part 2 of 2
[Metamorphosis]
- 00:06:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some of these are like slightly curved and it tilts me can you make them either more noticeably curved or just straight?
- 00:22:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh.. I don't really get it. The 5 looks super out of place. Try something like
https://i.imgur.com/9CuQav7.png or some pattern that actually connects all the way atm 1,2 and 3,4 look paired but 5 is just kinda there.
- 00:23:417 - Could have done something here with all the synths playing instead of just circles for drums. Feels like you just skipped a major part of song.
- 01:06:175 (1,1,2) - Remove hitsounds from slider tails? They seem kind of out of place.
- 01:08:934 - This section is very underwhelming, you could do so much more here but you just use some circles and triangle patterns.
- 01:58:072 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Cool idea but sad you didn't use it anywhere else in the kiai - would have been a lot more interesting imo.
Overall diff is pretty underwhelming, I feel like you could have done a lot more with 01:08:934 - but the rest is.. idk, it's fine but it's pretty generic.
[Insane]
- 00:22:037 (1,2,1) - There are some cool vocals that are going on here you could map with 1/4 sliders or circles but 1/2 sliders are pretty underwhelming imo.
- 00:47:900 (3) - These 45 degree sliders tilt me cuz they're not really used in patterns half the time - would look better like
https://i.imgur.com/Heyz0xS.png or something imo
- 00:48:331 (2,3) - Overlapping these closer would look nicer, pixel overlaps are usually tilting.
- 00:50:313 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of how these overlaps are constructed, looks kinda random. I think
https://i.imgur.com/foh863S.png works better.
- 00:51:693 (1,1) - Angles could be more consistent? // 01:45:486 (1,1) - etc etc
- 00:54:451 (1) - Two sounds why one slider? Two 1/4 sliders works here imo.
- 01:01:693 (1,1,2) - All of these overlapping makes your whole visual concept look weak. I would recommend just trying to avoid overlapping things like this unless it's consistently done. 01:03:417 (1,3) - Could center like
https://i.imgur.com/3Bfith2.png- 01:03:589 (2) - Could be 1/4 slider cuz has the same sound as 01:03:417 (1) - ?
- 01:04:106 (1,2) - 1/4 sliders for wubs? Not consistent with 00:58:589 (1,2) - anyways so do something about that?
- 01:42:037 (1,2) - Idk about you but I feel like a reverse would work well here.. not sure how to explain why though.
- 02:01:520 (2,3,1,2) - Structurally looks pretty weak when one is overlapping and one is stacked, should probably do either or.
Kinda same as the topdiff, looks overall kinda messy, structure is weak. Could use work in expressing the song more with sliders for more noticeable wubs like I mentioned too.
[Light Insane]
- 00:12:900 (3,4,5,1) - If you're gonna hex do it properly at least :l
https://i.imgur.com/3PsA11K.png- 00:42:727 (1,2,3,4) - Why not hitsound all the 1/4?
- 01:05:831 (4,1) - You can avoid this overlap too.
Idek know what to say that's objective tbh, I feel like you tried to make a Hard but it was too difficult so you made it into a Light Insane instead.
[Hard]
- 00:00:658 (1,2) - Spacing is too close imo, space 2 out a bit cuz they barely touch. // 00:02:727 (1,2) - Same and this happens consistently and it detracts from the visuals of the map since they're not consistent.
- 00:31:003 (3) - Why is this randomly curved? Just make it straight like 00:30:658 (2) - or mirrored.
- 00:50:658 - I feel like you can make this last note clickable for a more stable rhythm cuz ending a buzz on a white tick feels quite awkward. // 01:01:348 (3) -
- 01:42:727 (4,5,6) - Why only here a triple and not for 01:41:606 - 01:44:365 - 01:45:744 - or anywhere else?
[Normal]
- 00:57:037 - Don't silence these on a Normal, the player does listen for sliderends and muting them will make it harder for them to follow the rhythm.
The rest is pretty consistent.
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Honestly idk what to say, the only thing that this set is missing is structure and some rhythm in the higher diffs as well as those massive breaks that could literally just be breaks with no objects in them. They feel so forced it would be better if they were just removed lol.
Good luck.