fhana - Cosmos no Youni · forum

Sotarks

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2017-09-02T15:49:05+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 10 septembre 2017 at 06:03:24

Artist: fhana
Title: Cosmos no Youni
Source: コメット・ルシファー
Tags: Comet Lucifer ~The Seed and the Sower~ junichi sato yuxuki waga kevin mitsunaga towana akitoshi corinn
BPM: 74
Filesize: 7794kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Normal (1,93 stars, 262 notes)
Melancholy (3,26 stars, 374 notes)

Download: fhana - Cosmos no Youni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#37

Last edited by Sotarks 2024-11-28T15:41:13+00:00, edited 31 times in total.

Linada

995 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-09-03T11:07:53+00:00

henlo

discord vocal mod

00:11:766 (1) - better shape
00:27:982 (3) - whistle
01:00:415 (5) - whistle
00:59:198 (2) - ctrlg
01:37:712 (1,2,3,4) - fixed flow/visual
01:42:577 (1) - ctrl g
02:03:252 (4) - whistle on reverse

only 1 timing point fhana song is that a lie

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-09-03T11:22:25+00:00

SPOILER

12:59 Sotarks: mir!
12:59 Mir: sotarks!
13:00 Sotarks: u free to check a 2 diffs set map
13:00 Sotarks: it's the map u timed
13:00 Sotarks: x)
13:00 Mir: "timed"
13:00 Mir: i just fixed ur offset cuz ur stupid
13:00 Mir: >:
13:00 Mir: is it like quick check or do you want me to mod it
13:00 Sotarks: i mean bubble if possible
13:00 Sotarks: x)
13:01 Mir: then wait a week or two to ask
13:01 Mir: school is coming back and i have very little time
13:01 Sotarks: oh ok np
13:02 Sotarks: i'm gonna ask someone else for this one then
13:02 Sotarks: np
13:02 Mir: sorry

13:02 Sotarks: no prob man
13:02 Sotarks: school more important
13:04 Sotarks: and maybe a quick check like opinion?
13:04 Mir: i can do that
13:04 Sotarks: so i can kudo you
13:04 Sotarks: x)
13:04 *Sotarks is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1404785 fhana - Cosmos no Youni [Melancholy]]
13:09 Mir: 01:02:036 (1,2,3,4) - spacingg
13:10 Mir: theres no difference here than 01:03:252 (5,6,7) -
13:10 Mir: in intensity
13:10 Sotarks: hmm yeah wanted to start more intense
13:10 Sotarks: for vocals but i get your popint
13:10 Sotarks: point here
13:10 Mir: if you start more intense make the rest intense
13:10 Mir: otherwise it just looks like a random spike in difficulty
13:11 Sotarks: i fixed spacing
13:14 Mir: 02:08:523 (1,2,3) - idk about u but i feel like 2 is too high
13:14 Mir: maybe move it down
13:15 Mir: compared to 02:15:009 (1,2,3) - you have it spaced a lot higher
13:16 Mir: uh otherwise it's just aesthetic stuff but i dont think you care about that
13:16 Sotarks: yeah will move down
13:18 Mir: well its an akitoshi's normal
13:18 Mir: idk how he doesn't get tired of making these
13:18 Mir: seems like it's fine for the most part
13:21 Sotarks: yeah
13:21 Sotarks: u can post if you're done

this is how i keep bn activity help

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-09-03T12:38:23+00:00

as requested

topdiff

00:00:415 - soft-slideslide stp, ça rendrait bcp mieux je pense
00:39:739 (6,1) - nazi but perfect stack
01:58:793 (1) - ce clap sur la red sonne pas trop bien imo ): normal-hitnormal sonnerait mieux jpense
cool!!

akitoshi

01:48:252 (6,7,1) - spacing rip

[]
short
really
short
glglgl

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2017-09-03T14:05:53+00:00

SPOILER

12:52 Sotarks: pls man can u mod my cosmos wanna speed rank
12:52 Sotarks: only 2 diffs
12:53 *Sotarks is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1404785 fhana - Cosmos no Youni]
12:53 Kalibe: thonking
12:53 Kalibe: akitoshi normal
12:53 Sotarks: <3
12:53 Sotarks: thanks man
12:53 Kalibe: is this really sotarks style
12:54 Sotarks: yeah
12:54 Sotarks: slow style
12:54 Kalibe: 00:19:063 (3,4) - lol blanket
12:55 Sotarks: irc ?
12:55 Sotarks: can u poist instead
12:55 Sotarks: x)
12:55 Kalibe: nop
12:55 Sotarks: lol
12:55 Sotarks: k
12:55 Sotarks: fix
12:57 Kalibe: 01:51:293 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
12:57 Kalibe: i dont like this jump pattern
12:58 Kalibe: these overlaps triggers me so hard
12:58 Kalibe: like
12:58 Sotarks: it plays really good
12:58 Sotarks: in dt
12:58 Sotarks: x)
12:58 Kalibe: but
12:58 Kalibe: aaaa
12:58 Sotarks: i like them
13:00 Kalibe: 02:29:401 (4) - 224/80
13:00 Kalibe: ?
13:01 Kalibe: 02:36:090 (1) - that heart
13:01 Kalibe: wew

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2017-09-03T15:26:09+00:00

fixed all irohas, and did some adjustment on other stuffs.

Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-09-04T03:21:55+00:00

General:
metadata and dont forget to add gder' tag
would need some extra red lines to reset downbeat
maybe move 02:39:333 - green line to 02:40:144 - cuz music volume is decreasing there

Akitoshi's Normal:
00:35:279 (1) - adjust the shape to make it turn at 00:36:090 - ? makes more sense with the music
01:17:036 - 01:23:523 - would be interesting to play if both claps are clickable

copyright:
00:03:658 (5) - no nc?
00:26:766 (7,1) - stack's off
00:42:171 (5,6,7) - idk if its intended but rip straight line caused by stack
00:48:658 (6,1) - expecting more movement to the slooow slider, so the contrast can be more impactful (like 00:34:874 (1,1) - )
01:13:387 (5,6,7) - visual spacing seems suddenly too large

i expect 01:13:387 (5,6) - to be similar to 01:12:374 (2,3,4,5) - at least
01:58:387 (5,6,1) - what about same flow as 01:57:577 (2,3,4) - ? https://puu.sh/xr0Aw/542ff2c19c.png it's much smoother to play but would need to adjust some other objects
02:05:279 (1,2) - all other stacks under slider tail are 1/2 gap i'd prefer you keep it consistent and unstack this one

and I wonder if those 5% lines are really necessary when i heard 00:45:820 (4) - cuz it's already quiet enough, but 01:32:543 - 01:32:746 - 01:45:313 - etc. should be 5% imo

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2017-09-04T10:17:48+00:00

metadata (according to apple) :

artist: fhána
romanized: fhana
title: コスモスのように
romanized: Cosmos no Youni
source: コメット・ルシファー

http://www.lantis.jp/artist/fhana/disco.html (according to this site, it's an image song. as far as i know, image songs of shows etc. seem to still keep their source. also, Lantis credits the anime specifically on this track, so i think use source is OK)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKSEJ1RE9UY
http://fhana.jp/portfolio/%e3%82%b3%e3% ... %89-fhana/

Garden wrote:
copyright:
00:03:658 (5) - no nc?
00:26:766 (7,1) - stack's off
00:42:171 (5,6,7) - idk if its intended but rip straight line caused by stack the line is straight? wut
00:48:658 (6,1) - expecting more movement to the slooow slider, so the contrast can be more impactful (like 00:34:874 (1,1) - ) since the voice is "straight" and not changing pitch i wanna emphasis that by a straight slider
01:13:387 (5,6,7) - visual spacing seems suddenly too large i expect 01:13:387 (5,6) - to be similar to 01:12:374 (2,3,4,5) - at least well it's here to emphasis the claps 01:13:793 (6,7) - but i at least fixed 01:13:387 (5) - this spacing
01:58:387 (5,6,1) - what about same flow as 01:57:577 (2,3,4) - ? https://puu.sh/xr0Aw/542ff2c19c.png it's much smoother to play but would need to adjust some other objects testplayed multiple times, and i guarentee this is smooth aswell i really want to keep the actual flow here
02:05:279 (1,2) - all other stacks under slider tail are 1/2 gap i'd prefer you keep it consistent and unstack this one

and I wonder if those 5% lines are really necessary when i heard 00:45:820 (4) - cuz it's already quiet enough, but 01:32:543 - 01:32:746 - 01:45:313 - etc. should be 5% imo fixed all, but yeah i want those 5% volume on ends to still hold the note rather than just a circle for more intensity

fixed tags too

~~i'll see about redlines resets soon and edit that post~~
edit : checked and i do'nt see what should be reset all seems to be snapped propelly ? can you maybe tell me what do you feel off ?

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-04T10:31:16+00:00

@Irohas fixed the spacing, thankssss

Garden wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal:
00:35:279 (1) - adjust the shape to make it turn at 00:36:090 - ? makes more sense with the music fixed
01:17:036 - 01:23:523 - would be interesting to play if both claps are clickable fixed on first part but not on 2nd one since it will be too much since 01:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - is all circles ;;

thank you!

a

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Garden

osu! Alumni

1,345 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-09-04T13:43:30+00:00

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Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-09-04T14:09:35+00:00

Speedranker smhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-04T14:31:39+00:00

Mir wrote:
Speedranker smhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,372 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2017-09-09T17:06:51+00:00

[Melancholy]
00:08:117 (3,4) - Stacking on the tail looks meh.

00:49:063 (1) - This super slow SV is making me crazy, I think it should at least be 0.5x as the previous one.

00:57:577 (7,8,9,10,11) - I think this pattern is too tricky, especially the stack.

01:10:550 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same

01:32:442 (1,2) - I don't think it necessary to use such sliders here. The music hardly suggests to do so.

01:37:711 (5,6,9) - I think this overlap is quite unacceptable in this level of difficulty.

02:10:954 (7,8) - Blanket.

02:28:792 (3,5,6) - ^

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2017-09-09T17:13:25+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Melancholy]
00:08:117 (3,4) - Stacking on the tail looks meh.

00:49:063 (1) - This super slow SV is making me crazy, I think it should at least be 0.5x as the previous one. The slow SV is here to get the emphasis on that intense holding voice, i don't wanna change that. It has a NC and straight to make it more readable tho.

00:57:577 (7,8,9,10,11) - I think this pattern is too tricky, especially the stack. It's really not that tricky, just look In Game, the overlap is not even visible.

01:10:550 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same Same reply as above

01:32:442 (1,2) - I don't think it necessary to use such sliders here. The music hardly suggests to do so. Those sliders are here to catch the emphasis on the violin man, gives also a nice variation to the rhytm

01:37:711 (5,6,9) - I think this overlap is quite unacceptable in this level of difficulty. Dude this BPM is low, enable the in game thing to see that the overlap is not even visible.

02:10:954 (7,8) - Blanket.

02:28:792 (3,5,6) - ^