As requested (m4m),
[
General]
Looks fine, but I can't check storyboard so sorry if I miss anything there.
[
Normal]
00:16:245 (1) - I don't see why you didn't curve this slider considering all the sliders were curved in this section and nothing in the music give out a "straight" feel.
00:20:918 (3) - The way you place this slider made me feel like the next is going to be under this slider and not above. I suggest moving the center anchor point down so that the contrary is true, this gives better flow.
http://puu.sh/7Pnw00:24:114 (1,2,3) - Maybe try something like this?
http://puu.sh/7Pof But it's fine if you want to keep it.
00:31:983 (1,2) - Prefer if you place it like this
http://puu.sh/7Ppr, but again, fine if you want to keep it.
00:53:623 (3) - Just adjust this a bit so it doesn't touch (2), looks cleaner to me.
01:02:475 (4) - Would prefer if you move the 2nd anchor point more to the center as it look almost like a straight slider to me.
01:56:573 (2) - Again, this doesn't feel like it should be straight, curving it fit better with the feel of the song.
02:05:180 (3) - ^
http://puu.sh/7Pqj The next note plays a bit nicer.
02:10:098 (3) - ^
http://puu.sh/7PqA02:54:606 (1) - Place like this so that this kick slider is a bit more oblivious
http://puu.sh/7Prb.
All my suggestion is just for polishing, don't need to follow them if you don't like it. This difficulty seems fine in general.
[
Collab]
00:18:459 (1,2) - This feel it should be stack to the end of the slider because you ended the slider on a blue tick, so I feel the note on the white tick should be with the slider.
http://puu.sh/7Psi If not, make spacing closer, I keep hitting (1) late.
00:53:131 (1) - Again, feel like this should be stacked with the end of slider.
01:04:934 (1) - Touching the hp bar. Not too hard to fix, just move (1) to [x:296, y:16) & (2) to [x:104 y:96).
01:17:229 (2,3) - I suggest removing (2) and adding a repeat to (3) to keep consistency with (4). It plays weird when you have two repeating of unequal length next to each other.
01:19:442 (2) - I feel you should snap this to 1.3x distant snap. Don't see any reason to use slightly less spacing for this note.
01:46:860 (1) - I suggest snapping to 1.9x like at 01:50:795. The jump feel a little too much for me and also for consistency
01:57:557 (2,3) - Something like this feel more interesting
http://puu.sh/7Pvt.
02:06:164 (7) - Again, would like this stacked.
02:22:639 (2) - ^
Seems good.
Mod may not be too good, can't mod these type of song too well. Deserved a star through, good luck!
School days ending song --- 记忆の海
Taiko: wmfchris
