ShadowSoul wrote:

marshall's Easy
00:35:566 (5) - Make the slider like http://puu.sh/f1z3 (Overlapping sucks)
00:53:566 (1) - Better http://puu.sh/f1zz
01:17:566 - Add Beat
01:23:566 (6) - 2 grids left , looks better
02:30:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/f1Bd maybe ? :3
03:12:899 (2) - 1 grid left ..

Teras wrote:

[CXu]

00:43:733 - 0:44:067 Feels empty here - It's timed to the same thing as 00:46:400 (3,1), so I'm keeping it.


Looks fine. Gotta admit that I haven't really liked your previous maps CXu, but this one is really good. :-) - wooh. Well, both my other ranked maps are from way back \o\ Aaand 9/10 of my maps sucks so yeah

• you have a folder called lyrics. but i don't see any lryics in any on the difficulties
  the easy and normal have a different preview point to doko and cxu. make them all the same please
  i wouldn't mind another diff thats somewhere between the normal and doko.
  also make all offsets 234 please
  also try have all the difficulties end at the same place
  can you please make all kiai times the same
  doko's and cxu's difficulties have weird slider speeds. can you fix them?

deadbeat wrote:

general

• you have a folder called lyrics. but i don't see any lryics in any on the difficulties done
  the easy and normal have a different preview point to doko and cxu. make them all the same please fixes
  i wouldn't mind another diff thats somewhere between the normal and doko.
  also make all offsets 234 please done
  also try have all the difficulties end at the same place I'll try :/
  can you please make all kiai times the same done
  doko's and cxu's difficulties have weird slider speeds. can you fix them?

I can try

p.s. if you do decide to add a hard. i recommend doing that one yourself

manten wrote:

[General]
Why is there diff which is using the long break time? 　About 20 sec ... About 30 sec etc. I dont know :/
I do not agree to such long break time.
However, you do not need to change. 　This is the opinion as one player. :3

I recommend making Hard diff! Okay (:
(Normal score is 2.7M Doko's diff score 15M... D:)


[Normal]
There is a little spacing miss... Please check Aimod.Done (:
02:33:567 - What is this inherited Point? If you don't use, remove please. It's the End of the Kiai Time b:


Good luck :3Thx (:

manten wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
01:19:567 (4) - This slider does not suit sound. imo it does
02:13:233 (4) - ＾ changed
03:22:899 (1) - move This spinner s end to 03:25:400. done

1. You'd better change artist from 'Mami Kawada' to 'Kawada Mami'. http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=kawada
2. Where is storyboard for Lyrics?

1. You'd better change artist from 'Mami Kawada' to 'Kawada Mami'. http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=kawada Mami Kawada is right, trusk me (;
2. Where is storyboard for Lyrics?

ykcarrot wrote:

[marshall's Easy]
00:59:233 (4,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H, then adjust spacing. Current flow isn't good.
01:09:566 (1) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247650
01:19:566 (4) - Is there any reason to make wiggle slider? Such as vocal vibration or whatever..
01:22:900 (5) - NC
02:00:899 (3) - It's just ugly overlap for Easy diff. http://puu.sh/hF8G
02:01:566 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247653
02:08:233 (1) - End spinner at 02:09:400

winber1 wrote:

DoKo

00:19:983 (1) - fits better if it started at 00:20:067 - as it follows the melody better. done
01:46:483 - adding a note here would fit better imo. and it also follows the drums. obviuosly some spacing needs to be rearranged. Don't think so D:
02:21:400 (1) - one 1/1 tick slider fits better imo. http://puu.sh/iEV9 sorry for he messy pattern and shape, but i just put the picture to show what rhythm i was talking about. done
02:32:067 - would be better if this note was mapped. Just feels empty :/ done
02:59:233 (7) - would be better if the slider end was silenced. You can clearly hear her vocals end there, so i don't think silenced sliderend would fit here.
03:25:233 (3) - would sound a little better if slider end was just a soft hitnormal. Currently, the normal hitfinish is just too harsh imo. done
03:27:900 (1) - use normal hitsounds with a clap done
03:58:067 (3) - add new combo. combo 2 and 3 may look like a jump otherwise.done

winber1 wrote:

CXu

00:09:400 (1) - better if you did something like this imo http://puu.sh/iEJS - I think what I have currently is fine And I don't hear a sound at 00:09:900
00:28:734 (3) - you could add a new combo to match 00:25:400 (1,2,1). (And also possibly add a new combo at 00:28:067 (3) - or you could remove the combo at 00:28:400 (1) - or something) - Actually, it's that part that is "out of new combo pattern", mostly because of the increased spacing, so keeping as it is
00:36:900 (4) - oh man i don't know why, but i would just love this so much more if you removed the repeat and added a small triplet stream http://puu.sh/iELR or do something similar.- YES <3
00:43:900 - add a note to follow vocals. - Gah fine, since everyone wants this D:
00:46:567 - i would also add a note here, but it's not really that awkward imo so it's fine if you don't add one.- Then I'm not adding mwahaha \o\
01:56:734 (4) - you could possible consider adding a new combo here and remove combo at 01:56:900 (1) - - Hmm, I think this is fine
01:59:567 - imo there needs to be a note here :/ so perhaps shorten the slider? - inb4 I add a sliderticksound on that upward hookthing. I'll keep this as it is now, but I'll consider it later \o\
02:33:900 (1,2) - hmm, this looks as if the first note starts at 02:33:817 - and the slider is at 02:33:900 - even though it's not. you could just turn it into a slider for readability sakes http://puu.sh/iER4 - idk, I just kinda liked it like this, so keeping it for now~
03:58:400 - aww i'd lke it better if you mapped till here - B-B-But my imagination ;_; Well, I'll consider it xD

winber1 wrote:

marshall's

--Same as normal . just my opinion tho. Just feels realyl empty.

I still follow my queue rules even with in-game requests. It's over 10 minutes, so i just modded up to Normal.

S h i a wrote:

Guten Tag Partzschi~ / Guten Tag :'D
sorry for a bit late/ np (:


[Overall]
There are Lyrics folder and some lyrics png files in it. but no codes in OSB file. If you won't make storyboard suggest you remove them The lyrics folder is delete D:
And I saw some very strange file name here. you may fix it manually. Fixed (:

Oh moe

[Normal]
too many whistle hitsounds in this diff.consider remove some. Okay o: I'll want to change it
00:10:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggest like this

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Accept
00:56:233 (5) - add a note here? Accept
00:56:899 (1) - suggest

SPOILER

Accept
01:48:899 (1) - new combo Nyan x:
01:50:566 (1) - remove newcombo ^ x:
02:28:733 (2) - I saw a lot of sliders and notes were not follow the vocal from the begining. but here, this slider follows.(starting from redline) That's really weird. so suggest you remove this slider and add note here 02:28:900 (2) - and 02:29:233 (3) - here. Accept o:
03:43:399 (2) - yeah. same here ^ I think this is okay x:



That's all. good luck. Thanks (:

328,248,178899,2,8,B|328:296|256:328|184:296|184:248,2,200

1. Switch the surname and first name of the artist, please. The correct one is Kawada Mami. It's in the rules.
   

   1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.

1. 00:51:566 (2) - Add Clap at the beginning?
2. 00:52:899 (4) - Add Whistle at the end?
3. 02:32:400 - 02:57:067 - ...Are you serious about this 25-seconds break? Well, it can't be helped.

1. 00:34:233 (3,4) - Remove Clap?
2. 01:27:566 (6) - Move to (392,192)?

1. Uh... what diff is this beatmap supposed to be? If it's Insane, it fits. But if it's for Hard... that was crazy.
2. 02:32:317 - 02:56:150 - A long break again? This beatmap was pretty intense, so I think this part can be mapped too because it works here.

1. 01:44:734 (6) - Remove Whistle?
2. 01:45:400 (3) - ^ (Only do this if you're following the suggestion above.)
3. 01:44:900 (7) - Add Whistle? (^)
4. 01:45:067 (9) - Remove Whistle? (^)
5. 01:46:234 (2,3,4,5) - ^
6. 02:56:317 - 03:06:817 - I was already happy when the instrumental part got mapped... And then came this break.
7. 03:52:067 - Add an inherited timing point here and adjust the volume to 20%? This is so that the spinner's hitsound won't be too loud, and then it won't interfere with the Finish hitsound of the last note (that note's hitsound got disturbed by the loud hitsound from the spinner before it).

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi.

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS SONG? No ? How much?



>General

1. Switch the surname and first name of the artist, please. The correct one is Kawada Mami. It's in the rules.
   

   1. Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.

Changed (:


>Normal

1. 00:34:233 (3,4) - Remove Clap? accept
2. 01:27:566 (6) - Move to (392,192)?accept

Okay... maybe just that.

Good luck on the way Thank you (:

klubek wrote:

OH MY SHANA SONG, I love you for this *__* <3

Hello Hi (:



[Normal]
01:40:900 (2) - remove circle accept
01:41:900 (3) - add circle accept





Good luck Thanks (:

Star Stream wrote:

From AIBAT

There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).fixed

Inconsistency in combo colours:
[CXu] : Combo1 : 255,128,128 Combo2 : 255,51,51 Combo3 : 255,0,128
[DoKo] : Combo1 : 224,39,57 Combo2 : 239,101,67 Combo3 : 142,23,23
[marshall's Easy] : Combo1 : 128,128,64 Combo2 : 0,0,255 Combo3 : 0,128,0 Combo4 : 0,0,64 Combo5 : 255,128,0
[Normal] : Combo1 : 192,192,192 Combo2 : 255,0,0 Combo3 : 255,128,64 Done, I think ?!

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
[CXu] : 66567
[DoKo] : 66567
[marshall's Easy] : 66733
[Normal] : 66733 changed

Inconsistency in Countdown:
[CXu] : 0
[DoKo] : 0
[marshall's Easy] : 1
[Normal] : 1

Use same Kiai Times because they're look alike now.

Rue wrote:

[CXu]
The combocolours are pretty much blending with the BG so I find playing a few moments of the map quite disturbing D: - Mmm, I can read the map with these combo colors just fine. Actually, I can read most maps with semi-blending combo colors just fine, and I don't think it's that blending here anyhow.
00:01:067 (4) - feels better stacked with (3) - Nah, I like it the way it is
00:41:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't matter how many times I played it, never sightread properly - Well, I and people I've asked to test this map can do it without problems.
00:46:567 - better feel the gap - Mapping the soemthingmelody, and there isn't a sound here.
00:50:900 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - As I mentioned above, along with the blending colours these are reeeally hard to read - I think it's fine :p
01:45:234 (1,2,3,4) - these always confuse me. Why isn't this just a stream? - Variation
01:54:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels very random D: - I think it plays fairly good though