11:20 <Garven> : Easy:
11:20 <Garven> : 00:19:767 (3) - Weirdly placed finish
11:20 <Garven> : 00:23:476 (4) - I foudn this kind of awkward to play. It breaks the rhythm that's set up before it so the player will likely be tricking in to
11:20 <Garven> : clicking late
11:21 <Garven> : 00:36:379 (6) - Eh same here
11:21 <Garven> : Though I can see the map is going to be 1/1/1/1/1 otherwise orz
11:21 <Garven> : Nooooo so boring even for the kiai ;_;
11:21 <osuplayer111> : fixed the finish
11:22 <Garven> : 00:59:767 (4,1) - Easily avoidable overlap
11:22 <osuplayer111> : fixed that too
11:22 <Garven> : 01:14:444 (4,1,2,3) - omg non 1/1 finally
11:22 <osuplayer111> : hahaha
11:23 <Garven> : This difficulty could be sooo much better. Doesn't compliment the song at all.
11:23 <Garven> : Normal: 00:10:131 (2,3) - These would have more impact as circles, not sliders
11:24 <Garven> : 00:26:218 (3) - ^
11:24 <Garven> : 00:47:509 (1) - Looks bad when not centered with a spinner following immediately after
11:25 <Garven> : 01:01:541 (2) - Eeeh stacking this with that rhythm...
11:25 <Garven> : Usually see that with just DS or closer spacing, not stacked
11:25 <Garven> : Dunno if that's good for a Normal diff
11:26 <Garven> : I can see why he did it for the pattern, but it doesn't play right for the diff
11:26 <Garven> : 01:04:928 (3) - Same thing as earlier
11:26 <Garven> : 01:06:702 (3) - ^
11:26 <osuplayer111> : btw, he used more sliders for let the star rating don't get too high
11:26 <Garven> : Star rating means bunk once you're not the lowest difficulty
11:27 <Garven> : 01:08:154 (1,2,3) - Hitsounding here is suddenly goofy with soft whistles after all those normal finishes and the custom clap
11:27 <osuplayer111> : 01:08:476 ?
11:28 <osuplayer111> : you mean that?
11:28 <Garven> : There too
11:28 <Garven> : But it's just LOUD LOUD LOUD suddenly soft whistles
11:28 <Garven> : :?
11:29 <osuplayer111> : yeah, that's true
11:29 <Garven> : Taiko: 00:15:896 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - This sounds pretty crappy against the music.
11:30 <Garven> : 00:47:670 (1) - Having a note preceeding a spinner in taiko is kinda weird
11:30 <Garven> : At least having the spinner start that late
11:30 <Garven> : Makes it feel like there's a gap it he rhythm
11:31 <Garven> : 01:04:928 (84,85) - KK?
11:31 <Garven> : 01:18:476 - Weird spot to end kiai
11:32 <Garven> : So many good spots for finishes during the kiai that were skipped right over. Made me sad-face
11:32 <Garven> : :<
11:32 <osuplayer111> : fixed the spinner
11:32 <osuplayer111> : kiai ends like the other diffs D:
11:32 <Garven> : It's really obvious in Taiko mode
11:32 <osuplayer111> : where do you suggest to end it?
11:32 <Garven> : Hmm
11:33 <Garven> : Either 01:15:734 - or 01:26:057 -
11:33 <osuplayer111> : agreed with 01:15
11:34 <osuplayer111> : or maybe it's better full kiai until end xD
11:34 <Garven> : I like it 'till the end
11:34 <osuplayer111> : since it's all energic
11:34 <Garven> : The song only gains intensity as it reaches the end
11:34 <osuplayer111> : yeah okay <3
11:34 <Garven> : :D
11:34 <osuplayer111> : same as me! :D
11:34 <osuplayer111> : the thought, I mean :P
11:34 <Garven> : Hehe
11:34 <Garven> : Vicho: 00:15:089 (5) - new combo
11:35 <Garven> : 00:21:541 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - aaah new combo spammy
11:35 <Garven> : Make the groups last twice as long at least
11:36 <Garven> : 00:50:089 (1,1) - Would have greater effect as circles instead of sliders
11:37 <osuplayer111> : changed the first two suggestions
11:37 <osuplayer111> : not really sure about the third >.<
11:38 <Garven> : 01:17:509 (4,5,6) - Maybe somethig like a triangle shape? A stack feels stupid there. My puush is broken. D:
11:38 <Garven> :
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16130311:38 <osuplayer111> : fixed that
11:39 <Garven> : Aaaah AR9 ;_;
11:40 <osuplayer111> : YES <3
11:40 <Garven> : I suuuuuck
11:40 <osuplayer111> : it's perfect on this song
11:40 <Garven> : 00:32:831 (6,7) - This spacing felt underwhelming
11:41 <osuplayer111> : yeah I did it tricky on purpose :P
11:41 <osuplayer111> : with AR9 it's really easy to read
11:41 <Garven> : I read it fine
11:41 <Garven> : It just didn't play well. :<
11:41 <Garven> : I was going to complain about the slider speed during the kiai
11:41 <Garven> : Then the rekiai hit and it finally felt right
11:41 <osuplayer111> : 00:32:831 (6) - what if I add a repeat here? ^^
11:41 <Garven> : ...maybe make the first one a little faster and increase the second one a litlte more? :D
11:42 <Garven> : That'd work, yeah
11:42 <osuplayer111> : I wanted the big speed change on purpose :P
11:42 <osuplayer111> : for more emphasis
11:43 <Garven> : Well yeah
11:43 <Garven> : But it felt so sloooow for the first round
11:43 <Garven> : Just speed them both up ;)
11:44 <osuplayer111> : but then I have to redo the sliders aghhh
11:44 <Garven> : The problems with making something awesome. :P
11:44 <osuplayer111> : maybe I can change 1st part
11:44 <osuplayer111> : 2nd part is fast enough to me
11:44 <Garven> : 01:23:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This felt uninspired after the first set of them
11:44 <osuplayer111> : 1,10x maybe?
11:44 <Garven> : 01:25:573 (1,2,3,4) - hit MISS MISS MISS
11:44 <Garven> : I suck :<
11:45 <osuplayer111> : haha :D
11:45 <osuplayer111> : don't think I'm gonna change that, btw... what do you suggest me to use for 1st kiai part then?
11:46 <osuplayer111> : 1,10x seems reasonable I guess
11:46 <Garven> : 1.1x is good, yeah
11:46 <Garven> : Just a slight speed up then the big speed up
