Discovering you like bang dream is probably one of my biggest surprise in my bn career.
[Expert]
00:31:197 (31197|6) - This LN should be shortened to 00:31:522 - , if you follow vocal, you should realize the vocalist doesn't extend that long. please do in hard diff (you may keep in easy and normal cause for simplification)
00:32:170 (32170|2,32332|2) - Fail to understand why you jack this one. if you want to jack you might do it at 00:32:332 (32332|2,32495|4) - so you keeping the consistency with 01:03:468 (63468|2,63630|2) - , your normal diff also already do that jack.
00:56:657 (56657|3,56819|3) - Random jack again, you didn't do this at 00:58:441 - and 01:01:035 - . try move to col 1 at least.
01:05:251 (65251|6) - I prefer this at col 6 so your pattern will be much more synchronize with the one at 01:05:738 (65738|5,65900|3,66062|1) - , the shield is okay don't worry.
01:13:359 (73359|1,73684|1) - Not sure why you jack this one when you didn't do the same at 01:08:170 (68170|0,68495|1) - and 01:10:765 (70765|0,71089|3) -
01:15:468 - felt underemphasized with only 1 note for clap.
01:18:062 (78062|0,78549|6,78711|4) - These 3 notes placement are awkward for me as the structure doesn't seem to be apparent here. I will recommend move to col 6 , col 5 , and col 7. much neater.
01:25:684 (85684|5,85846|4) - Supposed to be jack, otherwise its inconsistent with how you jack at 01:26:332 (86332|4,86495|4) - , 01:20:495 (80495|2,80657|2,81143|2,81305|2) -
01:38:657 - This LN felt out of place, will be better if you move it to col 3 to make stair LN with the previous 2 LN. If you do, you may move 01:38:981 (98981|3) - to col 5 to make the structure still intact.
[Hard]
00:15:630 (15630|0,16278|1,16927|0) - personally i know ur intention around this area but i personally don't really like this. I will switch column notes between 00:16:927 (16927|0,17576|2) -
00:32:495 (32495|0) - Having this at col 7 instead will fit more with the flow you created with previous pattern.
00:39:143 - Since this is hard difficulty, im not sure why only cover the drum with LN. at least try to create 1/2 pattern + LN here, its for gap too. please do it at all same sound.
01:06:873 - This section here felt really underwhelming especially for hard diff. at least try to do 2 chord for every F+C sound like you did at 00:51:630 -
01:20:495 (80495|3,80819|4) - Try to switch column here for consistency with how you did 01:25:359 (85359|4,85359|0,85522|5,85522|1,85684|6,85684|2) -
01:36:224 - 01:36:711 - personally felt these two really need to be 2 note chord, otherwise its really odd that 01:36:549 - has more note compared with clap sound but has much weaker sound.
[Normal]
00:11:738 - Personally not a big fan of you copy paste this entire section to hard and expert, but i guess it's still okay.
00:48:062 - not really sure i understand this section, if i recall correctly, you do jack for the drum that combined with vocal like 00:45:468 - and 00:42:873 - right? and yet this one doesn't have that jack, and the part at 00:52:603 - you do jack, so it's confusing.
[Easy]
00:30:549 (30549|2) - Try move LN to col 2 so it will synchronize with the pattern at 00:31:197 (31197|5,31846|3) -
00:53:251 (53251|2) - try move to col 4? the note felt a bit too much on the left side.
01:14:981 (74981|5,75143|4) - Should be jack here, to be consistent with the vocal jack you did before.
01:35:089 - I dont recommend you to follow vocal here. you mislead beginner by thought you follow vocal at first, but suddenly back to drum at 01:35:738 - , and suddenly having more jack at 01:35:900 (95900|2,96062|2,96549|1,96711|1) - compared with your other difficulty, i think it's okay to just follow drum since the vocal here mixed with 1/4 so its hard to follow.
Your pattern here is much more structured and better, good to see your map here.
Call me back if you're done.