Hi,from modreqs
- So, in general, the things which bothered me the most were the streams. This is a stream map, yet the streams feel as generic as they could be. So my biggest advice for this map is to try to be more creative when you map the streams so that they don't feel so repetitive. Also i feel they could be a bit more spaced but that is up to you.
So here we go:
- 00:04:236 (7,8) - rotate 90 degrees and align with 00:02:902 (5,6) -
- 00:05:569 (1,3,5,7) - i think those could be slightly curved
- 00:14:902 (1,2,3,4) - this should be mapped like the rest of the similar parts since nothing changes in the rythm
- 00:23:234 (2) - move this to the left in order to make a larger angle for jump
- 00:28:567 (2,3,4,5) - this would create a better flow if those jumps were counter clockwise like the other ones 00:27:234 (2,3,4,5)
- 00:34:736 (6,1) - objects are too close
- 00:36:069 (6) - maybe better stack it on top of 00:36:069 (6) - to avoid confusion
- 00:40:903 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- 01:25:569 - A suggestion here: you could try to gradually increased the slider sv to emphasize the build up of intensity that'g going on right there like you did here 01:48:235 . Same thing can be applied in other similar parts as well.
- 01:27:235 (2,3) - make those a bit more spaced from 01:26:902 (1) - to emphasize the pitch change of the song
- 01:32:235 (1,2) - ^
- 01:36:569 (1,2) - don't stack those
- 01:49:569 - from here on it should be more intense. Also the following streams look pretty boring so maybe try to diversify them instead of having all of them be an S shape. And since they are so stacked i don't think they need this name NCs. One NC for each stream should be enough.
- 02:01:569 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you should make those and the streams from h
ere on more spaced as the song gets more intense. Also change the shape of them so that they won't look all the same but rotated
- 02:09:569 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this doesn't play that well and it's way too confusing. the first 4 are ok but then the next for feel so random like it suddenly switches from a square jump to random weird angled jumps. Try to structure this part better.
- 02:10:902 - since this is one of the most intense parts of the song i feel like the streams should be more spaced. Also the change in spacing is barely noticeable.
- 02:24:235 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - here those feel too spaced compared to the rest of the streams. Either make them less spaced or make the other streams more spaced as well.
- 02:25:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Also this. Since this is where the pitch reaches it's maximum intensity this stream should be the most spaced out of all of them
- 02:45:402 (1,2) - don't overlap those for no reason
- 02:59:735 (5,6) - those should have equal spacing
- 03:24:902 (3) - maybe ctrl+g
- 04:00:235 (1,2,3) - - move those to the right for a less sharp angle.
- 04:03:735 (8,9,10,11,1,2) - same
- 04:32:567 (2,3,4,5) - those should have a somewhat equal spacing
- 04:40:567 (2,3,4,5) - same. you can't just double the space of a jump all of a sudden for no reason
- 04:58:902 (1) - the spinner is pointless since the song has already ended by this point
Also don't forget to check AiMod since there are a bunch of unsnapped objects.
Hope some of this helps. GL!