1. Cinnamon (4.98 stars, 571 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 446 notes)
3. Normal (2.78 stars, 231 notes)

1. 曲のMP３に名前ついてないんですが　これって大丈夫なんですかね　（もし、つけるとしたら　かなりめんどくさくなるので　無視で、　一様書いてみただけです）
2. 曲のフォルダのosb形式のやつが二つあるので　いらないほうを削除してください
3. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2 → 0 (私はたしか　これは最初から初めのobjectまでが合計で３秒くらいになればい気がしました）

1. 03:28:018 (2) - 被っていて見えない感じがします

1. AR-1.
2. 00:44:685 (3) - 1 grid up
3. 00:44:852 (4) - ^
4. 00:45:018 (5) - ^
5. 02:48:018 (1) - ^
6. 02:48:352 (2) - ^
7. 02:48:685 (3) - ^

-Gamu- wrote:

( ノﾟДﾟ)こんにちわ

[General]

1. 曲のMP３に名前ついてないんですが　これって大丈夫なんですかね　（もし、つけるとしたら　かなりめんどくさくなるので　無視で、　一様書いてみただけです） 気付かなかったです><; とりあえず修正無し
2. 曲のフォルダのosb形式のやつが二つあるので　いらないほうを削除してください　done
3. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2 → 0 (私はたしか　これは最初から初めのobjectまでが合計で３秒くらいになればい気がしました） 最初の@がSB注意のやつで隠れるので伸ばしてたんですが気になるようなので0にしました

ここから提案です

[Normal]

1. 03:28:018 (2) - 被っていて見えない感じがします

[Hard]

1. AR-1.
2. 00:44:685 (3) - 1 grid up
3. 00:44:852 (4) - ^
4. 00:45:018 (5) - ^
5. 02:48:018 (1) - ^
6. 02:48:352 (2) - ^
7. 02:48:685 (3) - ^

[Cinnamon]

[*]特にないです

All fixed

いい譜面です。そしてSBいい(ﾟдﾟ) thanks

あ、良かったら　今私未完成の曲があって　Hard diffがないんですよね　今Normalつくっていて
Hard diffつくってみませんか？　作らせていただきます！あまり期待しないでくださいね><;
曲はこちらです　→　http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36936

１分５０秒くらいの曲です　

あとフレンドいれました あい。私からも送りました
よろしくです　 　よろしくですー

くるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくるくる

1. BPM is fine, I got a offset : 4035 (+16 from yours), if you feel this timing is better, please change it, and once you changed it, remembered to resnap all notes, and make sure timing section is right on tick

1. 160 kbps mp3 is rare , it's usually use 128 kbps or 192 kbps mp3, just sayin, not a big deal though
2. I think the volume of all your diff. is too low, maybe you could raise it a bit, however it's depends on yourself

1. It's recommended that use 640x480 pixels picture as SB elements since it's the default size in SBE, 800x600 is fine though, you can use 640x480 next time.
2. I think you don't need lighting1-lighting5.png, since you can change the color of SB elements by write some code in osb file like:
   

   _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

   easing:
   0 - none
   1 - start fast and slow down
   2 - start slow and speed up
   
   starttime, endtime: the times in milliseconds between which the event will be animated
   
   r1, g1, b1: the starting component-wise colour
   r2, g2, b2: the finishing component-wise colour
   
   sprites with (255,255,255) will be their original colour. sprites with (0,0,0) will be totally black. anywhere in between will result in subtractive colouring. to make full use of this, brighter greyscale sprites work very well.
3. I found this code in the last part of your osb file
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
   F,0,214602,214685,0,1
   F,0,214685,216018,1,0
   F,0,216018,219935,0
   F,0,219935,220018,0,1
   F,0,220018,221352,1,0
   F,0,221352,222602,0
   F,0,222602,222685,0,1
   F,0,222685,224018,1,0
   F,0,224018,225268,0,0.006751716
   F,0,225268,225352,0.006751716,1
   F,0,225352,232018,1,0

   0.006751716 code for Fade is not a visable effect but would cost some SB load, you can change this coe to
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
   F,0,214602,214685,0,1
   F,0,214685,216018,1,0
   F,0,216018,219935,0
   F,0,219935,220018,0,1
   F,0,220018,221352,1,0
   F,0,221352,222602,0
   F,0,222602,222685,0,1
   F,0,222685,224018,1,0
   F,0,224018,225268,0
   F,0,225268,225352,0,1
   F,0,225352,232018,1,0

   anyway it's not a big deal, too
4. 02:20:034 - 02:24:534 - Oh, my... this part SB is...blind lol, it's fine since you enabled "display epilepsy warnning"

1. 00:11:868 (3) - How about add a finish here?
2. 00:14:701 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
3. 00:17:368 (6) - I feel 40% volume is a bit low, why not just keep 70% here?
4. 00:20:034 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
5. 00:22:701 (5) - I feel 40% volume is a bit low, why not just keep 70% here?
6. 00:25:368 (1) - Add finish?
7. 00:30:701 (4) - ^
8. 00:41:201 (1) - It's not recommended that use unusual spacing in a notmal diff. :/
9. 01:10:535 (3) - Add finish?
10. 01:13:368 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle?
11. 01:29:368 (3) - Add finish?
12. 01:39:868 (1) - Emm, stack here maybe confusing, I think put this slider out to a 1/2 beat spacing would better
13. 01:45:201 (1) - ^
14. 01:50:534 (1) - ^
15. 01:56:034 (1) - tiny spacing wrong, but oh well, it's acceptable, here note ends at a strange place, why here a break?
16. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section?
17. 02:46:701 (3,1,2,3) - I think this part might be confuse, consider use 1 note a one reverse slider to 02:46:701 (3), that may work better IMO
18. 02:49:368 - Drag break to here?
19. 03:00:035 (1) - 03:20:034 - The volume are way to low at this part
20. 03:34:618 - Useless timing section?

1. 00:11:868 (1) - Add finish?
2. 01:10:535 (1) - ^
3. 01:56:034 (1,2) - You can try make these 2 slider more neat, read here for more imformation
4. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section?
5. 02:20:034 (1) - Add finish?
6. 02:44:035 (1) - ^
7. 02:49:368 - Drag break to here?
8. 03:00:035 (1) - 03:20:034 - The volume are way to low at this part
9. 03:29:368 - KIAI start here seems better
10. 03:34:618 - Useless timing section?

1. Why use Cinnamon as diff. name? Use a name like insane is much easy to understrand the difficulty, it's not a big deal :/
2. 00:09:368 (8) - Add finish?
3. 00:23:868 (4) - Unexpected jump IMO
4. 00:25:368 (1) - Add finish?
5. 01:07:368 (6) - Consider new combo here since spacing changed
6. 01:08:034 (8) - Add finish?
7. 01:55:951 - I think 0.5xBPM is too slow, 0.75 is slow enough for this part
8. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section?
9. 02:25:284 - ^
10. 03:29:368 - KIAI starts here seems better

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. BPM is fine, I got a offset : 4035 (+16 from yours), if you feel this timing is better, please change it, and once you changed it, remembered to resnap all notes, and make sure timing section is right on tick change it

[General]

1. 160 kbps mp3 is rare , it's usually use 128 kbps or 192 kbps mp3, just sayin, not a big deal though change it
2. I think the volume of all your diff. is too low, maybe you could raise it a bit, however it's depends on yourself

[SB]

1. It's recommended that use 640x480 pixels picture as SB elements since it's the default size in SBE, 800x600 is fine though, you can use 640x480 next time. yeah! but, making map use the 800x600 (four maps) I can use 640x480 next time
2. I think you don't need lighting1-lighting5.png, since you can change the color of SB elements by write some code in osb file like:
   

   _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

   easing:
   0 - none
   1 - start fast and slow down
   2 - start slow and speed up
   
   starttime, endtime: the times in milliseconds between which the event will be animated
   
   r1, g1, b1: the starting component-wise colour
   r2, g2, b2: the finishing component-wise colour
   
   sprites with (255,255,255) will be their original colour. sprites with (0,0,0) will be totally black. anywhere in between will result in subtractive colouring. to make full use of this, brighter greyscale sprites work very well. WoW I don't know. use the next time! ( but it is difficult to make a color )
3. I found this code in the last part of your osb file
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
   F,0,214602,214685,0,1
   F,0,214685,216018,1,0
   F,0,216018,219935,0
   F,0,219935,220018,0,1
   F,0,220018,221352,1,0
   F,0,221352,222602,0
   F,0,222602,222685,0,1
   F,0,222685,224018,1,0
   F,0,224018,225268,0,0.006751716
   F,0,225268,225352,0.006751716,1
   F,0,225352,232018,1,0

   0.006751716 code for Fade is not a visable effect but would cost some SB load, you can change this coe to
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
   F,0,214602,214685,0,1
   F,0,214685,216018,1,0
   F,0,216018,219935,0
   F,0,219935,220018,0,1
   F,0,220018,221352,1,0
   F,0,221352,222602,0
   F,0,222602,222685,0,1
   F,0,222685,224018,1,0
   F,0,224018,225268,0
   F,0,225268,225352,0,1
   F,0,225352,232018,1,0

   anyway it's not a big deal, too change it
4. 02:20:034 - 02:24:534 - Oh, my... this part SB is...blind lol, it's fine since you enabled "display epilepsy warnning" yeah

[Normal]

1. 00:11:868 (3) - How about add a finish here?
2. 00:14:701 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
3. 00:17:368 (6) - I feel 40% volume is a bit low, why not just keep 70% here?
4. 00:20:034 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
5. 00:22:701 (5) - I feel 40% volume is a bit low, why not just keep 70% here?
6. 00:25:368 (1) - Add finish?
7. 00:30:701 (4) - ^
8. 00:41:201 (1) - It's not recommended that use unusual spacing in a notmal diff. :/ change it
9. 01:10:535 (3) - Add finish?
10. 01:13:368 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle?
11. 01:29:368 (3) - Add finish?
12. 01:39:868 (1) - Emm, stack here maybe confusing, I think put this slider out to a 1/2 beat spacing would better sorry, no change. because it is my favorite!
13. 01:45:201 (1) - ^ ^
14. 01:50:534 (1) - ^ ^
15. 01:56:034 (1) - tiny spacing wrong, but oh well, it's acceptable, here note ends at a strange place, why here a break? thanks and Since it was normal diff, the break was increased.(About 1-minute interval)
16. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section? volume change point. because volume change is one this side
17. 02:46:701 (3,1,2,3) - I think this part might be confuse, consider use 1 note a one reverse slider to 02:46:701 (3), that may work better IMO
18. 02:49:368 - Drag break to here?
19. 03:00:035 (1) - 03:20:034 - The volume are way to low at this part volume 10%up!
20. 03:34:618 - Useless timing section? volume change point. because volume change is one this side

[Hard]

1. 00:11:868 (1) - Add finish?
2. 01:10:535 (1) - ^
3. 01:56:034 (1,2) - You can try make these 2 slider more neat, read here for more imformation remake it!
4. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section? volume change point. because volume change is one this side
5. 02:20:034 (1) - Add finish?
6. 02:44:035 (1) - ^
7. 02:49:368 - Drag break to here?
8. 03:00:035 (1) - 03:20:034 - The volume are way to low at this part volume 10%up!
9. 03:29:368 - KIAI start here seems better
10. 03:34:618 - Useless timing section? volume change point. because volume change is one this side

[Cinnamon]

1. Why use Cinnamon as diff. name? Use a name like insane is much easy to understrand the difficulty, it's not a big deal :/ Sorry,no change diff name. because this name is my favorite!! (title:@=Cinnamon roll and Artist:OSTER project=FuwaFuwa Cinnamon)
2. 00:09:368 (8) - Add finish?
3. 00:23:868 (4) - Unexpected jump IMO Sorry, no change
4. 00:25:368 (1) - Add finish?
5. 01:07:368 (6) - Consider new combo here since spacing changed change it with 00:08:701
6. 01:08:034 (8) - Add finish?
7. 01:55:951 - I think 0.5xBPM is too slow, 0.75 is slow enough for this part Sorry, no change. because 02:06:368(BPM0.5x)to 02:06:701slider(BPM1.0x) speed change is my favorite!
8. 02:19:951 - Useless timing section? volume change point. because volume change is one this side
9. 02:25:284 - ^ ^
10. 03:29:368 - KIAI starts here seems better

You have no RANKed maps? yeah
This map is really nice!
2 star for you

Byakugan249 wrote:

Ok ur next

Normal:
00:13:685(2,3) - Aline it with (1)
01:02:685(1) - 2 grids left for the end point
01:08:018(1) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down for the end point
01:12:352(2,3) same as the 1st suggestion
01:19:352(2,3) 1 grid down for both

Hard:
00:16:185(5) - 2 grids right from there fix the spacing for the next slider.(7) is fine.
Other than that everything's good

Cinnamon:
u need to set the grid size to tiny to do this. ok~
00:07:352(3) - 1 grid down but keep the stack
00:26:018(3) - 1 grid down(set the grid size to tiny to do this)
00:27:352(3) - 2 grids up at the end point
01:06:018(3) - 2 grids right but keep the stack on the next note
03:27:018(6) - try to stack it with the end slider (7) and (1)
03:44:518(6) - 1 grid left(without distance snap)

I can't believe i heard un, deux, trois meaning 1,2,3 anyways Star and GL

Bobo wrote:

HIIII

Nice SB~!

Modded on request.

-Normal-

Why's the DS set to 0.0? always use the 0.8x DS. but Stack at the time of stack use the 0.0x DS!

01:12:034 - I'd lower this combo from the cieling.
01:56:034 - This doesn't seem timed to the rhythm. sorry, no change
02:34:701 - Move this up a couple grids.

-Hard-

01:02:701 - Delete new combo.
02:24:034 - Stack this combo? sorry, no change
03:33:368 - ^? sorry, no change

-Cinnamon-

Hmm, do not make hitsounds silent at any point in the song. why

02:01:034 (1, 2) - These don't seem to fit a rhythm. ok change it

Nice SB but the map itself needs a little work.
Doesn't mean the map is bad tho
Keep up the good work.

Raging Bull wrote:

Isn't it Megurine Luka?

Err no kds if it's right.

Raging Bull wrote:

Isn't it Megurine Luka?

Err no kds if it's right.

Breeze wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Isn't it Megurine Luka?

Err no kds if it's right.

Haha, Actually it's easily make this fault if you use Japanese input method
Since "ルカ" is by typing "ruka"
"lu" would be "ぅ" lol

Raging Bull wrote:

Is the title really just @? ._.

VocaloidTACU wrote:

Hi ~ modding is here ~ !

[General]

Cinnamon diff is so easy .. more harder XD this is my style!

[Nomal]
00:24:701 - add slider like http://puu.sh/6gFt　
00:40:368 (4,5) - maybe some nomal user do not pass this .
01:09:368 (5,6,7) - ^ sorry, no change
01:31:701 (1,2) - ^ sorry, no change
01:49:368 (7,1) - ^ no change because my favorite!
02:20:034 - ~ 02:24:284 - lazy o.o....... please remove just nomal diff 　what o.o?
03:29:074 - ~ 03:33:868 - ^ ^
03:46:701 (1) - hiding the previous one

So... nice diff

[Hard]
00:33:034 (5) - new combo sorry, no change
01:31:701 (5) - ^ sorry, no change
02:01:701 (2,3) - Symmetry this is ok?
03:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - too empty. add some beat. ok add beat!!!　It changes greatly
YEAH! THIS IS !!!!!

[Cinnamon]

AR -1 (9 is too much.) ok
low SV. no change ><
more add jump pattern


00:09:701 (2,3) - remake this. like http://puu.sh/6gGY　A part changed
00:13:368 (1,2,3) - change pattern. like http://puu.sh/6gH9
01:02:701 (1,2,3,4) - change beat. like http://puu.sh/6gMH make jump sorry, no change
01:05:284 - add circle here and 00:06:618 still wait. i think hold
01:08:201 (1,2,3) - change beat like http://puu.sh/6gN5 A part changed
01:31:868 (1,2,3,4) - make jump this part change it
02:21:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ only last 1,2,3,4 change the jump
02:24:868 - add circle
02:25:034 - ^
02:25:201 - ^
02:41:701 - ^ sorry, no change
02:42:034 - ^ sorry, no change
02:42:368 - ^ sorry, no change
03:00:035 (1,2,3,4) - too empty. add some beat. ok add beat!!!　It changes greatly
03:29:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make jump this part only last 1,2,3,4 change the jump
03:34:201 - add circle
03:34:368 - ^
03:34:534 - ^


done ..!

how awesome song !!!!

i'll give you star !

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Normal]
The spacing may be a bit small for me.. you can use 1.0x instead of it.but it's no problem you choose 0.8x.　sorry, use the 0.8xDS
00:21:368 (4) - 2 slider points in the middle, 2 grids up.
01:10:534 (6) - spacing?
01:11:368 (7) - ^
02:12:034 (2) - the 3rd (from left to right) slider point, 2 grids left. and the 4th , 1 grid down.
03:13:368 (1) - don't stack on the previous slider. why?
03:33:368 (4) - the last slider point, 1 grid down.


[Hard]
01:52:868 (1) - not seems nice.
02:35:868 (4) - :< the whole note is hidden. change it


[Cinnamon]
00:45:201 (5) - the top of the note is hidden..move it away..
01:28:034 (4) - ..seems bad
03:01:034 (6,7) - the change of the spacing is not clearly. try to increase the spacing more. spacing change it
03:02:368 (6,7) - ^
03:33:368 (1) - looks bad
-------------------------------------------------
the whole mapset is not bad~
Good luck

Neptunus wrote:

Hey Kosiga~
Normal:
00:11:868 (3) - suddenly rhythme changed in an normal would be tough for beginners, if you dont want to change the pattern then you could manage this simply by Newcombo this. change NC only
01:10:534 (6) - also here~ change NC only
00:47:951 - time line (Audio timing section) here should be at 00:48:034 - , since the hitsound bug being fixed. well, only suggestion here, up to U.~
01:12:034 (1) - such stack in a normal is not preferable, could you space out a little bit? sorry, no change
01:27:368 (1) - also here
01:39:868 (1,2) - also here and when it comes to this 01:39:868 (1) - it is even harder x.x sorry, no change because this is my favorite!!
01:50:534 (1) - also here sorry, no change because this is my favorite!!
to show this, 02:06:368 (1,2) - stuffs like these are more acceptable than the above.

Hard:
00:07:868 (4,1,2,3,4) - no, change please, and please bear in mind that this song has a BPM of 180, so this would be too hard even for a hard yeah
01:06:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also here and 02:45:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here yeah
00:14:035 (3) - HERE, I heard it was like "1 2 1" or am I wrong?? should it be "1 2 1" or "1 2 3"like the storyboard showed?? This is called　1,2,3!! no 1,2,1

00:17:201 (7) - Not preferable, not match the rhythme nor the vocal but only cause the draining of HP no change but add NC!(soft draining of HP)
00:22:534 (9) - also here no change but add NC!(soft draining of HP)
00:45:368 (1) - I suggest that you move this to 00:45:201 - and cancel the new combo of it and end it at 00:46:368 - change it


Cinnamon:
00:10:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack these more than a "straight line" please, that would be more exquisite
00:17:368 (1,2) - these two are off the vocal should be 00:17:201 - and 00:17:534 - and the following 3 and 4 should be at 00:18:201 - and 00:18:868 - sorry, no change because this matches me
01:21:368 (1) - should be 01:21:284 - I think sorry, no change because this matches me
02:02:701 (4,5,6) - NO，same rhythme but suddenly spaced out between 02:03:034 (5,6) - closer please

And thats it!
DELICIOUS STROYBOARD!
good luck on ranking!~

General

Disable Warning before gameplay plz , Can't see a note

Normal

1. 00:17:034 (5) - New Combo
   00:21:368 (4) - ^
   03:02:701 (3) - ^
   03:10:701 (3) - ^
   03:16:034 (3) - ^

Hard

1. 00:21:868 (7) - New Combo

Cinnamon Roll @

1. Can't find any mistake :3

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

General

Disable Warning before gameplay plz , Can't see a note +1000ms

Normal

1. 00:17:034 (5) - New Combo 00:17:368 NC
   00:21:368 (4) - ^ 00:22:701 NC
   03:02:701 (3) - ^
   03:10:701 (3) - ^
   03:16:034 (3) - ^

Hard

1. 00:21:868 (7) - New Combo

Cinnamon Roll @

1. Can't find any mistake :3

artpiggo wrote:

SB stuff:
There should be flash warning. song setup⇒Audio⇒Display epilepsy warning.(Finishing of a check)　Is anything in addition to it?
miku10.jpg for me, It should be circle instead of rectangular. Please still wait

cinnamon

01:23:701 (4) - whistle
01:54:368 (5) - ^ add and 01:54:034

hard

00:17:201 (1) - whistle at end
00:22:534 (1) - ^
00:45:201 (6) - ^

normal
fine

8.5/10 nice SB kuru kuru kuru lolz

Mustaash wrote:

kurukurukurukurukuru there's my mod

[General]

Offset : 1368 　no change
You have 2 files "Hatsune Miku & Kagamine Rin & Megurine Ruka - @ (kosiga).osb" remove one of them. fixed
I don't know why you don't map the full song.. It did not want to be over 4 minutes

[Cinnamon]

Set the Difficulty Setting like this : http://puu.sh/6GhI sorry, no change
00:12:368 (2) - Finish hitsound the beggining of Slider sorry, no change
00:12:868 (3) - Finish hitsound the whole slider sorry, no change
00:13:368 (1,2,3) - Whistle sorry, no change because weak for 1,2,3
00:14:201 - Add note sorry, no change
00:14:368 - Add Slider 1/2 with a reverse arrow. sorry, no change
00:23:868 (4) - New Combo because of spacing change it
01:54:701 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle sorry, no change
03:08:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Whistle the beggining of every slider you have. sorry, no change
03:18:201 (1,2) - Really confusing for the player sorry, no change

[Hard]

Approach Rate + 1 change it

By esthetic, move this slider 01:39:034 (7) - like this http://puu.sh/6Gih change it
01:54:701 (1,2,3,4) - OMG CONFUSION FOR A HARD. sorry I don't think so

Overall looks fine.

Can't take a look on the Normal diff, sorry.. yeah
Nice map

Ritaka wrote:

Mod by request.

[Normal]
I couldn't find much wrong here. Nice normal.

[Hard]
02:29:034 > New combo? fixed
02:45:368 > It may be better to turn this stream into a normal combo by removing (2) and (4). sorry, no change
03:02:034 - 03:02:701 > The spacing here seems a little off to me. Try this? change it
03:27:868 > You have some very nice sliders in this map, but this one is weird to me. You don't have to change it, but I suggest trying to do it another way. sorry I do not think. Thank you

[Cinnamon]
02:03:868 > Add a new combo. sorry, no change
02:04:034 > If you did ^, Remove this new combo. sorry, no change
02:06:368 > If you did ^, Add new combo. sorry, no change
02:06:701 > If you did ^, Remove new combo. sorry, no change
03:44:368 > (5) X:100 Y:164 change it
03:44:534 > (6) X:168 Y:164 change it

Overall, this map is a good challenge for beginners and those who are not.

keimntn wrote:

いい譜面ですな！
俺があんまり言ってもかえって良くないかもなので、ほんの少しです。modと言うよりadviceってかんじで・・・ どんどん言っちゃってください

・どのdiffも３分５０秒で終わっているので、使わない２０秒くらいを途中でフェードかけてカットすべきかもです。（03:52:868あたりがいいのでは？）
　oszファイルは小さい方が、ネット回線弱い人には嬉しいでしょうし・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・俺とかwwwwwwwwwww フェードかけてみました offsetもちょっとズレたみたいなので修正4035⇒4056ms
・Lead-inは不要かと 最初のnoteに被るので少し長くしています

Cinnamon
・00:08:034(1)~00:08:701(1)スキンによってはすごく見にくいかも？(01:06:701も) このままいってみますー

以上です。
くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠くる＠

star置いてくゼィ

karenying wrote:

Please set lead-in to 1000 of normal diff.
no kds

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
lead-in = 0 plz , I don't think this song need lead-in sorry, no change. because hide with the first note, I lengthen it
timing in Hard is different with other diffs　change it
hitsound is kinda quiet.. hitsound all diff change it

[Normal]
01:54:639 - I'm not sure silenced slider is rankble or not , I suggest you use default hitsound here and volume = 5% change it. I did not know that it became unrankble
02:04:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to x:272 y:344 , to make the circles stack better when playing , pay attention to later notes' spacing if you fix this change it

[Hard]
00:17:222 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/6Wjb I changed it into reference (I matched it with my style)
00:22:555 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^ ^
01:36:389 (7,1) - try this , follow the vocal better http://puu.sh/6Wk5 ok.change it
01:43:889 (4) - change to 2 sliders , 01:43:889 - 01:44:389 and 01:44:555 - 01:45:055 , sound better change it
01:54:639 - same as Normal change it
03:00:889 (3) - move to 03:00:972　 sorry,no change. because feel like not matching me
03:01:055 (4) - move to 03:01:222 , if you changed ^ plz change this one , too ^
03:47:389 (7) - end at 03:48:055 change it

[Cinnamon]
01:10:555 (1,2) - stack the end ? change it
01:54:639 - same as Normal change it
02:23:389 (3) - ctrl + r very nice kurukuru
03:29:722 (2) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:30:722 (1) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:31:722 (4) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:32:722 (3) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:33:389 (1,3) - ^ very nice kurukuru
all ctrl + r is for better flow yeah all change it

very good rhyme :3

shikyu wrote:

via mod queue, suggestions:
[Normal]
00:17:389 (1) - maybe lenghten 4 ticks ahead? sorry, no change
00:21:389 (4) - shorten 1 tick behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
00:41:222 (1) - suggestion, shorten 3 ticks behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
00:44:055 (4) - shorten 2 ticks behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
01:21:389 (1) - same suggestion as 00:17:389 no lengthen. but add slider,circle 01:23:389~01:23:722
01:37:055 (4) - NC change it
01:45:222 (1) - remove finish at start of slider, doesn't reaally fit the song sorry, i don't think so. I think fit a vocal
01:50:555 (1) - ^ ^
01:56:055 (1) - delete this note, I think it doesn't really good remove note. but add circle
02:20:055 (1,2,3) - lenghten 4 ticks ahead sorry, no change
02:26:722 (3) - remove whistle, add whistle at start of slider (4) hit sound change
02:28:055 (1) - add whistle at end of slider ^
3:29:389 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as02:20:055 sorry, no change

[Hard]
general : fix hitsounds, weird at some places all diffl hitsound change
00:16:722 (6) - remove whistle at start of slider ^
01:28:222 (2) - shorten 2 ticks behind change it
03:27:889 (4) - fix this slider change it. but this may not be good. If there is a good idea, please teach it

[Cinnamon]
02:34:222 (4) - too fast, move it 6 ticks ahead　Intentionally
I thinks it's good, but (same as hard) fix hitsounds all diffl hitsound change

that's all

biwako wrote:

こんにちは～
from queue~

[Normal]
00:33:055 (1) - finish削除 fixed
00:33:222 (2) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
01:23:722 (3) - スライダーの終わりにfinish追加 fixed
01:31:722 (1) - finish削除 fixed
01:31:889 (2) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
02:02:722 (3,1) - spacing 重なってるのでプレイしてみれば問題無しの場所にきます@@
02:20:055 (1) - ^ 0.84なので大丈夫かと思います
03:29:389 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H? BGと合ってるのは右回りですが、1番目のサビと逆にしています。とりあえず保留

[Hard]
02:06:389 (2) - スライダー速度x0.75　サークルに変更
02:24:222 (2,4) - Ctrl+H? ごめんなさい。no change
02:34:722 (1) - 始まりにfinish追加? ごめんなさい。no change
02:38:056 (4,5) - 1grid右 (Grid Level 4) fixed
03:33:555 (2,4) - Ctrl+H? ごめんなさい。no change

[Cinnamon]　spacing 全箇所見直しました。
00:05:389 (1) - Ctrl+R? fixed
00:11:222 (6) - 1grid右 (Grid Level 4) fixed
00:15:055 (2) - x:76,y:312に移動
00:38:389 (1) - x:252,y:320に移動?
01:04:055 (1) - Ctrl+R? fixed
01:31:889 (1) - 1grid下 (Grid Level 4)
02:20:055 (1) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
02:34:222 (4,5,6) - 4grid右&1grid下 (Grid Level 4)
03:06:055 (3,4) - 3grid下 (Grid Level 4)
03:16:055 (5) , 03:18:222 (1) new combo入れ替え ごめんさい。no change

くるくる@ω@ くるくる@ω@

terametis wrote:

こんにちわ！
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください！


[Normal]
00:12:555 (2)　　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか？ いただきます！ (with 01:10:555(1,2) )

SPOILER

00:34:555 (3)　　　　　　スライダーを短くしてノート追加してみてはどうでしょうか？ ごめんなさい no change です

SPOILER

01:18:339 (1)　　　　　　今までの流れ的にこちらの方がいい気がします。 ok.　fixed

SPOILER

01:33:222 (3)　　　　　　00:34:555と同じ感じに ごめんなさい no change です
02:04:555 (1)　　　　　　スライダー後に1/8拍後すぐにオブジェクトを置いてるパターンが00:13:389等入っているので、重ねてしまうかDSに則ったほうがいいと思います。 これは重ねて置いてあるとplayしたときズレていくのでこうしてあります。 play時にはこれで重なった状態です。

[Hard]
00:08:389 (4)　　　　　　このような配置はどうでしょうか？ ちょっと難しい？ok.change it!! (with 01:07:055(4) , 02:45:722(4) )

SPOILER

00:26:555 (1)　　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか。 一部変更。

SPOILER

01:52:889 (1)　　　　　　あまりリズムに合っていない気がします。このようなリズムはどうでしょうか いただきます。

SPOILER

[Cinnamon]
00:43:889 (1)　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか？ いただきます。

SPOILER

　

02:20:055 (1)~　　　　こんなくるくるの仕方はどうでしょうか? nice ＠くるくる＠　change it !! http://puu.sh/7By9

modと言うよりも違うリズムの提案になってしまいました・・・
殆ど僕の好みですので気に入ったところだけ参考にして頂ければ嬉しいです!
ランク化期待しています!　がんばってください
star~

kissfly wrote:

I think your map is very crowded.Espacially the distance between slider to oveplapped circle in all dif
But your SB is very good

Normal
Circle size - 1 Because of normal,you can - 1 size.Your circle is crowded sorry,no change. because once more crowded and I think a lower circle size
03:05:722 (2)~(5) bad overlapped.This unrankable ago,But I don't know today.And you can make (2)~(4) around slider (5) with a easy jump please let me suspend. Change any other good ideas
03:28:055 (2) do it better in order to aviod 03:29:389(1) overlapped it? please let me suspend. Change any other good ideas

Hard
Also crowded
01:55:389(3) one grid left.It's too closed too (2) not same as (1) fixed
02:19:389(3) Your SB + BG + circle(1)and(2) make the short slider disappear sorry, what do you mean? 3 slider ⇒ change circle?
02:24:055(1)~(4) I think your SB is fit with this,But the four short distance circle is interfered with SB.So you can make the four circles long distance ok. change it. use the DS about 1.4x
03:33:389(1)~(4) ~ ^
03:55:555(5) one grid down Parallel (3) 03:44:555(5) fixed

Cinnamon
This dif isn't crowded
00:07:055~00:08:899 you'd better remap it.Error distance.Your jump in 00:08:722(1) is right,But your distance in 00:08:055 is too short.So the jump in 00:08:722 is error.In one second,you change three time distance.And itn't from small to large ,it's from large to small to large.Strange ok. change it
00:37:555(6) Bad overlapped change it
01:06:555~01:07:389 the same as 00:07:055~00:08:899 change it
02:24:055(1)~(4) I kown.This time your SB is clockwise rotation in medium,Your circle can't clockwise rotation in medium too.Person's head will halo.The same to Hard dif change it?
03:01:222(7) one grid high fixed
03:05:222(6) make it like a Diamond？ ok. change it
03:33:389(1)~(4) is better.Because itn't in medium

In one word,a good song.It's my mod,Thank you

Samah wrote:

M4M:

[General]
Hitsounds are very quiet!
Storyboard is cute, but a little distracting in places. For a moment I thought the @ at the start was a spinner! @ hides when I make a spinner

[Normal]
01:39:055 (4,1) - I wouldn't hide the start of slider (1), because it's hard to tell that it's only half a beat difference. I look at the state of other people for a while (because I like this)
01:44:055 (7,1) - ^ ^
01:49:389 (7,1) - ^ ^
02:02:722 (3,1) - Spacing is wrong here. I'd suggest moving (1,2,3,4,5) away from the previous slider (3), or stack them under the end of it. let's play. 1,2,3,4,5 is slider (3) stack them under the end
03:06:722 (5) - This looks messy being hidden under (1,2,3,4). I suggest moving the other notes to either side of the slider like jumps. What kind of slider is it? I want to make it with a circle.　change it

[Hard]
00:17:055 (7,1) - Can't really tell that there is a whole beat between these. sorry, no change. I think that it is the tolerance level
00:22:389 (5,1) - ^ ^
Remove this timing point: 02:19:389 remove it

[Cinnamon]
01:10:555 (1,2) - Try to make these end at the same point, or spread them apart. ok. change it
02:27:889 (4,5,6,7) - The (4,5) shape is fine, but the (6) and (7) are too far apart. yaeh. but please let me suspend. because I cannot think about a good idea
Remove this timing point: 02:19:389 remove it

Nice maps.

1. メモ帳で.osuを開いてAudioLeadInを1000にしてください。これだけ1004でした
2. 02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います
3. 03:33:389 (4) - ^
4. 03:48:055 (1) - 03:50:722で終了？
   もしこのままがいいなら最後の大きなfinish音が変に感じるので最後を普通に10%にした方がいいかもです

1. 00:09:389 (6) - new combo
2. 02:19:389 (3) - これはhitburstのせいでスキンデフォだとsilderのrepeatの矢印が見えない(これはunrankable)
   それにrepeat自体も見えにくい感じなので良く見えるように配置しなおす必要がありますorz
3. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に

1. 03:01:222 (7) - 細かいことですがmove 1 grid left
2. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に

banvi wrote:

クルクル@w@　　くるくる@w@
[Normal]

1. メモ帳で.osuを開いてAudioLeadInを1000にしてください。これだけ1004でした fixed
2. 02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
3. 03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^
4. 03:48:055 (1) - 03:50:722で終了？ ok.終了時間変更しました
   もしこのままがいいなら最後の大きなfinish音が変に感じるので最後を普通に10%にした方がいいかもです

[Hard]

1. 00:09:389 (6) - new combo fixed
2. 02:19:389 (3) - これはhitburstのせいでスキンデフォだとsilderのrepeatの矢印が見えない(これはunrankable)
   それにrepeat自体も見えにくい感じなので良く見えるように配置しなおす必要がありますorz Hard、Cinnamon diff　合わせて見直しました！
3. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に fixed

[シナモン]

1. 03:01:222 (7) - 細かいことですがmove 1 grid left fixed
2. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に ^

こ…これはかなり良い譜面だと思います！SBもすばらしい
はやくrankされるべきです 頑張ります ><;;（いつになることやらですが )

kosiga wrote:

[Normal]
[*]02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
[*]03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^

banvi wrote:

kosiga wrote:

[Normal]
[*]02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
[*]03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^

おうふ…分かりにくくてすみません><
多分なかなかonline行けないと思うのでここで書いときますorz

http://puu.sh/8RBV

こういう風にsilderの真ん中が縦軸に来るように置く感じです
この方が見た目的にいいかなあと思いました

Takos wrote:

Modding queueから来ましたが見るところがありませんでした！
☆置いていきます、ランクファイトです・・・！