Hi, NM Request from my modding queue.
4K:1|2|3|4
[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!
[Ikura Onigiri "SC"]
- 00:33:941 - You need one more note here for the drum sound, so you can try this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435588
- 00:34:798 - And also here too,so if you apply my previous mod, add a note on col4 then.
- 00:53:798 - to 00:54:369 - If you want to fully represent the pitch relevancy, try this way to rearrange your LNs then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435593
- 01:44:798 - Here is the same problem as 00:33:941 - How about trying a different way to rework the patterns? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435599
- 01:45:655 - Here is the same as 00:34:798 -, and also add a note on col4 for the drum sound.
- 02:27:512 - to 02:28:655 - In this bar you are suddenly raising the difficulty in my opinion because you are using 1/8 patterns for nearly the whole bar. However, for most 1/8 sounds before you are just ignoreing them to catch some easier 1/4 or 1/2 melodic sounds. I think this way should also be applied here. My solution is, 02:27:512 - to 02:28:084 - for the first half of this bar, try to avoid using 1/8 patterns but just catch those 1/2 melodic sounds. The second half you can just keep them as it is now. Here is a way to rearrange them: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435613
- This is a very decent chart. I can't see any big problems inside it.
- 00:25:298 (25298|1,26441|2) - I don't really think there are actually sounds there. You may slow down to check if I am right but I prefer you to delete them sicne there are no sounds for me.
- As what you did in 00:33:798 - , triple note for heavier snare, I do think on these lines with heavier snares: 00:34:512 - 00:34:941 - 00:36:084 - you will still need triple notes.
- I would really prefer you to delete this 00:48:155 (48155|2) - even if there are sounds here because you have been catching a more obvious melody line around these bars with short 1/4 LNs, and here indeed has no such obvious melody sound but only the previous weaker one. With this note your focus here may be broken in my opinion, and what's more, why not giving players a small rest from 1/4 handstreams that continue for many bars?
- 00:50:084 - Here is another heavier snare you used to make triple note with, so how about moving 00:50:155 (50155|1) - this to col3 and add one on 00:50:084 - in col2?
- 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) - I still don't like these notes mixing with all 1/4 LNs. The reasons go with 00:48:155 (48155|2) - this note, and deleting them will definitely make your patterns neater.
- 01:06:441 (66441|1) - The same idea as 00:48:155 (48155|2) - , deleting it for clearer focus.
- 01:13:298 (73298|3,73726|1,74155|1,74441|2,74869|3) - The same idea as 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -
- 01:21:941 - 01:22:084 - Add one more note on each line to keep your pattern of catching drum sounds consistent.I prefer this way to rearrange then: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435680
- 01:23:512 (83512|1) - Moving this to col3 will relieve a pressure caused by 01:23:512 (83512|1,83655|1,83726|1) - this 3-note stack.
- 01:32:655 (92655|3) - Moving this to col3 will do the same thing as above 01:23:512 (83512|1) -
- 01:37:941 - to 01:38:369 - I think this way can represent the music better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9435697, as 01:38:084 - a triple here for heavier drum really keeps your pattern consistent and the double notes for weaker drums are still necessary for me.
- 01:42:369 - Here you may also need a triple note for the heavier snare.
- 01:45:369 - 01:45:798 - 01:46:941 - Still need triple notes on these lines for heavy snares.
- 02:05:869 (125869|0,126298|2,126726|2,127012|1,127441|0) - Deleting them as the reasons for 00:55:012 (55012|0,55441|2,55869|2,56155|1,56584|0) -, clearer focus in short.
- 02:17:298 (137298|1) - The same idea as above, deleting for better focus.
- 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) - Still the same idea, deleting for better focus.
- 02:27:798 (147798|2) - I know this LN is for melody, but don't you think that this LN pattern is broken too much? I mean, for a single LN standing here between 1/8, it makes players feel weird at first glance. It is even better to just delete it and leave that inteval empty for some while, which may also give players a short rest for preparation of next wave of 1/8 patterns.
- 02:35:584 (155584|2) - The same idea as 02:17:298 (137298|1) -, deleting for better focus.
- 02:42:441 (162441|3,163298|1,163584|2,164012|3) - The same idea as 02:24:155 (144155|3,144584|1,145012|1,145298|2,145726|3) -, deleting for better focus.
- Well, you have really decent LN use in this difficulty. I appreciate your effort!
That's all for me. Good luck and hope this mod post help you more or less!