wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
lead-in = 0 plz , I don't think this song need lead-in sorry, no change. because hide with the first note, I lengthen it
timing in Hard is different with other diffs　change it
hitsound is kinda quiet.. hitsound all diff change it

[Normal]
01:54:639 - I'm not sure silenced slider is rankble or not , I suggest you use default hitsound here and volume = 5% change it. I did not know that it became unrankble
02:04:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to x:272 y:344 , to make the circles stack better when playing , pay attention to later notes' spacing if you fix this change it

[Hard]
00:17:222 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/6Wjb I changed it into reference (I matched it with my style)
00:22:555 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:389 (1) - ^ ^
01:36:389 (7,1) - try this , follow the vocal better http://puu.sh/6Wk5 ok.change it
01:43:889 (4) - change to 2 sliders , 01:43:889 - 01:44:389 and 01:44:555 - 01:45:055 , sound better change it
01:54:639 - same as Normal change it
03:00:889 (3) - move to 03:00:972　 sorry,no change. because feel like not matching me
03:01:055 (4) - move to 03:01:222 , if you changed ^ plz change this one , too ^
03:47:389 (7) - end at 03:48:055 change it

[Cinnamon]
01:10:555 (1,2) - stack the end ? change it
01:54:639 - same as Normal change it
02:23:389 (3) - ctrl + r very nice kurukuru
03:29:722 (2) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:30:722 (1) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:31:722 (4) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:32:722 (3) - ^ very nice kurukuru
03:33:389 (1,3) - ^ very nice kurukuru
all ctrl + r is for better flow yeah all change it

very good rhyme :3

shikyu wrote:

via mod queue, suggestions:
[Normal]
00:17:389 (1) - maybe lenghten 4 ticks ahead? sorry, no change
00:21:389 (4) - shorten 1 tick behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
00:41:222 (1) - suggestion, shorten 3 ticks behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
00:44:055 (4) - shorten 2 ticks behind, add 1 repeat sorry, no change
01:21:389 (1) - same suggestion as 00:17:389 no lengthen. but add slider,circle 01:23:389~01:23:722
01:37:055 (4) - NC change it
01:45:222 (1) - remove finish at start of slider, doesn't reaally fit the song sorry, i don't think so. I think fit a vocal
01:50:555 (1) - ^ ^
01:56:055 (1) - delete this note, I think it doesn't really good remove note. but add circle
02:20:055 (1,2,3) - lenghten 4 ticks ahead sorry, no change
02:26:722 (3) - remove whistle, add whistle at start of slider (4) hit sound change
02:28:055 (1) - add whistle at end of slider ^
3:29:389 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as02:20:055 sorry, no change

[Hard]
general : fix hitsounds, weird at some places all diffl hitsound change
00:16:722 (6) - remove whistle at start of slider ^
01:28:222 (2) - shorten 2 ticks behind change it
03:27:889 (4) - fix this slider change it. but this may not be good. If there is a good idea, please teach it

[Cinnamon]
02:34:222 (4) - too fast, move it 6 ticks ahead　Intentionally
I thinks it's good, but (same as hard) fix hitsounds all diffl hitsound change

that's all

biwako wrote:

こんにちは～
from queue~

[Normal]
00:33:055 (1) - finish削除 fixed
00:33:222 (2) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
01:23:722 (3) - スライダーの終わりにfinish追加 fixed
01:31:722 (1) - finish削除 fixed
01:31:889 (2) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
02:02:722 (3,1) - spacing 重なってるのでプレイしてみれば問題無しの場所にきます@@
02:20:055 (1) - ^ 0.84なので大丈夫かと思います
03:29:389 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H? BGと合ってるのは右回りですが、1番目のサビと逆にしています。とりあえず保留

[Hard]
02:06:389 (2) - スライダー速度x0.75　サークルに変更
02:24:222 (2,4) - Ctrl+H? ごめんなさい。no change
02:34:722 (1) - 始まりにfinish追加? ごめんなさい。no change
02:38:056 (4,5) - 1grid右 (Grid Level 4) fixed
03:33:555 (2,4) - Ctrl+H? ごめんなさい。no change

[Cinnamon]　spacing 全箇所見直しました。
00:05:389 (1) - Ctrl+R? fixed
00:11:222 (6) - 1grid右 (Grid Level 4) fixed
00:15:055 (2) - x:76,y:312に移動
00:38:389 (1) - x:252,y:320に移動?
01:04:055 (1) - Ctrl+R? fixed
01:31:889 (1) - 1grid下 (Grid Level 4)
02:20:055 (1) - 始まりにfinish追加 fixed
02:34:222 (4,5,6) - 4grid右&1grid下 (Grid Level 4)
03:06:055 (3,4) - 3grid下 (Grid Level 4)
03:16:055 (5) , 03:18:222 (1) new combo入れ替え ごめんさい。no change

くるくる@ω@ くるくる@ω@

terametis wrote:

こんにちわ！
以下は全て提案です。気に入らなければスルーしてください！


[Normal]
00:12:555 (2)　　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか？ いただきます！ (with 01:10:555(1,2) )

SPOILER

00:34:555 (3)　　　　　　スライダーを短くしてノート追加してみてはどうでしょうか？ ごめんなさい no change です

SPOILER

01:18:339 (1)　　　　　　今までの流れ的にこちらの方がいい気がします。 ok.　fixed

SPOILER

01:33:222 (3)　　　　　　00:34:555と同じ感じに ごめんなさい no change です
02:04:555 (1)　　　　　　スライダー後に1/8拍後すぐにオブジェクトを置いてるパターンが00:13:389等入っているので、重ねてしまうかDSに則ったほうがいいと思います。 これは重ねて置いてあるとplayしたときズレていくのでこうしてあります。 play時にはこれで重なった状態です。

[Hard]
00:08:389 (4)　　　　　　このような配置はどうでしょうか？ ちょっと難しい？ok.change it!! (with 01:07:055(4) , 02:45:722(4) )

SPOILER

00:26:555 (1)　　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか。 一部変更。

SPOILER

01:52:889 (1)　　　　　　あまりリズムに合っていない気がします。このようなリズムはどうでしょうか いただきます。

SPOILER

[Cinnamon]
00:43:889 (1)　　　　　このリズムはどうでしょうか？ いただきます。

SPOILER

　

02:20:055 (1)~　　　　こんなくるくるの仕方はどうでしょうか? nice ＠くるくる＠　change it !! http://puu.sh/7By9

modと言うよりも違うリズムの提案になってしまいました・・・
殆ど僕の好みですので気に入ったところだけ参考にして頂ければ嬉しいです!
ランク化期待しています!　がんばってください
star~

kissfly wrote:

I think your map is very crowded.Espacially the distance between slider to oveplapped circle in all dif
But your SB is very good

Normal
Circle size - 1 Because of normal,you can - 1 size.Your circle is crowded sorry,no change. because once more crowded and I think a lower circle size
03:05:722 (2)~(5) bad overlapped.This unrankable ago,But I don't know today.And you can make (2)~(4) around slider (5) with a easy jump please let me suspend. Change any other good ideas
03:28:055 (2) do it better in order to aviod 03:29:389(1) overlapped it? please let me suspend. Change any other good ideas

Hard
Also crowded
01:55:389(3) one grid left.It's too closed too (2) not same as (1) fixed
02:19:389(3) Your SB + BG + circle(1)and(2) make the short slider disappear sorry, what do you mean? 3 slider ⇒ change circle?
02:24:055(1)~(4) I think your SB is fit with this,But the four short distance circle is interfered with SB.So you can make the four circles long distance ok. change it. use the DS about 1.4x
03:33:389(1)~(4) ~ ^
03:55:555(5) one grid down Parallel (3) 03:44:555(5) fixed

Cinnamon
This dif isn't crowded
00:07:055~00:08:899 you'd better remap it.Error distance.Your jump in 00:08:722(1) is right,But your distance in 00:08:055 is too short.So the jump in 00:08:722 is error.In one second,you change three time distance.And itn't from small to large ,it's from large to small to large.Strange ok. change it
00:37:555(6) Bad overlapped change it
01:06:555~01:07:389 the same as 00:07:055~00:08:899 change it
02:24:055(1)~(4) I kown.This time your SB is clockwise rotation in medium,Your circle can't clockwise rotation in medium too.Person's head will halo.The same to Hard dif change it?
03:01:222(7) one grid high fixed
03:05:222(6) make it like a Diamond？ ok. change it
03:33:389(1)~(4) is better.Because itn't in medium

In one word,a good song.It's my mod,Thank you

Samah wrote:

M4M:

[General]
Hitsounds are very quiet!
Storyboard is cute, but a little distracting in places. For a moment I thought the @ at the start was a spinner! @ hides when I make a spinner

[Normal]
01:39:055 (4,1) - I wouldn't hide the start of slider (1), because it's hard to tell that it's only half a beat difference. I look at the state of other people for a while (because I like this)
01:44:055 (7,1) - ^ ^
01:49:389 (7,1) - ^ ^
02:02:722 (3,1) - Spacing is wrong here. I'd suggest moving (1,2,3,4,5) away from the previous slider (3), or stack them under the end of it. let's play. 1,2,3,4,5 is slider (3) stack them under the end
03:06:722 (5) - This looks messy being hidden under (1,2,3,4). I suggest moving the other notes to either side of the slider like jumps. What kind of slider is it? I want to make it with a circle.　change it

[Hard]
00:17:055 (7,1) - Can't really tell that there is a whole beat between these. sorry, no change. I think that it is the tolerance level
00:22:389 (5,1) - ^ ^
Remove this timing point: 02:19:389 remove it

[Cinnamon]
01:10:555 (1,2) - Try to make these end at the same point, or spread them apart. ok. change it
02:27:889 (4,5,6,7) - The (4,5) shape is fine, but the (6) and (7) are too far apart. yaeh. but please let me suspend. because I cannot think about a good idea
Remove this timing point: 02:19:389 remove it

Nice maps.

1. メモ帳で.osuを開いてAudioLeadInを1000にしてください。これだけ1004でした
2. 02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います
3. 03:33:389 (4) - ^
4. 03:48:055 (1) - 03:50:722で終了？
   もしこのままがいいなら最後の大きなfinish音が変に感じるので最後を普通に10%にした方がいいかもです

1. 00:09:389 (6) - new combo
2. 02:19:389 (3) - これはhitburstのせいでスキンデフォだとsilderのrepeatの矢印が見えない(これはunrankable)
   それにrepeat自体も見えにくい感じなので良く見えるように配置しなおす必要がありますorz
3. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に

1. 03:01:222 (7) - 細かいことですがmove 1 grid left
2. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に

banvi wrote:

クルクル@w@　　くるくる@w@
[Normal]

1. メモ帳で.osuを開いてAudioLeadInを1000にしてください。これだけ1004でした fixed
2. 02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
3. 03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^
4. 03:48:055 (1) - 03:50:722で終了？ ok.終了時間変更しました
   もしこのままがいいなら最後の大きなfinish音が変に感じるので最後を普通に10%にした方がいいかもです

[Hard]

1. 00:09:389 (6) - new combo fixed
2. 02:19:389 (3) - これはhitburstのせいでスキンデフォだとsilderのrepeatの矢印が見えない(これはunrankable)
   それにrepeat自体も見えにくい感じなので良く見えるように配置しなおす必要がありますorz Hard、Cinnamon diff　合わせて見直しました！
3. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に fixed

[シナモン]

1. 03:01:222 (7) - 細かいことですがmove 1 grid left fixed
2. 03:48:055 (1) - [Normal]と同様に ^

こ…これはかなり良い譜面だと思います！SBもすばらしい
はやくrankされるべきです 頑張ります ><;;（いつになることやらですが )

kosiga wrote:

[Normal]
[*]02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
[*]03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^

banvi wrote:

kosiga wrote:

[Normal]
[*]02:24:055 (4) - y軸対称に置いた方がいいと思います すいません、y軸対称というのがいまいちわかりません (02:21:389 (2) - と対称？02:22:722 (3) - のスライダー頭に4のendを合わせる？) 申し訳ありません。多分ゲーム内PMで聞きます。
[*]03:33:389 (4) - ^ ^

おうふ…分かりにくくてすみません><
多分なかなかonline行けないと思うのでここで書いときますorz

http://puu.sh/8RBV

こういう風にsilderの真ん中が縦軸に来るように置く感じです
この方が見た目的にいいかなあと思いました

Takos wrote:

Modding queueから来ましたが見るところがありませんでした！
☆置いていきます、ランクファイトです・・・！

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

fine

Hard:

00:08:139 (2) - maybe remove this note? It might be a bit hard for a [Hard], and it's one of only a few streams ok~ change it.
01:06:806 (2) - ^ ok~ change it.
02:26:555 (1) - maybe this? http://puu.sh/adln IMO, it fits better good idea. but I like this rhythm sorry...
02:45:472 (2) - same as 00:08:139 (2) ok~ change it.
03:35:889 (1) - same as 02:26:555 (1) sorry, no change ><

Cinnamon:

01:43:889 (6,7) - woah, IMO this doesn't fit that well... Maybe you could map this as you did before. http://puu.sh/adnu nice idea @@! change it~~

nice map

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:54:389 (6) - New combo.
01:56:055 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed[/color]

[Hard]

01:50:222 (5) - Kinda nazi: 1 grid left with using grid level 4. fixed

[Cinnamon]

00:24:555 (4) - Make it linear, it looks weird like that. fixed? Does the meaning match?
01:44:889 (5,1) - Spacing, too close. fixed spacing 1.0x [/color]

Good map!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Alright, let's give this a try.

Bubbled~

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

1. sb\wing04.png is not used, have you forgot to use it? If it's useless, delete it and then full-submit I forgot to turn off remove it
2. lighting1-lighting5 are needless, remember, you can use code to change color, I've done this for, just delete lighting1.png, lighting3.png, lighting4.png, lighting5.png and use this osb I understand ↓ thank you
   [attachment=0:79d2e]Hatsune Miku & Kagamine Rin & Megurine Luka - @ (kosiga).osb[/attachment:79d2e]
3. The default size of SBE is 640x480, so use 640x480 is just a fullscreen image, no need to do any scale, if you don't want to change your 800x600 images, keep in mind in next time you making SB then(It seems I've said this when I first time mod this map :p) I understand :3 I use caution when making the next SB

Send me a forum PM for recheck when you done changes

Breeze wrote:

Nice SB and map, SB looked kinda blind though haha, if you can make your SB fit song well but doesn't effect play at all, that would be more perfect
Anyway, RANKED!

VocaloidTACU wrote:

OME ~

Patchouli wrote:

kosigaさんの時代がきている・・・！おめでとう！

Jacob wrote:

kuru kuru kuru kuru