From my Queue,
[General]
➱Unused storyboard file: sb\bg.jpg
➱Inconsistency in Kiai time: Fourth kiai in all the difficulties should all start on 01:32:410 and ends at 01:34:589. However, only the insane difficulty ends it at 01:34:672
➱Consider adding "Deppy" and “Link” to all of your tags as well.
➱background image is 1920x1080, but the recommended size is 1024x768.
➱BPM before 00:03:583- may not be consistent with the overall BPM as the second and third sounds by the vocal should be snapped in ⅛ with this BPM.
[Link's Easy]
➱00:38:947 (4) - This one lands in red tick. Will it be confusing considering it is the difficulty for the new players? Why not make it like what you did in 00:30:400 (3) - a 1/1 reverse slider? Or if you want variety, a circle plus a 1/1 slider is also okay.
➱00:41:629 (4) - This one however, I think you can change it so it starts from 00:41:460- and ends at what it currently ends at. So that you can still keep a similar rhythm while making 00:42:299 (1) - more natural to hit.
➱01:02:411 (2) - I recommend changing this slider to a circle at 01:02:242- and a 1/1 slider at 01:02:577- . That way this would not be too awkward and still performing a good rhythm.
➱01:10:288 (3,1) - Fix blanket. Slightly.
➱01:38:611 (2) - Too much turning point is being used. Which makes it actually not a perfect curve. I think something like this is enough:
➱01:51:851 (3,4) - These two sliders’ placement are badly designed when the first three kick sliders are pointing to the left. Consider making it so that 4 can also point in that way.
[Normal]
➱00:04:589 (3,4,5) - The pattern is crowdy for normal difficulty. It can confuse players.
➱00:06:265 (6) - You should better start the NC here instead of 00:07:438 (1) -
➱00:25:036 (7) - Move this so that it forms the angle with (6) just like what the previous two sliders (5) and (6) forms.
➱00:36:432 (7) - consider rotating it using Ctrl+Shift+R, selection centre, 90°. This should make your feature pattern more representative.
➱00:43:807 (2,3,4) - This seems crowded again, and 00:44:477 (4) - is not parallel with 00:43:807 (2) - too, which may make it a bit weird.
➱01:12:801 (1) - consider Ctrl+G this and make it distance snap again. Having the direction of the slider pointing directly opposite to the next note is not recommended for a normal difficulty.
➱01:16:656 (3) - I prefer a curve slider here.
➱01:17:829 (6,7,8) - Crowded pattern just as 00:04:589 (3,4,5) - . Maybe overlay (7) to (8).
➱01:21:348 (1,2,3) - Seriously too crowded.
➱01:27:717 (4,5) - Again, overlay them.
➱01:50:175 (4) - Same as 00:25:036 (7) -
➱01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - Consider changing the design of these.
[Deppy's Advanced]
➱00:09:617 (1,2) - Feel like they can definitely be better placed.
➱00:32:075 (1) - This slider can be done better as well.
➱00:33:751 (4,1) - Very bad overlapping of sliders.
➱00:44:477 (4,1) - Again.
➱01:12:801 (1,2,3) - Too close to the corner?
➱01:15:985 (1) - Make this a 4/1 reverse slider just like what you did in 01:26:712 (1) -
➱01:21:348 (1,2) - Bad overlapping
➱01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - A L-shaped circle quadruple is not good as it looks like 2010, a C-shaped should do.
➱01:28:220 (3,4) - Bad incline angle for (4)
➱01:49:505 (2,3,4) - Move the whole pattern downwards to allow 4 to have the same angle formed by 01:49:505 (2,3) -
[GIDZ's Hard]
➱00:06:265 (1,2) - Make the slider shapes of these to 00:03:583 (1,2) - , or vice versa. It allows to be curved because the vocal swings.
➱00:15:985 (3) - Fix the placement of it.
➱00:47:829 (1) - I feel like you can move this to a lower position.
➱00:50:343 (6,1) - Is there a reason to overlap them? Why not make them as separate as in 00:55:706 (6,1) - ?
➱00:52:522 (5,6,1) - Also here.
➱00:58:220 (6,1) - You should not overlay them as most of the other overlays are 1/2s and 1/4s, but not 1/1.
➱01:09:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it should be better if you do something like:
➱01:12:801 (7) - NC this. Keep the NC at 01:13:304 (1) - by the way.
➱01:20:678 (3) - Unsnapped slider end!!
➱01:29:058 (6,1) - Again, you should not overlay them like this.
➱01:32:075 (1,2) - Also here.
➱01:39:449 (4,5) - Why not make (5) just like (4)?
[Starfy's Light Insane]
➱00:02:242 (1,1) - As mentioned on the General part, they should be snapped to ⅛ or just change the BPM.
➱00:32:075 (2) - You should better end this slider at 00:32:577-
➱00:42:801 (2) - Also here.
➱01:16:991 (6,1) - Move (6) lower, or move (1) higher.
That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset
[General]
➱Unused storyboard file: sb\bg.jpg
➱Inconsistency in Kiai time: Fourth kiai in all the difficulties should all start on 01:32:410 and ends at 01:34:589. However, only the insane difficulty ends it at 01:34:672
➱Consider adding "Deppy" and “Link” to all of your tags as well.
➱background image is 1920x1080, but the recommended size is 1024x768.
➱BPM before 00:03:583- may not be consistent with the overall BPM as the second and third sounds by the vocal should be snapped in ⅛ with this BPM.
[Link's Easy]
➱00:38:947 (4) - This one lands in red tick. Will it be confusing considering it is the difficulty for the new players? Why not make it like what you did in 00:30:400 (3) - a 1/1 reverse slider? Or if you want variety, a circle plus a 1/1 slider is also okay.
➱00:41:629 (4) - This one however, I think you can change it so it starts from 00:41:460- and ends at what it currently ends at. So that you can still keep a similar rhythm while making 00:42:299 (1) - more natural to hit.
➱01:02:411 (2) - I recommend changing this slider to a circle at 01:02:242- and a 1/1 slider at 01:02:577- . That way this would not be too awkward and still performing a good rhythm.
➱01:10:288 (3,1) - Fix blanket. Slightly.
➱01:38:611 (2) - Too much turning point is being used. Which makes it actually not a perfect curve. I think something like this is enough:
➱01:51:851 (3,4) - These two sliders’ placement are badly designed when the first three kick sliders are pointing to the left. Consider making it so that 4 can also point in that way.
[Normal]
➱00:04:589 (3,4,5) - The pattern is crowdy for normal difficulty. It can confuse players.
➱00:06:265 (6) - You should better start the NC here instead of 00:07:438 (1) -
➱00:25:036 (7) - Move this so that it forms the angle with (6) just like what the previous two sliders (5) and (6) forms.
➱00:36:432 (7) - consider rotating it using Ctrl+Shift+R, selection centre, 90°. This should make your feature pattern more representative.
➱00:43:807 (2,3,4) - This seems crowded again, and 00:44:477 (4) - is not parallel with 00:43:807 (2) - too, which may make it a bit weird.
➱01:12:801 (1) - consider Ctrl+G this and make it distance snap again. Having the direction of the slider pointing directly opposite to the next note is not recommended for a normal difficulty.
➱01:16:656 (3) - I prefer a curve slider here.
➱01:17:829 (6,7,8) - Crowded pattern just as 00:04:589 (3,4,5) - . Maybe overlay (7) to (8).
➱01:21:348 (1,2,3) - Seriously too crowded.
➱01:27:717 (4,5) - Again, overlay them.
➱01:50:175 (4) - Same as 00:25:036 (7) -
➱01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - Consider changing the design of these.
[Deppy's Advanced]
➱00:09:617 (1,2) - Feel like they can definitely be better placed.
➱00:32:075 (1) - This slider can be done better as well.
➱00:33:751 (4,1) - Very bad overlapping of sliders.
➱00:44:477 (4,1) - Again.
➱01:12:801 (1,2,3) - Too close to the corner?
➱01:15:985 (1) - Make this a 4/1 reverse slider just like what you did in 01:26:712 (1) -
➱01:21:348 (1,2) - Bad overlapping
➱01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - A L-shaped circle quadruple is not good as it looks like 2010, a C-shaped should do.
➱01:28:220 (3,4) - Bad incline angle for (4)
➱01:49:505 (2,3,4) - Move the whole pattern downwards to allow 4 to have the same angle formed by 01:49:505 (2,3) -
[GIDZ's Hard]
➱00:06:265 (1,2) - Make the slider shapes of these to 00:03:583 (1,2) - , or vice versa. It allows to be curved because the vocal swings.
➱00:15:985 (3) - Fix the placement of it.
➱00:47:829 (1) - I feel like you can move this to a lower position.
➱00:50:343 (6,1) - Is there a reason to overlap them? Why not make them as separate as in 00:55:706 (6,1) - ?
➱00:52:522 (5,6,1) - Also here.
➱00:58:220 (6,1) - You should not overlay them as most of the other overlays are 1/2s and 1/4s, but not 1/1.
➱01:09:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it should be better if you do something like:
➱01:12:801 (7) - NC this. Keep the NC at 01:13:304 (1) - by the way.
➱01:20:678 (3) - Unsnapped slider end!!
➱01:29:058 (6,1) - Again, you should not overlay them like this.
➱01:32:075 (1,2) - Also here.
➱01:39:449 (4,5) - Why not make (5) just like (4)?
[Starfy's Light Insane]
➱00:02:242 (1,1) - As mentioned on the General part, they should be snapped to ⅛ or just change the BPM.
➱00:32:075 (2) - You should better end this slider at 00:32:577-
➱00:42:801 (2) - Also here.
➱01:16:991 (6,1) - Move (6) lower, or move (1) higher.
That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset