iMercurial wrote:

Hi, M4M.

General

AIBat wrote:

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections: http://puu.sh/oKHe
Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/oKHs
Inconsistency in Kiai Times: http://puu.sh/oKHE

Easy

00:15:524 (2) I suggest you to close distance this circle from (1).

Normal

00:29:886 (2) In Easy/Normal Diffs, Circles under sliders aren't allowed, they could be confused.
00:36:269 (7) New combo
01:48:077 (2) Same as 00:29:886
01:48:716 (1) ^
01:55:737 (2,3) ^
01:57:013 (2) ^
01:58:290 (2) ^
02:20:950 (4) Is this sliders following something? If It doesn't, please delete it or put something else.
02:28:290 (8) Same as 00:29:886
02:34:035 (4) ^
02:44:886 (3) ^
02:46:641 (7,8) ^
03:25:737 (2) ^
03:27:013 (4) ^

Hard

AIBat wrote:

Some unsnapped circles and sliders: http://puu.sh/oKRN
Unsnapped Green Lines: http://puu.sh/oKSG

Some suggestions but nobody cares suggestions.

Good Luck, posting in your Mod Queue.

1. Size of the BG 800x599, it shoud be 800x600, change it please
2. If I were on your place, i would though about diff's names, easy = normal, normal = hard and etc

1. 00:15:524 (2) - woud be better for the rythm, if you move it to 00:15:205 -
2. 00:40:737 (2) - spacing
3. 00:45:843 - so long break D:
4. 01:03:715 (1,2,1) - you can not change it, but woud be better that will be more easy rythm, mey be 1/1
5. 01:42:333 - whistle there
6. 01:48:076 (1,2) - hard place in easy, change it
7. 01:56:374 (2) - spacing
8. 02:19:672 (2) - remove 02:21:268 (3) , and replace this slider to 02:19:992 -
9. 02:22:225 (2,3) - ^
10. 02:28:289 (3,4) - hard
11. 02:52:225 (2) - spacing D:
12. 03:35:151 (1,2) - wha... that is Easy, it's confusing, i think there is no problem to use 1/1 or 1/2
13. 03:37:704 (1,2) - ^
14. 03:40:257 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:42:810 (2,3) - ^
16. 03:44:247 (1,2,1,2) - naaah

1. AR = 3 and may be circle size = 3
2. 01:55:098 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - meeh, it's Normal, yea

1. AR = 7

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Size of the BG 800x599, it shoud be 800x600, change it please ok.changed
2. If I were on your place, i would though about diff's names, easy = normal, normal = hard and etc

cause I don't think Hard is really fit the Insane..Most parts are easy to play yeh?So no change..sorry
Hard

1. AR = 7

AR7 a little late for this and also make the map crowded..So no change...sorry

Others is good, but think about the difficulty
Good luck

Vass_Bass wrote:

Pokie's Easy

SPOILER

1. 00:15:524 (2) - woud be better for the rythm, if you move it to 00:15:205 -
2. 00:40:737 (2) - spacing
3. 00:45:843 - so long break D:
4. 01:03:715 (1,2,1) - you can not change it, but woud be better that will be more easy rythm, mey be 1/1
5. 01:42:333 - whistle there
6. 01:48:076 (1,2) - hard place in easy, change it
7. 01:56:374 (2) - spacing
8. 02:19:672 (2) - remove 02:21:268 (3) , and replace this slider to 02:19:992 -
9. 02:22:225 (2,3) - ^
10. 02:28:289 (3,4) - hard
11. 02:52:225 (2) - spacing D:
12. 03:35:151 (1,2) - wha... that is Easy, it's confusing, i think there is no problem to use 1/1 or 1/2
13. 03:37:704 (1,2) - ^
14. 03:40:257 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:42:810 (2,3) - ^
16. 03:44:247 (1,2,1,2) - naaah

The idea of having easier difficulties is that complete beginners are able to complete them. If I were to give that map to someone who had never so much as seen osu! before, I should think he/she would have an awful lot of trouble in trying to complete it.

1. 00:43:290 (T) - Add red line to adjust a metronome.
2. 01:24:141 (T) - ^ and set time signature 3/4.
3. 01:39:779 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
4. 01:58:927 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
5. 02:39:778 (T) - ^ time signature 3/4
6. 03:01:480 (T) - ^ time signature 3/4
7. 03:09:777 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
8. 03:28:925 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4

1. 02:51:268 (1,2) - Sadly, you cannot use a jump like this in the easiest diff. (I want to respect but I cannot permit...)

• 
  This is hard-like normal diff, so current difficulty setting seems too low. Set HP/OD4? The difficulty spread will be better too.

1. 02:53:502 (1) - Consider to add finish(soft-one fits better).

1. 01:23:662 (T) - This green line is snapped wrongly(snapped at late timing). So resnap it please.
2. 03:08:582 (14) - Remove this note? Seems to fit the music better.

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long long time

[General]

1. 00:43:290 (T) - Add red line to adjust a metronome.
2. 01:24:141 (T) - ^ and set time signature 3/4.
3. 01:39:779 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
4. 01:58:927 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
5. 02:39:778 (T) - ^ time signature 3/4
6. 03:01:480 (T) - ^ time signature 3/4
7. 03:09:777 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4
8. 03:28:925 (T) - ^ time signature 4/4

[Pokie's Easy]

1. 02:51:268 (1,2) - Sadly, you cannot use a jump like this in the easiest diff. (I want to respect but I cannot permit...)

[LKs' Normal]

• 
  This is hard-like normal diff, so current difficulty setting seems too low. Set HP/OD4? The difficulty spread will be better too.

1. 02:53:502 (1) - Consider to add finish(soft-one fits better).

[Hard]

1. 01:23:662 (T) - This green line is snapped wrongly(snapped at late timing). So resnap it please.
2. 03:08:582 (14) - Remove this note? Seems to fit the music better.

Sweet map! Call me back after fix :3

Suzully wrote:

Each diff has different offset

01:39:779
02:39:778

Suzully wrote:

All stuff are fine now. Bubbled!

Suzully wrote:

The source should be Kurousa-P. (Sorry I didn't notice when bubbling before )
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Kurousa-P

Suzully wrote:

I can rank this. Go ahead~ :3
(I won't be able to have time for free today, so I'll let you wait a bit until...maybe tomorrow though)