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aston_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 23, 2011 at 2:45:30 AM

Artist: SeeU
Title: RUN
Source: Vocaloid3
Tags: SeeU Korean Vocaloid K-Pop pumpkin JNAME CHRIS KBSB kakiman ShuPing NicoNicoDouga Sanjenin Nagi -U
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6145kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.44 stars, 253 notes)
  2. Hard (4.42 stars, 407 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 591 notes)
  4. Normal (3.42 stars, 327 notes)
  5. S.Nagi's Taikorun (4.94 stars, 817 notes)
Download: SeeU - RUN
Download: SeeU - RUN (no video)
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SeeU – SV01 시유
Korean Vocaloid SeeU;
Gonna attempt to rank > _ <

Easy - Notes done; Sounds done
Normal - Notes done; Sounds done
Hard - Notes done; Sounds done
Insane - Notes done. Sounds done ^ㅅ^.

Taiko diff by Sanjenin Nagi -U

Kiai done on all difficulties!
Now taking/asking for mods~

Thanks Sanjenin Nagi -U for video :D/

릴릴릴릴 Remember Dream~ Forever Dream~

Forever Pending :(

10/15/11 : eikkaleyd's mod applied
10/23/11 : Saten-san's mod applied
10/23/11 : kosiga's mod applied
10/24/11 : Soaprman's mod applied
10/25/11 : Xafnia's mod applied
11/08/11 : Megurine Luka's mod applied
11/15/11 : _Gezo_'s mod applied
01/08/12 : ampzz's mod applied
Sanjenin Nagi
offset : 1951

:D very like seeu song =w=




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Sanjenin Nagi
i'm want taiko map guest diff =w=
Sure?



and SeeU - Run Video

http://puu.sh/65v2
Topic Starter
aston_old

Sanjenin Nagi -U wrote:

i'm want taiko map guest diff =w=
Sure?



and SeeU - Run Video

http://puu.sh/65v2
make for me :D ty<3
Sanjenin Nagi

aston wrote:

Sanjenin Nagi -U wrote:

i'm want taiko map guest diff =w=
Sure?



and SeeU - Run Video

http://puu.sh/65v2
video size big = delete
make for me :D ty<3
sorry video size big :C
new Link


http://puu.sh/6m96 :D

maping : 4~50% complate
Sanjenin Nagi
eikkaleyd
:) Supporting!

Remember to add audio and KIAI TIME in it.
And, maybe vol.30% is too ……light? :D

——for normal
it will be better if OD+2 and CS-1

——for hard
00.10.258 I think these four notes are too close
Topic Starter
aston_old

eikkaleyd wrote:

:) Supporting!

Remember to add audio and KIAI TIME in it.
And, maybe vol.30% is too ……light? :D

——for normal
it will be better if OD+2 and CS-1

——for hard
00.10.258 I think these four notes are too close
did these, and not done with audio/kiai. so.
Saten
General
Add Sanjenin Nagi -U to the tags

Insane
00:05:643 (5) - New Combo
00:06:104 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:07:489 (6) - New Combo
00:08:874 (1) - Remove New Combo
There were too many different combo patterns from what I'm used to, so I wont mention them since you chose that type patten.
00:20:181 (6,7) - I guess stacking sliders like this is un-rankable. Move (6) 1 grid up
SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

You need to change these sliders somehow, as they are acting as stack 0 which is unrankable
03:12:104 - not sure if this is allowed (kiai fountain spam)

Hard
00:05:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - seems abit too crowded here imo
03:12:797 - o.o

Taiko
Add video

Normal
Same as above
Change Stack Leniency to 6 for patterns like 02:16:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
03:06:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is rather long o.o
03:12:797 - Kiai fountains during spinner isn't allowed ><

Easy
Same as above
01:22:951 (1) - Start this 1/2 ahead
02:22:028 (1) - ^
03:12:797 - lolwut

Topic Starter
aston_old

Saten-san wrote:

General
Add Sanjenin Nagi -U to the tags Done.

Insane
00:05:643 (5) - New Combo Done.
00:06:104 (1) - Remove New Combo Done.
00:07:489 (6) - New Combo Done.
00:08:874 (1) - Remove New Combo Done.
There were too many different combo patterns from what I'm used to, so I wont mention them since you chose that type patten. So are they fine or..? D:
00:20:181 (6,7) - I guess stacking sliders like this is un-rankable. Move (6) 1 grid up Done.
SPOILER

Sakura Hana wrote:

You need to change these sliders somehow, as they are acting as stack 0 which is unrankable
03:12:104 - not sure if this is allowed (kiai fountain spam) Redid to lessen spam.

Hard
00:05:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - seems abit too crowded here imo Redid to go around, showing a clearer view.
03:12:797 - o.o Same as above, redid XD.

Taiko
Add video Ouch, did not see.

Normal
Same as above Ouch, did not see.
Change Stack Leniency to 6 for patterns like 02:16:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Changed to 6 <:.
03:06:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is rather long o.o Broken up into 5-3-2-1-1; didn't know why it was so long, sorry.
03:12:797 - Kiai fountains during spinner isn't allowed >< Oh, redid to first notes and stop before slider starts.

Easy
Same as above Same with this one ; u ;.
01:22:951 (1) - Start this 1/2 ahead Done.
02:22:028 (1) - ^ Done.
03:12:797 - lolwut Redid ><.

Thanks so much for mod! :D
kosiga
oh... I like the song :oops:

my mod for you and all suggestion

[General]
  1. all difficult: add KIAI TIME 01:15:797~01:22:720, 01:23:181~01:30:104 ,02:14:874~02:21:797 ,02:22:258~02:29:181 ,02:59:181~03:06:104 ,03:06:566~03:11:643 and It is set now KIAI TIME align all difficulty please.
[Easy]
  1. AR -1 ( because same as Normal)
  2. 00:35:643(4) - this kickslider difficult for beginners. change repeat slider
  3. 00:49:258 - add note ?
  4. 01:22:258(6,1) - this part I think very difficult for beginners.
  5. 01:48:335 - add note ?
  6. 02:21:335(6,1) - same 01:22:258(6,1)
  7. 02:30:104(2) - same 00:35:643
  8. 02:33:566(1) - ^
  9. 02:43:489(1) - ^
  10. 03:12:797(1) - slider end 03:13:489 and remove KIAI TIME
  11. 03:13:489(1) - spinner 03:13:951~03:15:104 and this spinner volume down plz (maybe 10% ?)
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:797 - add note
  2. 00:49:258 - ^
  3. 01:16:951(1,3) - remove note
  4. 01:30:566(1) - spacing too close
  5. 03:00:566(1) - move 03:00:335 and add one repeat ?
  6. 03:11:412 - add note
  7. 03:11:643(1) - remove KIAI TIME
  8. 03:12:335(1) - spinner start 03:12:104 and volume down point 03:13:951 (maybe 10%)
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:566(1) - slider end point remove whistle
  2. 01:44:643(1) - ^
  3. 03:12:797(1) - remove KIAI TIME
  4. 03:13:258(1) - volume down. same Normal
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:643(4) - change slider ? end 00:12:566
  2. 00:20:643(7,8) - stack
  3. 00:45:566(1) - slider end point remove whistle
  4. 01:00:912(6,7) - stack at 5 circle or 5 circle change repeat slider
  5. 01:59:989(6,7) - ^
  6. 02:26:643(1) - spacing too close
  7. 02:55:143(12) - remove note
  8. 03:12:104(1) - remove KIAI TIME
  9. 03:13:951(1) - volume down .(maybe 10%)
That's all.

nice Insane map. Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
aston_old

kosiga wrote:

oh... I like the song :oops:

my mod for you and all suggestion

[General]
  1. all difficult: add KIAI TIME 01:15:797~01:22:720, 01:23:181~01:30:104 ,02:14:874~02:21:797 ,02:22:258~02:29:181 ,02:59:181~03:06:104 ,03:06:566~03:11:643 and It is set now KIAI TIME align all difficulty please. This felt like Kiai overkill, because too much Kiai time, please refer to http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&n=10&c=9#c9.
[Easy]
  1. AR -1 ( because same as Normal) Done.
  2. 00:35:643(4) - this kickslider difficult for beginners. change repeat slider Done.
  3. 00:49:258 - add note ? Done.
  4. 01:22:258(6,1) - this part I think very difficult for beginners. Done.
  5. 01:48:335 - add note ? Done.
  6. 02:21:335(6,1) - same 01:22:258(6,1) Done.
  7. 02:30:104(2) - same 00:35:643 Done.
  8. 02:33:566(1) - ^ Done.
  9. 02:43:489(1) - ^ Done.
  10. 03:12:797(1) - slider end 03:13:489 and remove KIAI TIME Done slider end, kept kiai moment.
  11. 03:13:489(1) - spinner 03:13:951~03:15:104 and this spinner volume down plz (maybe 10% ?) This changes my map from Easy to Normal difficulty because spinner is too fast for beginners. Extended till 3:16:256 with 5% sound, unless you desperately need me to have it end at 3:15:104.
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:797 - add note Done.
  2. 00:49:258 - ^ Done.
  3. 01:16:951(1,3) - remove note Not done, matches song too well to remove.
  4. 01:30:566(1) - spacing too close Fixed.
  5. 03:00:566(1) - move 03:00:335 and add one repeat ? Done.
  6. 03:11:412 - add note Done.
  7. 03:11:643(1) - remove KIAI TIME Not doing Kiai Changes unless lots of people think the exact same thing
  8. 03:12:335(1) - spinner start 03:12:104 and volume down point 03:13:951 (maybe 10%) Slider redone a little bit, volume down as requested
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:566(1) - slider end point remove whistle Done.
  2. 01:44:643(1) - ^ Done.
  3. 03:12:797(1) - remove KIAI TIME As stated above about Kiai
  4. 03:13:258(1) - volume down. same Normal Done.
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:643(4) - change slider ? end 00:12:566 Too long of a slider.
  2. 00:20:643(7,8) - stack Look closer, it's not stacked. It has a distance number. I changed it after Saten's mod, if you modded before that.
  3. 00:45:566(1) - slider end point remove whistle
  4. 01:00:912(6,7) - stack at 5 circle or 5 circle change repeat slider Wh- What. Same stream as 00:15:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - except shorter.
  5. 01:59:989(6,7) - ^ ^.
  6. 02:26:643(1) - spacing too close Fixed.
  7. 02:55:143(12) - remove note ..Remove the 2nd to last note on stream? Aesthetics and better play with stream staying there; prevents a potential 50/100 happening there instead of 300. Not to mention it sounds better with it there.
  8. 03:12:104(1) - remove KIAI TIME See above about Kiai.
  9. 03:13:951(1) - volume down .(maybe 10%) Changed to 5%.
That's all.

nice Insane map. Good luck~ :)
Thanks for modding~
Soaprman
As requested~

Easy
01:22:720 (1) - This has a different number of repeats from the rest of the sliders like it. Tight sliders with lots of repeats are already confusing to some newer players. Switching it up like this just isn't something I would do with Easy. Maybe make it more like 01:15:797 (1).

02:21:797 (1) - Same thing here with the slider repeats.

03:13:951 (1) - End at 3:15:797? Sounds a little better with it landing on the tall white line there. Also, if you're going to use the 5% to quiet it, be sure to use the soft sampleset.

Normal

03:02:412 (4) - This is probably fine but it's just a bit weird that (1) before it follows both the beat and vocals and this just follows the beat, not the vocals. Perhaps start it earlier so that it does?

Hard

No complaints whatsoever.

Insane

00:18:911 (1,2) - I personally don't mind it, but this is hidden a bit beneath the score up in the corner.

01:57:335 (5) - Kind of hidden by the kiai fountain. Not a big deal.

S.Nagi's Taikorun

Not good enough to play taiko onis but it sounded nice!



Not many problems with this at all. Nice map! The song is catchy too.
Topic Starter
aston_old

Soaprman wrote:

As requested~

Easy
01:22:720 (1) - This has a different number of repeats from the rest of the sliders like it. Tight sliders with lots of repeats are already confusing to some newer players. Switching it up like this just isn't something I would do with Easy. Maybe make it more like 01:15:797 (1). I changed this into a 1/1 repeat instead of 1/2.

02:21:797 (1) - Same thing here with the slider repeats. Done.

03:13:951 (1) - End at 3:15:797? Sounds a little better with it landing on the tall white line there. Also, if you're going to use the 5% to quiet it, be sure to use the soft sampleset. Changed ending and set to soft :).

Normal

03:02:412 (4) - This is probably fine but it's just a bit weird that (1) before it follows both the beat and vocals and this just follows the beat, not the vocals. Perhaps start it earlier so that it does? I changed this just cause, and fixed distance of notes after it.

Hard

No complaints whatsoever.Surprised o:.

Insane

00:18:911 (1,2) - I personally don't mind it, but this is hidden a bit beneath the score up in the corner. Changed to lower-middle field, looks like it'll play better.

01:57:335 (5) - Kind of hidden by the kiai fountain. Not a big deal. Not changing cause you said it wasn't a big deal and I think it's still kind of see-able. Furthermore, I think it depends on resolution and there's a pattern + follow points.

S.Nagi's Taikorun

Not good enough to play taiko onis but it sounded nice!



Not many problems with this at all. Nice map! The song is catchy too.
Thanks for modding~ and the star! :D
Xaffy

Easy

Seems fine.

Normal

00:14:874 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
00:58:719 (4,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:57:796 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
02:42:566 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
These really don't feel like they follow the song at all.
How about something like this:

If that's too hard, stack the notes?


Hard

Did I just play a hard with no 1/4 stacks, no short streams, no patterns, no jumps, no nothing. Just linear straight forward notes with the same distance snap the entire time? Nothing "wrong" with it, but wow is it boring.

Insane
Pretty fun, nothing too add.
Topic Starter
aston_old

Xafnia wrote:


Easy

Seems fine. :D.

Normal

00:14:874 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
00:58:719 (4,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:57:796 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
02:42:566 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
These really don't feel like they follow the song at all.
How about something like this:

If that's too hard, stack the notes? Redid these to sliders and a 1/4 repeat.


Hard

Did I just play a hard with no 1/4 stacks, no short streams, no patterns, no jumps, no nothing. Just linear straight forward notes with the same distance snap the entire time? Nothing "wrong" with it, but wow is it boring. Added a few short streams and small jumps.

Insane
Pretty fun, nothing too add.:D.
Thanks for modding~
SeeU_old
Nice song :)

star this one~
Topic Starter
aston_old
Thank you for the star! :D
Megurine Luka
[General]

Add Vocaloid3 in tag
del osb since you dont have any storyboard

offset 175
After you change your offset, ctrl+A and move all the notes to the right position.

The following time indication is based on 175 offset

[Easy]

I suggest you use distance snapping 1.0 and adjust all spacing. Short spacing will also confuse new babies
Also remember to adjust your new combos. Generally speaking, 5 notes for a combo is suitable for easy

01:19:099 (1) - del 1 turn and prolong it.
02:18:176 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:06:105 (4) - move apart from 2
00:14:943 (5) - NC
00:16:327 (8) - dont put this in NM, it is too difficult.
00:17:251 (1) - http://puu.sh/8jZo
00:23:251 (2) - this stack is also too difficult for normal
00:24:174 (3,4,5,6) - It do not fit the song o.o
00:29:712 (6) - 1 grid left
00:33:866 (1) - http://puu.sh/8jZJ
00:56:020 (6) - NC
00:59:250 (5) - ^
01:00:634 (8) - same with before
01:01:558 (1) - ^(Actually copy and paste is extremely irresponsible IMO, I'm not going to point out the same problem in the rest of the song)
01:17:481 (3) - 1 grid left
01:23:712 (3) - ^
01:24:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stack is too difficult for normal
01:26:943 (6) - http://puu.sh/8k0v
01:31:097 (2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/8k0D
01:40:328 (3) - del whistle
02:41:250 (2) - leave from 6
Rest are the same problem with before.

[Hard]

00:07:327 (2) - spacing
00:06:866 (1,2,3) - not fit the song, try http://puu.sh/8k1e
00:54:173 (2,3) - spacing

The main problem of this diff is your arrangement. The arrangement looks really bad. :<
You need to try to find more different arrangement rather than put them in a line or a curve.
Also it is the problem of your other difficulties. But Easy and NM are fine with that.

[Insane]

00:04:790 (1,2,3,4) - another square is better, dont make it anti-clockwise in a sudden
00:20:251 (6,7,8) - stack perfectly
00:39:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a better star
00:44:482 (1) - put it below 2
01:34:097 (1,2) - spacing
01:38:251 (2) - ^
Not going to mod further more. The spacing in this diff need to be fixed. Jumping does not mean you can put large space in everywhere. You need to Jump in a regular pattern or it will look very messy just as what you did right now. Like 00:29:482 (2,3,4,5,6) these jump is really ugly :<
I see lots of good pattern (like the square), but still it's not good enough :< Also some of them do not fit the song really, like 00:30:636 (1,2,3,4,5)

Also, 00:35:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these note by note pattern is not recommended in insane, it's too easy for an insane diff. Try more pattern to fit the song.

Good luck then XD
Topic Starter
aston_old

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

Add Vocaloid3 in tag Check "Source".
del osb since you dont have any storyboard Done.

offset 175 Done.
After you change your offset, ctrl+A and move all the notes to the right position.

The following time indication is based on 175 offset

[Easy]

I suggest you use distance snapping 1.0 and adjust all spacing. Short spacing will also confuse new babies
Also remember to adjust your new combos. Generally speaking, 5 notes for a combo is suitable for easy
Redid EVERYTHING with 1.0x and some combos.

01:19:099 (1) - del 1 turn and prolong it. Done.
02:18:176 (1) - ^ Done.

[Normal]

00:06:105 (4) - move apart from 2 Done.
00:14:943 (5) - NC Done.
00:16:327 (8) - dont put this in NM, it is too difficult. Done.
00:17:251 (1) - http://puu.sh/8jZo Done.
00:23:251 (2) - this stack is also too difficult for normal Done.
00:24:174 (3,4,5,6) - It do not fit the song o.o Done.
00:29:712 (6) - 1 grid left Done.
00:33:866 (1) - http://puu.sh/8jZJ Done.
00:56:020 (6) - NC Done.
00:59:250 (5) - ^ Done.
01:00:634 (8) - same with before Changed a lot from here, map is different and looks nicer.
01:01:558 (1) - ^(Actually copy and paste is extremely irresponsible IMO, I'm not going to point out the same problem in the rest of the song) Above~
01:17:481 (3) - 1 grid left Above~
01:23:712 (3) - ^ Above~
01:24:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stack is too difficult for normal This was redone along with above <:
01:26:943 (6) - http://puu.sh/8k0v Done.
01:31:097 (2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/8k0D Done.
01:40:328 (3) - del whistle Done.
02:41:250 (2) - leave from 6 Done.
Rest are the same problem with before. As said before, I redid almost everything; redid patterns to look nicer and removed Copy+Pastes.

[Hard]

00:07:327 (2) - spacing Done.
00:06:866 (1,2,3) - not fit the song, try http://puu.sh/8k1e Done.
00:54:173 (2,3) - spacing No, this was done on purpose, breaks whole beginning after break if redone.

Not redoing Hard's arrangements nor Copy+Paste, I like it the way it is.

The main problem of this diff is your arrangement. The arrangement looks really bad. :<
You need to try to find more different arrangement rather than put them in a line or a curve.
Also it is the problem of your other difficulties. But Easy and NM are fine with that.

[Insane]

00:04:790 (1,2,3,4) - another square is better, dont make it anti-clockwise in a sudden No.
00:20:251 (6,7,8) - stack perfectly Unrankable if I stack these (I had them stacked before), in mods before, Sakura Hana was quoted saying this would create an unrankable map.
00:39:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a better star Wasn't meant to be a star, meant to be triangle-pattern, if remade, it'd stack on sliders and I'd rather keep it like this.
00:44:482 (1) - put it below 2 Ruins pattern I was going for, and doesn't match spacing, two triangles was what I was going for (explains combo colors).
01:34:097 (1,2) - spacing 1.52x....? It's correct D:
01:38:251 (2) - ^ In order to avoid stacking notes and lengthened effects, + minijump of sorts.

Not going to mod further more. The spacing in this diff need to be fixed. Jumping does not mean you can put large space in everywhere. You need to Jump in a regular pattern or it will look very messy just as what you did right now. Like 00:29:482 (2,3,4,5,6) these jump is really ugly :<
I see lots of good pattern (like the square), but still it's not good enough :< Also some of them do not fit the song really, like 00:30:636 (1,2,3,4,5)

Also, 00:35:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these note by note pattern is not recommended in insane, it's too easy for an insane diff. Try more pattern to fit the song.

Good luck then XD
Thanks for mod~
Yuzeyun
Better late than never !

[General]
The BG is 1071x767. Crop it to 1024x768.
The MP3 is okay.
Offset unicity is okay
Diff spread is okay
Make sure the countdown is disabled.


Misc :

wut

[Easy]
00:33:867 (1,2) - Weird rythm... Use a 1/1 slider instead ?
00:47:713 (3) - NC ?
00:49:790 (1) - Move the 2 highest points 1 grid down ? It looks more symmetrical.
01:15:867 (1) - 1/1 ?
01:47:713 (5,6) - It sounds weird but I did not find any solution right now.
02:08:943 (5,6,7) - Overlapping... Plus, the spacing changes abruptly from 1 to 0,8.
02:14:944 (1) - Look at 1:15:867
02:44:944 (2) - NC ?
03:09:405 (5) - This slider doesn't follow the shape o.o
03:10:329 (1,2,3,4,5) -

[Normal]
00:26:944 (3) - Make it more symmetric.
01:15:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - They play weird. But if I suggest you what I thought, you would change a lot of things :

  • then
02:03:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - I got tricked... I thought it wasn't put to DS 1.. This instead ?
02:07:559 (3,4) - DS 2.50 ? It's a little too high for a normal.
02:47:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern looks weird too.
02:51:867 (3,4,5,6) - Huh.
03:11:252 (2,1,1,1) - Why a new combo for each note ?

[Hard]
00:10:328 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:16:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to unstack.
00:35:713 (1,2) - They look awkward
00:40:790 (3) - Rotate by -8° clockwise.
00:53:713 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:00:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097
01:18:867 (2) - I'd suggest a NC here.
01:21:867 (1) + 01:22:328 (1) - Delete NCs
01:23:251 (3) - NC
01:26:251 (3) - Same as 1:18:867
01:52:790 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:59:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097
02:35:713 (1) - Make it prettier.
02:43:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097
03:12:867 (1,1) - Same as the Normal's end.

[S.Nagi's Taiko]
I'll edit this post to post the BG I'll provide you, since there is not any BG for it at all.
Edit : I did it, but it's 2,695 KB :l (Photoshop doesn't let me save as JPG :l)
Megurine Luka
Hmm. I mean maybe you need to add this song's creator as source
and add vocaloid3 as tag

But whatever, it's ok.
Topic Starter
aston_old

_Gezo_ wrote:

Better late than never !

[General]
The BG is 1071x767. Crop it to 1024x768. Will fix in a bit.
The MP3 is okay.
Offset unicity is okay
Diff spread is okay
Make sure the countdown is disabled. Fixed.


Misc :

wut

[Easy]
00:33:867 (1,2) - Weird rythm... Use a 1/1 slider instead ? Done.
00:47:713 (3) - NC ? Done.
00:49:790 (1) - Move the 2 highest points 1 grid down ? It looks more symmetrical. It does, but it also makes it shorter and makes the end circles uneven, so I'll keep it as is x:.
01:15:867 (1) - 1/1 ? Fixed.
01:47:713 (5,6) - It sounds weird but I did not find any solution right now. O-okay D:
02:08:943 (5,6,7) - Overlapping... Plus, the spacing changes abruptly from 1 to 0,8. Fixed.
02:14:944 (1) - Look at 1:15:867 Fixed.
02:44:944 (2) - NC ? Fixed.
03:09:405 (5) - This slider doesn't follow the shape o.o Redid shape and followup <:.
03:10:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Did this.

[Normal]
00:26:944 (3) - Make it more symmetric. Done.
01:15:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - They play weird. But if I suggest you what I thought, you would change a lot of things : Fixed.

  • then
02:03:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - I got tricked... I thought it wasn't put to DS 1.. This instead ? Done.
02:07:559 (3,4) - DS 2.50 ? It's a little too high for a normal. Oh, one of the notes was placed wrong on timeline, I fixed it <:.
02:47:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern looks weird too. Fixed.
02:51:867 (3,4,5,6) - Huh. Fixed.
03:11:252 (2,1,1,1) - Why a new combo for each note ? Derp.

[Hard]
00:10:328 (1,1,1,1) - ^ Done.
00:16:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to unstack. Done.
00:35:713 (1,2) - They look awkward Done.
00:40:790 (3) - Rotate by -8° clockwise. Done.
00:53:713 (1,2,3) - Spacing Meant on purpose :c.
01:00:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097 Done.
01:18:867 (2) - I'd suggest a NC here. Done.
01:21:867 (1) + 01:22:328 (1) - Delete NCs Done.
01:23:251 (3) - NC Done.
01:26:251 (3) - Same as 1:18:867 Done.
01:52:790 (1,2,3) - Spacing On purpose :c.
01:59:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097 Done.
02:35:713 (1) - Make it prettier. Done.
02:43:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 0:16:097 Done.
03:12:867 (1,1) - Same as the Normal's end. Fixed.

[S.Nagi's Taiko]
I'll edit this post to post the BG I'll provide you, since there is not any BG for it at all. Gonna work with this.
Edit : I did it, but it's 2,695 KB :l (Photoshop doesn't let me save as JPG :l)
Thanks for mod~
Xaffy

SinDemonDragon13
Awesome! :D
Really good beatmap! :) Cant wait to see this one geting ranked! X3
kawaiipandah
Love SeeU~ Hope this map gets ranked soon!
Sanjenin Nagi
upload map
offset fixed

Download: SeeU - RUN (aston) [S.Nagi's Taikorun].osu
Agnes
desu desu

[General]

Nothing to poke at.

[Easy]
Suggestions.

00:13:098 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Replace one of the combos here with a slider? Possibly one of the (1,2) combos.
00:52:790 - Feels like an awkward place to start a break. It felt right at 00:46:329, then picked back up at 00:53:713, but I don't want to destroy the nice slider at 00:49:790 (1). ;v;
01:26:944 (7) - Extend to the next white tick?

[Normal]
...


you know what, i just realized i'm behind on a ton of chores atm. Will finish modding tomorrow.
SinDemonDragon13
Can I make a diff, too? :3
ampzz
Fun mapset and fairly catchy song.

IRC Mod
01:48 <ampzz> : 01:56:021 (3,4) - to a (3,4,5) works out swell as it finishes that vocal piece neatly and still leaves adequate room for the jumps.
01:50 <aston> : do you mean change the new combo from 01:56:482 (1) - to 01:56:713 (2) ?
01:51 <ampzz> : Nah, nothing like that, I'll show what I meant;
01:52 <ampzz> : http://puu.sh/cuKk
01:54 <aston> : done
02:01 <ampzz> : 01:15:867 (1,2,3,4) - would work better as a 5-circle stream, flows tidier with the vocal in this section.
02:04 <ampzz> : From what my ears can pick up that is.
02:04 <aston> : http://puu.sh/cuN4 did this instead
02:05 <aston> : cause i can't really make a circle with .72x spacing
02:06 <ampzz> : Ohhh
02:06 <ampzz> : Works very nicely and looks sick as that ^
02:07 <ampzz> : Those were the only things I could pick up on for now, will have a look at it again tomorr.. when I wake up 'today'.

[Insane]:

00:18:981 (1,2,3) - Possibly add a beat at the (2) slider end to match up to the vocal audio cue so it doesn't feel like a void here, which then flows nicely into the (new 4, 5, 6).
00:56:021 (6,7,8) - Doesn't make much sense if you go by the audio; the more notable segment here is the vocals. Create a new combo like you did with the [Normal] difficulty as that flowed smoothly.
02:39:405 (1,2,3) - Add a circle in the 1/4 stanza marks on top of the sliders to follow the rhythm here more, like so - http://puu.sh/cGpr

[Hard]:

Increase Approach Rate to at least 7; 6 is too confusing and tedious for what is otherwise a fun difficulty, especially the streams.
02:17:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - Drop the 5 at the end of this; turn 4 into a slider ending at 5's old location as it sounds more on cue with the 'dream' vocal sound.

[Normal]

00:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - Removing the slider at 3 here and replacing it with a circle; having 4 start earlier at [00:16:098] repeating until [00:16:790] sounds better.


If anyone is after the English translation for the vocals to this song, here they are:
SPOILER
Look up at the sky

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

A day passes, and so another
But the time inside me stays the same
People on the streets look happy
Only the light from the street lamp shines on me

I want to fly high into the sky
Like a bird
I'm going to run after
The rainbow inside of my heart

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back
Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run

One year passes, and so another
But the apperances inside me are same
I'm shut inside the time that stopped
So that it became a dawn where the stars slept

My heart beats- I want to love
Like the pretty flowers
I'm secretly going to love
With my shy heart

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run

If you ever get a thought that you're alone in this world,
Then shout with all your might towards the sky
Even if you fall when walking and walking,
Run run run, don't stop

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back
Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run
Topic Starter
aston_old

ampzz wrote:

Fun mapset and fairly catchy song.

IRC Mod
01:48 <ampzz> : 01:56:021 (3,4) - to a (3,4,5) works out swell as it finishes that vocal piece neatly and still leaves adequate room for the jumps.
01:50 <aston> : do you mean change the new combo from 01:56:482 (1) - to 01:56:713 (2) ?
01:51 <ampzz> : Nah, nothing like that, I'll show what I meant;
01:52 <ampzz> : http://puu.sh/cuKk
01:54 <aston> : done
02:01 <ampzz> : 01:15:867 (1,2,3,4) - would work better as a 5-circle stream, flows tidier with the vocal in this section.
02:04 <ampzz> : From what my ears can pick up that is.
02:04 <aston> : http://puu.sh/cuN4 did this instead
02:05 <aston> : cause i can't really make a circle with .72x spacing
02:06 <ampzz> : Ohhh
02:06 <ampzz> : Works very nicely and looks sick as that ^
02:07 <ampzz> : Those were the only things I could pick up on for now, will have a look at it again tomorr.. when I wake up 'today'.

[Insane]:

00:18:981 (1,2,3) - Possibly add a beat at the (2) slider end to match up to the vocal audio cue so it doesn't feel like a void here, which then flows nicely into the (new 4, 5, 6). Done.
00:56:021 (6,7,8) - Doesn't make much sense if you go by the audio; the more notable segment here is the vocals. Create a new combo like you did with the [Normal] difficulty as that flowed smoothly. Done.
02:39:405 (1,2,3) - Add a circle in the 1/4 stanza marks on top of the sliders to follow the rhythm here more, like so - http://puu.sh/cGpr Done, changed some spacing to make it more viable.

[Hard]:

Increase Approach Rate to at least 7; 6 is too confusing and tedious for what is otherwise a fun difficulty, especially the streams. Done.
02:17:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - Drop the 5 at the end of this; turn 4 into a slider ending at 5's old location as it sounds more on cue with the 'dream' vocal sound. Done.

[Normal]

00:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - Removing the slider at 3 here and replacing it with a circle; having 4 start earlier at [00:16:098] repeating until [00:16:790] sounds better. Done.


If anyone is after the English translation for the vocals to this song, here they are:
SPOILER
Look up at the sky

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

A day passes, and so another
But the time inside me stays the same
People on the streets look happy
Only the light from the street lamp shines on me

I want to fly high into the sky
Like a bird
I'm going to run after
The rainbow inside of my heart

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back
Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run

One year passes, and so another
But the apperances inside me are same
I'm shut inside the time that stopped
So that it became a dawn where the stars slept

My heart beats- I want to love
Like the pretty flowers
I'm secretly going to love
With my shy heart

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run

If you ever get a thought that you're alone in this world,
Then shout with all your might towards the sky
Even if you fall when walking and walking,
Run run run, don't stop

Run run run, jumping high
The dark world is getting brighter
Run run run, jumping jump
You'll see the dreams that you wish for

Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream I won't look back
Everybody lalala remember dream
Forever dream don't give up run and run
Thanks for the mod o/---------------
Bang 💥🔫
Sync
General
-- You need to resnap all of your inherited timing sections on every single difficulty.
-- Combo colors are inconsistent. In Insane's .osu file, replace Combo3 : 83,169,255 with Combo3 : 0,128,192
-- The hitsounds should be raised in each difficulty. Really hard to hear ;_;
-- Make sure kiais are consistent throughout each difficulty (including the taiko)


Insane
01:30:636 (7) - New combo
01:30:867 (1) - Remove combo
02:16:790 (4) - Would make this a slider
02:18:637 (4) - would also make this a slider
02:18:867 (5) - Remove this hit circle; overmapping
02:39:751 (2) - Remove this hit circle
02:38:944 (4) - Make this into a 1 beat slider; remove overlapping notes (to better follow the vocals)
02:39:636 (5) - Add a hit circle here
03:00:867 (2) - Make this a single hit circle
03:01:098 (3) - Add a 1 beat slider here (to follow the vocals)
03:02:713 (2) - Remove slider, make into a hit circle etc
03:02:944 (3) - 1 beat slider etc (yeah)
03:08:252 (2,3) - Same deal here
03:10:097 (2,3) - ^

S.Nagi's Taikorun
-- Change slider velocity to 1.4 for authenticity (and 1.6 sucks)
-- Remove all slider velocity changes
-- Seek further modding from those who are experienced with taiko modding

Hard
00:29:251 (2) - Add a hit circle

Normal
00:08:944 (3) - Remove this slider, make it a hit circle
00:09:405 (4) - Make a 1-beat slider; delete overlapping hit circle
00:11:713 (4) - add a slider here to follow the vocals better. It gets pretty boring just waiting for the next note.
00:28:559 (4) - Make a one-beat slider here; delete overlapping hitcircle.
00:46:790 (7) - Add a hit circle
00:47:251 (8) - ^ (or make those two into a slider; either work)
00:46:790 (7) - Add a hitcircle
00:47:251 (8) - ^
00:48:175 (2,3) - Make these two hit circles into a slider. The tick makes it feel less empty, too.
01:12:867 (4) - Add a 1-beat slider here; delete overlapping hit circle
01:59:712 (8) - Remove repeat
02:00:175 (1) - Add a 1-beat slider; delete overlapping slider
02:00:867 (2) - ^
02:01:559 (3) - Remove this slider, add a hit circle
02:01:790 (4) - Add a hit circle
02:02:021 (5) - Add a one-beat slider here; delete overlapping slider
02:02:713 (6) - Add a one-beat slider here
02:44:021 (8,1,2,3) - I'd suggest doing the same thing here.
02:51:867 (3) - Make into a 1-beat slider; remove 4
02:53:021 (5) - Move two ticks forward (1/4)
03:02:251 (4) - Remove one repeat
03:03:405 (5) - Add a hit circle

Easy
02:26:021 (7) - Extend by 1/2 a beat
03:02:944 (7) - ^
03:05:713 (5) - ^

Looks like that's it. Hope I helped. Good luck and PM me whenever you want to deal with combos
Sanjenin Nagi

Sync wrote:

S.Nagi's Taikorun
-- Change slider velocity to 1.4 for authenticity (and 1.6 sucks) - ??? I made maps taiko 1.4 does not fit.
Have always been sticking to 1.6 do not intend to be modified.


-- Remove all slider velocity changes - Such as the above answer answer

-- Seek further modding from those who are experienced with taiko modding - Try to think and operate, but whenever trouble remembering to osu.
Sanjenin Nagi
Notes of the time close to the drift, has been fixed.

Download: SeeU - RUN (aston) [S.Nagi's Taikorun].osu
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