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R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size)

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Kuma-san
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Kuma-san
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 октября 2011 г. at 16:15:03

Artist: R-15
Title: HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size)
Source: R-15
Tags: Ending biwako terametis Hellzero KayeSara
BPM: 168
Filesize: 9104kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. biwako's Hard (4,94 stars, 243 notes)
  2. Hard (4,94 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Hellzero's Easy (2,28 stars, 86 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 318 notes)
  5. KS's Taiko (4,83 stars, 442 notes)
  6. tera's Normal (4,03 stars, 128 notes)
Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size)
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Last edited by Kuma-san , edited 75 times in total.
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
offset:1023(+12)
Source:R-15
Tags:Ending anime

and, May I make guest diff?
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
done.
Please add "biwako" Tag to all diff ;)

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
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Kuma-san
Okay
Upload
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Alex7Kom
6 posts
Joined November 2009
Alex7Kom
This is the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?nupanxsggc1y033
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
I make Normal diff.


If you like this,add my diff please :)

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
Tera your diff is awesome *_* better than my
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Skype mod
19:03 <Kuma-san> : ЗИРААА ну сделай мне изю
19:03 <Hellzero> : где
19:04 *Kuma-san is listening to (R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36832]
19:04 <Kuma-san> : тут нормал классный
19:07 <Hellzero> : 00:18:165 (1) -
19:07 <Hellzero> : после спинера на 00:19:594 четкий бит слышется
19:07 <Hellzero> : лично я там зафейлил изза этого
19:08 <Hellzero> : 00:30:665 (1) -
19:08 <Hellzero> : антиджамп :<
19:08 <Hellzero> : бтв спейсинг там врет
19:08 <Kuma-san> : инс?
19:09 <Hellzero> : да
19:11 <Kuma-san> : антиджампы не запрещены
19:11 <Kuma-san> : так изи сделаеш?
19:11 <Kuma-san> : я тут мата наебать пытаюсь чтобы он помодил мне мапу седня
19:13 <Kuma-san> : зира ты буш конф?
19:14 <Hellzero> : и что нам в 3 сидет ьмолчать чтолде?
19:15 <Hellzero> : про изи мб седня сделаю
19:16 <Hellzero> : аниму смотрел?
19:16 <Hellzero> : эту
19:16 <Kuma-san> : да
19:16 <Hellzero> : там цензуры много?
19:17 <Kuma-san> : по идее должна выйти версия без цензуры ибо там цензура ввиде чернил и прочей хери
19:17 <Hellzero> : ну выйти то должна это понятно...
19:17 <Hellzero> : ее там как просто кое что прикрывают или на пол экрана?
19:18 <Kuma-san> : http://i24.fastpic.ru/big/2011/0712/57/ ... 8aeb57.png
19:19 <Hellzero> : уууу
19:19 <Hellzero> : не ждем БДрип
19:19 <Hellzero> : не,*
19:19 <Kuma-san> : ну да а то цензура меняет все пздц как
19:20 <Kuma-san> : интерес аж пропадает
19:20 <Hellzero> : я против легкой ничего против не имею но это же пздц
19:20 <Kuma-san> : ну там эротика играет большую роль а когда ее закрывают это не шик
19:41 <Hellzero> : 00:42:451 - киаи тут нужно запускать
19:41 <Kuma-san> : поч
19:41 <Kuma-san> : ?
19:41 <Hellzero> : 01:05:308 -заканчивать тут
19:42 <Hellzero> : или даже тут 01:03:880
19:42 <Hellzero> : ты киаи с вокала начинаеш
19:43 <Hellzero> : я тя тоже спрошу поч?
19:43 <Kuma-san> : потому что более оживленная часть вокала идет которую легче устышать чем музыку
19:44 <Hellzero> : ... хз как объяснить канешно
19:46 <Kuma-san> : так чотко что айса матом сделали
19:47 <Hellzero> : хо
19:47 <Hellzero> : круто
19:47 <Kuma-san> : ты не знал?
19:47 <Kuma-san> : О_О
19:47 <Hellzero> : нет
19:47 <Kuma-san> : я в этот же день утром в скайп кинул
19:47 <Hellzero> : я же не спекчу за матами
19:49 <Kuma-san> : http://puu.sh/6mlw
19:50 <Kuma-san> : нараку тоже крутой чел
19:50 <Hellzero> : да
19:50 <Kuma-san> : если нотшинта не помодит сегодня мне мапу то он пидор
20:05 <Hellzero> : готово
20:06 <Hellzero> : почти :<
20:06 <Kuma-san> : хуя ты быстрый
20:06 <Hellzero> : ага
20:20 <Hellzero> : http://puu.sh/6mpA оффни
20:21 <Hellzero> : http://puu.sh/6mpG
20:23 <Kuma-san> : спс
20:24 <Hellzero> : бтв наш тред гост диф умер?
20:25 <Kuma-san> : да походу
20:26 <Kuma-san> : я зато понял что люди пздц еблаки
20:27 <Kuma-san> : я же написал чтоб в сообщение указывали что они в курсе что тема не для моддинга.так вот чел
20:27 <Kuma-san> : написал эту фразу и ток через неск часов он додумался что это не для мода тема
20:27 <Hellzero> : бывает
20:43 <Hellzero> : 00:06:558 (1,2,3) -
20:44 <Hellzero> : 00:07:719 -
20:44 <Hellzero> : тут ноту для трипла
20:45 <Hellzero> : 00:09:415 (10) - НК
20:45 <Hellzero> : 00:10:487 (1) - тут убрать
20:45 <Hellzero> : 00:11:023 (6) -
20:46 <Hellzero> : 00:16:737 (1,2,3,4,5) -
20:48 <Hellzero> : 00:30:487 -
20:50 <Hellzero> : 00:35:308 (5) -
20:50 <Hellzero> : http://puu.sh/6mtb
20:51 <Hellzero> : 00:39:058 (1) - нк убрать
20:51 <Hellzero> : 00:39:594 (7) - добавить
20:52 <Hellzero> : 00:42:808 -
20:53 <Hellzero> : 00:55:844 (1,3) -
20:54 <Hellzero> : 00:56:737 -
20:55 <Hellzero> : 00:57:451 (1) -
20:55 <Hellzero> : 00:57:630 -
20:56 <Hellzero> : 01:01:022 (5) - тут НК
20:57 <Hellzero> : 01:05:130 (1,3) -
20:57 <Hellzero> : 01:12:451 (1) - убрать ноту
20:58 <Hellzero> : 01:12:987 -
20:58 <Hellzero> : 01:21:915 (7) -
21:02 <Hellzero> : 01:09:415 (1,2,3) - слайдер
21:05 <Hellzero> : 01:22:094 -
21:13 <Hellzero> : 00:43:880 (9) - НК
21:13 <Hellzero> : 00:44:415 (1) - убрать
21:13 <Hellzero> : 00:44:415 (3,4,5) - слайды
21:16 <Hellzero> : 00:45:308 -
21:17 <Hellzero> : 00:46:737 (6) - нк тут
21:17 <Hellzero> : 00:48:165 (5) - НК
21:18 <Hellzero> : 00:49:594 - НК
21:18 <Hellzero> : http://puu.sh/6mvX
21:20 <Hellzero> : 00:54:237 -
21:24 <Hellzero> : 00:55:665 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
21:26 <Hellzero> : 01:05:130 (1,3) -
21:27 <Hellzero> : http://puu.sh/6mx9
21:28 <Hellzero> : 01:07:987 (1,3) -
21:29 <Hellzero> : 01:16:737 (1,3) -
21:32 <Hellzero> : 01:25:308 (3,4,5,6,7) -
21:34 <Hellzero> : 00:49:594 (7,8,9,10) -
21:35 <Kuma-san> : http://puu.sh/6myf
mizune_gin
mizune_gin
insane:
00:16:737 remove new combo and then 00 16 558 new combo
00:41:002 i think remove note 4 ，not bad
01:02:879 add circle http://puu.sh/6pg0

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (Kuma-san) [Insane].osu
Last edited by mizune_gin , edited 6 times in total.
Kuma-san
428 posts
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Topic Starter
Kuma-san

mizune_gin wrote:

insane:
00 16 737 remove new combo and then 00 16 558 new combo
00 41 002 i think remove note 4 ，not bad
Sorry but without change
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
A little mod
[Insane]
00:11:022 (1)~(6),(1)　If you want making prettier,(1)(344,264),(2)(440,232),(3)(352,184),(4)(448.152),(5)(360,104),(6)(456,72)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,(1)(368,24)
00:29:594 (1) 　　　　　　(48,168)?
00:48:165 (1) 　　　　　　finish?
00:56:380 (4)~(5)　　　I think,(4)(192,152),(5)(208,248). If you like this,change two note.
01:06:737 (6)　　　　　　1grid down?
01:12:987 (3)　　　　　　1grid down?
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

terametis wrote:

A little mod
[Insane]
00:11:022 (1)~(6),(1)　If you want making prettier,(1)(344,264),(2)(440,232),(3)(352,184),(4)(448.152),(5)(360,104),(6)(456,72)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,(1)(368,24)
00:29:594 (1) 　　　　　　(48,168)?
00:48:165 (1) 　　　　　　finish?
00:56:380 (4)~(5)　　　I think,(4)(192,152),(5)(208,248). If you like this,change two note.
01:06:737 (6)　　　　　　1grid down?
01:12:987 (3)　　　　　　1grid down?
without change
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Hellzero's Easy
00:35:308 (2) - вистл в конец
00:40:130 (3) - вистл на реверс
00:52:451 (2) - финиш вместо вистла? а то орут как будто финиш
00:59:594 (1) - финиш сюда?
01:22:451 (1) - +вистл
01:26:915 (5) - ффффффф, позор! слайдер уполз за границы окна:

+ irc mod (General , Insane):
14:39 <Kuma-san> : Алекс привет.можешь помодить мапу?
14:40 <Aleks719> : ох, какую?
14:40 <Aleks719> : привет
14:41 *Kuma-san is editing (R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36832]
14:49 <Aleks719> : какого художника
14:50 <Aleks719> : видео 1280х720
14:50 <Aleks719> : и пикселит ужасно
14:50 <Aleks719> : пережать бы
14:50 <Aleks719> : до каких нибудь 640х...
14:50 <Kuma-san> : оукей
14:51 <Aleks719> : + 18мб радости это многовато
14:51 <Aleks719> : дальше
14:51 <Aleks719> : тебе нужен аппроач
14:51 <Aleks719> : сёркл
14:51 <Aleks719> : т.к. кастомные круги
14:51 <Kuma-san> : я буду скином заниматься чуть позже
14:52 <Aleks719> : окей, не забудь главное
14:52 <Kuma-san> : та я по пингвинам буду делать так что не забуду
14:52 <Aleks719> : я вот не люблю кастомные скины ><
14:53 <Aleks719> : мне нравятся мои ушастые круги
14:53 <Kuma-san> : ну хз прост с этим какт мягче играется чтоль
14:53 <Aleks719> : tera's Normal : превью другое
14:54 <Aleks719> : у хеллзеро леттербокы отключены
14:54 <Aleks719> : *леттербоксы
14:54 <Aleks719> : я бы везде отключил
14:54 <Aleks719> : т.к. есть видео
14:55 <Aleks719> : аниме из тагов убирай
14:55 <Aleks719> : это будет в жанре
14:56 <Aleks719> : комбоцвета потом выберешь?
14:56 <Kuma-san> : посоветуешь какие ?
14:56 <Aleks719> : ну смотри
14:56 <Aleks719> : у тебя бг очень цветастый
14:57 <Aleks719> : кто как делает, я например против того, чтобы цвета сливались, т.к. в контраст иду
14:57 <Aleks719> : а кто-то наоборот
14:57 <Aleks719> : самый главный совет: без белого, серого и черного
14:58 <Aleks719> : ну смотри
14:58 <Aleks719> : можно взять 5 цветов
14:58 <Aleks719> : по цвету кимоно
14:58 <Aleks719> : 5ти девочек
14:59 <Kuma-san> : окей
14:59 <Aleks719> : т.е. и контраст и как бэ привязка какая-то
14:59 <Aleks719> : оффсет чей?
14:59 <Aleks719> : твой?
15:00 <Kuma-san> : бивако
15:00 <Aleks719> : надо проверить тогда
15:00 <Aleks719> : погоди
15:01 <Kuma-san> : он видать с сили работает в теме тайминг чека я прост написал сили чтобы он посмотрел а пришел
15:01 <Kuma-san> : бивако
15:01 <Aleks719> : не, годно все
15:01 <Aleks719> : норм оффсет
15:02 <Aleks719> : в тайминг чеке все кто хочет работает)
15:02 <Aleks719> : ну пошли по инсу
15:03 <Aleks719> : не великоваты круги-то?
15:04 <Aleks719> : :D
15:04 <Aleks719> : это я так. норм круги
15:04 <Kuma-san> : ну хз я не люблю средний размер кругов =__=
15:05 <Aleks719> : 00:18:165 (1) -
15:05 <Aleks719> : имхо
15:05 <Aleks719> : конец здесь : 00:19:237
15:06 <Aleks719> : 00:24:594 (3) - + финиш в начало
15:06 <Aleks719> : не жалуешь ты как-то свистки
15:07 <Kuma-san> : я хз прост как ставить хитсаунды D: может как и в пингвинах возьму кастомные
15:07 <Aleks719> : ну э
15:07 <Aleks719> : под музыку)
15:08 <Aleks719> : 00:37:630 (5) - вот тут не уверен
15:08 <Aleks719> : у тебя квадрат прыжков
15:08 <Aleks719> : а потом норм спейсинг
15:08 <Aleks719> : мб новым комбо выделить?
15:09 <Aleks719> : 00:42:451 (1) - убери финиш с конца
15:09 <Kuma-san> : именно на той ноте нк?
15:09 <Aleks719> : да
15:09 <Aleks719> : и следующее комбо такое же
15:10 <Aleks719> : квадрат прыжков
15:10 <Aleks719> : 00:43:880 (1) - убери финиш с конца
15:10 <Aleks719> : 00:43:880 (1,2,3,4,5) - тут вообще вроде клэпы пропали
15:11 <Aleks719> : 00:49:594 (7) - тут нк
15:11 <Aleks719> : и там где эта 7-10
15:11 <Aleks719> : тоже клэпов нет
15:12 <Aleks719> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157750
15:12 <Aleks719> : 9,10 там же
15:12 <Aleks719> : сделал бы как на скрине
15:13 <Kuma-san> : окей
15:14 <Aleks719> : в конце спиннера - финиш
15:14 <Aleks719> : 00:53:880 (6) - финиш с конца убери
15:14 <Aleks719> : 00:55:308 (6) - ^
15:15 <Aleks719> : 00:57:094 (7) - клэп в начало
15:15 <Aleks719> : 01:02:987 - добавить ноту
15:16 <Aleks719> : 01:06:915 (7) -нк здесь
15:17 <Aleks719> : 01:11:022 (1) - вистл в конец
15:17 <Aleks719> : 01:12:630 (1) - +вистл
15:18 <Aleks719> : 01:13:165 (4) - +вистл
15:18 <Aleks719> : 01:14:415 (2) - ^
15:19 <Aleks719> : 01:14:594 (3) - вистл в конец
15:19 <Aleks719> : 01:16:201 (1) - вистл в начало, финиш в конец
15:21 <Aleks719> : 01:16:558 (2) - эту нотя я бы убрал
15:21 <Aleks719> : как-то она выбивается
15:21 <Aleks719> : тогда 01:16:201 (1) - удалил бы нк
15:21 <Aleks719> : 01:16:737 (1) - вистл в начало
15:21 <Aleks719> : 01:17:272 (2) - вистл
15:22 <Aleks719> : 01:17:987 (4,6) - два вистла
15:23 <Aleks719> : 01:18:701 (8) - вистл в конец
15:23 <Aleks719> : 01:19:237 (1) - клэп в начало
15:24 <Aleks719> : 01:21:022 (4,5) - финиши в начало слпйдеров. (6) - добавь финиш
15:25 <Aleks719> : 01:21:915 (7) - вистл
15:25 <Aleks719> : 01:22:094 (8) - я бы сделал финиш в начале вместо клэпа
15:25 <Aleks719> : хотя не
15:26 <Aleks719> : оставь клэп на (8)
15:26 <Kuma-san> : D:
15:26 <Aleks719> : 01:22:451 (1) - а сюда добавь финиш
15:26 <Aleks719> : на (1) звук посильнее
15:27 <Aleks719> : 01:25:308 (3) - нк просится отсюда, на не от (1)
15:27 <Aleks719> : ура, конец
15:28 <Kuma-san> : :D
15:28 <Aleks719> : можно я только хеллзеровскую ещё? :S а то мне идти надо, а возращаться и домодивать 2 диффы
15:28 <Aleks719> : жесть как лениво
15:29 <Kuma-san> : окей
15:29 <Aleks719> : фуф
15:29 <Kuma-san> : хеллзеровская это изи
15:29 <Aleks719> : ага
15:29 <Kuma-san> : а насчет остального на инсе все норм?
15:30 <Aleks719> : ещё что-то было
15:30 <Aleks719> : 00:22:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - этот паттерн не очень понравился
15:30 <Aleks719> : выглядит рвано, от точки до точки
15:31 <Aleks719> : ща нарисую
15:31 <Aleks719> : что-нить
15:32 <Aleks719> : скрин один : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157762
15:32 <Aleks719> : скрин два : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157763
15:34 <Aleks719> : 00:28:880 (4,5,6,7,8) - я бы сделал прямым или аркой
15:35 <Aleks719> : 01:16:737 (1,2,3) - (2) стоит несимметрично
15:36 <Aleks719> : и од 8 всё-таки
15:36 <Aleks719> : имхо много
15:40 <Kuma-san> : ок
15:41 <Kuma-san> : и все?
15:41 <Aleks719> : ну могут ещё сказать, что хп8 великоват
15:41 <Aleks719> : и что свистков мало
JauiPlaY
1,292 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
Hi~ :)
Some suggestions:

[General]
Add ed to your tags?
I guess the artist should be at least R-15 Cast?
And what's more, you must add a approaching circle.

[Hellzero's Easy]
00:13:165 (4,5) - A slider with reverse arrow is better for an easy diff.
00:18:165 (1) - Should starts at 00:17:987.
00:41:380 (1) - Imo it's too short for an easy.
And please control your combo between 3-5.

[tera's Normal]
00:04:594 (5) - Bad overlapping...
I think others are fine, but add more claps if you want please.
And also, please control your combo between 4-7.

[biwako's Hard]
...I'm serious, 50% hitsound volume is enough. It's too noisy for now ;_;
00:19:237 (8) - This part is quite noisy for me, so maybe a note here and add another one at 00:19:415?
00:32:451 (6) - Add clap to the reverse arrow.
00:47:630 (7) - Add clap to the beginning.

[Insane]
00:13:165 (4) - Add clap to the end.
00:16:022 (4) - ^
00:17:630 (6) - Add clap to the beginning.
00:24:594 (3) - Remove the finish on the beginning.
00:24:951 (4) - Move the finsh from the end to the beginning.
00:35:844 (6) - Add clap to the beginning.
00:36:737 (1,2,3,4) - They need finish badly imo...
00:38:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:058 (4) - Clap.
01:02:451 (7,8,9) - Bad overlapping.
01:16:201 (8) - Add clap to the beginning.

I think this map still needs some working, so good luck! :oops:
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi~ :)
Some suggestions:

[General]
Add ed to your tags? i think "ending" is enought
I guess the artist should be at least R-15 Cast?
And what's more, you must add a approaching circle. Already done

[Hellzero's Easy]
00:13:165 (4,5) - A slider with reverse arrow is better for an easy diff.
00:18:165 (1) - Should starts at 00:17:987.
00:41:380 (1) - Imo it's too short for an easy. Fixed
And please control your combo between 3-5.

[tera's Normal]
00:04:594 (5) - Bad overlapping...
I think others are fine, but add more claps if you want please.
And also, please control your combo between 4-7.

[biwako's Hard]
...I'm serious, 50% hitsound volume is enough. It's too noisy for now ;_;
00:19:237 (8) - This part is quite noisy for me, so maybe a note here and add another one at 00:19:415?
00:32:451 (6) - Add clap to the reverse arrow.
00:47:630 (7) - Add clap to the beginning.

[Insane]
00:13:165 (4) - Add clap to the end.
00:16:022 (4) - ^
00:17:630 (6) - Add clap to the beginning.
00:24:594 (3) - Remove the finish on the beginning.
00:24:951 (4) - Move the finsh from the end to the beginning.
00:35:844 (6) - Add clap to the beginning.
00:36:737 (1,2,3,4) - They need finish badly imo...
00:38:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:058 (4) - Clap.
01:02:451 (7,8,9) - Bad overlapping.
01:16:201 (8) - Add clap to the beginning.

I think this map still needs some working, so good luck! :oops:
Fixed
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako

JauiPlaY wrote:

[biwako's Hard]
...I'm serious, 50% hitsound volume is enough. It's too noisy for now ;_;
00:19:237 (8) - This part is quite noisy for me, so maybe a note here and add another one at 00:19:415?
00:32:451 (6) - Add clap to the reverse arrow.
00:47:630 (7) - Add clap to the beginning.
all fixed.

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi, here's my mod.

General;
- Use the colors from Hellzero's diff for all diffs.

Hellzero's Easy;
- 00:01:023 >> Finish yes ?
- 00:06:915 (3,4) >> confusing for new players, (4) is really short and repeats, may be better to just put a slider from where (3) is to where (4) ends
- 00:34:237 >> Curve this a bit more
- 01:09:772 >> The same as above above ^^

tera's Normal;
- 00:02:451 >> finish at start
- 00:05:308 >> ^
- 00:36:737 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:42:451 >> ^
- 00:47:094 >> clap
- 00:49:951 >> clap
- 00:50:655 >> from here you mess the hitsound pattern, keep it consistent or it sounds weird
- 01:02:987 >> Start the slider here instead but end at the same spot
- 01:07:808 >> remove clap and add finish

biwako's Hard;
- 00:26:022 >> start the slider here, no need for a 1/4 or whatever that is called
- 00:27:630 >> ^
- 00:41:737 >> ^ and this 1/4 doesn't make sense
- 00:44:058 >> doesn't sound good/make sense, end the slider here
- 01:00:130 >> move (2) here
- 01:00:844 >> for this to make sense either add a note here or move (4) here, sounds better

Insane;
- 01:26:915 (1,2,3) >> A jumpy ending please ? :3

* star
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi, here's my mod.

General;
- Use the colors from Hellzero's diff for all diffs. Ooops,i forgot

Hellzero's Easy;
- 00:01:023 >> Finish yes ?
- 00:06:915 (3,4) >> confusing for new players, (4) is really short and repeats, may be better to just put a slider from where (3) is to where (4) ends
- 00:34:237 >> Curve this a bit more
- 01:09:772 >> The same as above above ^^

tera's Normal;
- 00:02:451 >> finish at start
- 00:05:308 >> ^
- 00:36:737 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:42:451 >> ^
- 00:47:094 >> clap
- 00:49:951 >> clap
- 00:50:655 >> from here you mess the hitsound pattern, keep it consistent or it sounds weird
- 01:02:987 >> Start the slider here instead but end at the same spot
- 01:07:808 >> remove clap and add finish

biwako's Hard;
- 00:26:022 >> start the slider here, no need for a 1/4 or whatever that is called
- 00:27:630 >> ^
- 00:41:737 >> ^ and this 1/4 doesn't make sense
- 00:44:058 >> doesn't sound good/make sense, end the slider here
- 01:00:130 >> move (2) here
- 01:00:844 >> for this to make sense either add a note here or move (4) here, sounds better

Insane;
- 01:26:915 (1,2,3) >> A jumpy ending please ? :3

* star
Fixed.Thanks
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
updated

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
You should add "(Tv Size)" to the title, for consistency

[Hellzero Easy]
Finishes to add, they're in the song
SPOILER
00:05:309 (1) Start
00:06:558 (2)
00:07:808 (5)
00:23:880 (1) Start
00:29:594 (1) Start
00:31:022 (1) Start
00:31:915 (2) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:32:451 (3) Start
00:33:344 (4) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:34:237 (1) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:35:308 (2) Start
00:48:165 (3) Start
00:52:451 (2) Start
01:08:165 (1) Start
01:09:951 (4) Start

[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider :D), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too (Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this

[Insane]
00:04:058 (3) - Blanket (5) like this
00:07:808 (3,4) - do some helix like this (as now it isn't so graphically good) and blanket 00:08:701 (6) like this
00:55:665 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagon like this
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this
all fixed.

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
You should add "(Tv Size)" to the title, for consistency

[Hellzero Easy]
Finishes to add, they're in the song
SPOILER
00:05:309 (1) Start
00:06:558 (2)
00:07:808 (5)
00:23:880 (1) Start
00:29:594 (1) Start
00:31:022 (1) Start
00:31:915 (2) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:32:451 (3) Start
00:33:344 (4) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:34:237 (1) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:35:308 (2) Start
00:48:165 (3) Start
00:52:451 (2) Start
01:08:165 (1) Start
01:09:951 (4) Start

[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider :D), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too (Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this

[Insane]
00:04:058 (3) - Blanket (5) like this
00:07:808 (3,4) - do some helix like this (as now it isn't so graphically good) and blanket 00:08:701 (6) like this
00:55:665 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagon like this
Fixed
kirinoimouto22
114 posts
Joined November 2010
kirinoimouto22
*-------*
love R-15 songs *o*
i can't star but, omedotou is a good map ^^
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi~

easy
-change combo color?
why easy diff is Default
-The SliderMultiplier in Easy diff is 0.799999999999999 currently, maybe you should fix this to 0.8 manually by open osu file.

normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 - 　 add note?

hard
AR+1?

insane
00:10:130 (3) I think that the same one as order of the form of - is good.
00:49:594 (1) - Is 2nd waypont required? The same form is desirable.00:50:665 (3) -
00:54:237 (7) - 2 grid left?
01:23:701 (8) - delete 3rd waypoint

good map
fight~
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Laurier wrote:

hi~

easy
-change combo color?
why easy diff is Default Fixed
-The SliderMultiplier in Easy diff is 0.799999999999999 currently, maybe you should fix this to 0.8 manually by open osu file. Fixed

normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 - 　 add note?

hard
AR+1?

insane
00:10:130 (3) I think that the same one as order of the form of - is good.
00:49:594 (1) - Is 2nd waypont required? The same form is desirable.00:50:665 (3) -
00:54:237 (7) - 2 grid left?
01:23:701 (8) - delete 3rd waypoint

good map
fight~
Thx.Fixed only in easy diff
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
/me from IRC request

[General]

del osb. file since you do not have storyboard
since you have set the custom skin,
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,196,255
Combo2 : 255,214,193
Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 119,187,255
Combo5 : 230,230,0
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
add the red font line to avoid conflict between players' custom skin and your skin.


[Easy]

00:06:915 (3) - del. note on red tick is not recommended in easy
00:39:951 (2) - del
01:09:773 (3) - del
01:16:023 (3,4) - make into one reversible slider

Nice map :D

[Normal]

np

[Hard]
00:04:772 (10) - 1 grid down
00:32:451 (6) - hmmm>http://puu.sh/6GCT


[Insane]
00:08:523 (5) - not stack well O.O
00:21:022 (1) - hmmm. don't like this small jump, I prefer you remain the regular distance
00:24:594 (3) - add fin at slider beginning
00:40:487 (3) - make the slider beginning and end in the same vertical line
01:06:558 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - make a right hexagon
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Megurine Luka wrote:

/me from IRC request

[General]

del osb. file since you do not have storyboard
since you have set the custom skin,
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,196,255
Combo2 : 255,214,193
Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 119,187,255
Combo5 : 230,230,0
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
add the red font line to avoid conflict between players' custom skin and your skin.


[Easy]

00:06:915 (3) - del. note on red tick is not recommended in easy
00:39:951 (2) - del
01:09:773 (3) - del
01:16:023 (3,4) - make into one reversible slider

Nice map :D

[Normal]

np

[Hard]
00:04:772 (10) - 1 grid down
00:32:451 (6) - hmmm>http://puu.sh/6GCT


[Insane]
00:08:523 (5) - not stack well O.O
00:21:022 (1) - hmmm. don't like this small jump, I prefer you remain the regular distance
00:24:594 (3) - add fin at slider beginning
00:40:487 (3) - make the slider beginning and end in the same vertical line
01:06:558 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - make a right hexagon
Easy without change.Insane fixed
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
:3

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
hi ~ Kuma-san~ :)

my some tips~


[General]

If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.
Please complete the full set SKIN.


[Insane]

00:14:951 (7) - move the here X:328 Y:180.
00:29:147 (7) - Remove note Better listen.


[biwako's Hard]

00:38:165 (6) - add NC.
00:48:165 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:522 (2) - add NC.
01:26:915 (6) - ^


[tera's Normal]

00:30:665 - add note + clap.
00:58:165 (3) - end point add finish.
01:02:451 (5) - start point add finish.
01:13:522 (5) - end point add finish.
01:15:665 (3) - Remove reentry clap.
01:25:308 (7) - add finish.


[Hellzero's Easy]

00:13:165 (4,5) - change Reentry slider?
01:16:023 (3,4) - ^
01:26:915 (5) - end point add finish,Remove whistle.


Kawaii song I like it~
nice job ~ ;)
Please accept my star (My Heart) >///<
good luck ~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
:3

General
Предлагаю разделить столь большое киаи
00:53:880 - думаю здесь сделать надо сделать еще фонтан, 01:05:308 а здесь вовсе удалить
Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4,5) - not good pattern, delete (3,4) and add there slider 00:07:094 - 00:07:451
00:13:165 (4,5) - ^ delete (5) and add note there 00:13:522
01:01:737 (5,6) - overlapped, move (5)
01:09:415 (2,3,4) - same as there 00:06:558
01:15:308 (2,3,4) - ^ 00:13:165

tera's Normal
00:06:737 (3) - 00:07:094-clap
00:24:951 (6) - delete finish
00:25:308 (1,3,5) - finish on start
00:48:165 (1) - ^
00:58:165 (3) - 00:59:594 - finish
01:16:022 - delete finish from there

biwako's Hard
really nice
00:43:522 (5) - sounds bad, replace it by circles
00:59:237 (9) - ^
01:08:522 (3) - ^
01:12:808 (5) - nazi, but move it oooone grid down please
01:26:915 (6) - new combo

Insane
больше финишей в начале
00:06:558 (1,2,3,4) - эту часть можно сделать нормал звуками
00:07:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - так много оверлапов что запутаться можно, 00:08:165 (4) - либо здесь новое комбо, либо эту часть отдели от предыдущего слайдера
00:22:808 (2) - спейсинг
00:23:522 (6,7) - ^
00:26:380 (4,5) - нехорошо выглядит, лучше перемести куда-нибудь перед слайдером
00:30:665 (1,2) - тут можно и не заметить что смена скорости пошла, так что переставь зеленую тайм секцию на слайдер, а эти круги расставь по спейсингу
01:05:308 (2,4) - не очень красиво выглядит, выровняй чтоб аккуратно было и можно расставить как-нибудь так
SPOILER

ну вот, удачи :3
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
Thanks Rika and Vass_Bass
Insane was fixed
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
JauiPlaY
[tera's Normal]
00:04:594 (5) - Bad overlapping...　
I think others are fine, but add more claps if you want please.
And also, please control your combo between 4-7.

Fixed

lovhin456
tera's Normal;
- 00:02:451 >> finish at start
- 00:05:308 >> ^
- 00:36:737 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:42:451 >> ^
- 00:47:094 >> clap
- 00:49:951 >> clap
- 00:50:655 >> from here you mess the hitsound pattern, keep it consistent or it sounds weird
- 01:02:987 >> Start the slider here instead but end at the same spot
- 01:07:808 >> remove clap and add finish

All Fixed

HakuNoKaemi
[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider ), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too (Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

Almost Fixed

Laurier
normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 - 　 add note?

sorry,dont change.

Kawayi Rika
[tera's Normal]

00:30:665 - add note + clap.
00:58:165 (3) - end point add finish.
01:02:451 (5) - start point add finish.
01:13:522 (5) - end point add finish.
01:15:665 (3) - Remove reentry clap.
01:25:308 (7) - add finish.

some place fixed

Vass_Bass
tera's Normal
00:06:737 (3) - 00:07:094-clap
00:24:951 (6) - delete finish
00:25:308 (1,3,5) - finish on start
00:48:165 (1) - ^
00:58:165 (3) - 00:59:594 - finish
01:16:022 - delete finish from there

some place fixed

thanks for mod!

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
Hi~ ^ ^

Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4) I think this part, it's too hard for easy. can change it like this? http://puu.sh/6JHG
01:01:737 (5) NC?
01:02:451 (1) del NC?

tera's Normal
maybe...the title is Tera's Normal?

biwako's Hard
maybe....(same with normal) the title is Biwako's Hard?
00:21:201 (6) NC?
00:26:737 (6) ^
00:37:630 (5) ^

Insane
00:07:808 (3) add finish in the beginning?
00:21:022 (1) add clap?
00:22:451 (1) add clap in the beginning?
00:48:165 (1) add finish?
01:07:808 (7) del clap, add finish?

okay~ that's all my mod~ I hope my mod can help you :3
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ ^ ^

Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4) I think this part, it's too hard for easy. can change it like this? http://puu.sh/6JHG
01:01:737 (5) NC?
01:02:451 (1) del NC?

tera's Normal
maybe...the title is Tera's Normal?

biwako's Hard
maybe....(same with normal) the title is Biwako's Hard?
00:21:201 (6) NC?
00:26:737 (6) ^
00:37:630 (5) ^

Insane
00:07:808 (3) add finish in the beginning?
00:21:022 (1) add clap?
00:22:451 (1) add clap in the beginning?
00:48:165 (1) add finish?
01:07:808 (7) del clap, add finish?

okay~ that's all my mod~ I hope my mod can help you :3
Thanks
biwako
442 posts
Joined November 2010
biwako
update

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,422 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
Я не забыл, но пока что времени не будет. Надеюсь, заскочу на следующей неделе.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,866 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
General
I found you a credit-less Video using about half the space of the current one (Video offset 662ms)
SPOILER
(The R-15 censor is gone though, but I don't see any problem with it. The censors was silly and more disturbing anyway)

Insane
00:05:130 (1) - Finish at the end
00:06:558 (1) - Finish at the beginning
00:29:594 (1,3,5) - Finish
00:31:022 (3) - Finish at the beginning
00:39:594 (1) - finish
00:40:487 (3) - finish at the end
00:49:237 (6) - clap at the beginning
01:08:880 (3) - finish at the end
01:09:415 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:17:272 (2) - 1 grid right
01:25:308 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:26:558 (7) - finish

biwako's Hard
00:13:165 (8) - whistle on the second and last one?
00:36:737 (1) - finish
00:38:166 (1) - ^
00:42:451 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:43:880 (6) - ^
00:52:451 (4) - ^ and slide-whistle
00:53:880 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:55:308 (5) - ^
01:22:451 (1) - ^ and slide-whistle
01:16:201 (9,10) - whistle?

tera's Normal
00:43:880 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:26:022 (1) - finish

Hellzero's Easy
01:26:558 (4) - finish
01:26:915 (5) - finish at the end

That's all~♪
Kuma-san
428 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Saten-san wrote:

General
I found you a credit-less Video using about half the space of the current one (Video offset 662ms)
SPOILER
(The R-15 censor is gone though, but I don't see any problem with it. The censors was silly and more disturbing anyway)

Insane
00:05:130 (1) - Finish at the end
00:06:558 (1) - Finish at the beginning
00:29:594 (1,3,5) - Finish
00:31:022 (3) - Finish at the beginning
00:39:594 (1) - finish
00:40:487 (3) - finish at the end
00:49:237 (6) - clap at the beginning
01:08:880 (3) - finish at the end
01:09:415 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:17:272 (2) - 1 grid right
01:25:308 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:26:558 (7) - finish

biwako's Hard
00:13:165 (8) - whistle on the second and last one?
00:36:737 (1) - finish
00:38:166 (1) - ^
00:42:451 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:43:880 (6) - ^
00:52:451 (4) - ^ and slide-whistle
00:53:880 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:55:308 (5) - ^
01:22:451 (1) - ^ and slide-whistle
01:16:201 (9,10) - whistle?

tera's Normal
00:43:880 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:26:022 (1) - finish

Hellzero's Easy
01:26:558 (4) - finish
01:26:915 (5) - finish at the end

That's all~♪
Insane,Easy and normal was fixed.Thanks
biwako
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Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
biwako
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Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Как и обещала С:

[Hellzero's Easy]

00:08:165 (1) - финиш? под "yaaaaay~"
01:11:022 (1) - ^

Отличная :3

[tera's Normal]

00:08:165 (1) - finish?
00:12:451 (3) - whistle
00:13:165 (5) - ^
00:13:880 (1) - ^
00:16:737 (1) - ^
00:18:165 (3) - finish?
00:19:594 (1) - finish as in Hellzero's diff? It's cool :3
00:21:022 (3) - ^
00:22:451 (1) - ^
00:23:880 (3) - ^
00:24:594 (5) - ^
00:25:308 (1) - ^
00:26:737 (3) - ^
00:28:165 (5) - ^
00:31:022 (1) - ^
01:08:165 (1) - ^
01:11:022 (1) - yaaay, finish?

And try to work with whistles :3
Good!

[biwako's Hard]

Good job with normal whistles!

00:06:558 (6) - finish
00:25:308 (x) - add note?

[Hard] and [Insane] will mod in irc ><
biwako
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terametis
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update

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
KayeSara
KayeSara
OK, finished~
And the name of Background is "TaikoBG"

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [KS's Taiko].osu

xierbaliti
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the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
KayeSara
KayeSara

xierbaliti wrote:

the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
._. There are limited advice on my diff at present Orz
Last edited by KayeSara , edited 2 times in total.
Kuma-san
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Topic Starter
Kuma-san

KayeSara wrote:

xierbaliti wrote:

the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
._. It haven't get some advices Orz
Arken(arien) said what its haven't problems
Breeze
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Breeze

General

  1. I've checked wiki, it seems title should be "R-15♡ - HIRAMEKI! Peace(≧▽≦)v (TV Size)"
    SPOILER

Hellzero's Easy

  1. Consider adding a short audio lead-in about 1s since this diff. starts earlier than others, too close to mp3 started point

Tera's Normal

  1. 00:31:022 (1) - Add finish?

KS's Taiko

  1. 00:40:130 (1) - D seems better? Or use d to 00:40:487 (2)?

biwako's Hard

  1. 00:42:808 (2) - Put this note a bit out of slider end seems better, it's easily read to a 1/2 beat space note
  2. 00:57:094 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:022 (2) - Add finish?

Hard

  1. 00:07:094 (6,7,8) - Why here use tiny spacing? It might be confusing
  2. 00:36:201 (1) - Remove new combo, use new combo at 00:36:737 (2) due to BPM change
  3. 00:42:987 (1) - Turn this sldier to right looked better IMO

Insane

  1. 00:02:272 (1) - Turn this slider to left seems played more comfortable
  2. 00:29:237 (5) - Spacing too close, might be confusing
  3. 00:30:665 (1) - Remove new combo, use NC to 00:31:022 (3) since BPM change starts here

nice map
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biwako
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biwako

Breeze wrote:

biwako's Hard

  1. 00:42:808 (2) - Put this note a bit out of slider end seems better, it's easily read to a 1/2 beat space note
  2. 00:57:094 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:022 (2) - Add finish?
all fixed.

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