1. Requiem (8.21 stars, 2470 notes)

Pending on September 18, 2017
Nominated on November 9, 2017 by Benny-
Approved on November 12, 2017 by -Sh1n1-
Disqualified on November 12, 2017 by JBHyperion
Nominated on November 12, 2017 by Benny-
Approved on November 15, 2017 by -Sh1n1-

Requiem : By Ascendance
Taikoclysm : By Backfire had to be removed, you can download it here!
Hitsounds : By Kite

Zing wrote:

00:33:703 (1,128) - The constant 1/2 does not fit well with this section. It is bland and appears to ignore the emphasized instruments. I would go with a Muzu-like 1/1-1/2 pattern in the slow parts between these two notes, following the strings and using Finishers on the big riffs. No, that just doesn't fit with the chaotic nature of the map and the constant barrage which the map is supposed to emphasize.

01:15:410 (347,348,349,350) - Just checking if you meant these to be 1/8 couplets.
Yep

01:27:556 (5) - If possible, fix the extra line here.
I don't know how, but i'll get asc to try.

03:43:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - SV inflation note: By removing all the yellow-ticks here, the map became 0.88* lower. This is an alarming change, and seems to run counter to your statement that you do not map 1/8 couplets for SR inflation.
You know what, I went overboard, because originally there was just 1/8 at the last half of it, and then I was like, "well it seems like it fits" but nah, I changed it. There is still some in there, tho.

07:52:461 (61) to 08:03:583 (109) - This part seems to neglect key vocals. I disagree with this, and think you should include syncopated 1/4 where the lyrical rhythm suggests they should be.
You're right and this is something that I knew the section lacked and I couldn't figure out what the fuck I was doing wrong lmao

08:25:242 (91) - I don't think this last kiai should exist. The epicness of the end of the song does not match the part before it.
That's up to asc.

08:47:778 (1) - The reverberation of the last percussion hit pales in volume to the spinner sound, which leads to, in game, there seeming to be absolutely no musical justification for the spinner, let alone how long it is. I think you should omit it entirely. I went ahead and shortened it by a lot. Oops.

Chara wrote:

futa

[reeeeeeeeeeeeeequiem]
00:37:800 (3) - make this also a 3/4 for consistency? it was originally and then zirox told me to die so i died
00:42:337 (4,1,2,3,4) - mayb make the distance between the first (4) and (1) a dash? for emphasis and also to flow better (adjust 2,3,4 with 1 ofc) I tried, and I also spaced out 1,2,3,4 a bit to play nicer
00:50:093 (1,2) - increase distance mayb, at the current distance i stop for a moment which is not really fluid in movement) the deed is done
00:59:459 (1) - there's a prominent note at 00:59:605, map that Prefer limiting it to the vocal
01:35:166 (6,7,8) - something like this would both add a hyper for emphasis and make it flow better to the next note: nice suggestion

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01:43:946 (1,1) - make these more horizontal for more movement, kinda awkward that they're almost vertical yeet
03:03:044 (2) - ^ yes
04:13:800 (1,2,3,4) - i choked on sightread here from how awkward this plays lol, mayb nerf fixed with the moddingv2 mod
04:49:068 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this could use some variety, like making some of those just note triples same as above
05:41:343 (2) - this goes off-grid by a tad bit kek not unrankable, not my problem :^)

that ending is high-quality choke material B)

pretty fun tho!!1!!11!11!1

hikikochan wrote:

hello, fix the barline issue @ 01:27:556 by adding a timing point at 01:27:537 -, then go to style tab and omit first barline on this point
thanks
not sure about ranking criteria for timing points between diffs but if that's a thing then this will need to be added in the catch diff as well yes

Sinnoh wrote:

I'll let Mbomb handle the rest

Sinnoh wrote:

how does 1/3 work
not like this

03:28:142 (1,2,3) - this isn't even 1/3, snap to 1/4

04:53:020 (4) - You snapped these to 1/3, this is correct.
04:53:020 (4,5,6) - You forgot to snap the rest of this section 1/3, this is not correct

05:50:268 (1) - Isn't timing like way off here
05:52:368 (4,5,6,7) - 05:59:268 (3,4,5,6) - 06:04:418 (4,5) - etc. These should be snapped to 1/6 but it's too hard to tell when timing is this far off

I'll let Mbomb handle the rest

I try not to dq mod but it didn't show up in mapfeed so couldn't look while it was bubbled, sorry about that.