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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on neděle 15. října 2017 at 1:47:13

Artist: Sana feat.Nekomata Master
Title: Indigo Bird
Tags: Naoyuki Sato Sanae Shintani Raindrops KONAMI♪MUSICフル KONAMI 新谷早苗 佐藤直之
BPM: 88
Filesize: 8033kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (1,29 stars, 450 notes)
  2. Normal - 4Key (1,76 stars, 632 notes)
  3. Unspoken Words - 4Key (2,31 stars, 955 notes)


Download: Sana feat.Nekomata Master - Indigo Bird
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Credit
■ Hitsounds by dudehacker.
■ Storyboard by Acnos.
■ Thank you Botan for all the help while mapping this.
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Metadata
Lyrics
English

Wandering barefooted on dried up sands
I sighed and stopped my step to shout at the night sky

The faraway path is a path that leads to you
At this rate, I wish the wind would just blow me away

Without realizing, I’m dreaming the same thing again
Perhaps it is of that night when time stopped

The word that I couldn’t tell you, I will try to reel it in no matter how many times
The place where the thread snapped off, now I can’t remember it anymore…
The common scenery and the future, you made them all shine with your light
Even though we are separated so far, I’m still bewitched by you in moonlit nights
Like ripples on water

I want to be on someone’s side, to be an irreplaceable someone
The truth is I have always known the answer

If I happened to meet you somewhere
I would have already become a bird unrecognizable by you

I’m going to forget everything, because by this night I will be reborn
I’m going to ride on the whimsical wind so I can reach a city somewhere far
Forgetting anything and everything, I will be a bird who doesn’t know you
To the smile that I used to love so much, before the morning sun rises,

“Goodbye”


Romanized

Hadashi de samayotta kawaita suna no ue
Tame iki yozora ni ukabete tachidomaru

Haruka na michinori wa kimi he to tsudzuku michi
Kono mama kaze ni fukaretetai

Itsu no ma ni ka mata onnaji yume miteru
Sore wa tabun toki ga tomatta ano yoru

Tsutaerarenakatta kotoba wo nando mo taguriyosete miru yo
Putsuri to ito ga kireta basho wo ima de wa mou omoi dasenai…
Arifureta keshiki mo mirai mo kimi no hikari de kagayaiteta
Konna ni tooku hanaretete mo tsukiyo ni bakasete wa kurikaesu
Sazanami no you ni

Dareka ni ite hoshii dare ni mo kawarenai
Honto wa kotae ga wakatteru

Moshi doko ka de kimi ni deatta to shite mo
Kidzukarenai tori ni natte shimaetara

Mou subete wasurete shimau yo kono yoru de umare kawaru kara
Kimagure na kazemuki ni notte doko ka no machi he tadoritsukeru
Nani mo ka mo wasurete shimau yo kimi wo shiranai tori ni natte
Anna ni suki datta egao mo asahi ga noboru mae ni

“Sayonara”
posted
Fun map.
posted
Hello Calcyon~ coming from my modq

|1|2|3|4|
Easy
  1. 00:06:522 (6522|2) - Consider to make this to LN, cuz here 00:09:249 (9249|3) - you did, and they are same music right?
  2. 00:14:363 (14363|1) - Move this note to col [1] to avoid double-hit, not so nice to beginner right?
  3. 00:24:931 (24931|2) - Move to col [4] will make pattern seems more nice
  4. 00:26:976 (26976|3) - Move it to 00:27:658 - , heavy beat cycle wrong
  5. 01:24:590 - delete a note, it's note heavy same like 01:24:590 -
  6. 01:59:022 (119022|2,119363|2,119704|2) - change it
Normal
  1. 00:25:101 (25101|0,25272|1) - here rhythm is not same with 00:30:613 (30613|0,30726|1) - , you'd better check it, I think there two should be same
  2. 00:43:681 - 00:44:363 - add a note to reflect the cymbal even you catch vocal to LN, same problem here 00:54:931 - 00:54:931 -
Hard
  1. 00:06:408 (6408|1) - move this to col [3], avoid double-hit
  2. 00:09:136 (9136|1) - move to col [3]
  3. 00:11:636 (11636|1,11636|2,11863|1,11863|2) - why here are two notes?
  4. 00:22:204 - add a note
It's fun map really~ good luck :)
posted

Unspoken Words


00:00:386 (386|2,386|3,954|3,954|2)
00:03:113 (3113|0,3113|3)
00:05:840 (5840|2,5840|3,6408|0,6408|1)
00:07:204 (7204|3,7204|1)
00:07:886 (7886|3,7886|2)
00:10:954 (10954|1,10954|3,11295|2,11295|0)
00:11:636 (11636|2,11636|1,11863|2,11863|1)
00:13:340 (13340|2,13340|0)
00:15:954 (15954|2,15954|3,16408|2,16408|1)

^ These all don't match the style of the of the rest of the map which is mostly singles. May want to double check these. If I'm missing something major, let me know. I'm not always perfect with these :p

00:02:772 (2772|1,2999|1) - Small anchor but may be difficult for a 2* player to read and play

00:05:158 (5158|0) - This should start at 00:05:045 (5045|0)

00:26:181 (26181|1) - Should be in column [1]

00:26:863 (26863|1) - Should be in column [3]

00:30:954 (30954|2,31067|2) - Try to avoid these

00:31:636 (31636|1,31749|1) - ^

00:41:863 (41863|2,41976|2) - ^

00:42:545 (42545|0,42658|0) - ^

00:47:317 (47317|2,47431|2) - ^

00:47:999 (47999|1,48113|1) - ^

00:52:772 (52772|1,52886|1) - ^

00:53:454 (53454|2,53567|2) - ^

01:17:658 (77658|3,77772|3) - ^

01:26:863 (86863|2,86976|2) - ^

01:27:545 (87545|1,87658|1) - ^

01:32:317 (92317|2,92431|2) - ^

01:32:999 (92999|1,93113|1) - ^

01:37:772 (97772|3,97886|3) - ^

01:38:454 (98454|0,98567|0) - ^

01:43:226 (103226|2,103340|2) - ^

01:43:908 (103908|1,104022|1) - ^

That's the most I'm going to point out for those.

01:19:562 (79562|2) - Ghost

01:22:317 (82317|1) - ^

01:19:647 (79647|1,79732|0) - These sound off-beat

01:22:715 (82715|2,82715|1) - These should be at 01:22:772 (82772|1,82772|2)

^ That is going to be too hard to play. Try to make it something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8781456

01:23:397 (83397|1,83397|2,83482|0,83482|3,83567|2,83567|1) - ^

01:56:295 (116295|3,116976|0) - I don't know why these LNs are here if they aren't being used elsewhere to represent the same sound.

Overall, I found it to be a very fun and relaxing map to play with some very nice 1/6 mapping to boot! If I missed out anything, feel free to tell me!

Good luck!
posted

_Stan wrote:

Hello Calcyon~ coming from my modq

|1|2|3|4|
Easy
  1. 00:06:522 (6522|2) - Consider to make this to LN, cuz here 00:09:249 (9249|3) - you did, and they are same music right? Fixed!
  2. 00:14:363 (14363|1) - Move this note to col [1] to avoid double-hit, not so nice to beginner right? Fixed!
  3. 00:24:931 (24931|2) - Move to col [4] will make pattern seems more nice Fixed!
  4. 00:26:976 (26976|3) - Move it to 00:27:658 - , heavy beat cycle wrong Fixed!
  5. 01:24:590 - delete a note, it's note heavy same like 01:24:590 - Fixed!
  6. 01:59:022 (119022|2,119363|2,119704|2) - change it Fixed!
Normal
  1. 00:25:101 (25101|0,25272|1) - here rhythm is not same with 00:30:613 (30613|0,30726|1) - , you'd better check it, I think there two should be same Fixed!
  2. 00:43:681 - 00:44:363 - add a note to reflect the cymbal even you catch vocal to LN, same problem here 00:54:931 - 00:54:931 -Fixed!
Hard
  1. 00:06:408 (6408|1) - move this to col [3], avoid double-hit Fixed!
  2. 00:09:136 (9136|1) - move to col [3] Fixed!
  3. 00:11:636 (11636|1,11636|2,11863|1,11863|2) - why here are two notes? Fixed!
  4. 00:22:204 - add a note Fixed!
It's fun map really~ good luck :)
Thanks for your mod, appreciate it a lot!
posted

Insp1r3 wrote:

Unspoken Words


00:00:386 (386|2,386|3,954|3,954|2)
00:03:113 (3113|0,3113|3)
00:05:840 (5840|2,5840|3,6408|0,6408|1)
00:07:204 (7204|3,7204|1)
00:07:886 (7886|3,7886|2)
00:10:954 (10954|1,10954|3,11295|2,11295|0)
00:11:636 (11636|2,11636|1,11863|2,11863|1)
00:13:340 (13340|2,13340|0)
00:15:954 (15954|2,15954|3,16408|2,16408|1)

^ These all don't match the style of the of the rest of the map which is mostly singles. May want to double check these. If I'm missing something major, let me know. I'm not always perfect with these :p Fixed! Discussed it and came to a different solution

00:02:772 (2772|1,2999|1) - Small anchor but may be difficult for a 2* player to read and play Fixed!

00:05:158 (5158|0) - This should start at 00:05:045 (5045|0) Fixed!

00:26:181 (26181|1) - Should be in column [1] Fixed!

00:26:863 (26863|1) - Should be in column [3] Fixed!

00:30:954 (30954|2,31067|2) - Try to avoid these

00:31:636 (31636|1,31749|1) - ^

00:41:863 (41863|2,41976|2) - ^

00:42:545 (42545|0,42658|0) - ^

00:47:317 (47317|2,47431|2) - ^

00:47:999 (47999|1,48113|1) - ^

00:52:772 (52772|1,52886|1) - ^

00:53:454 (53454|2,53567|2) - ^

01:17:658 (77658|3,77772|3) - ^

01:26:863 (86863|2,86976|2) - ^

01:27:545 (87545|1,87658|1) - ^

01:32:317 (92317|2,92431|2) - ^

01:32:999 (92999|1,93113|1) - ^

01:37:772 (97772|3,97886|3) - ^

01:38:454 (98454|0,98567|0) - ^

01:43:226 (103226|2,103340|2) - ^

01:43:908 (103908|1,104022|1) - ^

That's the most I'm going to point out for those. Fixed! Changed the minijacks into longjumps, should fit the song better now.

01:19:562 (79562|2) - Ghost Fixed!

01:22:317 (82317|1) - ^ Fixed!

01:19:647 (79647|1,79732|0) - These sound off-beat Fixed!

01:22:715 (82715|2,82715|1) - These should be at 01:22:772 (82772|1,82772|2) mapped to drums and then piano, i think it's right, might change in the future

^ That is going to be too hard to play. Try to make it something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8781456 Fixed!

01:23:397 (83397|1,83397|2,83482|0,83482|3,83567|2,83567|1) - ^ Fixed!

01:56:295 (116295|3,116976|0) - I don't know why these LNs are here if they aren't being used elsewhere to represent the same sound. Fixed!

Overall, I found it to be a very fun and relaxing map to play with some very nice 1/6 mapping to boot! If I missed out anything, feel free to tell me!

Good luck!
Thanks a lot for the mod and the help ingame!
posted
Hi hi, first time modding from a lowly #88,000 ranked player.
Also because I'm a new mania player I don't know all the terminology so bear with me. x)
started: 6:50pm

General
  1. Raise the volume during the chorus, 50% sounds alright.
  2. Beginning at 00:41:295... I think it would fit the music a lot better if you mapped chords on the piano chords. There's nothing wrong with what you have currently, I just think it would be better. Would require the entire section to be remapped though...

Normal

00:09:931 (9931|1) - Any reason why this isn't a chord? The guitar pluck is noticeably softer here so it being a single note is fine but you mapped 00:11:295 (11295|3,11295|2) as a chord even though it's the exact same sound. I think making both patterns the same here is best.
00:24:931 (24931|3) - Same with this one, this should be a chord just like the other ones. The sound remains the same so the notes should be the same in this case.
01:22:772 (82772|1,82886|0,82886|3,82886|2) - Personally I find this to be too hard to play for a Normal, especially when this is only a 1.68*. I think a 2-note chord is suits this difficulty better. The entire map doesn't play like a harder normal either which is why I believe the 3-note chord is too hard. If we want to talk about the consistency of note composition, 01:22:204 (82204|1,82204|2) is the same sound but mapped differently (2-note chord).
01:23:567 (83567|2,83567|3,83567|1) - Same as ^
01:24:249 (84249|0,84249|1,84249|3) - Same as ^
>> To compare, I think 01:37:204 (97204|1,97204|2,97204|3) is an acceptable 3-note chord because there's enough space and time for players to react to it.
01:42:658 (102658|2,102772|3,102886|1,102999|0) - I might not be able to hear it but this sounds the same as 01:31:749 (91749|3,91749|1,91976|2,92090|0) but mapped differently? Feels weird to play if we take into account what we've played so far AND because that pattern doesn't appear in the chorus again so it just feels out of place.
01:51:181 (111181|3,111522|0,111522|3) - Map this so it's consistent with how you've mapped everything else. It's undermapped. (arifureta keshiki mo mirai mo) <-- map the "eee" sound in mirai
01:53:567 (113567|1,113567|0,113567|3) - The sound here isn't strong enough for a 3-note chord and isn't consistent with the rest of the chorus. 01:59:022 (119022|2,119022|1,119022|3) is good because of the crash cymbal. If anything, 01:48:113 (108113|3,108113|2) should be a 3-note chord, but I personally think there should be zero 3-note chords in this difficulty.

finished 8:01pm
posted
Hi Caly~

NM Req from Chochoa's Queue

Feel Free to Reject My Mods
1|2|3|4


mod Inside
General
-widescreen support

Normal

00:09:931 - add note on 4
00:10:613 - move to 1
00:31:408 (31408|3) - move to col 3, cuz it has a different sound from 00:31:067 (31067|3) - , jack is doestn't fit
00:31:749 (31749|2) - move to 4
00:38:056 (38056|1) - delete necessary note
00:45:386 (45386|0,45386|2,45726|1,45726|3,46067|2,46067|0,46408|2,46408|1,46749|3,46749|0) - idk why u make it double???!
00:54:249 (54249|3,54931|0,55613|1) - delete , just layering
01:02:431 (62431|2,62431|1,62772|2,62772|3) - make it single
01:25:158 (85158|2) - no needed , delete

Unspoken Words

00:01:067 (1067|0) - ln should start from here 00:00:954 -
00:05:158 (5158|0) - & 00:06:522 (6522|3) - & 00:08:567 (8567|3,9249|0) - & other part like that, same as above^
00:09:136 (9136|2,9476|2,9817|2,10158|2) - avoid this anchor , try another pattern
00:17:431 (17431|3) - would be better start from 00:17:772 - just piano
00:22:886 (22886|0,23226|0,23567|0,23908|0,24249|0) - change pattern
00:27:204 (27204|2,27545|1,27658|3,27886|0,28226|2) - you can delete that, just ln to cover vocal
so u can re arrange this issue 00:28:340 (28340|0,28681|0,29022|0,29363|0,29704|0) -
00:38:567 - ln start
00:45:386 (45386|1,45613|1,46067|2,46295|2,46408|1,46636|1) - avoid that jack, since it's a hard diff not insane
00:48:681 (48681|2,49022|2,49363|2,49704|2) - same as previous problem~
00:59:817 (59817|2,59931|1,60045|0,60272|0,60386|3,60386|1,60499|2,60613|0,60726|1,60840|3,60954|2) - nothing sound has change in this section so re arrange, make like previous section~
01:41:295 (101295|2,101636|2,101976|2,102317|2,102658|2) - re arrange pattern


ez diff it's okay for me~

GL with your maps~
posted

Botan wrote:

Hi hi, first time modding from a lowly #88,000 ranked player.
Also because I'm a new mania player I don't know all the terminology so bear with me. x)
started: 6:50pm

General
  1. Raise the volume during the chorus, 50% sounds alright. Fixed! (will do it properly when I'll get around to hitsounding.)
  2. Beginning at 00:41:295... I think it would fit the music a lot better if you mapped chords on the piano chords. There's nothing wrong with what you have currently, I just think it would be better. Would require the entire section to be remapped though... thank you for this, although i agree it might sound better, for playability purposes, I'm going to keep it consistent with the rest, might rethink this later though

Normal

00:09:931 (9931|1) - Any reason why this isn't a chord? The guitar pluck is noticeably softer here so it being a single note is fine but you mapped 00:11:295 (11295|3,11295|2) as a chord even though it's the exact same sound. I think making both patterns the same here is best. Fixed!
00:24:931 (24931|3) - Same with this one, this should be a chord just like the other ones. The sound remains the same so the notes should be the same in this case. Fixed!
01:22:772 (82772|1,82886|0,82886|3,82886|2) - Personally I find this to be too hard to play for a Normal, especially when this is only a 1.68*. I think a 2-note chord is suits this difficulty better. The entire map doesn't play like a harder normal either which is why I believe the 3-note chord is too hard. If we want to talk about the consistency of note composition, 01:22:204 (82204|1,82204|2) is the same sound but mapped differently (2-note chord). Fixed! Agreed.
01:23:567 (83567|2,83567|3,83567|1) - Same as ^ Fixed!
01:24:249 (84249|0,84249|1,84249|3) - Same as ^ Fixed!
>> To compare, I think 01:37:204 (97204|1,97204|2,97204|3) is an acceptable 3-note chord because there's enough space and time for players to react to it.
01:42:658 (102658|2,102772|3,102886|1,102999|0) - I might not be able to hear it but this sounds the same as 01:31:749 (91749|3,91749|1,91976|2,92090|0) but mapped differently? Feels weird to play if we take into account what we've played so far AND because that pattern doesn't appear in the chorus again so it just feels out of place. Fixed! same for ^
01:51:181 (111181|3,111522|0,111522|3) - Map this so it's consistent with how you've mapped everything else. It's undermapped. (arifureta keshiki mo mirai mo) <-- map the "eee" sound in mirai Fixed!
01:53:567 (113567|1,113567|0,113567|3) - The sound here isn't strong enough for a 3-note chord and isn't consistent with the rest of the chorus. 01:59:022 (119022|2,119022|1,119022|3) is good because of the crash cymbal. If anything, 01:48:113 (108113|3,108113|2) should be a 3-note chord, but I personally think there should be zero 3-note chords in this difficulty. Agreed. In this case I feel like it's none, or all of them. For now I've decided against triplets, might change it later.

finished 8:01pm
Thank you for the mod!~
posted

ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Hi Caly~

NM Req from Chochoa's Queue

Feel Free to Reject My Mods
1|2|3|4


mod Inside
General
-widescreen support

Normal

00:09:931 - add note on 4 Fixed!
00:10:613 - move to 1 Fixed!
00:31:408 (31408|3) - move to col 3, cuz it has a different sound from 00:31:067 (31067|3) - , jack is doestn't fit Fixed!
00:31:749 (31749|2) - move to 4 Fixed!
00:38:056 (38056|1) - delete necessary note Mapped to the guitar (not the vocals :p), keeping it for now, might decide against it later.
00:45:386 (45386|0,45386|2,45726|1,45726|3,46067|2,46067|0,46408|2,46408|1,46749|3,46749|0) - idk why u make it double???! Fixed!
00:54:249 (54249|3,54931|0,55613|1) - delete , just layering Fixed!
01:02:431 (62431|2,62431|1,62772|2,62772|3) - make it single Same drum sound as 01:01:749 (61749|1,61749|2) - so I'll keep it for now,
also I think it closes out the section pretty nicely.

01:25:158 (85158|2) - no needed , delete Mapped to the guitar, which is also mapped in the next stair, going to keep it for now.

Unspoken Words

00:01:067 (1067|0) - ln should start from here 00:00:954 -
00:05:158 (5158|0) - & 00:06:522 (6522|3) - & 00:08:567 (8567|3,9249|0) - & other part like that, same as above^ LNs are mapped to the quiet choir, not the guitar. Same for the above ^
00:09:136 (9136|2,9476|2,9817|2,10158|2) - avoid this anchor , try another pattern Fixed!
00:17:431 (17431|3) - would be better start from 00:17:772 - just piano Again, going to keep this LN, because I mapped it to the choir and the other LN to the guitar.
00:22:886 (22886|0,23226|0,23567|0,23908|0,24249|0) - change pattern Fixed!
00:27:204 (27204|2,27545|1,27658|3,27886|0,28226|2) - you can delete that, just ln to cover vocal I am keeping it for now to maintain the same feel I was aiming for, if it gets mentioned again by someone else, I will probably change it.
so u can re arrange this issue 00:28:340 (28340|0,28681|0,29022|0,29363|0,29704|0) - Fixed!
00:38:567 - ln start Fixed!
00:45:386 (45386|1,45613|1,46067|2,46295|2,46408|1,46636|1) - avoid that jack, since it's a hard diff not insane Fixed!
00:48:681 (48681|2,49022|2,49363|2,49704|2) - same as previous problem~
00:59:817 (59817|2,59931|1,60045|0,60272|0,60386|3,60386|1,60499|2,60613|0,60726|1,60840|3,60954|2) - nothing sound has change in this section so re arrange, make like previous section~ Fixed! (I think? I hope this is how you meant it :p)
01:41:295 (101295|2,101636|2,101976|2,102317|2,102658|2) - re arrange pattern Fixed!


ez diff it's okay for me~

GL with your maps~
Thanks a lot for the mod!!!~
posted
Hello~
NM req from my queue~

Unspoken Words
00:15:613 (15613|1,15726|2) - mending pindah ke 12 aja..
00:30:613 (30613|2,30726|1) - lbih baik ctrl + H


Maaf cuma nemu dikit banget ><
Kalo gak ngeabantu gak usah kudos :3

Good Luck~
posted

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~
NM req from my queue~

Unspoken Words
00:15:613 (15613|1,15726|2) - mending pindah ke 12 aja.. Fixed!
00:30:613 (30613|2,30726|1) - lbih baik ctrl + H Fixed!


Maaf cuma nemu dikit banget ><
Kalo gak ngeabantu gak usah kudos :3 Gave you kudosu, because I like these changes a lot :).

Good Luck~
Thank you for your mod!! (although I had to use google translate :D)
posted

Calcyon wrote:

Thank you for your mod!! (although I had to use google translate :D)
Ahh I'm so sorry, my mistakes, I think you're indonesian sorry ><
posted

FadillSan wrote:

Calcyon wrote:

Thank you for your mod!! (although I had to use google translate :D)
Ahh I'm so sorry, my mistakes, I think you're indonesian sorry ><
pffffft.... :''3

hey Calcyon NM request from in-game chat ?
and iam sorry not good in english :3

free to reject
column
1|2|3|4

general
=un-check widescreen support if you don't use SB in easy & normal
=i think kiai time has ended in 02:12:658
=why not add note from 02:17:431 until finish ?
easy
00:21:181 (21181|1,21863|1,22545|1,23226|1) - focused in col 2, re-arrange ?
00:29:363 (29363|1,30045|1,30726|1,31408|1) - ^^
00:30:386 (30386|2,30386|3) - repeatable with 00:27:658 (27658|2,27658|3) -
00:39:846 (39846|3) - make confused,move to here 00:39:761 -
00:44:022 (44022|2,44022|3) - with 00:41:295 (41295|2,41295|3) -
00:47:431 (47431|1,48113|1,48795|1,49476|1) - focused col 2
00:58:340 - 00:59:022 - add note
01:14:363 (74363|2,75045|2,75726|2,76408|2) - 01:17:090 (77090|1,77772|1,78454|1,79136|1) - deliberate ? i think shoulb be re-arrange
LN 01:24:590 to 01:26:295 -
01:26:636 (86636|1,87317|1,87999|1,88681|1,89363|1) - ah col 2 again :3
02:02:431 (122431|2,123113|2,123795|2,124476|2,125158|2,125840|2) - 6x in col 3 :''3
02:09:249 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792467
why ? not same ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792364
normal
00:23:226 - add note
00:28:681 - ^^
00:29:022 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792515
00:34:136 (34136|2,34817|2,35499|2,36067|2,36522|2) - aaaah col 3 :3
00:38:056 (38056|1) - move in here 00:38:113 -
00:40:272 - hmmm :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792532
00:57:317 (57317|0,57999|0,58681|0,59363|0,60045|0) - focused col 1
01:00:386 (60386|2,61067|2,61749|2,62431|2) - ^ col 3
01:01:749 (61749|1,62431|1,63113|1,63795|1,64476|1,65158|1) - ^^ col 1
01:15:726 (75726|0,76408|0,77090|0,77772|0,78454|0) - ^
01:22:090 (82090|3,82772|1,83454|0,84136|1) - move down to blue line
01:22:715 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792580
01:32:431 - ^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792590
02:07:772 (127772|1) - deletet 02:07:658 (127658|2) - move to col 2 in 02:07:715 -

that's all,sorry 2 diff I am so tired :(:(

ok GL~ :):)
posted

atian540 wrote:

hey Calcyon NM request from in-game chat ?
and iam sorry not good in english :3

free to reject
column
1|2|3|4

general
=un-check widescreen support if you don't use SB in easy & normal Fixed!
=i think kiai time has ended in 02:12:658 Fixed!
=why not add note from 02:17:431 until finish ? It would be the exact same thing as the intro, I don't think it would add anything new to the map and I think the last long note section closes the map out nicely, this is a shorter version of the song, compared to the full 4:30 one, because I wanted to have only one chorus in.
easy
00:21:181 (21181|1,21863|1,22545|1,23226|1) - focused in col 2, re-arrange ? Fixed!
00:29:363 (29363|1,30045|1,30726|1,31408|1) - ^^ Fixed!
00:30:386 (30386|2,30386|3) - repeatable with 00:27:658 (27658|2,27658|3) - Fixed!
00:39:846 (39846|3) - make confused,move to here 00:39:761 - Fixed!
00:44:022 (44022|2,44022|3) - with 00:41:295 (41295|2,41295|3) - Fixed!
00:47:431 (47431|1,48113|1,48795|1,49476|1) - focused col 2 Fixed!
00:58:340 - 00:59:022 - add note Fixed!
01:14:363 (74363|2,75045|2,75726|2,76408|2) - 01:17:090 (77090|1,77772|1,78454|1,79136|1) - deliberate ? i think shoulb be re-arrange Fixed! it was deliberate, but it played poorly, so i changed it.
LN 01:24:590 to 01:26:295 - Fixed!
01:26:636 (86636|1,87317|1,87999|1,88681|1,89363|1) - ah col 2 again :3 Fixed!
02:02:431 (122431|2,123113|2,123795|2,124476|2,125158|2,125840|2) - 6x in col 3 :''3 Fixed!
02:09:249 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792467 Fixed! I liked this a lot, did it just like it's in the screenshot.
why ? not same ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792364 Fixed!
normal
00:23:226 - add note Fixed!
00:28:681 - ^^ Fixed!
00:29:022 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792515 Fixed!
00:34:136 (34136|2,34817|2,35499|2,36067|2,36522|2) - aaaah col 3 :3 Fixed!
00:38:056 (38056|1) - move in here 00:38:113 - 00:37:886 (37886|0,38056|1,38226|2) - mapped to the guitar, so I'm keeping it that way
00:40:272 - hmmm :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792532 Fixed!
00:57:317 (57317|0,57999|0,58681|0,59363|0,60045|0) - focused col 1 Fixed!
01:00:386 (60386|2,61067|2,61749|2,62431|2) - ^ col 3 Fixed!
01:01:749 (61749|1,62431|1,63113|1,63795|1,64476|1,65158|1) - ^^ col 1 Fixed!
01:15:726 (75726|0,76408|0,77090|0,77772|0,78454|0) - ^ Fixed!
01:22:090 (82090|3,82772|1,83454|0,84136|1) - move down to blue line Fixed!
01:22:715 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792580 Fixed! ok, i like it
01:32:431 - ^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8792590 Fixed!
02:07:772 (127772|1) - deletet 02:07:658 (127658|2) - move to col 2 in 02:07:715 - Fixed!

that's all,sorry 2 diff I am so tired :(:(

ok GL~ :):)
Thank you for your very helpful mod!!
posted
my god this song

move Raindrops into Tag, unnecessary double tags (Nekomata Master Raindrops) shall be removed, and add KONAMI♪MUSICフル KONAMI 新谷早苗 into tag

don't kudos this post
posted

Arzenvald wrote:

my god this song

move Raindrops into Tag, unnecessary double tags (Nekomata Master Raindrops) shall be removed, and add KONAMI♪MUSICフル KONAMI 新谷早苗 into tag

don't kudos this post
Fixed, thank you!
posted


hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
feel free to reject,I still need learn about modding

column
l1l2l3l4l


Easy
00:37:204 (37204|0) - add 1 note here
00:45:386 (45386|0) - ^
00:48:113 (48113|1) - ^
00:50:840 (50840|3) - ^
00:53:567 (53567|2) - ^
01:00:726 (60726|3) - move to 01:00:386 (60386|2,60386|3) - for better place
01:29:704 (89704|2) - add 1 note here
01:40:613 (100613|1) - ^
Normal
00:56:976 (56976|1,56976|3) - umm,delete 1 note?
01:01:067 (61067|0,61067|3) - ^
01:14:363 (74363|2,74704|0,74704|1,74931|2,75045|3) - ctrl+h myb cuz this 01:13:681 (73681|2,74363|2,74931|2,75386|2) -
01:56:863 (116863|1,117317|1,117658|1,117999|1) - almost become anchor,a little rearrange will fix this
Unspoken Words
00:23:113 (23113|1,23454|1,23795|1,24136|1,24476|1) - anchor,rearrange
00:34:817 (34817|3) - move to 2
00:38:454 (38454|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8807320 maybe like dis?
00:43:908 (43908|2,44249|2,44590|2,44931|2,45272|2,45613|2) - there is no wrong on the pattern,but look at the anchor
01:32:658 (92658|0) - move to 3


to be honest,the map was good.keep up and good luck! :D
soo calm song~ :oops:
posted

[ Blaze ] wrote:



hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
feel free to reject,I still need learn about modding

column
l1l2l3l4l


Easy
00:37:204 (37204|0) - add 1 note here Fixed!
00:45:386 (45386|0) - ^ Fixed!
00:48:113 (48113|1) - ^ Fixed!
00:50:840 (50840|3) - ^ Fixed!
00:53:567 (53567|2) - ^ Not the same sound as the other chords, feels out of place to add a note.
01:00:726 (60726|3) - move to 01:00:386 (60386|2,60386|3) - for better place Fixed!
01:29:704 (89704|2) - add 1 note here Fixed!
01:40:613 (100613|1) - Fixed! ^
Normal
00:56:976 (56976|1,56976|3) - umm,delete 1 note?
01:01:067 (61067|0,61067|3) - ^ keeping it to maintain the chord cycle, same with ^
01:14:363 (74363|2,74704|0,74704|1,74931|2,75045|3) - ctrl+h myb cuz this 01:13:681 (73681|2,74363|2,74931|2,75386|2) - Fixed!
01:56:863 (116863|1,117317|1,117658|1,117999|1) - almost become anchor,a little rearrange will fix this Fixed!
Unspoken Words
00:23:113 (23113|1,23454|1,23795|1,24136|1,24476|1) - anchor,rearrange Fixed!
00:34:817 (34817|3) - move to 2 Fixed!
00:38:454 (38454|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8807320 maybe like dis? I like it, but I dont think there is enough sounds to support that pattern, also I wanted to keep this simple
00:43:908 (43908|2,44249|2,44590|2,44931|2,45272|2,45613|2) - there is no wrong on the pattern,but look at the anchor Fixed!
01:32:658 (92658|0) - move to 3 Fixed!


to be honest,the map was good.keep up and good luck! :D
soo calm song~ :oops:
Applied, thank you for the mod!!
posted
from queue 1234
ez
00:39:761 (39761|3) - may want to move to 3 so its slightly easier to read for new players
01:30:386 (90386|1,90726|1,91067|2,91408|2,91749|0,92090|0) - why the sudden pattern?
01:52:545 (112545|2,112886|2,113226|1,113567|1) - ^ // applies for the section
02:11:636 (131636|1,131976|1,132317|1) - this should not exist in easy diffs
02:15:386 (135386|2,135471|1,135556|0) - not sure if this is technically doable for new players
Great chart
normal
00:14:022 - on col 3 there are 2 1/1 3-note stacks, which is denser than the other cols which feels a little bit unbalanced
01:01:749 (61749|0) - move to 2 to even out the playing field (col 1)
01:30:726 (90726|2,91067|2,91408|2) - try and avoid this
01:34:817 - VERY right hand biased here
01:56:295 - ^ left hand
01:56:863 (116863|1,117317|1,117658|1,117999|1) - some form of anchor i guess
02:00:726 (120726|2,121067|2,121408|2) - same as before
Decent chart
nothing shall be spoken
00:05:499 (5499|2,5840|2,6067|2,6408|2) - some form of anchor i guess
00:09:476 (9476|1,9817|1,10158|1,10499|1) - ^
00:13:908 (13908|2,14249|2,14590|2,15045|2,15386|2) - ^
00:23:113 (23113|1,23454|1,23795|1,24136|1,24476|1) - ^
00:34:817 (34817|3,35158|3,35386|3,35726|3,36067|3,36522|3) - ^
00:40:272 (40272|1,40613|1,40954|1,41295|1) - ^
00:42:999 - very right hand biased after this
00:54:249 - sudden difficulty spike?
00:58:340 (58340|2,58681|2,58908|2,59249|2,59590|2,59817|2) - anchory
01:31:749 (91749|0,92090|0,92431|0,92658|0,92999|0,93340|0,93795|0,94136|0) - ^
01:57:147 - somewhat col 2 and 3 bias here
02:17:431 (137431|2,137431|1,137431|0) - sound isnt strong enough for a triple, maybe just a single will do considering its only one sound and its not very strong
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