1. Why are there both "black.png" and "black.jpg" pictures ? I suggest you remove the jpg one and use only the png.
2. Same for white.jpg and white.png.
3. You don't need "cmn_891127" in the tags. Although they made the SB, they didn't make a difficulty and shouldn't be added to the tags.
4. The storyboard load goes over 5.00x right before kiai times.
5. The difficulty and score gap between Normal and Ghost is unacceptably high. You need a Hard diff that fits in between.

• I quite like this. It flows pretty well and is interesting for an easy. It's not boring at all and fits the song.

1. 00:42:288 (3) - You can improve this slider's curve. The sharp turn at the top doesn't look very good - especially not considering the other sliders in the map are all smooth.
2. 02:02:212 (5) - Same.

1. The AR feels really too fast for the diff. I suggest dropping it to 4. I'd think that using bigger circles would be better too, but that's up to you.

1. Why use a custom difficulty name (that doesn't state the kind of diff whatsoever) when all the other diffs have standard names ? At least rename that to Insane.
2. I can't say I agree with the wiggles on the sliders. They're quite confusing... I even question their rankability. I don't see what they add to the diff either. Here's a list of the sliders I'm talking about; please change them:
   
   1. 01:29:577 (5) -
   2. 02:38:844 (1) -
   3. 03:25:780 (1,4) -
   4. 03:27:445 (6) -
      I might have missed some - double check your diff to make sure you didn't miss any.
3. 00:18:310 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is irregular - and a bit too high to my taste. I see why you used jumps here, but I don't think they should be so big.
4. 00:27:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Avoid using sliders in compressed spacing like that. It's really difficult to read because the difference between two circles and one slider is very hard to see with that low speed and spacing. In this case it's still readable, somehow... I'd rather you changed these into circles or made the spacing a bit bigger.
5. 03:37:103 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Silencing notes like that is unrankable.

1. At least rename this to Sp3's Taiko Oni...
2. That is one sexy taiko. Very nice. Though the slider velocity looks quite high to me... And why 1/6 ? I didn't hear any 1/6 in the song at all.
3. 00:34:295 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - this is the smexiest

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB1.jpg",320,240
 F,0,27610,28942,0,1
 M,0,27610,44286,400,240,242,240
 F,0,28942,44286,1

Odaril wrote:

Sp3's Taiko

1. At least rename this to Sp3's Taiko Oni... Umm...sorry~I think Sp3's Taiko is ok ex:Katy Perry - E.T.
2. That is one sexy taiko. Very nice. Though the slider velocity looks quite high to me... And why 1/6 ? I didn't hear any 1/6 in the song at all. Uh... Taiko not only conform to song~and It's Create the rhythm. I hear 1/6 It's really fit and I like it so I don't want to change it >"<
   and about slider velocit. I use 1.10 SV for this diff... I think It's enough to this diff
3. 00:34:295 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - this is the smexiest haha~It's good for player I think \:D/

Odaril wrote:

你好~ as per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Why are there both "black.png" and "black.jpg" pictures ? I suggest you remove the jpg one and use only the png.
2. Same for white.jpg and white.png.Fix~~~~~~~~~
3. You don't need "cmn_891127" in the tags. Although they made the SB, they didn't make a difficulty and shouldn't be added to the tags.
   I think this is ok :\....
4. The storyboard load goes over 5.00x right before kiai times.
5. The difficulty and score gap between Normal and Ghost is unacceptably high. You need a Hard diff that fits in between.

add Beren's Hard and Fix sb \:D/

Luka's Easy

• I quite like this. It flows pretty well and is interesting for an easy. It's not boring at all and fits the song.

1. 00:42:288 (3) - You can improve this slider's curve. The sharp turn at the top doesn't look very good - especially not considering the other sliders in the map are all smooth.
2. 02:02:212 (5) - Same.

FIX all！

Normal

1. The AR feels really too fast for the diff. I suggest dropping it to 4. I'd think that using bigger circles would be better too, but that's up to you.

Fix

Ghost

1. Why use a custom difficulty name (that doesn't state the kind of diff whatsoever) when all the other diffs have standard names ? At least rename that to Insane.
2. I can't say I agree with the wiggles on the sliders. They're quite confusing... I even question their rankability. I don't see what they add to the diff either. Here's a list of the sliders I'm talking about; please change them:
   
   1. 01:29:577 (5) -
   2. 02:38:844 (1) -
   3. 03:25:780 (1,4) -
   4. 03:27:445 (6) -
      I might have missed some - double check your diff to make sure you didn't miss any.
   ↑Fix all↑
3. 00:18:310 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is irregular - and a bit too high to my taste. I see why you used jumps here, but I don't think they should be so big.I don't want to change this because I think is so fun and beautiful :]
4. 00:27:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Avoid using sliders in compressed spacing like that. It's really difficult to read because the difference between two circles and one slider is very hard to see with that low speed and spacing. In this case it's still readable, somehow... I'd rather you changed these into circles or made the spacing a bit bigger.I think this one is ok,because I ask lot of Player and they said this is no hard to read and really fun!
5. 03:37:103 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Silencing notes like that is unrankable.

FIX！


Nice mapset, despite the spread that needs to be fixed. I could understand a bit of the lyrics (just a few characters, not full sentences), but I'm having a really hard time reading the characters. D: I'm not used to that font.XD Just try to ask some people! I think chinese is very hard too \:D/【come on you are chinese people !(ｏ ‵-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。)】

Call me back when you're done with the Hard so I can recheck this.

Beren wrote:

:!:

1. 00:28:967 - 把break拉到这里开始？
2. 00:42:121 - 这里加个note吧，4个音少一个总觉得有点怪……
3. 00:52:944 (7) - 把这个挪去和后面(1)的开头叠？
4. 01:29:577 - 考虑在这里加个note然后再开始spinner?
5. 01:54:553 (5) - 删掉？这里感觉留空比较好
6. 02:20:861 (2) - 感觉这里可以做个减速slider——纯粹个人喜好……
7. 02:50:667 - 考虑kiai喷泉从这里出来？

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there ~ mod Beren's diff only for ur request~

Beren:

1. 00:28:967 - 把break拉到这里开始？报告再拉就没break了╮(╯_╰)╭...
2. 00:42:121 - 这里加个note吧，4个音少一个总觉得有点怪…… K了
3. 00:52:944 (7) - 把这个挪去和后面(1)的开头叠？ K了
4. 01:29:577 - 考虑在这里加个note然后再开始spinner? K了
5. 01:54:553 (5) - 删掉？这里感觉留空比较好 不减了，note多一点刷分.-.【喂】
6. 02:20:861 (2) - 感觉这里可以做个减速slider——纯粹个人喜好…… 好复杂....
7. 02:50:667 - 考虑kiai喷泉从这里出来？

闪瞎了....

that's all~~~GL~~~and star~

Kiiwa wrote:

yooooo

1. 00:42:288 (1) - 感觉这个折返好纠结，不应该是像00:40:956 (3)一样的两个鼓声么？
2. 01:29:660 (1) - 这个spinner开始的好早啊，不是应该从01:30:243这开始么，或者在01:30:243加一个note再spinner
3. 02:02:878 (5) - 这个截止到前面的红线怎么样~
4. 02:47:503 (1) - 在蓝线结束好奇怪，要不就是02:49:501，要不就是02:50:001
5. 03:07:131 (X) - 加一个note

Leorda wrote:

Well, tutuhaha sent me a PM to mod this....


[Luka's Easy]
01:30:243 (4) - New combo?
02:47:503 (4) - ^
03:12:127 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, may hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)


[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate is bit slow

01:09:595 (1) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it can be hidden for beginners
02:00:880 (5) - New combo?
02:39:843 (5) - ^


[Beren]
* The difficulty name should be "Beren's Hard"

02:02:878 (5,6) - Using a custom soft hitsound make sound goes worse. Perhaps using a default soft hitsound?
02:47:503 (1) - ^ also, can you split these slider into 2 slider? Having 1 slider with many repeating slider are boring for advanced player


Once you done, in-game PM me

Breeze wrote:

时隔八月

Garven wrote:

[General]
The sliderball being unanimated is kind of weird.
You need a spinner circle where you can see that it is spinning.
02:50:667 - beuoooooooooool

[Timing]
I'm hitting much better at -8 offset on the first section. sorry but I dont plan to change timing any more, Brezz and Alice and Olider alreay check it long time ago, ^_^well..sorry

[Easy]
01:00:937 (1) - This could look a lot better. Try using a red anchor point like this: FIX

SPOILER

01:08:929 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy. Try to give around 4 beats. FIX
02:06:209 (3) - I don't recommend using short repeating sliders like this in Easy diffs - especially with a hit object so soon afterward. FIX
02:08:873 (3) - ^ FIX

[Normal]
02:23:859 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a NormalFIX
03:11:128 (1) - ^FIX
In general, the new combos in this difficulty were kind of oddly placed. It'd be best to aim for every two tall white ticks so that everything is more consistent.
FIX

[Hard]
00:44:952 (1) - Going from .5x -> 1x is a huge change in velocity. It feels like really old maps where they didn't have much choice in slider velocity. Now we have much better options available, and maps today should reflect that change to provide a smoother play experience. Please make this transition better. Especially since the speed doubles, but the distance snapping stays the same. It plays poorly :<
Same thing going on with the other kiai sections.
02:36:846 - And yet this part is still at 1x. Feels off compared to all that .5x earlier
The map feels... just really poorly paced with the disproportionate speed changes. I strongly suggest you rethink the overall design of this difficulty and adjust accordingly.
about this part Beren come to talk with me "I dont know how to change Orz!....."
I think this part is find, and I like the rhythm what Beren to use in this diff, .5x to 1.0x is feasible to use in this map because the BPM was low, and Beren do some change on space, I think play it was really fun ^6^~ and I suggest two thing let her change~
02:50:667 (2,3) -
and 03:23:449 (5,1) -
^_^

[Taiko]
Please don't use either the soft nor the custom sound set in a Taiko.

[Insane]
00:27:302 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Soooo is there a reason why these are spaced so closely but 00:34:295 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - are not? because there I think it is litter bit rapid than 00:27:302, I dont plan to change it but add a NC
01:31:908 (2,3) - And another weird spacing increase. I'm not really hearing any justification through the music for this change of pace.^
03:26:779 (4) - Miss a finish? FIX
Kind of the same comment from hard: the .5x -> 1x speed changes are kind of jarring, though not nearly to the same extent.
same as what Beren diff said

Megurine Luka wrote:

有生之年系列

p3n wrote:

It seems the taiko diff didn't had any in-depth mods until now. I will ask around to see if I can find some Taiko modders to give it a try just to have a minimum of modding for this diff, too.


- Overall size of the .osz is OK for me (elaborate SBs can take up some space and further lowering the quality of SB backgrounds would yield probably less than 2MB)
- When you get the taiko mod(s) also delete the Taiko BG as they are unrankable now. (Use a normal one)


no kd. I'll see if we can get this ranked asap.

p3n wrote:

- Overall size of the .osz is OK for me (elaborate SBs can take up some space and further lowering the quality of SB backgrounds would yield probably less than 2MB)

Kokatsu wrote:

Also something concerning the SB: the flashes in Kiai (like at 00:47:616 -) seem somewhat wrong to me, they lack some kind of flash. try to make them more bright and more sudden would be nice.

1. 00:52:944 - add d

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG_NAME.jpg",0,0    <---- delete this line

p3n wrote:

I know this was taking very long but I'm finally back home so here we go:


[Skin]
The rotating sliderball is very low quality with jagged edges and it doesn't stay in one place. I didn't notice this on my 10" netbook display but now I can see it clearly You should rework this skinelement. You can also use the template skin elements and make sure the exact dimensions are kept along with the per-pixel transparency (if you know how to mask it in PS).

tutuhaha wrote:

啧在我好不容易rank后居然和长喜谷子的TV撞了百鬼你到底做的什么孽....

tutuhaha wrote:

啧在我好不容易rank后居然和长喜谷子的TV撞了百鬼你到底做的什么孽....