Breeze - La Plage · forum

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-09-30T15:42:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 ноября 2011 г. at 4:00:23

Artist: Breeze
Title: La Plage
Tags: Lenor kanpakyin spboxer3 Reiji-RJ
BPM: 92,5
Filesize: 4569kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (4,86 stars, 479 notes)
Beginner (1,23 stars, 148 notes)
Middling (2,95 stars, 215 notes)
Taiko (4,43 stars, 537 notes)

Download: Breeze - La Plage
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner by Reiji-RJ
Middling by kanpakyin
Taiko by spboxer3

Last edited by Louis Cyphre 2011-11-20T00:00:48+00:00, edited 15 times in total.

fartownik

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fartownik 2011-09-30T18:47:29+00:00

Aleksart

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Aleksart 2011-10-07T12:34:45+00:00

Офигенная песня, бля буду) Как слышу её, то какую то другую песню мне напоминает, не могу ток название вспомнить... ><
Хард офигенный, молодца, Луис)
Бля, кудосу на звезду нету ><

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-10-21T13:37:25+00:00

Sorry for delay,here we go!

Please don't care the star rating,it was a really easy diff.

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Kanpakyin's Easy].osu

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2011-10-21T19:14:33+00:00

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Taiko muzukashii].osu
Here is my first muzukashii :3
Hope you like my style

Tony

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Tony 2011-10-21T19:37:13+00:00

It was him instrumental~ really nice! good luck :3

Louis Cyphre

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Topic Starter

Louis Cyphre 2011-10-21T20:16:49+00:00

I'd say La Plage with vocal <:

Mastodonio

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Mastodonio 2011-10-21T21:02:44+00:00

THE GAME

zeroclover

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zeroclover 2011-10-22T11:39:28+00:00

hi, come for play and mod

Advance
nice beatmap, i only can mod a little

(minus) : too many sliders, hard to get 100% acc (for mouse user like me

)
add some whistle sounds at beginning, (just like Middling diff)
(my suggestion) :
01:30:868 - im using this combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168115 its look fine
01:00:868 - 01:02:166 - i think need spinner here ( bcause , its look fine

)

Middling
im not pro mod normal diff(2.91)
but its look fine when i played with dt
no error on AiMod too

my play result

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168090
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168092

Aleksart

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Aleksart 2011-11-04T00:40:23+00:00

Стар, как и хотел :3
Ну и попозже попробую помодить песню, хотя , врядли что найду, т.к. ты супер маппер

Aleksart

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Aleksart 2011-11-04T01:32:21+00:00

Beginner
Очень понравилось, непривычно тока как расставлено всё, но в целом неплохо.
Придраться не к чему(
03:38:166 (1) - финиш, какой там использовался то... N:C1 (40%)

Middling
General: Circle Size -1 and HD +1,AR +1,OD +1

00:25:517 - add whistle
00:25:841 (4) - remove whistle
00:26:166 - add whistle
00:31:679 - remove whistle
00:32:004 - add whistle
00:33:949 - add
00:34:274 - remove
00:34:598 - add
00:46:274 - ^
00:46:598 - remove
00:46:922 - add
00:47:571 - add or remove
00:48:868 - add
00:49:517 - ^
00:49:517 - ^
00:52:112 (3) - add
00:52:112 (3,4) - ^
00:53:085 - ^
00:55:679 - add
00:56:977 - ^
00:57:949 - ^
01:55:031 (2) - remove clap and add finish
Дальше ритм какой то странный идёт.. мне не нравится

02:53:409 (3) - ^
03:38:166 (2) - add finish N:C1 (40%)

Ух.. надоело)
Старку я поствавил... Пожалуй тока в фавориты осталось записаться

Advanced - просто круто

Lucy_Heartfilia_old

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Lucy_Heartfilia_old 2011-11-04T15:19:42+00:00

In general
Now the Mp3 should cut < 3:30? Your Mp3 last 3:56 is no problem?
03:18:706 ~ end why don't you not use KIMI time?

Beginner
No Problem

Middling
02:26:841(2) - change finish
03:04:436(3) - too far from(2).the distance between (1) and (2) is rigth

Advanced
01:52:598(2)~(3) - make it in a stright line
02:07:355(2) - New Combol
02:38:166(6) - one grid left

Good job.Matual map skill with beautiful song.Star

Tony

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Tony 2011-11-04T18:36:44+00:00

hey there :3 here's mah awesome mod! (suggestions)

[Beginner]

Can you tell me if the distances are consistant in this diff? I see many differences of distancing~ from 1.0x to 1.5x. I'm not sure if it's allowed or not :S
00:45:625 (4) - try vertical flip like here (Nazi, but it looks better

)
00:56:004 (4) - a bit ugly underlap (Nazi)

[Middling]

Try AR4. It plays better I think
01:05:085 (x) - add a note here! It feels empty
01:41:733 (x) - ^
02:17:409 (x) - ^
02:44:004 (x) - ^
03:17:733 (5) - move this 1/2 later. It fits better

03:24:868 (x) - add a note here and here 03:25:193(x) -

[Advanced]

Just perfect :3 I like how does it sound this 1/8 slider 01:03:625 (4) - everywhere!

Awesomest beatmap of all times! expect some kd stars from me in this weekend!

- Rche -

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- Rche - 2011-11-06T15:45:57+00:00

[Advanced]
those overlapping sliders look bad in my eyes...maybe just mine.
01:13:193 (1,2) and 01:14:490 (1,2) - they really look bad.
01:56:328 (1) - remove hitsound at the end?
02:09:301 (1) - why new combo?
02:45:788 (1,2) - i think the new combo should be at (2)
02:47:896 (4) - new combo?

[Middling]
01:55:355 (1,2) - i think the new combo should be at (2)
02:00:544 (5,1) - i think the new combo should be at (5)
02:17:733 (4) - new combo?
03:34:598 (5) - ^

that's all.
double star.
(runs away)

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2011-11-06T18:01:04+00:00

hello~~

Some Suggestions
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Beginner

00:39:139 (1,2) - need out more space like you did 00:57:301 (1,2,3) - 1.20x
00:44:328 (3,4) - not look good slider blanket try make same like 00:41:733 (1,2)
00:46:922 (1,2,3,4) - random spacing why? try same spacing like you did 00:46:922 (1,2,3,4)
01:25:517 (2,3) - I can see still incosiente spacing

you spacing all are kindy incosiente like Tony said i suggest you start active Distance Snap and make consistant pleasse
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Middling

AR +1 most better play IMO

00:56:328 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:57:301 (2) - put new combo
01:41:409 (3,1) - i have worried this stack because bpm is low then will be hard play and read hard overlaps, will be better unstack IMO
02:03:463 (4,1) - Same thing ^
02:04:112 (1) - Remove new combo
02:17:085 (3,4) - same 01:41:409 (3,1)
02:43:679 (3,1) - ^
03:36:868 (6) - put new combo and at 03:37:517 (1) - remove new combo
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Advanced

everthing look good
/me feel song and fly *-* Omg I can fly (dream orz)
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that all i think
and good luck and star

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-11-07T12:07:39+00:00

Just fixed a few thing.

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Middling].osu

Last edited by kanpakyin 2011-11-07T22:44:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-11-07T18:04:55+00:00

Most fixed, thanks :3

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Beginner].osu

Louis Cyphre

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Topic Starter

Louis Cyphre 2011-11-08T14:19:26+00:00

Updated. Thanks everyone for modding

S h i o n

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S h i o n 2011-11-09T14:44:26+00:00

Hi,Louis Cyphre

General

[EDIT] Offset 20969ms (-8) is better to me

Beginner

01:17:409 (4) - Make end tick to 97,133 ?
02:53:733 (3,1) - Replace them with slider or at least use such 2 notes after such rythem has appeared once. (I mean if you can try slider+slider and slider + 2notes , that's much easier than what it looks like.)

Middling

02:19:679 (1) - Finish on head
02:41:085 (4) - Try this and just let it look better ?
```
220,230,161085,2,0,B|240:159|192:114,1,110,8|8
```
02:54:706 (1) - A little ugly
03:25:193 (x) - Need one note ?

Advanced

01:25:193 (3) - Finish on head
03:17:409 (1) - maybe put this around 03:16:761 (1) to have much fun xD
03:19:031 (3) - Make end tick to 476,164 for a better flow
03:24:220 (5) - Make end tick to 256,352 according to (2,3)

I am have completely lost myself in music and playing this diff. Perfectly nice to me !!
Another nice song & much enjoyable mapset~

I am looking forward to its rank...

Last edited by S h i o n 2011-11-10T09:46:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

nimi

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nimi 2011-11-09T20:44:19+00:00

Hey

[Beginner]

Nothing special to mention about this diff, tbh.. Mostly I can say I'd like to see more effort on hitsounds in the beginning of the map, but I guess that's due to the song being really quiet in that part.

[Middling]

01:05:085 (x) - add a note here? (or extend the previous slider)
01:18:058 (1) - unless it was on purpose.. make it symmetrical?
01:36:220 (5) - doesn't sound really good imo >< instead, you could make it like this: http://puu.sh/8omK but it's up to you
02:34:598 - unecessary timing section
02:35:247 - ^
03:23:895 (4) - same of 01:18:058 (1)

[Advanced]

02:08:490 (x) - add a note here?
02:13:193 (1) - consider removing nc
Well.. Overall I think you could use more the taiko hitsounds you used in the beginning of the map, aand you should use the same combo colours that were used in other diffs >_> They look better, imo

That's all~ Hope the mod was helpful, and good luck on ranks <3

Reiji-RJ

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Reiji-RJ 2011-11-10T09:47:22+00:00

No changes, sorry D:
Thanks for modding!

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2011-11-12T00:54:38+00:00

Middling:
00:57:301 (2) - Slider isn't straaaaight.
01:06:058 (3) - Make slider prettier pl0x.
01:10:274 (1,2) - Use grid level 4 to make it perfect, like so:

01:14:490 (2,3,4,1,2) - Big difficulty jump. Make it easier.
01:18:058 (1,2,3,4) - These don't look really nice, esp. with (3,4), when (3) could blanket (4) nicely if the slider was nicer. Fix?
03:25:193 - Add a beat here.

Advanced:
- Lower AR by 1?
- I'd supreme combo mod this diff, but I don't think it's too necessary. Tell me if you want or not.
- Oh yeah, this diff. is really nice! Fun to play

Louis Cyphre

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Topic Starter

Louis Cyphre 2011-11-12T08:07:42+00:00

- Lower AR by 1?

BPM is 93 yea, but as you see only metronome arrives on 93, beats arrive mostly on 1/4 notes, and little repeats on 1/8. So actually it's 186 bpm. 186 bpm with AR7 is kinda gay ;w;

About combo mod, i don't think it's so necessary, unless you can point out something really critical or bloodly weird.

Thanks for modding YGO ^_^

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-11-12T08:43:05+00:00

Here.

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Middling].osu

Kotone

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Kotone 2011-11-12T10:49:42+00:00

Combo color is diff of Advanced diff
And there is a unsnapped note of taiko diff,03:16:762 (1) - this
Middling: 02:34:598 - unless TS
no kds

Louis Cyphre