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Mami Kawada - Joint

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marshallracer
1,592 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer

Dark_Ai wrote:

Easy
- Approach Rate -2 das andere hab ich dir ja schon gesag ok
- Slider Velocity runter auf 0,080 ist im Moment besser für Easy (dann natürlich sliders bearbeiten) nope, 1 ist ok

00:50:899 (1) - mach nur nen clab am Anfang
00:51:566 (2) - clab weg
00:52:233 (3) - selbe wie bei 1
00:56:899 (3,4,1) - abstand
01:00566 (4) - mach nur nen clab am Anfang
01:06:233 (2) - entferne es ._.
01:14:233 (7) - ende es am 01:24:566 wtf was?
01:22:899 (4) - mach statt clab whistle is'n clap x3
01:25:233 (8) - verschiebe zu 01:24:899 vor
01:36:899 (1) - selbe wie 01:22:899
01:37:233 (2) - clab weg
01:38:899 (4) - ^ mach whistle
01:40:566 (5) - clab weg
01:44:233 (4) - clab passt hier nicht ganz
01:47:233 (2) - entfernen wieso? D:
01:52:233 (3) - mach hier am besten nen circle statt nen slider
02:00:233 (2) - clab weg
02:00:566 (3) - entfernen
02:03:233 (2) - mach whistle statt clab
02:04:899 (4) - ^
02:13:233 (4) - add circle, dann 02:13:899 auf Abstand achten huh? ó.o
02:21:566 (1,2,3) - weg mit clabs 1 whistle 2 nix 3 whistle
02:26:566 (4) - clab nur am Anfang
02:27:233 (5) - whistle
02:30:899 (5) - new combo und entferte clabs ._. die passen ned ><
02:57:233 (1) - add 2 Noten http://puu.sh/cr1X
02:58:899 (6,7) - finde es so besser http://puu.sh/cr2H und whistle
03:01:566 (1) - Abstand
03:07:566 (1) - entfernen 03:07:899 circle setzen
03:14:233 (4) - ende den slider 03:14:566 ohne rückkehr
03:29:899 (2,3,4) - clabs weg
03:37:233 (2) - entfernen noin D:
03:38:566 (-) - ^ ^
03:41:566 (1-4) - die clabs gefallen mir ned ._. ich find die ok :/

M A R I O wrote:

marshall's Easy

Das soll ne easy sein oô (bissi schwer ^^")

00:56:566 (2,3) - spacing isn bissi arg (3mal so groß!) *siehe voriger mod*
01:08:584 (3) - maybe make this lider 1/2 tick longer? ^^ (ends on "de") doesn't it do this already?
01:13:399 (2) - Put 2 to this pos.? nah, it would ruin the flow~
Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny

M A R I O wrote:

Broetchen

Das Gebäck hat wieder zugeschlagen ^^


01:30:899 Is that Mini Kiai time intended?
02:34:899 .... again?

But that diff is fine ^^
Schon wieder bin ich der einzige der nichts machen muss D:
Die Kiai-fontains (Kiaitime und 1/4 später keine mehr) sind mit Absicht und würd' ich auch Partzsch raten in den anderen Diffs zu übernehmen, macht sich am Ende vonner Kiai immer ganz gut nochmal'n Fontain zu haben~
SuperPartzschi
62 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
Ey...Jetzt hab ich die schon rausgenommen -.-
Lightgazer
94 posts
Joined August 2010
Lightgazer
Ich brings besser mal hinter mich
Ich werd aber nur 3 diffs anfangen und (vllt) denn rest später nachholen fürs erste (denn ein recheck is hier nicht ausweichbar) :cry:

SPOILER

General

Warum eigentlich keinen Slidertick 2? der passt doch total gut! (Wichtig ist der Tick Sollte überall der gleiche sein das wurde mir zumindest so gesagt oh und so oder so bemerke ich gerade das in denn 2 insanes die tick so schon auf 2 sind also fixen wäre gut)
Sehe das das Normal ja eine ganz andere Source hat (ja der war gut!) kenne diesen Anime (glaub ich) nicht deswegen kenn ich die source nicht aber durch andere maps sollte er ja Shakugan no Shana II sein also bitte fixen
Viele verschiedene Offsets die NICHT auf ihren selben nenner gehen (beim addieren) Heißt also das offset ist sogar Falsch also bei dem wo ihr glaubt es sei das richtige benutzt es bitte an der selben stelle in jeder diff (ich würde sagen 2,900 passt)
Lillys Hard benutzt eine Slider Tick Rate von 0,5 die Unrankable ist und es wohl nie mehr sein wird... also fix das mal und zur not kann man ja nicht passende Ticks silencen (obwohl hier schon immens viele Sections sind aber ok)
Ist CXu eine Approval Guest diff? Da 18M score ja fast schon MAX ist für Ranked
So viele Custom hitsounds... sind die wirklich alle im gebrauch...?
OSB weg wenn du sie nicht brauchst
shakugan-no-shana-27 bild wird nicht verwendet also in die tonne treten

Easy

Timing Sections Resnappen
Genau wie alle noten da welche unsnapped sind
00:35:566 (1) NC hier wenn man mich fragt denn generell sind die combos hier recht lang was bei easy eigentlich nicht sein sollte
00:39:233 (2) flip die Horizontal und 90° mit uhr adjustiere denn ein wenig damit dieser pattern etwas besser aussieht
00:40:233 (3) NC hier
00:43:233 (1,2,3) diese 3 könnte man doch besser aussehen lassen oder? (2 zu x:256 y:112) und nicht nach snappen vergessen denn rest
00:53:566 (1) der slider sollte 1 grid runter genau wie die 2 und lass ihn noch mehr biegen damit er nicht mit der nächstgelegenden 3 Stackt
01:14:899 (1) für denn spinner seh ich eig keinen grund zu existieren
01:22:900 (4) NC hier
01:38:900 (5) 1 grid links
01:38:900 (5) auch gleich NCen oh und nicht nachsnappen vergessen nach dem Grid change
02:00:899 (3) puh sehr hässlich wie der circle in dem slider steckt
02:05:566 (1,2,3,4) diese hier solltest du so nachjustieren das ihre distanz die selbe ist (einfach etwas dran rumspielen) auch könnten die westenlich hüber sein und auch besser platziert schließlich hast du das ganze spielfeld frei
02:26:566 (4) der hier könnte auch einen schöneren platz vertragen
02:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) sind nicht gerade lässt sich aber einfach fixen (4 ein grid hoch und die 5 1 rauf und rechts)
03:20:233 (1,2,3,4) das selbe wie bei 02:05:566 (1,2,3,4)
03:22:899 (1) hm vllt spinnen lassen bis 03:25:566?
03:38:899 (1) NC
03:40:566 (6,7) der slider hier stackt auch ganz schön obwohl rechts unten doch soviel platz ist...
03:43:233 (2) platzier denn doch lieber weg vom vorigen slider nicht in ihn (x:288 y:224)
und anstatt es mit der 1 zu stacken "kannst" du es ja auch mit der 2 tun
03:45:566 (1) lieber 1 grid rauf und links (symmetrie könnte der auch vertragen)

Normal

Das fängt ja gut an

Auch hier alle noten Resnappen
00:32:899 (1) der 1 stackt schon wieder ein wenig als slider justieren hier wieder
00:38:899 (2) etwas zu nah laut Distance snap also weiter weg mit dem hier
00:40:233 (1,2,3,4) die Könnte man doch viel schöner anreihen oder?
00:45:233 (5) wenn schon stacken dann richtig
01:00:566 (3,4) etwas zu weit weg
01:10:233 (2) der hier könnte Wirklich schöner sein
01:12:899 (1,2,3) die hier sind wieder etwas zu weit weg
01:14:233 (4) und die wiederrum zu nah...
01:18:566 (4) wieder zu weit weg und durch das fixen dieser note muss 5 ja auch näher also versuchs so das die nächste 01:20:233 (1) etwas mehr aus der ecke raus kommt
01:21:566 (3,4,5,6) immer dieses 0,20 spacing change auf random...
01:24:233 (2) zu nah
01:25:233 (1) und das zählt ja schon als Jump :lol:
01:26:566 (3,4,5,6) auch die sollten gedistanced werden
01:36:899 (1) Oh mein... ab hier spinnt das spacing total... (20+ dann wd 40 weniger und dann 60 mehr? versuch bitte ALLE noten hier zu resnappen)
02:10:733 (1,2) die kommen sehr unerwartet würde also empfehlen das nur ein slider sein zu lassen (am besten denn slider langziehen denn der kommende tick passt hervorragend dazu)
02:30:233 (1) diese stackt fast wieder
02:57:233 (1) oh wie schön~ Normales spacing :o
03:03:566 (4) NC
03:16:233 (5,1) hier jedoch ist wieder ein 0,40 jump
03:20:233 (4) NC würde hier besser passen
03:23:899 (3,4) vllt zum slider machen und wenn schon lassen wollen dann unstack
03:32:899 (4) NC
03:43:399 (2) ehm ich glaub der slider is falsch gemacht hier denn er ist einen tick zu lang und sitzt zudem auch auf dem falschen tick
03:57:566 versteh eigentlich denn sinn nicht die kiai weiter laufen zu lassen da man es ja so oder so nicht sieht

Hard

Wichtig! Wenn man slider verlangsamt mit sections wird auch die distanz beeinträchtigt
Und um das zu verhindern macht man eig das einzig logischte (Wenn man damit aufhört gleich beim nächsten circle die section setzten und NICHT beim nächsten slider) / ( und damit das spacing erhöhen für bestimmte parts is zu verwirrend)
AR 8? reicht denn nicht 7?
Alle noten auch hier Resnappen
hier scheinen auch unsnapped slider ends zu sein also solltest du JEDEN einzelnen neu machen (ja oder du lässt alle Recalculieren da solltest du aber auch alle doppelt checken)
Sehr viele Grüne sections versuch ein paar loszuwerden auch wenn du sie eigentlich brauchst
00:13:544 (7) NC
00:18:877 (8) NC
00:37:711 (1) erstens etwas zu weit weg und für einen "jump" wäre der platz viel zu weit unten also würde ich das lieber fixen
00:39:045 (4,5) nicht schön wie die 2 sich abtasten
00:40:211 (1) etwas zu weit weg dieser hier
00:44:711 (6) lass denn hier lieber nach oben schauen
00:45:378 (8) und denn hier etwas hübscher platzieren
00:46:044 (10) NC
00:46:544 (11,12,13,1,2,3) ein ganz schöner Hitburst haufen also versuch die vorigen etwas besser anzureihen um verwirrung zu vermeiden
00:47:544 (1) NC weg
00:48:878 (6) NC
00:48:878 (1) etwas zu weit weg und wenn du schon beim spacing fixen bist sieh auch gleich zu das du beim kommenden combo 00:49:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) nicht zuviel wieder overlappst mit hitbursts
00:51:211 (2) der hier ist auch etwas zu weit weg
00:52:044 (5,6) würde empfehlen diese 2 2 Ticks früher starten zu lassen da der kommende spinner wirklich kurz ist
00:52:711 (1) du könntest denn spinner auch dann hier starten und 00:53:544 hier enden lassen (passt auch zum gesang)
01:06:711 (4) NC
01:07:378 (3,4,5) die 3 sollten etwas näher
01:08:711 (9,10) diese 2 näher und sie könnten auch schöner angereiht sein
01:09:878 (2) näher ran (1 grid rechts und unten)
01:10:378 (4) schöner platzieren
01:11:211 (6) random langsam werdende slider sind nie gut und überhaupt an einem ort wo nichts langsamer wird
01:13:211 (2,3,4,5) die hier gehören wesentlich näher beieinander
01:15:044 (11) NC
01:15:711 (1) hm jump wieder
01:16:878 (4,5,6) wieder viel zu weit weg
01:17:378 (8) NC hier und resnap die kommenden noten da sie wieder ein Suddenly increased spacing haben (was nicht cool und gut ist)
01:18:544 (1) NC weg
01:20:044 (11) NC
01:22:711 (1) NC weg
01:23:544 (10) NC
01:24:711 (x) hier würd ich sogar noch eine note hinzufügen
01:25:711 (x) hier ebenso
01:28:211 die kiai sollte eig hier enden
01:29:211 (5) NC
01:38:712 (9) wieder random langsam werdende slider /NC die wenigstens damit man es weiß UND mach sie immer an den selben stellen
01:41:712 (1) jump
01:43:378 (7,8) zu weit weg
01:46:878 (9) beweg denn lieber nach x:176 y:304
01:47:545 (1) oh und die nach x:480 y:192
01:50:045 (10) NC
01:52:879 (10) NC
01:54:544 (6) platzier denn hier etwas besser
01:54:878 (7) ah diese sind ziemlich gut die bemerkt man wirklich kaum
01:56:212 (1) diese hier is sogar zu nah :o
01:58:211 (1) wieder ein spacing change für eine weile...
02:00:878 (10) NC
02:02:377 (1) NC weg
02:03:544 (7) NC
02:03:544 (7) und 1 grid links btw
02:03:878 (2) zu hoch denn der stackt schon in denn score was nicht gut ist also gib ihm einfach nach x:336 y:144
02:10:794 diese Kiai startet 1 tick zu spät
02:10:711 (1) NC
02:11:378 (1,2,3) naja wenigstens ge NCed der jump also ok
02:14:378 (4) unschöner stack
02:16:878 (11) NC
02:16:878 (1) auch is dies ein unschöner stack wieder mal
02:19:045 (6) der hier auch
02:19:378 (1) NC weg
02:21:378 (13) und wieder NC
02:22:711 (1) NC bei langsam werdenden sliders... wieso hier und nicht überall anders...?
02:24:044 (1) Näher ran
02:27:544 (9) NC
02:21:878 (2) zu x:440 y:136
02:25:211 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) dieser part hat wieder random Distance
02:28:378 (3,4,5) wieder mal zu weit weg
02:28:711 (x) Circle vllt? (wenn ja NC auch gleich hier und von der nächsten entfernen)
02:37:544 (10) NC
02:39:544 (1) NC weg
02:42:878 (12) NC
02:48:211 (1) starker Anti jump
02:48:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) und generell solltest du diesen part neu snappen
02:53:544 (9) NC
03:11:211 (10) nicht sicher hier aber ich glaub der slider sollte ge NCed werden
03:12:378 (1) anstatt die hier
03:14:211 (8) NC
03:16:544 (1) NC weg hier
03:17:544 (4) und da wieder NC
03:28:044 (4) NC
03:32:544 (7) NC
03:35:877 (1) NC weg
03:36:044 (11) und hier NC
03:37:211 (1) NC weg
03:38:878 (9) NC
03:39:877 (1) NC weg
03:42:211 (11) und hier wieder NC
03:43:378 (10) NC hier

Es kann sein das iwas nicht stimmt hier also nicht wundern wenn ich iwas falsch ausdrück da das ganze 4 std dauerte
SuperPartzschi
62 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
[quote="Lightgazer"
[spoilerbox]
General

Warum eigentlich keinen Slidertick 2? der passt doch total gut! (Wichtig ist der Tick Sollte überall der gleiche sein das wurde mir zumindest so gesagt oh und so oder so bemerke ich gerade das in denn 2 insanes die tick so schon auf 2 sind also fixen wäre gut)Stimmt allerdings...Done
Sehe das das Normal ja eine ganz andere Source hat (ja der war gut!) kenne diesen Anime (glaub ich) nicht deswegen kenn ich die source nicht aber durch andere maps sollte er ja Shakugan no Shana II sein also bitte fixenKleiner Fehler von mir, geändert. BTW Ja SnS II :D
Viele verschiedene Offsets die NICHT auf ihren selben nenner gehen (beim addieren) Heißt also das offset ist sogar Falsch also bei dem wo ihr glaubt es sei das richtige benutzt es bitte an der selben stelle in jeder diff (ich würde sagen 2,900 passt)Changed
Ist CXu eine Approval Guest diff? Da 18M score ja fast schon MAX ist für RankedNyan, also er wollte eigentlich nochmal versuchen den Score ein bisschen runterzuschrauben, also da bin ich überfragt D:
So viele Custom hitsounds... sind die wirklich alle im gebrauch...?Da muss ich passen...
OSB weg wenn du sie nicht brauchstDone
shakugan-no-shana-27 bild wird nicht verwendet also in die tonne tretenIst weg



Normal

Das fängt ja gut an

Auch hier alle noten Resnappen
00:32:899 (1) der 1 stackt schon wieder ein wenig als slider justieren hier wiederDone
00:38:899 (2) etwas zu nah laut Distance snap also weiter weg mit dem hierDone
00:40:233 (1,2,3,4) die Könnte man doch viel schöner anreihen oder?Jetzt wo du es sagst, Done
00:45:233 (5) wenn schon stacken dann richtigNyan.
01:00:566 (3,4) etwas zu weit wegNäher rangeholt, Done
01:10:233 (2) der hier könnte Wirklich schöner seinSliderformen ist nicht mein Ding, aber man sollte dennoch auf Schönheit achten, Done
01:12:899 (1,2,3) die hier sind wieder etwas zu weit wegSame wie beim ersten, Done
01:14:233 (4) und die wiederrum zu nah...Verschoben^^
01:18:566 (4) wieder zu weit weg und durch das fixen dieser note muss 5 ja auch näher also versuchs so das die nächste 01:20:233 (1) etwas mehr aus der ecke raus kommtNäher geholt und Slider in die Ecke verschoben^^
01:21:566 (3,4,5,6) immer dieses 0,20 spacing change auf random...Nyan? :3...Ich sag nix
01:24:233 (2) zu nahWeiter weg gesetzt
01:25:233 (1) und das zählt ja schon als Jump :lol: Ups, gefixed
01:26:566 (3,4,5,6) auch die sollten gedistanced werdenGesagt, getan
01:36:899 (1) Oh mein... ab hier spinnt das spacing total... (20+ dann wd 40 weniger und dann 60 mehr? versuch bitte ALLE noten hier zu resnappen)Done
02:10:733 (1,2) die kommen sehr unerwartet würde also empfehlen das nur ein slider sein zu lassen (am besten denn slider langziehen denn der kommende tick passt hervorragend dazu)Gefixed
02:30:233 (1) diese stackt fast wiederfixed
02:57:233 (1) oh wie schön~ Normales spacing :o Auch ein blindes Huhn, findel mal ein Korn :o
03:03:566 (4) NCOkay
03:16:233 (5,1) hier jedoch ist wieder ein 0,40 jumpfixed
03:20:233 (4) NC würde hier besser passenakzeptiert
03:23:899 (3,4) vllt zum slider machen und wenn schon lassen wollen dann unstackSlider passt besser :o
03:32:899 (4) NCdone
03:43:399 (2) ehm ich glaub der slider is falsch gemacht hier denn er ist einen tick zu lang und sitzt zudem auch auf dem falschen tickVerbessert
03:57:566 versteh eigentlich denn sinn nicht die kiai weiter laufen zu lassen da man es ja so oder so nicht siehtHmm...Kiai geändert


[/quote]

Uff...Das war ein langer Mod...Ich habe alles verbessert und VORALLEM das Spacing sollte jetzt stimmen
Von daher, Thx to Mod :3
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
"Ist CXu eine Approval Guest diff? Da 18M score ja fast schon MAX ist für Ranked" <-- Just assuming this is about the 18mill maxscore limit thing. I'm hoping it's still possible to rank this with the current score as it's barely over the limit, and feels kinda silly to label it "unrankable" for that reason.

Anyhow, changed the offset to 2900 (or 234, which is equivalent (eh how to spell) to 2900). Which means an offset change of a whopping -1ms

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [CXu].osu
Winshley
osu! Alumni
2,384 posts
Joined May 2011
Winshley
Broetchen8441 shared this map to me, so I might give myself a shot on modding it. My mod is focused more on technical stuff rather than creativity though. Forgive me if this somehow looks like nazi modding... :o

[General]
- Kill that OSB file. It has different Creator name and it's empty, making the file useless and taking up (small) space.
- Some unused images found on folder. Unless you might wanna use them later, remove them.
- Timing Offset: -5ms (it could be just me though...)
- Match all the Timing Offset across all difficulties. Follow CXu's starting offset.
- @Broetchen8441: I still think [Normal] is more like Normal difficulty than Hard though, making the difficulty spread ENII. Consider making a Hard diff (I might do it if I have free time though). =/

[marshall's Easy]
- Pink color combo?? It looks ugly especially when the background image doesn't have anything pink-ish.
- 01:05:566 (1) - Move to 01:05:399. It matches the vocal there.
- 01:19:566 (3) - The distance snapping went derp thanks to the unnecessary BPM changes... ;_;
- 01:58:899 (1) - Move the whole slider to 01:58:733 (along with the slider end). Again, matches the vocal. Spacing might have to be adjusted if you really are going to move it.
- 02:30:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uneven distance spacing.
- 03:07:899 (1) - This is too far for Easy diff and not symmetrical. D: This works better
- 03:36:066 (1) - Too close to spinner (as compared to other objects following after spinners). Might be a bit too surprising for newbies. I would suggest on shortening the 03:33:566 (1) spinner to 03:35:233 instead.

[Normal]
- 03:43:399 (2) - Sounds a bit uneven here.

[Broetchen]
- More than 3 unique slider speed, and most of them doesn't really follow the flow and unexpected, unlike "Aha?" which does follow the flow nicely... :o
- 03:46:733 (1) - I know this has been discussing this from IRC, but I still think that the spinner is too long. If I'm the mapper, I would stop the spinner at 03:52:233, map something between, and spinner again on 03:54:899. :P

[CXu]
- Set preview point
- Not sure why, but I think the distance spacing looks "scattered" all around. I guess you need modder(s) that can play Insane map and ask for he/she/their opinions.
DoKito
600 posts
Joined October 2010
DoKito
General
  1. Lösche "LillyWonka" von den Tags, da du ihre Diff ja gelöscht hast.
  2. Inherited Points sind unsnapped in manchen Diffs
[marshall's Easy]
  1. 01:14:899 (1) - Der Spinner passt irgendwie nicht so ganz.
  2. 01:19:566 (3) -x1,5? Sowas ist denke ich mal ziemlich schwer für Newbies zu lesen. Ich glaub nicht, dass das so gut ist für eine Easy Diff, da die die Geschwindigkeit nicht so gut erahnen können ;o Außerdem passt der Slider eh nicht so ganz.
  3. 02:18:900 (1) - Das Gleiche wie mit dem Spinner oben.
  4. 02:18:900 (1,1) - Ich würde sagen hier ist der Abstand ein wenig zu gering D:
  5. 03:07:899 (1,2) - Wtf soll dieser Jump? U mad, bro? Q.q
  6. 03:25:399 (1) - Zieh die Pause auf diesen Tick. (Einfach per drag & drop)
  7. 03:33:566 (1) - Passt auch nicht.
  8. 03:40:899 (7,1) - Diese stelle hier folgt irgendwie keinen Rhythmus. o,o'' Vorallem der lange Slider startet völlig komisch.
[Normal]
  1. Hier sind ein paar sinnlose Inherited Points... Die rufen nämlich keinerlei Veränderungen hervor. Löschen! D;
  2. 01:22:233 (5,6) - Spacing?
  3. 01:23:233 (1) - Passt irgendwie nicht.
  4. 01:40:316 - 01:42:149 - Nur weil hier keine Vocals sind, heißt das nicht, dass es hier nichts zum mappen gibt D; Ich würde hier etwas hinmachen, da ich persönlich finde, dass sowas den "Flow" einer Map ein wenig zerstört.
  5. 01:46:233 (4) - Reverse?
  6. 01:50:316 - 01:52:816 - Das Gleiche wie oben.
  7. 02:34:899 - Pause hierhin ziehen?
  8. 03:25:399 (1) - Wie wärs wenn du den Slider leise, wenn nicht gar stumm machst?
  9. 03:43:399 (2) - Wieso endet der auf'm 1/4 Takt?
[Broetchen]


  • Hier war aber jemand faul und hat oft Copy & Paste benutzt :3...
  1. 00:21:566 (7) - NC?
  2. 01:46:899 - Warum dieser Slowdown ab hier?! Macht irgendwie keinen Sinn, da weder die Musik ruhiger/langsamer wird noch sonst irgendwas.
  3. 03:06:566 - ^
  4. 03:28:066 - Unerwarteter Speedup.

    Komische Diff... Irgendwie war der komplette Mapping-Rhythmus arg komisch und manche Jumps total random. Genauso siehts mit den Slowdowns und Speedups aus.
[CXu]
  1. 00:43:900 (x) - Add a circle? Would flow better.
  2. 00:53:733 (3) - Remove and place 4 somewhere else. 00:56:233 (7,8) - Those two also are 1/1 and it really fits better to the music.
  3. 01:57:734 (3) - ^
  4. 03:10:733 (3,1) - I'd recommend to map something in between of them.

    Best diff in this mapset. Well done (:
Soooo... Das wärs :3 Hoffe ich konnte helfen und war nicht zu streng xD
SuperPartzschi
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi

DoKoLP wrote:

General
  1. Lösche "LillyWonka" von den Tags, da du ihre Diff ja gelöscht hast. Done
[Normal]
  1. Hier sind ein paar sinnlose Inherited Points... Die rufen nämlich keinerlei Veränderungen hervor. Löschen! D; Getan (:
  2. 01:22:233 (5,6) - Spacing?Verbessert (:
  3. 01:23:233 (1) - Passt irgendwie nicht. Hab ich mal ein bisschen anders gemacht ;)
  4. 01:40:316 - 01:42:149 - Nur weil hier keine Vocals sind, heißt das nicht, dass es hier nichts zum mappen gibt D; Ich würde hier etwas hinmachen, da ich persönlich finde, dass sowas den "Flow" einer Map ein wenig zerstört.Hab mal 3 Circle hingesetzt :o
  5. 01:46:233 (4) - Reverse? Passt sogar besser :o
  6. 01:50:316 - 01:52:816 - Das Gleiche wie oben.Mal ebend 5 Circle hingesetzt ;)
  7. 02:34:899 - Pause hierhin ziehen? Bin ich mit einverstanden (:
  8. 03:25:399 (1) - Wie wärs wenn du den Slider leise, wenn nicht gar stumm machst? Hört sich gut an (:
  9. 03:43:399 (2) - Wieso endet der auf'm 1/4 Takt? Flüchtigkeit :3 aber ausgebessert (:


Soooo... Das wärs :3 Hoffe ich konnte helfen und war nicht zu streng xD
Danke fürs modden (:
Und ja du konntest helfen ;)
CXu
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CXu

Winshley wrote:

[CXu]
- Set preview point - Ops, done
- Not sure why, but I think the distance spacing looks "scattered" all around. I guess you need modder(s) that can play Insane map and ask for he/she/their opinions. - Should be fine :P

DoKoLP wrote:

[CXu]
  1. 00:43:900 (x) - Add a circle? Would flow better. - That feels awkward to me. I'm using the same "pausing" in all the patterns in this part anyhow
  2. 00:53:733 (3) - Remove and place 4 somewhere else. 00:56:233 (7,8) - Those two also are 1/1 and it really fits better to the music. - Have to disagree again. The sound at 53:733 is different from the one at 56:233, and I think the current pattern I have fits better than removing it.
  3. 01:57:734 (3) - ^ - See above
  4. 03:10:733 (3,1) - I'd recommend to map something in between of them. - Don't you just like them breaks :D

    Best diff in this mapset. Well done (: - Thank you :)
Soooo... Das wärs :3 Hoffe ich konnte helfen und war nicht zu streng xD
Thanks for modding guys~~
Here's my diff with preview point. Also I recommend using the same preview point as I'm using

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [CXu].osu
marshallracer
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Joined December 2010
marshallracer

Winshley wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
- Pink color combo?? It looks ugly especially when the background image doesn't have anything pink-ish.
- 01:05:566 (1) - Move to 01:05:399. It matches the vocal there.
- 01:19:566 (3) - The distance snapping went derp thanks to the unnecessary BPM changes... ;_; huh?
- 01:58:899 (1) - Move the whole slider to 01:58:733 (along with the slider end). Again, matches the vocal. Spacing might have to be adjusted if you really are going to move it.
- 02:30:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uneven distance spacing.
- 03:07:899 (1) - This is too far for Easy diff and not symmetrical. D: This works better kinda fixed it
- 03:36:066 (1) - Too close to spinner (as compared to other objects following after spinners). Might be a bit too surprising for newbies. I would suggest on shortening the 03:33:566 (1) spinner to 03:35:233 instead.

DoKoLP wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
  1. 01:14:899 (1) - Der Spinner passt irgendwie nicht so ganz. akzeptabel :<
  2. 01:19:566 (3) -x1,5? Sowas ist denke ich mal ziemlich schwer für Newbies zu lesen. Ich glaub nicht, dass das so gut ist für eine Easy Diff, da die die Geschwindigkeit nicht so gut erahnen können ;o Außerdem passt der Slider eh nicht so ganz. umgebastelt x3
  3. 02:18:900 (1) - Das Gleiche wie mit dem Spinner oben. genau wie oben x3
  4. 02:18:900 (1,1) - Ich würde sagen hier ist der Abstand ein wenig zu gering D: ne, ich find das is ok so ^^
  5. 03:07:899 (1,2) - Wtf soll dieser Jump? U mad, bro? Q.q is weg x3
  6. 03:25:399 (1) - Zieh die Pause auf diesen Tick. (Einfach per drag & drop)
  7. 03:33:566 (1) - Passt auch nicht. doch :<
  8. 03:40:899 (7,1) - Diese stelle hier folgt irgendwie keinen Rhythmus. o,o'' Vorallem der lange Slider startet völlig komisch. die ist aber leicht zu spielen D:
Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
Saten
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Saten
CXu
03:09:900 (2) - 1 grid left

Jenny
03:57:566 (1,2,1,2) - Troll end lol

Normal
00:34:899 (5) - better slider-shape?
00:45:233 (5) - stack with previous slider end?
01:30:899 - end the break here
02:00:899 (1) - better slider-shape, like this maybe?
SPOILER
02:10:733 (1) - finish at the beginning
02:13:399 (1) - ^
02:21:399 (1) - ^ fits well with the kiai fountain
03:16:233 (5) - finish at the end
03:23:899 (3) - ^ and try not to stack with previous slider
03:28:066 (1) - finish at the beginning
03:36:066 (1) - ^

marshall's Easy
01:05:399 (1) - Finish
01:06:733 (1) - finish at the beginning
02:00:233 (2) - finish
02:01:566 (1) - finish at the end
02:10:733 (1) - finish
03:09:566 (3,4) - 1 grid left
03:12:233 (1) - hidden note D: place it here instead
SPOILER
03:43:566 (3) - New combo?

_________
Where did [Lillys Hard] go? D:
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
[General]
Some of your backgrounds have wrong resolution. they should be perfectly 4:3, recomended and most used sizes are 1024 x 768 and 800 x 600.

Use same break length in all diffs
I have 2 normals, delete one of them from folder (the useless one)
Offset must be same in all diffs.

[Easy]
20+ break, it's unrankable
00:47:233 (2) - why so crooked? http://puu.sh/eTMQ better like this
01:06:733 (1) - ok, i get it, please work on your sliders better and them smooth and delicious.

[CXu]
www
AR-1
00:26:900 (1,2,3) - keep consistency ~
03:42:233 (1,2) - smoother

Fast look, map still needs tones of work :/
SuperPartzschi
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
Normal
00:34:899 (5) - better slider-shape? Fixed
00:45:233 (5) - stack with previous slider end? 1 circle is enough, I think D:
01:30:899 - end the break here 01:31:899 is okay D:
02:00:899 (1) - better slider-shape, like this maybe?
SPOILER
Fixed
02:10:733 (1) - finish at the beginning This is good, Done
02:13:399 (1) - ^ ^
02:21:399 (1) - ^ fits well with the kiai fountain ^
03:16:233 (5) - finish at the end ^
03:23:899 (3) - ^ and try not to stack with previous slider ^ Fixed
03:28:066 (1) - finish at the beginning ^
03:36:066 (1) - ^ ^



_________
Where did [Lillys Hard] go? D: I should delete it ;_;
SuperPartzschi
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
[General]
Some of your backgrounds have wrong resolution. they should be perfectly 4:3, recomended and most used sizes are 1024 x 768 and 800 x 600. Fixed

Use same break length in all diffs I think about it
I have 2 normals, delete one of them from folder (the useless one) Fixed
Offset must be same in all diffs. Yeah, i know. Fixed (I think)
CXu
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CXu

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[CXu]
www - wwwwww
AR-1 - AR8 feels too slow.
00:26:900 (1,2,3) - keep consistency ~ - wee fix
03:42:233 (1,2) - smoother - Intentional

Saten-san wrote:

CXu
03:09:900 (2) - 1 grid left - <3
Thanks for modding guys~~

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [CXu].osu
marshallracer
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Joined December 2010
marshallracer

Saten-san wrote:

marshall's Easy
01:05:399 (1) - Finish
01:06:733 (1) - finish at the beginning
02:00:233 (2) - finish
02:01:566 (1) - finish at the end
02:10:733 (1) - finish
03:09:566 (3,4) - 1 grid left
03:12:233 (1) - hidden note D: place it here instead
SPOILER
03:43:566 (3) - New combo?
done

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
20+ break, it's unrankable sorry, that I can't map there something adequate
00:47:233 (2) - why so crooked? http://puu.sh/eTMQ better like this
01:06:733 (1) - ok, i get it, please work on your sliders better and them smooth and delicious.
done

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Just a Few Suggestions ~

Marshall's Easy
00:35:566 (5) - Make the slider like http://puu.sh/f1z3 (Overlapping sucks)
00:53:566 (1) - Better http://puu.sh/f1zz
01:17:566 - Add Beat
01:23:566 (6) - 2 grids left , looks better
02:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f1Bd maybe ? :3
03:12:899 (2) - 1 grid left ..

Normal
01:14:233 (4) - On a line with 2,3 ?
01:14:899 (1,2) - Put them in middle :o
02:18:233 (1) - Remove NC
03:15:566 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f1E0 ?
03:18:233 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Just turn them around if you change the one above :3

Jenny
03:18:233 (4) - Space it .. Please

CXu
Sexy Map Bro <3
SuperPartzschi
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
Normal
01:14:233 (4) - On a line with 2,3 ? Yeah
01:14:899 (1,2) - Put them in middle :o I think, it's okay so (:
02:18:233 (1) - Remove NC Okay~
03:15:566 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f1E0 ? Yeah, okay~
03:18:233 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Just turn them around if you change the one above :3 Why? :DD

Thx for Modding (:
marshallracer
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Joined December 2010
marshallracer

ShadowSoul wrote:

marshall's Easy
00:35:566 (5) - Make the slider like http://puu.sh/f1z3 (Overlapping sucks)
00:53:566 (1) - Better http://puu.sh/f1zz
01:17:566 - Add Beat
01:23:566 (6) - 2 grids left , looks better
02:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f1Bd maybe ? :3
03:12:899 (2) - 1 grid left ..
Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Mod on request.

[Jenny]

1:26:399 (7) I would recommend that you remove reverse arrow and move the next slider at 1:26:899 to the spot where the reverse sliders would end. Adding a circle after the moved slider would make this sound way better than it currently does.

2:30:399 ^

1:46:899 - 1:52:733 those claps, they don't fit in at all.

Nothing major in this diff, I just find those things unfitting when i listen to em.

[CXu]

00:43:733 - 0:44:067 Feels empty here


Looks fine. Gotta admit that I haven't really liked your previous maps CXu, but this one is really good. :-)
CXu
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CXu

Teras wrote:

[CXu]

00:43:733 - 0:44:067 Feels empty here - It's timed to the same thing as 00:46:400 (3,1), so I'm keeping it.


Looks fine. Gotta admit that I haven't really liked your previous maps CXu, but this one is really good. :-) - wooh. Well, both my other ranked maps are from way back \o\ Aaand 9/10 of my maps sucks so yeah
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny
Fixed what you mentioned Teras, did the things with the sliders somehow different, but changed it so ppl will be fine with that... at least I think so~
deadbeat
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deadbeat
general
  • you have a folder called lyrics. but i don't see any lryics in any on the difficulties
    the easy and normal have a different preview point to doko and cxu. make them all the same please
    i wouldn't mind another diff thats somewhere between the normal and doko.
    also make all offsets 234 please
    also try have all the difficulties end at the same place
    can you please make all kiai times the same
    doko's and cxu's difficulties have weird slider speeds. can you fix them?
p.s. if you do decide to add a hard. i recommend doing that one yourself
Jenny
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Jenny
...nice.
SuperPartzschi
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi

deadbeat wrote:

general
  • you have a folder called lyrics. but i don't see any lryics in any on the difficulties done
    the easy and normal have a different preview point to doko and cxu. make them all the same please fixes
    i wouldn't mind another diff thats somewhere between the normal and doko.
    also make all offsets 234 please done
    also try have all the difficulties end at the same place I'll try :/
    can you please make all kiai times the same done
    doko's and cxu's difficulties have weird slider speeds. can you fix them?
I can try

p.s. if you do decide to add a hard. i recommend doing that one yourself
A hard? I dont know :/

Thx to mod (:
manten
253 posts
Joined September 2009
manten
hai :3
mod request from IRC
ALL suggestions :)

[General]
Why is there diff which is using the long break time? 　About 20 sec ... About 30 sec etc.
I do not agree to such long break time.
However, you do not need to change. 　This is the opinion as one player. :3

I recommend making Hard diff!
(Normal score is 2.7M Doko's diff score 15M... D:)

[CXu]
00:06:233 (4) - NC →　00:06:734 (1) - remove NC
00:10:567 (1) - remove NC
00:43:900 - add Note D:
01:23:067 (1,2) - somewhat too near?
02:52:900 (1,2) - too quick D:
03:28:067 (1) - speed mistake of the slider from here.

[DoKo]
01:30:233 - add note
01:56:733 (1) - NC
03:46:233 (1) - NC

[Normal]
There is a little spacing miss... Please check Aimod.
02:33:567 - What is this inherited Point? If you don't use, remove please.

[marshall's Easy]
01:19:567 (4) - This slider does not suit sound.
02:13:233 (4) - ＾
03:22:899 (1) - move This spinner s end to 03:25:400.

Good luck :3
SuperPartzschi
62 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi

manten wrote:

[General]
Why is there diff which is using the long break time? 　About 20 sec ... About 30 sec etc. I dont know :/
I do not agree to such long break time.
However, you do not need to change. 　This is the opinion as one player. :3

I recommend making Hard diff! Okay (:
(Normal score is 2.7M Doko's diff score 15M... D:)


[Normal]
There is a little spacing miss... Please check Aimod.Done (:
02:33:567 - What is this inherited Point? If you don't use, remove please. It's the End of the Kiai Time b:


Good luck :3Thx (:
Thx for Mod (:
marshallracer
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Joined December 2010
marshallracer

manten wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
01:19:567 (4) - This slider does not suit sound. imo it does
02:13:233 (4) - ＾ changed
03:22:899 (1) - move This spinner s end to 03:25:400. done
Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
Sure
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Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi there :D
OK, let's go :3


[General]
  1. You'd better change artist from 'Mami Kawada' to 'Kawada Mami'. http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=kawada
  2. Where is storyboard for Lyrics?

[CXu]
01:30:234 (1) - Start from 01:30:400 and delete two repeat. It doesn't fit
01:45:234 (10) - NC to be consistent with 00:41:233 (1)
02:00:067 (5,6) - Switch them?
02:47:567 (8) - NC
02:52:900 (1,2) - Seriously, it's not funny at all
03:52:233 (1) - Please avoid using 'post spinner note'. Almost players hate it. I don't see any suitable reason to add it after spinner.


[DoKo]
That dark red combo color is blended to BG too much, make it a bit brighter
This diff is very good as it is, but it's too hard for Hard diff. Feel like Insane.
Yes, it should be Hard diff. Or diff spread fails.
Others are fine.


[Normal]
00:40:899 (2) - Rotate? I really don't like that overlap. http://puu.sh/hF5b
00:42:900 - I expected a note here. Add a note with finish?
01:12:899 (1) - Spacing
01:28:733 (Break time) - I don't see any reason to start from here.
01:31:900 (Break time) - End at 01:32:233, which makes more sense
02:24:066 (1) - Stack correctly under 02:23:566 (3)
03:06:566 (6) - This flow is better IMO. http://puu.sh/hF6F
03:28:066 (1) - Too far from center


[marshall's Easy]
00:59:233 (4,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H, then adjust spacing. Current flow isn't good.
01:09:566 (1) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247650
01:19:566 (4) - Is there any reason to make wiggle slider? Such as vocal vibration or whatever..
01:22:900 (5) - NC
02:00:899 (3) - It's just ugly overlap for Easy diff. http://puu.sh/hF8G
02:01:566 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247653
02:08:233 (1) - End spinner at 02:09:400


Good luck ;3
SuperPartzschi
62 posts
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Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
[quote="ykcarrot"


[General]
  1. You'd better change artist from 'Mami Kawada' to 'Kawada Mami'. http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=kawada Mami Kawada is right, trusk me (;
  2. Where is storyboard for Lyrics?
The Lyrics folder is delete o.O...Or? D:

[Normal]
00:40:899 (2) - Rotate? I really don't like that overlap. http://puu.sh/hF5b Done (:
00:42:900 - I expected a note here. Add a note with finish? Yeah, done (:
01:12:899 (1) - Spacing Done
01:28:733 (Break time) - I don't see any reason to start from here. Sorry D;
01:31:900 (Break time) - End at 01:32:233, which makes more sense Done (:
02:24:066 (1) - Stack correctly under 02:23:566 (3) Done (:
03:06:566 (6) - This flow is better IMO. http://puu.sh/hF6F Done (:
03:28:066 (1) - Too far from center Changed (;





Good luck ;3 Thx (:[/quote]

Thx for Mod (:
CXu
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CXu
Changed some, left some others. I'm not removing the speedup, mind you.

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [CXu].osu
marshallracer
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marshallracer

ykcarrot wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
00:59:233 (4,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H, then adjust spacing. Current flow isn't good.
01:09:566 (1) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247650
01:19:566 (4) - Is there any reason to make wiggle slider? Such as vocal vibration or whatever..
01:22:900 (5) - NC
02:00:899 (3) - It's just ugly overlap for Easy diff. http://puu.sh/hF8G
02:01:566 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247653
02:08:233 (1) - End spinner at 02:09:400
everything done

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [marshall's Easy].osu
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Just Modding Doko ..

01:56:733 (1) - Remove Useless New Combo
03:52:567 (1) - ^
03:58:067 (3) - Add New Combo if u want

That's all lol
winber1
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Joined February 2010
winber1
CXu

00:09:400 (1) - better if you did something like this imo http://puu.sh/iEJS
00:28:734 (3) - you could add a new combo to match 00:25:400 (1,2,1). (And also possibly add a new combo at 00:28:067 (3) - or you could remove the combo at 00:28:400 (1) - or something)
00:36:900 (4) - oh man i don't know why, but i would just love this so much more if you removed the repeat and added a small triplet stream http://puu.sh/iELR or do something similar.
00:43:900 - add a note to follow vocals.
00:46:567 - i would also add a note here, but it's not really that awkward imo so it's fine if you don't add one.
01:56:734 (4) - you could possible consider adding a new combo here and remove combo at 01:56:900 (1) -
01:59:567 - imo there needs to be a note here :/ so perhaps shorten the slider?
02:33:900 (1,2) - hmm, this looks as if the first note starts at 02:33:817 - and the slider is at 02:33:900 - even though it's not. you could just turn it into a slider for readability sakes http://puu.sh/iER4
03:58:400 - aww i'd lke it better if you mapped till here :(

DoKo

00:19:983 (1) - fits better if it started at 00:20:067 - as it follows the melody better.
01:46:483 - adding a note here would fit better imo. and it also follows the drums. obviuosly some spacing needs to be rearranged.
02:21:400 (1) - one 1/1 tick slider fits better imo. http://puu.sh/iEV9 sorry for he messy pattern and shape, but i just put the picture to show what rhythm i was talking about.
02:32:067 - would be better if this note was mapped. Just feels empty :/
02:59:233 (7) - would be better if the slider end was silenced.
03:25:233 (3) - would sound a little better if slider end was just a soft hitnormal. Currently, the normal hitfinish is just too harsh imo.
03:27:900 (1) - use normal hitsounds with a clap
03:58:067 (3) - add new combo. combo 2 and 3 may look like a jump otherwise.

Normal

--Ok the beginning really should be mapped imo. and also same as Cxu's diff, cuz i also like the ending :( Oh well, just my opinion.

00:34:899 (5,1) - don't put a jump here
00:36:900 (2) - this slider fits better http://puu.sh/iEYX
00:42:900 (5,1,2,3) - i wouldn't space them so close.
00:46:567 (4) - do something liek this http://puu.sh/iEZY and http://puu.sh/iF06
00:56:233 - add a note here and 00:56:567. If not, then end the slider (00:55:233 (4) - ) at 00:55:733 -
00:55:400 (4,1) - i am alos hesitant to do this anti-spacing. I just wouldn't use it.
01:33:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would delete these notes.
02:15:233 (5) - end slider at 02:16:067 -
02:32:233 (4) - turn into one note

THe rest doesn't seem to be that weird, but sometimes it's a little off from the vocals and feels weird. However you should really be more consistent with spacing 01:12:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - is just weird. Even things likt 00:44:566 (4,5,1,2) - make the map look messy

marshall's

--Same as normal :(. just my opinion tho. Just feels realyl empty.

I still follow my queue rules even with in-game requests. It's over 10 minutes, so i just modded up to Normal.


You really need a Hard diff tho. THe difficulty gap between DoKo (or CXu's) and Normal is just huge.

Hope this helps a bit. Good luck~~
DoKito
600 posts
Joined October 2010
DoKito

winber1 wrote:

DoKo

00:19:983 (1) - fits better if it started at 00:20:067 - as it follows the melody better. done
01:46:483 - adding a note here would fit better imo. and it also follows the drums. obviuosly some spacing needs to be rearranged. Don't think so D:
02:21:400 (1) - one 1/1 tick slider fits better imo. http://puu.sh/iEV9 sorry for he messy pattern and shape, but i just put the picture to show what rhythm i was talking about. done
02:32:067 - would be better if this note was mapped. Just feels empty :/ done
02:59:233 (7) - would be better if the slider end was silenced. You can clearly hear her vocals end there, so i don't think silenced sliderend would fit here.
03:25:233 (3) - would sound a little better if slider end was just a soft hitnormal. Currently, the normal hitfinish is just too harsh imo. done
03:27:900 (1) - use normal hitsounds with a clap done
03:58:067 (3) - add new combo. combo 2 and 3 may look like a jump otherwise.done
@Shadowsoul: Fixed all your suggestions as well.

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [DoKo].osu
CXu
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CXu

winber1 wrote:

CXu

00:09:400 (1) - better if you did something like this imo http://puu.sh/iEJS - I think what I have currently is fine :P And I don't hear a sound at 00:09:900
00:28:734 (3) - you could add a new combo to match 00:25:400 (1,2,1). (And also possibly add a new combo at 00:28:067 (3) - or you could remove the combo at 00:28:400 (1) - or something) - Actually, it's that part that is "out of new combo pattern", mostly because of the increased spacing, so keeping as it is
00:36:900 (4) - oh man i don't know why, but i would just love this so much more if you removed the repeat and added a small triplet stream http://puu.sh/iELR or do something similar.- YES <3
00:43:900 - add a note to follow vocals. - Gah fine, since everyone wants this D:
00:46:567 - i would also add a note here, but it's not really that awkward imo so it's fine if you don't add one.- Then I'm not adding mwahaha \o\
01:56:734 (4) - you could possible consider adding a new combo here and remove combo at 01:56:900 (1) - - Hmm, I think this is fine
01:59:567 - imo there needs to be a note here :/ so perhaps shorten the slider? - inb4 I add a sliderticksound on that upward hookthing. I'll keep this as it is now, but I'll consider it later \o\
02:33:900 (1,2) - hmm, this looks as if the first note starts at 02:33:817 - and the slider is at 02:33:900 - even though it's not. you could just turn it into a slider for readability sakes http://puu.sh/iER4 - idk, I just kinda liked it like this, so keeping it for now~
03:58:400 - aww i'd lke it better if you mapped till here :( - B-B-But my imagination ;_; Well, I'll consider it xD
Thanks a bunch for modding :D

Download: Mami Kawada - Joint (Partzschi) [CXu].osu
SuperPartzschi
62 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
SuperPartzschi
[quote="winber1"
Normal

--Ok the beginning really should be mapped imo. and also same as Cxu's diff, cuz i also like the ending :( Oh well, just my opinion. Okay, I'll do miy best

00:34:899 (5,1) - don't put a jump here Done
00:36:900 (2) - this slider fits better http://puu.sh/iEYX Accept
00:42:900 (5,1,2,3) - i wouldn't space them so close. I think it's okay (:
00:46:567 (4) - do something liek this http://puu.sh/iEZY and http://puu.sh/iF06 Accept (:
00:56:233 - add a note here and 00:56:567. If not, then end the slider (00:55:233 (4) - ) at 00:55:733 - Add a note (;
00:55:400 (4,1) - i am alos hesitant to do this anti-spacing. I just wouldn't use it. Okay o:
01:33:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would delete these notes. Accept (:
02:15:233 (5) - end slider at 02:16:067 - accept
02:32:233 (4) - turn into one note accept

THe rest doesn't seem to be that weird, but sometimes it's a little off from the vocals and feels weird. However you should really be more consistent with spacing 01:12:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - is just weird. Even things likt 00:44:566 (4,5,1,2) - make the map look messy Okay





You really need a Hard diff tho. THe difficulty gap between DoKo (or CXu's) and Normal is just huge. A Harddiff is coming (;

Hope this helps a bit. Good luck~~ Thanks (:[/quote]

Thanks for mod (:
marshallracer
1,592 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer

winber1 wrote:

marshall's

--Same as normal :(. just my opinion tho. Just feels realyl empty.

I still follow my queue rules even with in-game requests. It's over 10 minutes, so i just modded up to Normal.
k chief, lemme see what I can change ... maybe I'll edit this post with new .osu
S h i a
397 posts
Joined December 2009
S h i a
Guten Tag Partzschi~ :D/
sorry for a bit late/
Mod request via in-game chat

[Overall]
There are Lyrics folder and some lyrics png files in it. but no codes in OSB file. If you won't make storyboard suggest you remove them :P
And I saw some very strange file name here. you may fix it manually.
Oh moe


[marshall's Easy]
Oh man..
00:33:900 (2,5) - overlapped,try a different slider sharp?
00:43:233 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
and also adjust 00:45:233 (4) -
01:00:566 (4) - nazi,but yea. these little change will make your map looking better.
SPOILER
01:25:566 (1) - let the spinner start from 01:25:400 (1) - . End at 01:28:233
02:00:899 (3) -
SPOILER
yeah so this means you should delete 02:01:566 (1) - .and fits music better.
02:15:566 (4) - before.
SPOILER
after.
SPOILER
03:11:233 (5) - delete this. add slider at 03:11:567 (5) - and slider ends at 03:12:567
03:33:567 (1) - let the spinner start at 03:33:400 (1) - end at 03:35:233
Sliders and notes were not acting their roles overall. :P so good luck

[Normal]
too many whistle hitsounds in this diff.consider remove some.
00:10:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggest like this
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00:56:233 (5) - add a note here?
00:56:899 (1) - suggest
SPOILER
01:48:899 (1) - new combo
01:50:566 (1) - remove newcombo
02:28:733 (2) - I saw a lot of sliders and notes were not follow the vocal from the begining. but here, this slider follows.(starting from redline) That's really weird. so suggest you remove this slider and add note here 02:28:900 (2) - and 02:29:233 (3) - here.
03:43:399 (2) - yeah. same here ^

[DoKo]
:D nice diff
00:35:233 (2) - x136 y264 and also adjust 00:36:233 (1) - a little
01:56:233 (1) - sudden spacing change. a new combo here would be nice.

[Cxu]
yeah. great diff as always.
Seems new ranking rules rise up to 20 million points. so 19 million is OK tho.
the combo color is quite "mix" with background image. so suggest you change.

That's all. good luck. :P
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