1. Collab do Prazer (4,25 stars, 537 notes)
2. Medio (1,87 stars, 251 notes)
3. MkGuh feat. Marianna Dificil (3,05 stars, 401 notes)

ezek wrote:

oh you did it

Net0 wrote:

Mapset pronto nem acredito :O

1. The dark brown combo color doesn't make good contrast with the bg sometimes, I suggest using something brighter.

1. 00:19:283 (5,1) - I see you're using a slider velocity change, which also causes a change in the spacing. In (1) I suggest to use the previous spacing instead to start right away with the new one, so this part is more intuitive to play and don't pick players by surprise. Most players will know the spacing will be different after feeling a different sv. The current way may be throwing off and make players think they have to click faster.
2. 00:48:852 (2,3) - 02:02:233 (4) - 02:17:772 (1,2) - 02:20:362 (4,1) - 02:35:254 (2,3) - 02:51:873 (2,3) - Improve blankets
3. 01:19:067 - Important note where the chorus/kiai begins, I highly suggest to make it clickable. You did at the second time it happened 02:28:132 (1) - . Also 01:29:427 (1) - is an equivalent from what I hear.
4. 02:05:686 (4) - You're touching the life bar on the default skin.
5. 02:50:578 - This beat is VERY outstanding, I'd say it must be clickable.
6. 02:54:031 (1,2,3) - You may wanna take a second glance at that alignment.

1. 00:04:823 (1) - I think you should add a hitsound here.
2. 00:12:593 (3,4,1) - Let's analyze this pattern. There's a jump between (3) and (4), which is fine because they get proper emphasis for being stronger than other previous notes. However, the transition between (4) and (1) covers a stronger beat, and yet uses regular spacing rather than a jump, why is that? I suggest either an equal jump (for emphasis consistency) or a bigger jump (to highlight that is stronger than the previous beats with jumps). I'd go for the second option.
3. 00:18:204 (4,1) - This overlap doesn't look nice and could be easily avoided.
4. 00:37:628 (1,5) - fix stack
5. 01:00:075 (1,2,3,4) - You have a main spacing of 1.1x while between these objects you use 0.99x, this is caused by the stacking, so you can disable distance snap and adjust the spacing manually. Keep this in mind all the time while you map using stacks, it happens all the time, there are more things like this in the map, but won't be pointing them out since they're minor. I expect you to fix some more.
6. 01:02:233 (2,1) - fix stack and also watch out with the blanket
7. 01:38:060 (1) - it would be nice if you could make the curve smoother
8. 02:19:067 (4,1) - stack is not perfect

1. 00:30:075 (5,1) - Improve blanket
2. 01:17:988 (3) - The pattern would look neater if this was more in the middle of the sliders and forming a triangle, like this, and also if 01:17:772 (2,1) - were stacked.
3. 01:19:931 (4,5) - I feel the jump is too big, maybe ask for opinions, I'm not very sure.
4. 01:29:211 (8) - I suggest to move this note to x119 y249 so 01:29:427 (1) - this gets a nice highlight with a jump. (Since it involves the transition with MkGuh's part, perhaps you should talk about it with him).
5. 02:27:269 (4,1) - stack can be improved

1. 00:04:823 - Why there's no note here? You added one in the previous diff.
2. 00:12:593 (1,2,1,2) - I believe these jumps are overdone, you should reduce them so there's more contrast with more important jumps like 00:16:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

1. 00:39:787 (3,4) - fix stack in the slider tails
2. 00:43:672 (3) - slider repeats shouldn't be hidden

1. 01:06:334 (4,5) - you could make a nice blanket here
2. 01:08:708 - The beat/vocal here is very strong, I highly suggest to map it as a clickable object for the emphasis it deserves.

1. 01:35:902 (5,1) - improve blanket

1. 02:03:096 (4,6) - Fix stack, on a side note, I find the pattern a bit tough to read, but maybe it's just me.
2. 02:08:276 (4,5,6) - 02:18:420 (2,3) - improve blanket
3. 02:22:521 (4,5,1) - maybe make them more aligned?

1. 02:24:679 (1,2,3) - Taking in account the last note from Lumael's part, you're making a semi-straight line that doesn't flow very well if you ask me. Also, there is not constrast or representation being made when the vocals appear at 02:24:895 (2,3) - . This is my suggestion.
2. 02:27:269 (2,4) - improve blanket pls
3. 02:29:751 (6) - This spacing for 1/4 is quite tricky since it wasn't used this way before in the map.
4. 02:33:096 (8,1) - This jump feel overdone, I suggest reducing it by half.

ezek wrote:

[MkGuh feat. Marianna Dificil]
Marianna

1. 00:30:075 (5,1) - Improve blanket ERRRRRR.... Okay nazi applied!
2. 01:17:988 (3) - The pattern would look neater if this was more in the middle of the sliders and forming a triangle, like this, and also if 01:17:772 (2,1) - were stacked. C'mon dude... Really about the stack? XD It is not even seen in gameplay. Fixed the triangle.
3. 01:19:931 (4,5) - I feel the jump is too big, maybe ask for opinions, I'm not very sure. Yes, it is.
4. 01:29:211 (8) - I suggest to move this note to x119 y249 so 01:29:427 (1) - this gets a nice highlight with a jump. (Since it involves the transition with MkGuh's part, perhaps you should talk about it with him). k
5. 02:27:269 (4,1) - stack can be improved It is already improved and again, it is a stack only ;B

Feel free to call me back for a recheck after you get 3-4 more mods~ that's great MkGuh's, Marianna's, Kuron's, Kalindraz's and Lumael's parts have been adressed already! Only missing Ataraxia...

Ataraxia wrote:

this will be a reply soon

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