Deif wrote:

A month later or so, here I am ;___;

General:

.OSB: If you aren't planning to make a storyboard, delete this file and make a full submission.

Easy:

00:56:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - TBH, this part felt a bit empty, considering this is the beginning of the kiai time. Would you mind adding some notes?

Hellzero's Normal:

Some parts of the map follow the bass, and some others use the main music. Anyway, as they're well differenced, it's not an important issue.
00:56:528 (2) - New combo, the previous note is in another stanza.

Hard:

00:53:705 (1,2) - Add a repetition in (1), or remove one in (2).
01:38:881 (1,2,3,4) - Would you mind doing a square, instead of a rectangle?
02:24:057 (1,2) - Add a repetition in (1), or remove one in (2).

Insane:

01:54:410 (3) - I suggest splitting it into 2 sliders.


It's hard to improve this mapset, so that's all :3

Rukarioman wrote:

[Easy]
01:40:293 (6,1,2) - This whole thing looks really cramped. Maybe try to move (2) out of there. fixed. I did rotate them by 90°
Rather boring, but solid diff I guess.

[Insane]
00:21:940 (1,2,3,4) - These ant-jumps confused em the first time around. Well not really antijumps but considering the combo before.Isn't that confusing, but okay. I made the distance bigger.

Meh, that's about it. It's a solid mapset, but not really impressive. I liked Normal the most.

1. 02:31:116 (1) - I didn't like this clap because it throws the rhythm off. You didn't use a clap on a downbeat anywhere else. Should just remove it imo.

1. 01:47:528 (3) - This should probably be a new combo, since you can't have it at 01:47:352. This also means that you should remove the new combo on 01:48:058 (1). This also brings better consistency seeing as you used this combo logic at 01:42:057 (1) and the song is kinda the same here so, yeah.

1. 00:30:763 (5) - I think you have a clap missing here.
2. 00:51:587 (2) - Since you will probably add that clap, a suggestion for this: why not make it slightly louder than 00:50:881 (1)? The same goes for 00:52:293 (3) which should be even more louder, and 00:52:999 (4) which should be even more louder than that 3. The reason is, the song kinda builds up here, and having 4 of the same with the same volume is kind of a turnoff for me.
3. 00:56:175 (1) - I would suggest that you use a normal clap for this note, seeing you used it for every other notes with a clap. Feels kinda out of place like it is now. You could always reduce your volume a little so that your kiai has the same impact it does now.
4. 01:06:410 (3) - I think the clap on 01:06:763 is "extra" and should probably be removed. See 01:51:587 (3) for example, you didn't use it here and the music is the same. Or, you can just add that clap to this slider instead, for consistency. Up to you.
5. 02:26:881 (1) - This slider comes a bit too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. What you could do is do the same like you did at 00:53:705 (1,1) to avoid this problem.

lolcubes wrote:

Lets give this another check!

[Insane]

1. 02:31:116 (1) - I didn't like this clap because it throws the rhythm off. You didn't use a clap on a downbeat anywhere else. Should just remove it imo.

fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:47:528 (3) - This should probably be a new combo, since you can't have it at 01:47:352. This also means that you should remove the new combo on 01:48:058 (1). This also brings better consistency seeing as you used this combo logic at 01:42:057 (1) and the song is kinda the same here so, yeah.

fixed

[Hellzero's Normal]

1. 00:30:763 (5) - I think you have a clap missing here. fixed
2. 00:51:587 (2) - Since you will probably add that clap, a suggestion for this: why not make it slightly louder than 00:50:881 (1)? The same goes for 00:52:293 (3) which should be even more louder, and 00:52:999 (4) which should be even more louder than that 3. The reason is, the song kinda builds up here, and having 4 of the same with the same volume is kind of a turnoff for me. I didn't do this in the other diffs and imo it's not that necessary, so i won't change it^^
3. 00:56:175 (1) - I would suggest that you use a normal clap for this note, seeing you used it for every other notes with a clap. Feels kinda out of place like it is now. You could always reduce your volume a little so that your kiai has the same impact it does now. fixed
4. 01:06:410 (3) - I think the clap on 01:06:763 is "extra" and should probably be removed. See 01:51:587 (3) for example, you didn't use it here and the music is the same. Or, you can just add that clap to this slider instead, for consistency. Up to you. fixed
5. 02:26:881 (1) - This slider comes a bit too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. What you could do is do the same like you did at 00:53:705 (1,1) to avoid this problem.

fixed

Fix the spinner in normal and consider the suggestions and call me back.

1. 02:24:058 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the spinner and add it to the circle.

lolcubes wrote:

[Normal]

1. 02:24:058 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the spinner and add it to the circle.

Fix and I rank.