2199: Si, creo que si
01:18 un-plugged: despues de escucharlo un par de veces
01:18 un-plugged: es como mas seco
01:18 un-plugged: 00:36:904 (194) - a diferencia de este
01:18 un-plugged: que si le queda el kat
01:18 gaston_2199: lo hice para mantener siempre el dd dk kd dk
01:18 un-plugged: sisi
01:18 un-plugged: esta optimo
01:19 gaston_2199: claro, por eso
01:19 gaston_2199: lo voy a mantener
01:19 un-plugged: 00:38:580 (200) - esto no suena igual que esto ?00:38:245 (199) -
01:20 gaston_2199: mal
01:20 gaston_2199: originalmente era un big don eso
01:20 un-plugged: puede andar un big note eso eh
01:21 un-plugged: 00:40:591 (214) - kat?
01:21 un-plugged: 00:41:010 - nota aca?
01:21 gaston_2199: nah, el finisher lo saqué porque hacia contraste a la vocal
01:22 gaston_2199: cambiados a kat
01:22 gaston_2199: 00:41:010 - no agrego nota para enfatizar la vocal
01:23 gaston_2199: además para mantener el ritmo del comienzo
01:23 un-plugged: ah joya
01:23 gaston_2199: (de esto 00:38:580 - )
01:23 un-plugged: sisi
01:24 un-plugged: 00:41:262 (219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237) - esto me gusto bastante
01:24 un-plugged: y el sv up le dio el toque
01:25 un-plugged: 00:45:703 - no va una nota aca?
01:25 gaston_2199: no suena tan fuerte como para agregar nota ahi
01:26 gaston_2199: el kat de antes logra contrastarlo y no parece notorio en el gameplay
01:26 un-plugged: mal
01:26 gaston_2199: además es como el relax luego del stream :^)
01:26 un-plugged: seria una buena idea si quisieras overmapearlo a morir
01:26 un-plugged: pero no es el caso
01:26 un-plugged: jaja
01:27 gaston_2199: nah, no me gusta overmappear jajaja
01:27 un-plugged: a mi tampoco
01:27 gaston_2199: muy rara veces overmapeo, pero tipo para seguir la vocal y esas cosas
01:27 gaston_2199: o sea, que quede piola
01:28 un-plugged: ahora que voy entendiendo como seguis la vocal
01:28 un-plugged: me parece muy piola
01:28 un-plugged: 00:54:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - por ejemplo aca
01:29 un-plugged: 00:55:508 (12) - que te parece hacerla big?
01:29 gaston_2199: claaaro, sigo el flow ahí
01:29 un-plugged: para mi queda mejor
01:30 gaston_2199: es todo un caso ahí
01:31 gaston_2199: en realidad agregué los finisher para enfatizar el sintentizador
01:31 gaston_2199: podría ser aplicado en las dificultades bajas eso
01:33 un-plugged: bueno
01:34 un-plugged: 01:01:541 (55) - kat?
01:35 un-plugged: 01:03:217 (66,67,68) - kkd?
01:35 gaston_2199: es muy parecido a esto 00:50:815 (277) -
01:35 gaston_2199: y por cosistencia lo tengo en don
01:35 un-plugged: ahhç
01:37 gaston_2199: también por consistencia el esto 01:03:217 (66,67,68) -
01:37 gaston_2199: lo que varía de ahí son 01:03:217 (66,67,68) -
01:37 gaston_2199: 01:03:887 (71,72,73,76,77,78) - **
01:37 gaston_2199: eso digo
01:39 un-plugged: 01:07:910 (23) - aca no queda mejor un don?
01:40 un-plugged: 01:08:077 (25) - y quizas esta de kat
01:41 un-plugged: bah, depende, ahi parece que estas siguiendo el drum
01:42 gaston_2199: Si, eso
01:42 gaston_2199: si fuera a seguir la vocal ahí si podría cambiarlo
01:42 gaston_2199: pero no me convence del todo
01:43 un-plugged: 01:15:703 - si pones una nota ahi y nerfea el triple anterior me parece que queda mejor
01:43 un-plugged: porque ahi se distingue mas el redoble
01:43 un-plugged: de la bateria
01:45 un-plugged: 01:18:301 (80) - y aca por que el don?
01:45 un-plugged: che voy muy lento no?
01:45 un-plugged: JAJA
01:45 gaston_2199: Naah, yo soy el lento jajaja
01:46 gaston_2199: es que me lo pienso y lo testeo
01:46 un-plugged: si queres lo hacemos en tramos, asi tengo tiempo de ver los demas mapas
01:47 gaston_2199: no no, si hablás de los otros mapas no podré darte el kudo de este mapa :^)
01:47 un-plugged: 01:23:077 - si completas aca con un kat que te parece?
01:47 un-plugged: ah pero no hace faaaltaaa
01:47 un-plugged: xD
01:48 gaston_2199: Agregué el don acá 01:18:301 (81) - para hacerlo más natural el stream
01:48 un-plugged: lo de completar con el kat ahi decia por el drum
01:48 un-plugged: me lo imagine lo del don
01:48 un-plugged: igual yo estoy en contra de hacer cosas para facilitar la lectura o a los players
01:48 un-plugged: me gusta apuntar mas a la logica de la cancion
01:49 un-plugged: y que la chupen todos (?
01:49 un-plugged: que la toquen tal cual digo
01:49 gaston_2199: Ah no, nada que ver jajaja
01:49 gaston_2199: yo quiero hacer mapas tranquis, que no sean taan dificiles de jugar
01:49 gaston_2199: o por lo menos que yo los pueda hacer
01:49 un-plugged: nah, no con el objetivo de dificultad
01:49 un-plugged: sino de certeza (?
01:49 gaston_2199: por eso no suelo mapear cosas dificiles
01:49 un-plugged: same
01:50 un-plugged: por eso hago cosas como el de sid
01:50 un-plugged: y el de the strokes
01:50 un-plugged: que no te mostre aun creo
01:50 un-plugged: bueno decime que opinas de lo demas que marque
01:51 gaston_2199: Ah, agregué un don acá 01:23:217 -
01:51 gaston_2199: pero no estoy seguro todavia
01:52 gaston_2199: y acá 01:15:703 - agregué nota para hacer triple pero tampoco estoy seguro
01:52 gaston_2199: quizás sea por la intensidad de la canción, como está empezando no los agrego
01:52 gaston_2199: pero voy a ver después
01:52 un-plugged: me gustaba mas un kat ahi
01:52 un-plugged: en el primero digo
01:53 gaston_2199: acá 01:15:703 - ?
01:53 gaston_2199: no me gusta mucho el patrón dkk xD
01:54 un-plugged: 01:36:401 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190) - aca parece que seguis la guitarra :o
01:54 un-plugged: y queda piola
01:55 un-plugged: nono
01:55 un-plugged: aca
01:55 un-plugged: 01:23:077 -
01:56 gaston_2199: Si, es lo mismo que 03:55:340 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) -
01:56 gaston_2199: 00:22:491 - **
01:57 gaston_2199: Ah, le puse don para seguir la vocal
01:57 un-plugged: ah okok
01:57 un-plugged: 01:59:195 - note here?
01:58 gaston_2199: te juro que pensé lo mismo
01:58 gaston_2199: pero es extrañisimo cuando lo jugás
01:59 un-plugged: a ver
01:59 gaston_2199: no sé
01:59 un-plugged: no tanto eh
01:59 un-plugged: igualmente
01:59 un-plugged: me parece muy minimo el cambio
01:59 un-plugged: es decir, para mi de ambas formas esta bien
02:01 gaston_2199: si otro modder me lo marca lo voy a agregar
02:04 un-plugged: dale
02:05 un-plugged: ah che
02:05 un-plugged: mañana me ayudas con el mod de cacao?
02:06 gaston_2199: cacao :kappa:
02:06 un-plugged: lo hacemos asi rapidin por voice channel
02:06 un-plugged: j3j3
02:06 gaston_2199: Dale, de una
02:10 un-plugged: 02:18:971 (3,4,5,6,7) - ddkkd?
02:10 un-plugged: siguiendo la vocal ofc
02:10 un-plugged: 02:19:642 (9,10,11,12) - kkk k? no queda tan mal
02:10 un-plugged: lo dejo a tu eleccion (?
02:13 gaston_2199: El primero es por el aumento de intensidad porque es el segundo kiai
02:13 un-plugged: kkk d*
02:13 un-plugged: que bolú
02:13 un-plugged: el sueño me afecta
02:14 gaston_2199: mmm, el kkk me parece buena idea
02:14 un-plugged: te la dejo picando (?ç
02:16 un-plugged: 02:27:686 (62,63,64) - dkd? por la vocal me resulta mas logico asi
02:16 un-plugged: 02:29:027 (71,72,73) - y aca un dkk, aunque creo que ese pattern no te gusta
02:19 gaston_2199: le hice kkd
02:19 gaston_2199: y el dkd aplicado
02:21 un-plugged: 02:31:876 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - kkdddk?
02:21 un-plugged: la bateria para mi suena mejor asi
02:21 un-plugged: 02:31:876 (83,84) - dado que estos dos suenan igual
02:22 un-plugged: 02:32:100 (85,86,87,88) - y estos 4 vendrian a ser los tom
02:22 un-plugged: 02:32:547 (89) - y crash
02:24 gaston_2199: y kkdkddk?
02:24 un-plugged: puede andar tambien
02:25 un-plugged: no suena malç
02:25 un-plugged: pero es que yo en seguida tomo los kats como crash o hi-hats abiertos
02:25 un-plugged: jaja
02:25 un-plugged: asi que ahi seria mas personal la eleccion
02:25 un-plugged: pero de ambas formas esta bien
02:25 gaston_2199: Entiendo
02:26 gaston_2199: Lo dejo en kkdkddk
02:27 un-plugged: de one
02:27 un-plugged: 02:43:608 (32) - kat?
02:28 un-plugged: hmm
02:30 gaston_2199: Mmm, creo que viene bien
02:30 gaston_2199: che, esa parte suena bien?
02:30 un-plugged: estoy escuchandola todavia jaja
02:30 un-plugged: es que
02:30 gaston_2199: digo, todo lo que abarca desde 02:37:910 - hasta 02:48:636 -
02:30 un-plugged: parece que seguis el piano y el drum a la vez?
02:31 un-plugged: si, ahi ando viendo
02:31 gaston_2199: se
02:31 un-plugged: entonces esta bien
02:31 un-plugged: y me gusta
02:31 un-plugged: 02:40:089 (16) - de hecho aca tambien me suena mas a kat
02:32 un-plugged: 02:40:089 (16,17) - podrias hacer ctrl+g
02:32 un-plugged: 02:40:256 (17) - o borrar esta
02:33 un-plugged: 02:42:770 (29,30) - aca hiciste algo parecido de hecho
02:33 un-plugged: de extender la nota con un don
02:33 un-plugged: bah
02:34 un-plugged: hiciste al reves
02:34 un-plugged: pero se aplica
02:34 un-plugged: (?)
02:34 un-plugged: vos me entendes (?)
02:34 gaston_2199: eso creo xD
02:34 gaston_2199: dejame ver
02:35 un-plugged: 02:43:273 (31) - ya te habia marcado esta no?
02:35 gaston_2199: claro, es que no hay sonido acá 02:40:256 -
02:35 un-plugged: ah no
02:35 un-plugged: bueno, me suena a kat
02:36 un-plugged: eeeso..
02:36 un-plugged: yo por eso pensaba que estabas extendiendo el sonido anterior
02:37 gaston_2199: uy, no sé qué hacer
02:37 un-plugged: yo la sacaria
02:37 un-plugged: y dejaria las tres ultimas de ese pattern en kat
02:38 gaston_2199: Si si, eso lo saqué
02:38 un-plugged: 02:40:089 (16) -
02:38 un-plugged: ojo
02:38 un-plugged: puede ser big tambien
02:38 un-plugged: no queda mal, creo
02:38 gaston_2199: A ver para
02:39 gaston_2199: dejame hacer un updated
02:39 gaston_2199: porque me está marcando cualquier cosa ahora
02:39 gaston_2199: update
02:39 un-plugged: oh cielos
02:39 un-plugged: 02:40:089 - en este punto igual decia
02:39 un-plugged: que quedaria bien como kdkkK
02:40 un-plugged: aunque ahora que me acuerdo
02:40 un-plugged: soy un pelotudo
02:40 un-plugged: no puede ser K si la anterior es kat
02:40 un-plugged: jaja
02:40 un-plugged: ah on
02:40 un-plugged: no*
02:40 un-plugged: pero es 1/2
02:40 un-plugged: no dije nada
02:40 un-plugged: el sueño afecta
02:40 gaston_2199: A ver, actualiza el mapa
02:41 gaston_2199: y ahí vemos como vamos
02:41 un-plugged: dalep
02:41 un-plugged: 02:39:418 (12,13,14,15,16) - bien tenemos este pattern
02:41 un-plugged: 02:40:089 (16) - que se me ocurre que esta suena mejor a kat
02:41 un-plugged: y que se puede probar hacerla K
02:42 gaston_2199: K es muy ruidoso para mi
02:43 un-plugged: pero queda lindo igual
02:43 gaston_2199: o podría probar kddkk
02:43 un-plugged: pero queda a tu eleccion
02:43 un-plugged: kddkk queda
02:44 un-plugged: de hecho me gusto mas
02:44 un-plugged: jaja
02:46 un-plugged: 02:42:435 (26,27,28) - kkd?
02:47 gaston_2199: Como está puesto?
02:47 un-plugged: kdkdk
02:48 gaston_2199: estoy entre kdkkk o kdkkd
02:48 un-plugged: 02:44:279 (33,34,35,36) - kddk?
02:48 gaston_2199: Si, esa la corregí
02:48 un-plugged: 02:42:435 (26,27) - yo lo pense de esta forma, como que estas dos suenan igual
02:48 un-plugged: y acá suena otra nota 02:42:770 (28) -
02:49 un-plugged: por eso ambas kat
02:49 un-plugged: y esa don
02:49 un-plugged: marcando la diferencia
02:49 gaston_2199: Claro, el tono es más bajo que 02:40:089 (16) -
02:49 gaston_2199: Ok, aplicado
02:49 un-plugged: exacto
02:50 un-plugged: 02:43:273 (29) - y esto, segun la melodia del piano, me suena mas a kat tambien
02:50 un-plugged: lo de big queda a preferencia
02:52 gaston_2199: No sé, los K me parecen muy exagerados
02:52 gaston_2199: todos esos golpes son muy parecidos a 02:37:910 (5) -
02:52 un-plugged: 02:44:279 (33,34,35,36) - nota aca?
02:53 un-plugged: 02:43:273 (29) - es que aca escucha la anterior a esa
02:53 un-plugged: es otra nota que tambien es don
02:53 un-plugged: pero esta (la 29) tiene un tono mas alto
02:53 un-plugged: por eso decia el kat
02:54 gaston_2199: para mi tiene el tono más bajo que 02:40:591 -
02:55 un-plugged: no, para nada
02:55 un-plugged: jaja
02:55 un-plugged: es claramente mas alto
02:56 gaston_2199: para mi es bajo lol
02:56 gaston_2199: no sé qué onda jaja
02:56 un-plugged: que dilema
02:56 gaston_2199: en termino de piano digo
02:56 un-plugged: sisi
02:56 un-plugged: por eso
02:56 un-plugged: bueh, sigamos
02:57 gaston_2199: bueno, me lo voy a plantear jaja
02:57 un-plugged: 02:46:290 (43,44,45,46) - dkkd?
02:57 un-plugged: si jaja
02:59 gaston_2199: mmm, dale
03:02 un-plugged: 02:50:815 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - dkkddkd?
03:03 gaston_2199: lo cambié a dkkdddk
03:03 un-plugged: 02:51:066 (79,80,81,82) - escucha bien estre tramo
03:03 un-plugged: las ultimas dos suenan diferente
03:03 un-plugged: bah
03:03 un-plugged: la anteultima nomas
03:03 un-plugged: la otra es igual a las anteriores, o sea, don
03:04 gaston_2199: si, lo había probado antes pero no me gustaba como quedaba
03:04 gaston_2199: el ultimo kat era para la guitarra
03:04 un-plugged: aaah
03:05 un-plugged: 02:51:820 (86,87,88) - mismo sonido los tres pulsos
03:05 un-plugged: 02:52:910 (95) - kat?
03:05 un-plugged: siguiendo la guitarra
03:06 gaston_2199: eso está como kkddd, no?
03:06 un-plugged: sep
03:07 gaston_2199: lo cambié a kkddk para seguir el drum
03:07 un-plugged: 02:52:910 (95) - nota aca?
03:07 gaston_2199: algo parecido a 02:55:508 (118,119,120,121,122) -
03:07 un-plugged: si es que sigue la guitarra
03:07 un-plugged: y en caso de que agregues un don
03:07 un-plugged: esta volvela kat 02:57:016 (132) -
03:08 gaston_2199: acá 02:52:910 - un don?
03:08 gaston_2199: ya estaba agregado desde antes
03:08 un-plugged: 02:57:519 (136) - kat; add note here 02:57:603 -
03:08 un-plugged: uh
03:08 un-plugged: creo que envie cualquiera
03:09 gaston_2199: no me gustan los patrones 1/4 con finisher al final
03:09 gaston_2199: no lo suelo usar
03:09 un-plugged: 02:52:910 (95) - creo que aca decia
03:09 un-plugged: ah no vi el finisher
03:09 un-plugged: mala mia
03:09 un-plugged: yo tampoco haria eso
03:10 gaston_2199: suena muy raro tener kat acá 02:57:016 (133,137) -
03:11 gaston_2199: y otra mania mia es que no me gustan que el big sea del mismo color que el de antes
03:11 gaston_2199: para mi aumenta la dificultad
03:11 un-plugged: 03:18:301 (43) - kat?
03:11 gaston_2199: (lo testee y aumentó a 4.8 lol)
03:11 un-plugged: si es de 1/4 esta re prohibido
03:11 un-plugged: xD
03:12 gaston_2199: No no, digo en general
03:12 un-plugged: 02:56:848 (130,131,132,133) - yo aca decia ddkkd
03:12 gaston_2199: en 1/4 obvio que no jaja
03:12 un-plugged: agregando nota aca 02:57:100 -
03:12 un-plugged: (que esta vacio)
03:13 un-plugged: ç 03:18:301 (43) - aca de paso alarga la vocal
03:13 gaston_2199: con esos finisher enfatizo el hithat
03:13 un-plugged: 03:18:468 (44) - con esta
03:14 gaston_2199: le agrego una nota de por medio?
03:14 gaston_2199: o solo cambio a kat?
03:14 un-plugged: donde?
03:14 gaston_2199: lo último
03:14 un-plugged: 02:57:100 - ?
03:14 un-plugged: sisi
03:14 un-plugged: quedaria ddkkd
03:15 un-plugged: si te parece xd
03:15 un-plugged: ah vos deciaslo otro
03:15 un-plugged: mala mia
03:15 gaston_2199: no no
03:15 gaston_2199: esto decía 03:18:301 (43) -
03:15 un-plugged: yo no agregaria nota
03:15 un-plugged: solo cambiaria a kat
03:16 un-plugged: que te parecfe agregar dos kats aca? una aca 03:18:887 - y el otro aca 03:18:971 - ?
03:16 un-plugged: sugerencia nomas
03:17 gaston_2199: querés que alargue el patrón?
03:17 un-plugged: 03:22:323 (13) - kat?
03:17 un-plugged: se`p
03:17 un-plugged: pero con kat nomas
03:17 un-plugged: de otro modo no quedaria, pienso yo
03:17 un-plugged: 03:23:664 (22) - don?
03:18 un-plugged: 03:24:083 - don here
03:18 gaston_2199: 03:22:323 (13) - lo mantengo por consistencia
03:18 un-plugged: no eso ultimo no
03:18 un-plugged: hay un finisher
03:18 un-plugged: que esta copado
03:18 gaston_2199: esto 03:23:664 (22) - viene de 02:10:424 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -
03:23 un-plugged: ah oki
03:23 un-plugged: 03:39:921 (65,66) - change to don?
03:25 un-plugged: bah no
03:25 gaston_2199: es todo kat ahí mepa
03:25 un-plugged: sisi
03:26 un-plugged: 03:45:116 (92) - este si suena a don
03:26 un-plugged: 03:45:368 (95) - igual que este
03:26 un-plugged: fijate que te parece
03:27 gaston_2199: traté de seguir el piano respetando el drum
03:28 un-plugged: no me convence mucho
03:28 un-plugged: es decir
03:28 un-plugged: se puede seguir directamente el piano
03:29 un-plugged: con los cambios que te dije
03:29 un-plugged: aunque
03:29 gaston_2199: con ese patrón no sé :thinking:
03:30 gaston_2199: lo que puedo hacer es cambiar a don 03:45:368 (95) -
03:30 un-plugged: el que pusiste no esta mal tampoco
03:30 un-plugged: si, o sea
03:31 un-plugged: si queres seguir el drum y el piano a la vez
03:31 un-plugged: ese pattern esta mejor
03:31 un-plugged: yyybueno, ese es todo mi aporte
03:31 un-plugged: el resto me parecio genial
03:31 gaston_2199: dale, con los puntos que me diste ya hice cambios en algunas partes
03:32 gaston_2199: postea en el foro para tus kudos
03:32 un-plugged: me alegro entonces que te haya servido
03:32 un-plugged: :^)
03:32 un-plugged: voy
posted
00:13:943 (59) - change to k, fits better musically imo

00:14:949 (63) - move up to ticks aka - 00:15:116 -

00:17:295 - ^

00:19:977 - ^

01:16:458 - ^

01:41:429 - ^

01:41:765 - ^

01:42:603 - ^

02:44:953 - katsuu

03:12:770 - could add a spinner here? oWo
posted

_niz wrote:

00:13:943 (59) - change to k, fits better musically imo I'm following the vocal pitch

00:14:949 (63) - move up to ticks aka - 00:15:116 -

00:17:295 - ^

00:19:977 - ^

01:16:458 - ^

01:41:429 - ^

01:41:765 - ^

01:42:603 - ^ These breaks are consistent with the vocal and instrumental

02:44:953 - katsuu Where?

03:12:770 - could add a spinner here? oWo Sorry, but I wanna follow the vocal there
Thanks for mod anyways!
posted
hihi M4M

[Inner Oni]
00:03:636 (15,16) - I guess kdk or change to be dkd is can be more follow piano and emphasize
00:21:653 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - change them to ddkkddkkkkd? from the 00:22:156 - I can hear drum sound if you use kkkkd it's can be more emphasize
00:45:284 - if you are trying to make it to be smooth SVs you need to add SV 0.78x here for the new bar
00:45:619 - is it your willfulness? here is can be mapped 1/8 kk
01:37:407 - change to ddkkd? I saw you started using 5-plets on the 01:40:089 and to be more spread I guess you should change to 5-plets
01:59:027 - same,please add SV to make it smoother
02:24:670 ~ 02:29:865 - actually they will be fine but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) is not flow and SVs not fit the part.I understand 02:24:670 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - higher SVs with higher-pitched but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - stroung sound is same and I wanna fix for you(make it more smoother).I suggest you delete SVs 02:30:368 and 02:30:871 or do whatever can make it smoother.also there 02:31:541 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - is problem for now bacause at 1/3 is hard to read. so 02:31:541 - change SV to 1.1x and last 02:31:876 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - you just change SVs start from 1.07x ( 02:31:876 ) to 1.01x ( 02:32:547 )

03:02:044 ~ 03:12:100 -I know you want to keep break but for me overall of the map is following vocals.so here is possiblely to mapping vocals (it's just my opinion you don't need to follow,up to u)
03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - same,sound is no different in my thought (here 03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - ) and please make SVs be more smoother,it's hard to read or you just try to make like 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) what I said before
03:55:759 - add note here? I think make it's longer than other point in last part should be good .else it's feel weird to gap here 03:56:094 - if you dislike to see note close with bignote you just add SVs from 03:55:424 ~ 03:56:178 - use 1.01x~1.1x

the diffi is pretty cool but SVs you should consider and changes them again please ;)

[Nardo's Oni]
00:29:698 - delete here for spread of notes and also 7+ notes in part like this is look weird (because the part is same as 00:17:128 ~ 00:21:150 ) delete please
00:32:547 - how about k ddkkd? kkd kdd is look weird to me idk
00:46:625 ~ 01:18:804 -seem good :3 also even all kiais!
01:22:072 - add k here? to follow+emphasize vocals and I guess it would be better because it will be oppisite here! 01:19:390 -
01:46:290 (543,544,545,546,547,548) - same as before if you would ot change to ddkkd
01:54:083 (580,581,582,583,584,585) - they're weird to me because you follow vocals.even 00:38:580 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - you should delete 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - (instead break by there) and put kkd 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - and add note 01:54:837 - to be more smoother and flow

pretty cool :)

[Muzukashii]
01:05:396 (241,242,243,244) - why not kkk? I think it's can be more highlight vocals
02:19:139 (223,224,225) - same
02:23:999 - overall of the map you never ignore drum sound so please add kkk and delete 02:23:747 (246) - for spread
03:12:435 (3) - change to k? to follow vocal+top diffi
03:13:441 ~ 03:40:256 - actually it's should have break 3/2 or 1/1 after passed 1/16~1/20 but because it's 179bpm lower than generally bpm .so I guess it can be rankeble but for sure you should delete 03:13:943 or 03:14:278 - and 03:24:670 or 03:25:005 -

yeah,the diffi is seem fine but please cute break at last kiai

[Futsuu]
00:46:625 - you need to add some triplets because before start kiai is have triplets(without kiai should easier than kiai) to make it's balance you need to add some triplets and also second is same! you need to add more triplets(buff them) make kiais balance and only last kiai is harder

I don't have another thing to say,you need to make more triplets in kiais to make more spread and balance,breaks is already relaxly to play

[Kantan]
00:04:725 - the note is improper for kantan or any 3/1 in beginning you should delete it to be proper
00:17:798 - change to dkd ? to emphasize drum:\?(idk) and to make it consistent here 00:28:524 (34,35,36)
00:53:664 - you should add d for spread of notes(again) and here is same 01:04:390 -
01:12:770 (92) - you should delete here because if new player pressed 01:10:591 (89,90,91) may they will be confused (I guess that will happen like I playing std)
02:07:407 - same as first kiai
02:18:133 - and same
02:37:239 (1) - the spinner is very too close the note :o you should delete that.can be more easy for new player too
03:56:178 (3) - you should delete the note by the two reasons
1.it too close the spinner...
2.03:46:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - you're not following vocals._.

the diffi is same as futsuu,just too unbalance because without kiai is harder and second kiai is should be buffed

well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both :)
posted

Rhytoly wrote:

hihi M4M

[Nardo's Oni]
00:29:698 - delete here for spread of notes and also 7+ notes in part like this is look weird (because the part is same as 00:17:128 ~ 00:21:150 ) delete please Deleted 00:29:362 (131) - instead.
00:32:547 - how about k ddkkd? kkd kdd is look weird to me idk I think they represent the drum sequence pretty well.
00:46:625 ~ 01:18:804 -seem good :3 also even all kiais! I am glad to hear that :3
01:22:072 - add k here? to follow+emphasize vocals and I guess it would be better because it will be oppisite here! 01:19:390 - fixed
01:46:290 (543,544,545,546,547,548) - same as before if you would ot change to ddkkd same as 00:32:547 -
01:54:083 (580,581,582,583,584,585) - they're weird to me because you follow vocals.even 00:38:580 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - you should delete 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - (instead break by there) and put kkd 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - and add note 01:54:837 - to be more smoother and flow Remain unchanged for a bit more variation as vocals are still well accompanied this way.

pretty cool :)

well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both :)
Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)

Update: https://puu.sh/A5buw.rar
posted

Rhytoly wrote:

hihi M4M

[Inner Oni]
00:03:636 (15,16) - I guess kdk or change to be dkd is can be more follow piano and emphasize Seems good, changed
00:21:653 (102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - change them to ddkkddkkkkd? from the 00:22:156 - I can hear drum sound if you use kkkkd it's can be more emphasize Yeah, you're right
00:45:284 - if you are trying to make it to be smooth SVs you need to add SV 0.78x here for the new bar I moved the 0,75 there
00:45:619 - is it your willfulness? here is can be mapped 1/8 kk Can be kat, for now I'll add it
01:37:407 - change to ddkkd? I saw you started using 5-plets on the 01:40:089 and to be more spread I guess you should change to 5-plets You're right, added 5-plet
01:59:027 - same,please add SV to make it smoother I applied the same thing
02:24:670 ~ 02:29:865 - actually they will be fine but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) is not flow and SVs not fit the part.I understand 02:24:670 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - higher SVs with higher-pitched but 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - stroung sound is same and I wanna fix for you(make it more smoother).I suggest you delete SVs 02:30:368 and 02:30:871 or do whatever can make it smoother.also there 02:31:541 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - is problem for now bacause at 1/3 is hard to read. so 02:31:541 - change SV to 1.1x and last 02:31:876 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - you just change SVs start from 1.07x ( 02:31:876 ) to 1.01x ( 02:32:547 ) I don't think it's very hard to read, but I'll see how change somethings

03:02:044 ~ 03:12:100 -I know you want to keep break but for me overall of the map is following vocals.so here is possiblely to mapping vocals (it's just my opinion you don't need to follow,up to u) Currently I do not wanna add notes there
03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - same,sound is no different in my thought (here 03:37:742 (47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - ) and please make SVs be more smoother,it's hard to read or you just try to make like 02:29:865 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) what I said before Same, I'll see what I can do
03:55:759 - add note here? I think make it's longer than other point in last part should be good .else it's feel weird to gap here 03:56:094 - if you dislike to see note close with bignote you just add SVs from 03:55:424 ~ 03:56:178 - use 1.01x~1.1x The current pattern fits good imo, I'll keep these

the diffi is pretty cool but SVs you should consider and changes them again please ;)

[Muzukashii]
01:05:396 (241,242,243,244) - why not kkk? I think it's can be more highlight vocals
02:19:139 (223,224,225) - same Changed
02:23:999 - overall of the map you never ignore drum sound so please add kkk and delete 02:23:747 (246) - for spread Applied
03:12:435 (3) - change to k? to follow vocal+top diffi Changed
03:13:441 ~ 03:40:256 - actually it's should have break 3/2 or 1/1 after passed 1/16~1/20 but because it's 179bpm lower than generally bpm .so I guess it can be rankeble but for sure you should delete 03:13:943 or 03:14:278 - and 03:24:670 or 03:25:005 - I tried make it more consistent with Oni since that part is very intense. I'll see it later after get some mods

yeah,the diffi is seem fine but please cute break at last kiai

[Futsuu]
00:46:625 - you need to add some triplets because before start kiai is have triplets(without kiai should easier than kiai) to make it's balance you need to add some triplets and also second is same! you need to add more triplets(buff them) make kiais balance and only last kiai is harder I think I balanced it 🤔

I don't have another thing to say,you need to make more triplets in kiais to make more spread and balance,breaks is already relaxly to play

[Kantan]
00:04:725 - the note is improper for kantan or any 3/1 in beginning you should delete it to be proper Deleted
00:17:798 - change to dkd ? to emphasize drum:\?(idk) and to make it consistent here 00:28:524 (34,35,36) I wanna keep that finishers for consistency with all mapset
00:53:664 - you should add d for spread of notes(again) and here is same 01:04:390 - Added
01:12:770 (92) - you should delete here because if new player pressed 01:10:591 (89,90,91) may they will be confused (I guess that will happen like I playing std) Removed
02:07:407 - same as first kiai
02:18:133 - and same Added
02:37:239 (1) - the spinner is very too close the note :o you should delete that.can be more easy for new player too I think it isn't really hard to play for a new player
03:56:178 (3) - you should delete the note by the two reasons
1.it too close the spinner...
2.03:46:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - you're not following vocals._. I moved the spinner there

the diffi is same as futsuu,just too unbalance because without kiai is harder and second kiai is should be buffed I sucks making full mapset

well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both :)
Thanks for mod!

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)

Update: https://puu.sh/A5buw.rar
Beatmap updated~
posted
[Muzukashii]

00:25:005 (77) - why not move this note to 00:24:670 - , it can follow the vocal also the rhythm.

02:39:083 (7,8) - try ctrl+g here, to follow the high pitch.

02:39:753 (9,10,11) - how about kdk here, there are two of high pitch at 02:39:753 (9) - and 02:40:089 (11) - or use the dkk like Oni.

[Oni]

00:12:267 (50,51) - 這邊 ctrl +g 改成 k d 看看? 00:12:267 (50) - 的音高比 00:12:603 (51) - 高的關係,這一小段除了這裡都有跟著vocal

00:37:575 (164,165,166,167) - 換成 00:37:575 (164,165) - k d 然後 00:38:077 (166,167) - d k 這樣會不會比較好,讓這段都保持一樣的組合,或是把最後這段改成 kdddk 去符合背景鼓聲。

01:02:211 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - 在副歌中只有這段的連打不是從紅線上當起點像 00:52:323 (242,243,244,245) - 跟 00:52:994 (247,248,249,250,251,252) - ,打起來跟整段副歌會有點違和感。

02:15:954 (714) - 到 02:18:468 (732) - 跟 03:29:865 (115) - 到 03:31:541 (128) - 這邊也是,不過應該是想要跟前面一次分開來做區別 ?

打起來大概就這幾個不太順而已 :D
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Tomoka Rin wrote:

[Oni]

00:12:267 (50,51) - 這邊 ctrl +g 改成 k d 看看? 00:12:267 (50) - 的音高比 00:12:603 (51) - 高的關係,這一小段除了這裡都有跟著vocal 50的音高事實上比51低,不過我把50也改k了。

00:37:575 (164,165,166,167) - 換成 00:37:575 (164,165) - k d 然後 00:38:077 (166,167) - d k 這樣會不會比較好,讓這段都保持一樣的組合,或是把最後這段改成 kdddk 去符合背景鼓聲。 這裡我還是想用k強調00:37:742 (165) - 的vocal.

01:02:211 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322) - 在副歌中只有這段的連打不是從紅線上當起點像 00:52:323 (242,243,244,245) - 跟 00:52:994 (247,248,249,250,251,252) - ,打起來跟整段副歌會有點違和感。 感覺這個變化還好,太重覆會有點沉悶。

02:15:954 (714) - 到 02:18:468 (732) - 跟 03:29:865 (115) - 到 03:31:541 (128) - 這邊也是,不過應該是想要跟前面一次分開來做區別 ? 同上。

打起來大概就這幾個不太順而已 :D
感謝mod! :)

@gaston: I think OD2 for Kantan seems a bit low as Futsuu has 4, so maybe use 3 instead for Kantan?
Updated version of my Oni could be found here: https://puu.sh/A92oW.rar
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Tomoka Rin wrote:

[Muzukashii]

00:25:005 (77) - why not move this note to 00:24:670 - , it can follow the vocal also the rhythm. Moved

02:39:083 (7,8) - try ctrl+g here, to follow the high pitch. Yeah, changed

02:39:753 (9,10,11) - how about kdk here, there are two of high pitch at 02:39:753 (9) - and 02:40:089 (11) - or use the dkk like Oni. I'll use dkk for consistency
Thanks for mod!

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

@gaston: I think OD2 for Kantan seems a bit low as Futsuu has 4, so maybe use 3 instead for Kantan?
Updated version of my Oni could be found here: https://puu.sh/A92oW.rar
You're right, I think tha same! Changed
Beatmap updated~
posted
[Kantan]
  1. 00:15:116 (17,18) - ctrl+g?
  2. not sure if you really need 00:45:619 (55) - ...
  3. you could move 00:53:664 (66) - to 00:52:323 - maybe?
  4. also 01:04:390 (81) - to 01:03:049 - ?
  5. how about deleting 01:24:167 (103,104) - ?
  6. 01:56:681 (142) - is too much.
  7. you may delete 01:59:362 (144) -
  8. 02:07:407 (156) - to 02:06:066 -
  9. 02:18:133 (172) - to 02:16:792 -
  10. you should really use 02:39:083 (3) - on 02:39:251 - and 02:39:753 (4) - on 02:39:921 -
  11. 03:15:116 (6) - delete this.
  12. 03:20:480 (16) - to 03:19:139 -
  13. delete 03:25:843 (24) -
  14. 03:31:206 (33) - to 03:29:865 -
  15. 03:37:910 (43,44) - look kinda random in a kantan, you should delete them.
  16. move 03:39:251 (45) - to 03:39:586 -


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:52:323 - you could put something at these parts too.
  2. 01:05:396 (42) - as kat?
  3. maybe delete 02:02:714 (2) -
  4. 02:39:083 (5,7) - ctrl+g?


[Muzukashii]
  1. add a little break by deleting 00:28:189 (89) -
  2. 00:35:563 (116) - kat to get some varienty?
  3. 03:38:413 (130,131) - ctrl+g? or 03:39:083 (134,135) -


[Nardo's Oni]
  1. good as it is!


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:45:661 (257) - not worth enough for 1/8 tho...
  2. 01:05:312 (4) - should be don or do ctrl+g with 01:05:228 (3,4) -
  3. 01:59:404 (318) -


I like the set, but I assume your kantan is a bit too hard to play for newbies.
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Lyawi wrote:

[Kantan]
  1. 00:15:116 (17,18) - ctrl+g? Applied
  2. not sure if you really need 00:45:619 (55) - ... There are drum sound, I think it's fine. But I'll see what can I doing
  3. you could move 00:53:664 (66) - to 00:52:323 - maybe? it's weird to play, I'll keep it
  4. also 01:04:390 (81) - to 01:03:049 - ? Same, I wanna emphasize the vocal
  5. how about deleting 01:24:167 (103,104) - ? I'll consider it
  6. 01:56:681 (142) - is too much. Removed
  7. you may delete 01:59:362 (144) - Nope for now
  8. 02:07:407 (156) - to 02:06:066 -
  9. 02:18:133 (172) - to 02:16:792 - Eeh, the same thing than before
  10. you should really use 02:39:083 (3) - on 02:39:251 - and 02:39:753 (4) - on 02:39:921 - Moved
  11. 03:15:116 (6) - delete this. eeh, I wanna keep the spread with Futsuu, but I agree it's a bit hard. I'll check the spread again
  12. 03:20:480 (16) - to 03:19:139 - Same
  13. delete 03:25:843 (24) - Same as above
  14. 03:31:206 (33) - to 03:29:865 - Same
  15. 03:37:910 (43,44) - look kinda random in a kantan, you should delete them. Drums sounds lol, but it's a bit hard that I'll see what can I change
  16. move 03:39:251 (45) - to 03:39:586 - Moved


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:52:323 - you could put something at these parts too. I wanna emphasize the vocal
  2. 01:05:396 (42) - as kat? So weird, I wanna keep the consistency
  3. maybe delete 02:02:714 (2) - I'll consider it
  4. 02:39:083 (5,7) - ctrl+g? I changed to kat (5)


[Muzukashii]
  1. add a little break by deleting 00:28:189 (89) - There are a snare drum, I can't ignore that
  2. 00:35:563 (116) - kat to get some varienty? the pitch is low as to change to kat, I'll keep it
  3. 03:38:413 (130,131) - ctrl+g? or 03:39:083 (134,135) - I'm following the drum there


[Nardo's Oni]
  1. good as it is!


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:45:661 (257) - not worth enough for 1/8 tho... Removed
  2. 01:05:312 (4) - should be don or do ctrl+g with 01:05:228 (3,4) - I think the current pattern fita good with the vocal pitch
  3. 01:59:404 (318) - Removed


I like the set, but I assume your kantan is a bit too hard to play for newbies. It's because I wanna do a good spread. I think you're right, I'll see the spread again
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
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https://osu.ppy.sh/users/102335
ask him to change modding version

[inner oni]
00:02:379 (10) - d
00:10:927 (50) - add d
00:45:675 (254) - add k
00:45:787 (254) - add d
01:06:904 (15) - no finish
01:31:876 (150) - d
01:32:211 (152) - d
01:32:714 (155) - d
01:59:418 (318) - add k
01:59:530 (318) - add d
02:20:647 (15) - no finish
03:33:720 (17) - ^

[oni]
00:26:010 (116,117) - kd
02:57:267 (118) - -> 02:57:100 (117) - and k
03:39:809 (186) - k snare
03:45:200 (219,220,221) - kdd

[muzukashii]
00:20:647 (61) - 00:20:815 (61) - dk
00:31:373 (103) - add d
00:31:709 (103) - add k
01:22:994 (1) - ~01:23:161 (2) - kkk
01:45:116 (81) - add d
01:45:452 (81) - add k
02:47:128 (34) - d
02:47:463 (35) - k

[futsuu]
01:16:625 (60) - K
01:56:010 (76) - delete
02:30:368 (64) - D
posted

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/users/102335
ask him to change modding version

[oni]
00:26:010 (116,117) - kd Remain unchanged to accompany the pitch increase at 00:26:346 -
02:57:267 (118) - -> 02:57:100 (117) - and k Retained for better flow.
03:39:809 (186) - k snare I think dddkkkd could differentiate the background vocals well.
03:45:200 (219,220,221) - kdd This would be rather hard for this level imo.
Thanks for your mod though~ :)
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hi o/
taiko mod as request :)

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:38:580 -~00:43:943 -since the density difference between futsuu and muzu is quite large, you may reduce the density on this part.
  2. 01:24:167 (94,95) -since the drum stopped on 01:23:664 -,you may remove them.
  3. 03:17:463 (8,9,10,11,12,13) -you may increase the density here because futsuu has 1/2 patterns and muzu has 1/4 one.
  4. 03:28:189 (21,22,23,24,25,26) -^


[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:51:988 -~00:55:843 -considering muzu already has some 1/4 triples but futsuu only contains one 1/2 triple, you may add k on 00:55:005 -and 00:55:508 -in order to make a little more short 1/2 patterns.
  2. 01:05:396 (38,39,40) -^
  3. 02:08:413 (16,17,18) -^
  4. 03:21:485 (17,18,19) -^
  5. 03:32:211 (44,45,46) -^
  6. 02:48:636 -~ 02:59:195 -could make this part a little more denser, since kantan has some 1/1 patterns and muzu contains harder 1/2+1/4 patterns.(compare with kiai)



[ Muzukashii]
  1. 03:37:742 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -how about changing to 1/1+1/2 dk kdk kdkdk to follow instrument and vocal more precisely?


[ Inner Oni]

  1. 01:35:396 -~ 01:36:234 -how about using this sv step up (https://i.imgur.com/p1B5OCb.png) to make smooth sv change?


good map in overall, but the difficulty gap could decrease a bit between futsuu and muzu . you may add a little more short 1/2 pattern when muzu has 1/4+1/2 patterns and Kantan has 4/1+2/1 patterns. you can call me back for recheck after find 2~3 mod :)
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