1. Crissa's Insane (4,85 stars, 483 notes)
2. Hard (3,42 stars, 337 notes)
3. Memories (5,3 stars, 488 notes)
4. Normal (2,01 stars, 182 notes)
5. TheShadow's Easy (1,17 stars, 96 notes)

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Polarbrear wrote:

I'm really enjoying this map and I would love to see this ranked! Make some more difficulties if you can too! (make more aqours songs in your map style, I like it)

Also i made some modifications to the map, only because the second difficulty had a huge shift in tempo so i made some mods

Here's the changed map https://www.mediafire.com/file/ivta89634od22ji/Aqours%20-%20HAPPY%20PARTY%20TRAIN.osz

GreenHue wrote:

Hello There! let's take a look at your map eh?

General

-Combo Colors blend with background and maps need combo colors which contrast... even though nobody plays with backgrounds on. Fixed

-Tags on difficulties need to be the same. Fixed

Wonderous Journey

00:03:680 I would move this to about x=90 y=95. just my opinion on aesthetic! Fixed

00:09:327 This stream should be completely replaced with circles and sliders because there are no sounds on the blue ticks. I only removed part of the stream, because i feel the rest of it does fit with the music

00:13:738 Same with this one. does not fit music ^^^

00:15:679 Here you chose to stress this instrument with a slider, which is perfect, but it is very inconsistantly mapped throughout the entire song. I would suggest going through this difficulty and listening for different sounds on different notes. if they are long notes like that, if they are, try putting a slider! I don't really know what you mean...?

00:18:503 blanket is off! (slider curving around another curved object) try making it symmetrical to add to aesthetic! Fixed

00:21:679 this is a nice jump! thanks mane

00:25:032 I think streams are a little overused in this map and are placed when they do not correspond to the music I only removed part of the stream, because i feel the rest of it does fit with the music x3

00:34:738 vocals are not mapped. try mapping the held down vocals with sliders! Fixed

00:36:679 making these sliders (1,2) the same angle will add to aesthetic Done

00:37:562 (3,4) is an example of a good blanket

00:47:444 these held sound would be much better mapped with sliders of increased spacing Fixed... kinda

00:54:503 make wave sliders like this! I personally prefer keeping the "short slider -> 1/2 jumps" structure in this diff so I avoid exploiting those kind of sliders cuz they're too long

It looks like the combos are placed pretty randomly. I suggest placing them at the beginning of new measures. I'll take it into account

-Sakurasaki wrote:

i'm new in this s**t

[Extra]
00:47:797 - Noota con sonido resaltante sin mapear fixed
00:55:562 (1) - why nc? fixed
00:55:915 (1,2,3) - extiende mas esos jumps, son poco intuitivos fixed
00:57:856 (7,8,9) - serian mejor si estuviesen apilados uno encima de otro como triples fixed
01:02:974 (1,3) - intenta escalar el circle(3) encima del slider (1) done
01:08:797 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - intenta hacer una star, quedarian mejor, asi como estan no son nada intuitivos y no van con la distancia entre notas adecuada. done
01:11:621 (5,6,7,8,9) - has que la estrella sea perfecta quedaria muy bien* done
01:14:268 (1) - ondealo como 01:14:621 (2) - y veras magia? fixed
01:14:621 (2) - estas desperdiciando una nota importante cuando la vocalista dice "no" y malogra el flow actual si lo dejas vacio. fixed
01:33:327 (7) - en este slider, te comes una nota importante al final de este que deberia ser mapeado con un slider o un punto por que dice "hi-ka-in-de"y te estas salteando el "Hi" reemplazandolo por un end slider y se nota overmapping, pero asi como esta no se siente muy intuitivo que digamos el resto de la song si se queda asi :c. fixed
01:41:268 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - arruinaste el flow actual con este que es muy lineal :cccc . remapped
01:43:562 (5,6,7) - no es muy estetico que digamos, no estamos en 2013 como para que esto sea rankeado. remapped

GreenHue wrote:

Hello There! let's take a look at your map eh?

Insane

00:22:562 stream does fit in the map, even though it does look nice! but i can clearly hear the beats:(

00:34:562 don't be afraid to start sliders on red ticks if you are mapping lyrics! oh, it started low on red tick and went higher on white,
that's why i mapped it like that

00:38:797 this slider skips a bunch of huge beats and doesn't really fit the song. try to replace it with 1/1 sliders and circles:) fixed

00:41:974 right here there is an instrument playing in the background that could be mapped if you wanted to, I think it would be good! i sticked to the main rhythm and vocals through this section, mapping this instrument here means that i would have to map it every time it comes in, and i don't feel to:(, it's a nice suggestion tho

rest of the map looks good! Thank you!

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:

Hey hey, mod request from Discord

Please remap

Kd pls ty

Gl

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:

Hey hey, mod request from Discord

Cuando chucha vas a cambiar el volumen de los hitsounds :triggered: ya

Wonderful Journey

00:03:856 (2,3) - esteticamente estos overlaps no se ven bien al jugarlos, te recomiendo 1.- no overlappearlos o 2.- pon el 3 mas encima para que se note el overlap Fixed

00:08:621 (4) - ctrl+g para flow, no ha problema con el circulo que viene ya que se puede usar para definir el cambio de seccion Fixed

00:10:385 (5,6,1) - tomando en cuenta la intensidad, el salto del 6 al 1 deberia ser mas grande que el del 5 al 6 Fixed

00:11:796 (3,4) - no veo la razon para que este jump sea mas grande a los anteriores Fixed

00:11:973 (4,1) - deberias remarcar mas el jump, es un cambio de seccion y a la vez se agregan instrumentos Fixed

00:13:385 (8,9) - tomando en cuenta la intensidad tambien, este jump deberia ser el mas grande Fixed

00:13:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - mmh, el stream se siente overmappeado y se puede escuchar que el slider es un triple, intenta hacer algo como dejar el stream como break y poner un triple en el slider o poner un triple al final del stream actual, pero con otra direccion para que se nota que son sonidos diferentes
Fixed
00:15:679 (5,6) - flow, no es muy comodo Fixed

00:16:032 (6,1) - podrias mejorar el blanket Fixed

00:17:268 (6,7,8,1) - es un poco incomodo imo, podrias considerar tirar el 8 cerca del 3 Fixed

00:18:150 (2,3) - es incomodo el flow aqui, te recomiendo empezar el 3 mas lejos Fixed??

00:20:621 (7,1) - slider Fixed

00:22:562 (6) - escucho un triple Fixed

00:23:444 (1) - yo lo pondria un poco mas lejos, que se note el jump, es parte de una nueva seccion igual Fixed

00:25:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - overmappppp, se que intentas representar el piano pero casi no es perceptible como 1/4, sugiero seguir la bateria escucho batería????

00:28:738 (3) - lo cortaria al tick rojo y rellenaria con otro slider 1/2 Fixed

00:29:974 (6) - same here, no se siente muy bien al jugar porque no representas las silabas con un objeto clickeable, en esta seccion son importantes las silabas Fixed

00:28:032 (1,3) - lo mismo del overlap del principio Fixed

00:32:444 (3,1) - estan demasiado cerca imo Fixed

00:32:974 (4) - yo lo borraria, no aporta nada al ritmo que sigues Fixed

00:32:444 (3,3) - si haces que sean iguales ayudaria bastante a la estetica Mas adelante me pides que lo cambie, check your privilege

00:33:856 (3) - lo mismo con lo de las silabas remapped

00:34:738 (4,1) - por que estan tan cerca?remapped

00:35:621 (4,5,6,7) - lo mappeaste como si la intensidad estuviera aumentando, pero es al revez Fixed

00:36:679 (1) - 2 circles fit better Fixed - 5 circles lmao

00:38:797 (6,7) - preferiria un slider largo, si no te interesa, ctrl g al 7 para el flow o rotalo un poco Fixed

00:47:444 (1,2) - mm no se siente muy bien, preferiria poner algo como circulo-slider y con mas distancia Fixed

00:46:915 (4,1) - este overlap igual se nota, no mucho pero lo hace ???????

00:48:679 (5) - fijate bien en las vocals/percusion ???????

00:50:091 (7) - el slider deberia ir en el tick blanco imo, es algo incomodo asi, te comes el tick blanco Fixed

00:52:209 (2) - creo q este shape es muy innecesario, esta parte se merece algo mas simple Fixed

00:55:562 (9) - ctrl g Fixed

00:55:915 (1,2) - vocals Fixed

00:59:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - overmap Batería

01:00:679 (4,5) - vocals De 00:59:621 (1) a 01:05:797 (8) no sigo las vocals para variar

01:03:327 (2,3) - vocals De 00:59:621 (1) a 01:05:797 (8) no sigo las vocals para variar

01:05:797 (8,9) - no es muy lindo, los overlaps tan marcados entre shapes asi se ven feos ya y vo, ademas que no se puede distinguir muy bien el 2do slider Fixed

01:09:327 (4) - triple Fixed

01:10:032 (1,2,3,4) - WHERE THE SV CHANGES ARE Fixed

01:12:503 (1) - vocals Fixed

01:13:385 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:14:444 (7) - Fixed

01:16:915 - pondria un circulo aqui o incluso un triple, no creo que dejarlo en blanco quede muy bien Fixed

01:21:327 (1,2,3,4) - es una de las partes mas intensas de la cancion, por que sliders? Fixed

01:23:268 (4) - aqui deberias empezar con los sliders 1/2, junto con las vocals Fixed

01:24:679 (4,5) - flow Fixed

01:29:091 (2) - terminarlo en tick rojo y rellenar con 2 circulos quedaria mejor imo Fixed

01:34:738 (3) - vocals Fixed

01:38:974 (3) - yo le subiria el SV y lo haria repeated, quedaria mejor imo Fixed

01:42:150 (1) - vocalsss Fixed

01:45:150 (1) - uwu ♥♥♥♥♥

hypercyte wrote:

Mod from /r/osumapping discord

Wonderful Journey

00:13:385 (6,7) - The spacing could be reduced here, seems a bit too much.

00:12:856 (5,7) - Maybe move the circle away from the slider, since when I was playing it, it felt very uncomfortable and was unnecessarily hard to read.

00:16:385 (5) - Move to (x:188 y:68) to fix blanket

00:17:091 (1,2,3,4) - Turn this into a "cross" pattern like this https://i.imgur.com/4Qi5uPb.png and make sure the circles don't overlap with sliders (other than the 4th one ofc)

00:20:621 (1) - Move to (x:340 y:183) to fix blanket

01:13:385 (4) - This slider ignores the sound on the white tick. Remove this slider, and place a circle at 01:13:385 - and a slider stacked on it here 01:13:562 - . Something like this https://i.imgur.com/gaeKLMA.png

Crissaegrim's Insane

Very well made diff, no issues found

Hard -- Generally I feel there are way too many unappealing and unnecessary overlaps in this diff

00:05:091 (3,4,5) - Really don't recommend having these overlaps but you're choice really.

00:13:209 (4) - Move to x:264 y:112 to fix blanket

00:28:738 (3,4,5,6) - Rearrange objects to get rid of that overlap (id suggest this https://i.imgur.com/nt8RYic.png)

00:33:327 (5) - Move to x:100 y:123 to fix blanket

00:43:738 (3) - Move to x204 y130 to fix blanket

00:43:738 (3) - x409 y199

Normal

Distance snap should be on!
Sorry, but either needs to be remapped or all objects needs to be re positioned.

You can use AIMod to check for spacing in normal and easy diffs! Press Ctrl+Shift+A to bring it up and tick the "check distance snap" box


Other than that, good luck with the map, it has potential.

1. you might wanna use a soft sampleset instead of a normal one. (hitsounds are loud af, tone it down to 40-50% and 60% in the kiai)
2. what's up with the sv changes w
3. you'll be fixing lots of NCs, they usually start at the big white tick unless there's significant notes to be nc'd.