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R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Kuma-san

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi, here's my mod.

General;
- Use the colors from Hellzero's diff for all diffs. Ooops,i forgot

Hellzero's Easy;
- 00:01:023 >> Finish yes ?
- 00:06:915 (3,4) >> confusing for new players, (4) is really short and repeats, may be better to just put a slider from where (3) is to where (4) ends
- 00:34:237 >> Curve this a bit more
- 01:09:772 >> The same as above above ^^

tera's Normal;
- 00:02:451 >> finish at start
- 00:05:308 >> ^
- 00:36:737 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:42:451 >> ^
- 00:47:094 >> clap
- 00:49:951 >> clap
- 00:50:655 >> from here you mess the hitsound pattern, keep it consistent or it sounds weird
- 01:02:987 >> Start the slider here instead but end at the same spot
- 01:07:808 >> remove clap and add finish

biwako's Hard;
- 00:26:022 >> start the slider here, no need for a 1/4 or whatever that is called
- 00:27:630 >> ^
- 00:41:737 >> ^ and this 1/4 doesn't make sense
- 00:44:058 >> doesn't sound good/make sense, end the slider here
- 01:00:130 >> move (2) here
- 01:00:844 >> for this to make sense either add a note here or move (4) here, sounds better

Insane;
- 01:26:915 (1,2,3) >> A jumpy ending please ? :3

* star
Fixed.Thanks
biwako
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
You should add "(Tv Size)" to the title, for consistency

[Hellzero Easy]
Finishes to add, they're in the song
SPOILER
00:05:309 (1) Start
00:06:558 (2)
00:07:808 (5)
00:23:880 (1) Start
00:29:594 (1) Start
00:31:022 (1) Start
00:31:915 (2) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:32:451 (3) Start
00:33:344 (4) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:34:237 (1) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:35:308 (2) Start
00:48:165 (3) Start
00:52:451 (2) Start
01:08:165 (1) Start
01:09:951 (4) Start

[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider :D), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too
(Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this

[Insane]
00:04:058 (3) - Blanket (5) like this
00:07:808 (3,4) - do some helix like this (as now it isn't so graphically good) and blanket 00:08:701 (6) like this
00:55:665 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagon like this
biwako

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this
all fixed.

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
You should add "(Tv Size)" to the title, for consistency

[Hellzero Easy]
Finishes to add, they're in the song
SPOILER
00:05:309 (1) Start
00:06:558 (2)
00:07:808 (5)
00:23:880 (1) Start
00:29:594 (1) Start
00:31:022 (1) Start
00:31:915 (2) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:32:451 (3) Start
00:33:344 (4) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:34:237 (1) End(Lower volume, maybe)
00:35:308 (2) Start
00:48:165 (3) Start
00:52:451 (2) Start
01:08:165 (1) Start
01:09:951 (4) Start

[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider :D), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too
(Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

[biwako's Hard]
You stacked notes really much... as this 1/4 stack seem 1/2 stack...
00:03:165 (4,5,6) - Like this, she's not repeating, and like that is better to play
00:11:022 (1,2,3) - As the sillab (3) follow is repeated, like this it play better
00:32:272 (5,6) - Destack them like this
00:34:237 (2,3,4) - Destack them like this
01:06:558 (6,7) - surely overmapped, only a slider was better
01:13:880 (1,2,3) - Destack and spread like this

[Insane]
00:04:058 (3) - Blanket (5) like this
00:07:808 (3,4) - do some helix like this (as now it isn't so graphically good) and blanket 00:08:701 (6) like this
00:55:665 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagon like this
Fixed
kirinoimouto22
*-------*
love R-15 songs *o*
i can't star but, omedotou is a good map ^^
Laurier
hi~

easy
-change combo color?
why easy diff is Default
-The SliderMultiplier in Easy diff is 0.799999999999999 currently, maybe you should fix this to 0.8 manually by open osu file.

normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 -   add note?

hard
AR+1?

insane
00:10:130 (3) I think that the same one as order of the form of - is good.
00:49:594 (1) - Is 2nd waypont required? The same form is desirable.00:50:665 (3) -
00:54:237 (7) - 2 grid left?
01:23:701 (8) - delete 3rd waypoint

good map
fight~
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Laurier wrote:

hi~

easy
-change combo color?
why easy diff is Default Fixed
-The SliderMultiplier in Easy diff is 0.799999999999999 currently, maybe you should fix this to 0.8 manually by open osu file. Fixed

normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 -   add note?

hard
AR+1?

insane
00:10:130 (3) I think that the same one as order of the form of - is good.
00:49:594 (1) - Is 2nd waypont required? The same form is desirable.00:50:665 (3) -
00:54:237 (7) - 2 grid left?
01:23:701 (8) - delete 3rd waypoint

good map
fight~
Thx.Fixed only in easy diff
Megurine Luka
/me from IRC request

[General]

del osb. file since you do not have storyboard
since you have set the custom skin,
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,196,255
Combo2 : 255,214,193
Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 119,187,255
Combo5 : 230,230,0
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
add the red font line to avoid conflict between players' custom skin and your skin.


[Easy]

00:06:915 (3) - del. note on red tick is not recommended in easy
00:39:951 (2) - del
01:09:773 (3) - del
01:16:023 (3,4) - make into one reversible slider

Nice map :D

[Normal]

np

[Hard]
00:04:772 (10) - 1 grid down
00:32:451 (6) - hmmm>http://puu.sh/6GCT


[Insane]
00:08:523 (5) - not stack well O.O
00:21:022 (1) - hmmm. don't like this small jump, I prefer you remain the regular distance
00:24:594 (3) - add fin at slider beginning
00:40:487 (3) - make the slider beginning and end in the same vertical line
01:06:558 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - make a right hexagon
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Megurine Luka wrote:

/me from IRC request

[General]

del osb. file since you do not have storyboard
since you have set the custom skin,
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,196,255
Combo2 : 255,214,193
Combo3 : 179,102,255
Combo4 : 119,187,255
Combo5 : 230,230,0
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
add the red font line to avoid conflict between players' custom skin and your skin.


[Easy]

00:06:915 (3) - del. note on red tick is not recommended in easy
00:39:951 (2) - del
01:09:773 (3) - del
01:16:023 (3,4) - make into one reversible slider

Nice map :D

[Normal]

np

[Hard]
00:04:772 (10) - 1 grid down
00:32:451 (6) - hmmm>http://puu.sh/6GCT


[Insane]
00:08:523 (5) - not stack well O.O
00:21:022 (1) - hmmm. don't like this small jump, I prefer you remain the regular distance
00:24:594 (3) - add fin at slider beginning
00:40:487 (3) - make the slider beginning and end in the same vertical line
01:06:558 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - make a right hexagon
Easy without change.Insane fixed
biwako
Kawayi Rika
hi ~ Kuma-san~ :)

my some tips~


[General]

If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.
Please complete the full set SKIN.


[Insane]

00:14:951 (7) - move the here X:328 Y:180.
00:29:147 (7) - Remove note Better listen.


[biwako's Hard]

00:38:165 (6) - add NC.
00:48:165 (1) - Remove NC.
00:48:522 (2) - add NC.
01:26:915 (6) - ^


[tera's Normal]

00:30:665 - add note + clap.
00:58:165 (3) - end point add finish.
01:02:451 (5) - start point add finish.
01:13:522 (5) - end point add finish.
01:15:665 (3) - Remove reentry clap.
01:25:308 (7) - add finish.


[Hellzero's Easy]

00:13:165 (4,5) - change Reentry slider?
01:16:023 (3,4) - ^
01:26:915 (5) - end point add finish,Remove whistle.


Kawaii song I like it~
nice job ~ ;)
Please accept my star (My Heart) >///<
good luck ~
Vass_Bass
:3

General
Предлагаю разделить столь большое киаи
00:53:880 - думаю здесь сделать надо сделать еще фонтан, 01:05:308 а здесь вовсе удалить
Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4,5) - not good pattern, delete (3,4) and add there slider 00:07:094 - 00:07:451
00:13:165 (4,5) - ^ delete (5) and add note there 00:13:522
01:01:737 (5,6) - overlapped, move (5)
01:09:415 (2,3,4) - same as there 00:06:558
01:15:308 (2,3,4) - ^ 00:13:165

tera's Normal
00:06:737 (3) - 00:07:094-clap
00:24:951 (6) - delete finish
00:25:308 (1,3,5) - finish on start
00:48:165 (1) - ^
00:58:165 (3) - 00:59:594 - finish
01:16:022 - delete finish from there

biwako's Hard
really nice
00:43:522 (5) - sounds bad, replace it by circles
00:59:237 (9) - ^
01:08:522 (3) - ^
01:12:808 (5) - nazi, but move it oooone grid down please
01:26:915 (6) - new combo

Insane
больше финишей в начале
00:06:558 (1,2,3,4) - эту часть можно сделать нормал звуками
00:07:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - так много оверлапов что запутаться можно, 00:08:165 (4) - либо здесь новое комбо, либо эту часть отдели от предыдущего слайдера
00:22:808 (2) - спейсинг
00:23:522 (6,7) - ^
00:26:380 (4,5) - нехорошо выглядит, лучше перемести куда-нибудь перед слайдером
00:30:665 (1,2) - тут можно и не заметить что смена скорости пошла, так что переставь зеленую тайм секцию на слайдер, а эти круги расставь по спейсингу
01:05:308 (2,4) - не очень красиво выглядит, выровняй чтоб аккуратно было и можно расставить как-нибудь так

ну вот, удачи :3
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
Thanks Rika and Vass_Bass
Insane was fixed
terametis
JauiPlaY
[tera's Normal]
00:04:594 (5) - Bad overlapping... 
I think others are fine, but add more claps if you want please.
And also, please control your combo between 4-7.

Fixed

lovhin456
tera's Normal;
- 00:02:451 >> finish at start
- 00:05:308 >> ^
- 00:36:737 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:42:451 >> ^
- 00:47:094 >> clap
- 00:49:951 >> clap
- 00:50:655 >> from here you mess the hitsound pattern, keep it consistent or it sounds weird
- 01:02:987 >> Start the slider here instead but end at the same spot
- 01:07:808 >> remove clap and add finish

All Fixed

HakuNoKaemi
[tera's Normal]
Follow Easy Finish suggestion too
00:04:594 (5) - Stack under 00:03:165 (2) ? (move 00:05:308 (1) - 1 grid right to to make the blanket remain )
00:05:308 (1,2,3) - Whirpool? (simply move slider ), maybe stack 00:07:808 (4) - under 00:06:022
(2) - end too (Only if you want)
00:58:165 (3) - uhm, isn't better like this? You followed drums, yeah, but actually the slider use did follow voice

Almost Fixed

Laurier
normal
00:41:737 -&00:42:094 -   add note?

sorry,dont change.

Kawayi Rika
[tera's Normal]

00:30:665 - add note + clap.
00:58:165 (3) - end point add finish.
01:02:451 (5) - start point add finish.
01:13:522 (5) - end point add finish.
01:15:665 (3) - Remove reentry clap.
01:25:308 (7) - add finish.

some place fixed

Vass_Bass
tera's Normal
00:06:737 (3) - 00:07:094-clap
00:24:951 (6) - delete finish
00:25:308 (1,3,5) - finish on start
00:48:165 (1) - ^
00:58:165 (3) - 00:59:594 - finish
01:16:022 - delete finish from there

some place fixed

thanks for mod!

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [tera's Normal].osu
Yasora
Hi~ ^ ^

Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4) I think this part, it's too hard for easy. can change it like this? http://puu.sh/6JHG
01:01:737 (5) NC?
01:02:451 (1) del NC?

tera's Normal
maybe...the title is Tera's Normal?

biwako's Hard
maybe....(same with normal) the title is Biwako's Hard?
00:21:201 (6) NC?
00:26:737 (6) ^
00:37:630 (5) ^

Insane
00:07:808 (3) add finish in the beginning?
00:21:022 (1) add clap?
00:22:451 (1) add clap in the beginning?
00:48:165 (1) add finish?
01:07:808 (7) del clap, add finish?

okay~ that's all my mod~ I hope my mod can help you :3
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ ^ ^

Hellzero's Easy
00:06:558 (2,3,4) I think this part, it's too hard for easy. can change it like this? http://puu.sh/6JHG
01:01:737 (5) NC?
01:02:451 (1) del NC?

tera's Normal
maybe...the title is Tera's Normal?

biwako's Hard
maybe....(same with normal) the title is Biwako's Hard?
00:21:201 (6) NC?
00:26:737 (6) ^
00:37:630 (5) ^

Insane
00:07:808 (3) add finish in the beginning?
00:21:022 (1) add clap?
00:22:451 (1) add clap in the beginning?
00:48:165 (1) add finish?
01:07:808 (7) del clap, add finish?

okay~ that's all my mod~ I hope my mod can help you :3
Thanks
biwako
TicClick
Я не забыл, но пока что времени не будет. Надеюсь, заскочу на следующей неделе.
Saten
General
I found you a credit-less Video using about half the space of the current one (Video offset 662ms)
SPOILER
(The R-15 censor is gone though, but I don't see any problem with it. The censors was silly and more disturbing anyway)

Insane
00:05:130 (1) - Finish at the end
00:06:558 (1) - Finish at the beginning
00:29:594 (1,3,5) - Finish
00:31:022 (3) - Finish at the beginning
00:39:594 (1) - finish
00:40:487 (3) - finish at the end
00:49:237 (6) - clap at the beginning
01:08:880 (3) - finish at the end
01:09:415 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:17:272 (2) - 1 grid right
01:25:308 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:26:558 (7) - finish

biwako's Hard
00:13:165 (8) - whistle on the second and last one?
00:36:737 (1) - finish
00:38:166 (1) - ^
00:42:451 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:43:880 (6) - ^
00:52:451 (4) - ^ and slide-whistle
00:53:880 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:55:308 (5) - ^
01:22:451 (1) - ^ and slide-whistle
01:16:201 (9,10) - whistle?

tera's Normal
00:43:880 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:26:022 (1) - finish

Hellzero's Easy
01:26:558 (4) - finish
01:26:915 (5) - finish at the end

That's all~♪
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Saten-san wrote:

General
I found you a credit-less Video using about half the space of the current one (Video offset 662ms)
SPOILER
(The R-15 censor is gone though, but I don't see any problem with it. The censors was silly and more disturbing anyway)

Insane
00:05:130 (1) - Finish at the end
00:06:558 (1) - Finish at the beginning
00:29:594 (1,3,5) - Finish
00:31:022 (3) - Finish at the beginning
00:39:594 (1) - finish
00:40:487 (3) - finish at the end
00:49:237 (6) - clap at the beginning
01:08:880 (3) - finish at the end
01:09:415 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:17:272 (2) - 1 grid right
01:25:308 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:26:558 (7) - finish

biwako's Hard
00:13:165 (8) - whistle on the second and last one?
00:36:737 (1) - finish
00:38:166 (1) - ^
00:42:451 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:43:880 (6) - ^
00:52:451 (4) - ^ and slide-whistle
00:53:880 (1) - whistle in the beginning
00:55:308 (5) - ^
01:22:451 (1) - ^ and slide-whistle
01:16:201 (9,10) - whistle?

tera's Normal
00:43:880 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:26:022 (1) - finish

Hellzero's Easy
01:26:558 (4) - finish
01:26:915 (5) - finish at the end

That's all~♪
Insane,Easy and normal was fixed.Thanks
biwako
biwako
Reiji-RJ
Как и обещала С:

[Hellzero's Easy]

00:08:165 (1) - финиш? под "yaaaaay~"
01:11:022 (1) - ^

Отличная :3

[tera's Normal]

00:08:165 (1) - finish?
00:12:451 (3) - whistle
00:13:165 (5) - ^
00:13:880 (1) - ^
00:16:737 (1) - ^
00:18:165 (3) - finish?
00:19:594 (1) - finish as in Hellzero's diff? It's cool :3
00:21:022 (3) - ^
00:22:451 (1) - ^
00:23:880 (3) - ^
00:24:594 (5) - ^
00:25:308 (1) - ^
00:26:737 (3) - ^
00:28:165 (5) - ^
00:31:022 (1) - ^
01:08:165 (1) - ^
01:11:022 (1) - yaaay, finish?

And try to work with whistles :3
Good!

[biwako's Hard]

Good job with normal whistles!

00:06:558 (6) - finish
00:25:308 (x) - add note?

[Hard] and [Insane] will mod in irc ><
biwako
terametis
KayeSara
OK, finished~
And the name of Background is "TaikoBG"

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [KS's Taiko].osu

xierbaliti
the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
KayeSara

xierbaliti wrote:

the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
._. There are limited advice on my diff at present Orz
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

KayeSara wrote:

xierbaliti wrote:

the taiko diff is fine to me ._.
._. It haven't get some advices Orz
Arken(arien) said what its haven't problems
Breeze

General

  1. I've checked wiki, it seems title should be "R-15♡ - HIRAMEKI! Peace(≧▽≦)v (TV Size)"

Hellzero's Easy

  1. Consider adding a short audio lead-in about 1s since this diff. starts earlier than others, too close to mp3 started point

Tera's Normal

  1. 00:31:022 (1) - Add finish?

KS's Taiko

  1. 00:40:130 (1) - D seems better? Or use d to 00:40:487 (2)?

biwako's Hard

  1. 00:42:808 (2) - Put this note a bit out of slider end seems better, it's easily read to a 1/2 beat space note
  2. 00:57:094 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:022 (2) - Add finish?

Hard

  1. 00:07:094 (6,7,8) - Why here use tiny spacing? It might be confusing
  2. 00:36:201 (1) - Remove new combo, use new combo at 00:36:737 (2) due to BPM change
  3. 00:42:987 (1) - Turn this sldier to right looked better IMO

Insane

  1. 00:02:272 (1) - Turn this slider to left seems played more comfortable
  2. 00:29:237 (5) - Spacing too close, might be confusing
  3. 00:30:665 (1) - Remove new combo, use NC to 00:31:022 (3) since BPM change starts here

nice map
star
biwako

Breeze wrote:

biwako's Hard

  1. 00:42:808 (2) - Put this note a bit out of slider end seems better, it's easily read to a 1/2 beat space note
  2. 00:57:094 (2) - ^
  3. 00:31:022 (2) - Add finish?
all fixed.

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [biwako's Hard].osu
Rewrite
nice map~
KayeSara

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. I've checked wiki, it seems title should be "R-15♡ - HIRAMEKI! Peace(≧▽≦)v (TV Size)"
    SPOILER
    ATTACH[0.jpg]
If you accept it, could you help me change it ?

KS's Taiko

  1. 00:40:130 (1) - D seems better? Or use d to 00:40:487 (2)?
Fix as you said!
Thx for your modding

Download: R-15 - HIRAMEKI! Peace (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [KS's Taiko].osu
terametis

Tera's Normal

  1. 00:31:022 (1) - Add finish?

fixed
Breeze
Since original title "R-15♡ - HIRAMEKI! Peace(≧▽≦)v (TV Size)" would lead to a error when load map
So present title suppose to be fine, rechecked and bubbled
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
Yay~
Curisu
good bg rofl
looking forward to ranking :D
Hellzero
На моей дифе
00:08:880 -
01:11:737 -
тут финишей не должно быть orz
Если лопнут бабл, то убери.
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Hellzero wrote:

На моей дифе
00:08:880 -
01:11:737 -
тут финишей не должно быть orz
Если лопнут бабл, то убери.
Ur diff have a good hitsounds
Hellzero
Да гуд гуд, но я их туда не ставил...
_Yamada__old
мне бы так мапки делать ._.
abalee
I thought it is your first map hmm...
keep improving in the future.

ranked.
Kawayi Rika
kawaii song ~ kuma ~

Congratulations ~ :)
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
THANKS GUYS \o/
KayeSara
Good!!!!!!Ranking!!!!
And Happy XD

Edit :_L u c i f e R_ thx for you again XD
_L u c i f e R_
A good map..
Congratulations~

Edit: :) ~KS~You are doing much better on your taiko..+U~
terametis
Congratulations~
biwako
grats :)
Megurine Luka
Congtz
Topic Starter
Kuma-san
Thanks
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