23:48 <knjiga> : some things i wanted to suggest already got cahnged in the meantime
23:48 <knjiga> : xD
23:48 <DoKoLP> : xDD
23:48 <DoKoLP> : \:D/
23:49 <knjiga> : in easy
23:49 <knjiga> : 02:25:469 -
23:49 <knjiga> : this long slider
23:49 <knjiga> : onkly a suggestion
23:49 <knjiga> : but feels somewhat dull just straight liek tahtjh
23:49 <knjiga> : maybe make it somewhat liek this
23:49 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nHA23:50 <DoKoLP> : ^^
23:50 <DoKoLP> : okey. i'm gonna change it
23:50 <knjiga> : 02:32:528 -
23:50 <knjiga> : a minor thing
23:50 <knjiga> : but you can move it to lok better liek this
23:50 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nHR23:51 <knjiga> : tahts all there ius to easy in particualr
23:51 <knjiga> : also will you take the suggestion that guy gave you
23:51 <knjiga> : for colors
23:51 <knjiga> : if you dont
23:51 <knjiga> : i feel like this red is a bit too dark
23:51 <knjiga> : its playable
23:51 <knjiga> : but would be better to make it ligher
23:52 <knjiga> : hard:
23:52 <knjiga> : 00:56:175 -
23:52 <knjiga> : maybe add aclap to this note
23:52 <knjiga> : or both calp and finish
23:53 <knjiga> : same here
23:53 <knjiga> : 02:26:528 -
23:53 <knjiga> : for taht las
23:53 <knjiga> : you should probably add another timing section
23:53 <knjiga> : so its not just 20%
23:54 <knjiga> : 02:21:234 -
23:54 <knjiga> : these slider
23:54 <knjiga> : they are fine now really
23:54 <knjiga> : but
23:54 <knjiga> : maybe you can reverse the first 4
23:55 <knjiga> : to make them more varied form that first tiem the appear in the song
23:55 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nIN23:55 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nIR23:55 <DoKoLP> : i'm not gonna change the colors
23:55 <knjiga> : k
23:55 <knjiga> : but make the red ligher
23:55 <DoKoLP> : i can make it lighter
23:56 <DoKoLP> : but won't change all of them
23:56 <knjiga> : k
23:56 <knjiga> : only red needs cahgne
23:56 <knjiga> : i just mentioned all
23:56 <knjiga> : since that guy who modded
23:56 <knjiga> : gave his suggestion
23:57 <knjiga> : insane:
23:57 <knjiga> : 00:56:175 -
23:57 <knjiga> : this not
23:57 <knjiga> : it has a finish
23:57 <knjiga> : and whistle
23:57 <knjiga> : finishs fits very well thematically
23:57 <knjiga> : but maybe clap soudns better
23:57 <knjiga> : maybe remove whistle and add calp
23:57 <knjiga> : or something
23:59 <knjiga> : 01:57:234 -
23:59 <knjiga> : these two sliders
23:59 <knjiga> : this is nazi
23:59 <knjiga> : but maybe change them
23:59 <knjiga> : so you dont get that sharp ineer edge
23:59 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nJt00:00 <knjiga> : 02:48:410 (5) -
00:00 <knjiga> : in rthis patter
00:00 <knjiga> : 5 is an antijump
00:01 <knjiga> : its fine
00:01 <knjiga> : but you can make it more hardcore
00:01 <knjiga> : by swaping 5 and 6
00:01 <knjiga> : xD
00:01 <knjiga> : it would be more consistent
00:03 <knjiga> : now this part
00:03 <knjiga> : 02:18:410 -
00:03 <knjiga> : that hellzero suggested
00:03 <knjiga> : i suggest
00:03 <knjiga> : reversing
00:03 <DoKoLP> : HARDCORE
00:03 <DoKoLP> : <3
00:03 <DoKoLP> :
00:03 <knjiga> : the whole yellow combo
00:03 <knjiga> : and green too
00:03 <knjiga> : xD
00:04 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nKh yellow
00:04 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nKk green
00:04 <DoKoLP> : naaah
00:04 <knjiga> : maybe you will have to adjust the spacing a bit after
00:04 <DoKoLP> : don't like that :/
00:04 <knjiga> : but that way its more intense
00:04 <DoKoLP> : i don't want jumps everywhere
00:04 <knjiga> : you can try it
00:04 <knjiga> : and decide
00:05 <DoKoLP> : song part is slow
00:05 <DoKoLP> : so i map slowly too
00:05 <knjiga> :
00:05 <DoKoLP> : with easy jumps
00:05 <knjiga> : this wouldnt add much difficulty
00:05 <knjiga> : only 3 practical jumps
00:05 <DoKoLP> : i already have enough difficulty in that map xD
00:05 <knjiga> : k
00:05 <knjiga> : you can ry firstif you want to make sure
00:05 <DoKoLP> : but i fixed all those other suggestions you gave me
00:05 <knjiga> : but its ok now too
00:05 <DoKoLP> :
00:06 <knjiga> : one last thing
00:06 <knjiga> : and it applies
00:06 <knjiga> : in general
00:06 <knjiga> : but mostly for insane
00:06 <knjiga> : and hard
00:06 <knjiga> : is the hitsounds
00:06 <knjiga> : maybe lower the volume a liitle
00:06 <knjiga> : like 10 or 15
00:06 <DoKoLP> : lol
00:06 <knjiga> : claps sound very loud
00:06 <DoKoLP> : kite said the volume is too low
00:06 <knjiga> : its 85 lol
00:06 <DoKoLP> : you says the volume is too loud
00:06 <knjiga> : how can it be low
00:07 <DoKoLP> : i know!
00:07 <DoKoLP> : xD
00:07 <knjiga> : also the part untill the first break
00:07 <DoKoLP> : volume is okay imo
00:07 <knjiga> : it goes
00:07 <knjiga> : like 4 clap 4 normal
00:07 <DoKoLP> : handclaps fit to the music well
00:07 <knjiga> : the pattern is nice
00:07 <DoKoLP> : and they can be loud as well
00:07 <knjiga> : but the claps are sdoo agressive
00:07 <knjiga> : well they fit
00:07 <knjiga> : but
00:08 <knjiga> : i would tone them down
00:08 <knjiga> : maybe split that part in timing sections
00:08 <knjiga> : like this
00:08 <knjiga> :
http://puu.sh/6nLi00:08 <knjiga> : and lower just the clap paret volume
00:09 <knjiga> : or you can evn try witohut claps
00:09 <knjiga> : just one is normal 100 %
00:09 <knjiga> : the other normal 40
00:09 <knjiga> : or something
00:09 <knjiga> : all an all there are all suggestions
00:09 <knjiga> : so you can try
00:10 <knjiga> : and decide if you like or not
00:10 <knjiga> : none of it is critical