MIOYAMAZAKI - Noise · forum

kunka

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-07-16T15:49:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月14日 at 1:07:13

Artist: MIOYAMAZAKI
Title: Noise
Source: 地獄少女宵伽
Tags: opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoi no togi hell girl Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
BPM: 225
Filesize: 18959kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.74 stars, 119 notes)
Hard (3.47 stars, 305 notes)
Insane (4.89 stars, 381 notes)
Makyu's Insane (4.64 stars, 305 notes)
Milan-'s Extra (5.51 stars, 344 notes)
Normal (2.34 stars, 177 notes)

Download: MIOYAMAZAKI - Noise
Download: MIOYAMAZAKI - Noise (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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地獄少女宵伽 Opening Song
闇に惑いし哀れな影よ、、人を傷つけ貶めて、、罪に溺れし業の魂、、、
いっぺん、、、死んでみる？
Milan-'s Extra by Milan-
Makyu's Insane by Makyu

Last edited by kunka 2017-11-13T16:08:11+00:00, edited 45 times in total.

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-07-18T12:49:53+00:00

- hit sounds setting -
(soft) whistle - default
clap - bass sound

(soft2) whistle - bass sound
clap - snare sound
finish - cymbal sound

(soft3) whistle - default
clap - snare sound
finish - cymbal sound

When it becomes inconvenient,i might change it again...

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-07-20T02:49:33+00:00

Hello, you interested in a Guest Difficulty? I can make one and you decide if you wan to add it if you like it! (A second Insane)

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-07-20T03:13:45+00:00

Makyu wrote:
Hello, you interested in a Guest Difficulty? I can make one and you decide if you wan to add it if you like it! (A second Insane)

I'm looking for a guest of ☆4.2 - 4.5 of insane or the hard diff.
If you can agree to it, thanks

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-07-20T05:56:59+00:00

Sure Thing!

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-07-30T05:41:22+00:00

Makyu asked me for a quick check.

Log (Spanish)

00:18 Gero: voy a empezar xD
00:22 Gero: Me pasas el mapa otra vez?
00:22 Makyu: https://puu.sh/wWK2i/8d641a2399.osz
00:29 *Gero is editing mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu]
00:30 Makyu: asdf
00:30 *Makyu is editing mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu]
00:30 Gero: 00:17:366 (2,3,4) - No me convence del todo el flujo y el tipo de salto que estas implementando, es decir el movimiento de (2) a (3) esta bien, pero hacia (4) se siente un poco raro
00:30 Gero: Podrias considerar hacer algo mas aqui?
00:31 Makyu: Puedo pensar en un patron diferente si
00:31 Makyu: quiero mantener el patron de 4,1 asi que pensare algo para los circles
00:33 Gero: 00:48:833 (1,2,3,4) - Considera aumentar el spacing entre estos objetos, cuando jugue esta parte me hizo confundirme un poco con el antijump, pensando que en realidad eran 1/2
00:33 Gero: 00:50:966 (3,4) - En comparacion a (3) (4)
00:34 Makyu: vale, me gustaria dejarlo asi, pero lo pensare si mas gente me menciona esa parte
00:34 Gero: 01:23:500 (2) - NC
00:34 Gero: 01:26:700 (1,2,3,4) - Ugh... antijump, solo aumenta un poco el espacio entre esos circulos y estara bien
00:35 Makyu: Habia una razon para no poner NC en este tipo de ocaciones, SaphireGhost fue el que me enseño buscare el post donde el me explico eso
00:35 Makyu: vale
00:36 Gero: En realidad eso solo se usa cuando no hay cambio de stanza en la cancion y hay un vacio entre las notas. Pero en este caso es el cambio a otra y hay espacio suficiente para que el jugador entienda el cambio de patron
00:37 Gero: Seria todo
00:37 Makyu: oh, si sientes bien el mapa?
00:37 Makyu: Lo termine relativametne rapido en dos dias
00:38 Gero: Si, hay algunos saltos como el primero que te mencione, los detesto pero no los vas a cambiar xd
00:38 Gero: El resto esta bien

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-07-30T05:59:53+00:00

Also, here is the map finished! I will hitsound it later when you uplioad it, change the Diff Name to Makyu's Insane when you upload it

Guest Diff

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi Milan- kunkakunkakunkakunka
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:1

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Also, I am so sorry, for this taking me so long to finish it, if you upload the map tomorrow I will try to hitsound it the same day.

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-07-30T10:18:09+00:00

I updated all it!! and thanks Gero!
※Add guest name in tag
※Change of the diff name of the Makyu
※Deletion of the widescreen support
※Add video-play to Makyu's Insane

@Makyu If hitsounds is completed, give call me. I update it immediately

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,726 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2017-07-31T02:16:37+00:00

little mod in Makyu's diff

chatlog

19:41 Makyu: Me gustaria saber tu opinion de un mapa <3, pero cuando salgas de MP
19:41 ErunamoJAZZ: ya
19:42 ErunamoJAZZ: cual es/
19:42 ErunamoJAZZ: ?
19:42 Makyu: t/618237
19:43 *ErunamoJAZZ is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1370620 mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu's Insane]]
19:44 Makyu: espectando
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: OD 7.5?? xD
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: dejelo en 7
19:48 Makyu: No me preguntes
19:49 Makyu: en el mio
19:49 Makyu: olvide cambiar las especificaciones
19:49 Makyu: xD
19:49 Makyu: luego del primer mod lo hago
19:49 Makyu: o si quieres un kudo free puedes hacer un irc mod de mi diff y la posteas
19:49 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:06:433 (1,2) - la distancia entre estos no es igual que en 00:03:233 (1,2) -
19:50 Makyu: done
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:21:633 (3) - mueva este un poquito más para arriba, de forma que quede como hizo en 00:19:900 (2,3,4) -
19:52 Makyu: oh, no habia notado eso
19:52 Makyu: oki
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: Yo no sé por qué noto esas bobadas xD
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: en la parte lenta
19:53 Makyu: Al menos no son cosas nazis como blankets
19:53 Makyu: que no voy a mover ni un solo blanket
19:53 Makyu: xD
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:33:100 (1,2) - hiciste un montón de esos
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: imho, no es que sean feos, si no que hay muchos xD
19:54 Makyu: Lo dejare asi, me gusta mucho como se juega
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:29:900 (1,2,1) - por ejemplo acá, quedan super bueno, pero en otras partes es como.. sí, pero siempre es lo mismo, entonces se le pierde la gracia
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: es que se juegan bien
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: pero mi punto es, que pienso que sería mejor no ponerlos por cada compas
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: si no porai cada dos compases
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: o 3 o 4, no sé xD
19:55 Makyu: xD
19:56 Makyu: Lo pensare, pero dudo que lo cambie, buscare una mejor forma de acomodarlo
19:56 Makyu: tampoco quiero abusar de los slider 1/1
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:300 (3,1) - un jump acá que tal?
19:57 Makyu: Alguna razon, yo diria que no, pierde consistencia con el resto
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: Pero la voz lo merece
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: imo
19:58 Makyu: hm
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:04:033 (3,4) - este jump lo sentí incómodo
19:58 Makyu: Puede ser, buscare un jump "invisible"
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:11:233 (3,4) - este también se sintió como fuera de lugar
19:58 Makyu: si, tampoco me gusto mucho como quedo, esos jumps son dificiles de hacer que funcionen
19:59 Makyu: Ese lo tenia por el patron, puedo ajustarlo
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: sí, muchas veces uno pone las cosas, pero hasta que la gente no lo juega no se sabe cómo se siente
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: cero determinismo xD
20:00 Makyu: xD
20:02 Makyu: Eso es todo?
20:03 Makyu: pon el chatlog

[General]

For some reason, the light green combo color have a white arrow, doing that difficult to read: https://puu.sh/wXsMW/57341e80e1.png

[Easy]

00:01:900 (3,4) - Flow here will not be very friendly for noobs, imho.
00:06:700 (1) - I think that changing concavity will be better in order of a smooth flow:
SPOILER
there are many places where you made a similar way... My suggestion is to polish flow a bit more :3

[Milan's Extra]

00:27:233 (5) - Este y 00:32:033 (3) - este otro, fueron bien dificiles de preveer.
00:57:500 (1,2,3,1) - En lo personal, no setí que fluyeran bien suave que digamos.

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-07-31T02:33:54+00:00

Here is the diff with changes, I will give it to you hitsounded by tomorrow!

Kappa

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu's Insane
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
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BeatmapSetID:640797

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
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kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-07-31T03:56:45+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[General]
For some reason, the light green combo color have a white arrow, doing that difficult to read: https://puu.sh/wXsMW/57341e80e1.png hmm,,i don't mind. but it's ok. I switched to slightly dark green.
[Easy]
00:01:900 (3,4) - Flow here will not be very friendly for noobs, imho. fixed
00:06:700 (1) - I think that changing concavity will be better in order of a smooth flow: ok~
SPOILER
there are many places where you made a similar way... My suggestion is to polish flow a bit more :3 Because i'm not obedient, I perform opposite placement for a flow unconsciously lol I made some modifications. Thank you!

Makyu wrote:
Here is the diff with changes, I will give it to you hitsounded by tomorrow! ok! By the way, a description of the "Video,0,"Noise.avi"" disappears at every update

NightOwl2023

140 posts

Joined April 2016

NightOwl2023 2017-07-31T18:51:09+00:00

Hey from #modreqs

[Milan-'s Extra]
00:01:100 (3) - Fix blanket
00:03:900 (2) - I would suggest a Ctrl + G since it's going against the pattern you used for the same notes at the beginning of the song

[Insane]
00:33:766 (6,1,4) - How about you save yourself from this overlap and try something like this:

Your Version:

My Version:

00:33:100 (5) & 00:36:300 (5) - Imo, based on what I heard in the music, these two sliders might reflect the notes better if they were reverse sliders

[Makyu's Insane]
00:26:300 (2) - Fix blanket?

Rest seems fine

[General]
This mapset is honestly really good and high quality. There were very little mistakes I could find.

Sorry if the mod was short, I'm trying to practice.

GL with ranking this!

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-01T10:47:58+00:00

Starz15 wrote:
Hey from #modreqs
[Insane]
00:33:766 (6,1,4) - How about you save yourself from this overlap and try something like this: I changed placement to remove overlap of it.
Your Version:

My Version:
00:33:100 (5) & 00:36:300 (5) - Imo, based on what I heard in the music, these two sliders might reflect the notes better if they were reverse sliders Rhythm smoothens by clicking the beginning of the lyrics imo. I carry out coherent triplet.

Thank you for sparing your precious time for me

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2017-08-02T13:50:59+00:00

hello kunka~

Milan-

00:00:700 (2,3) - 00:13:100 (1,2) - blanket
00:15:100 (3) - reverse...... the entire section has no reverse. it makes the flow stop, which is not that suitable imo. try this?
00:44:166 (4) - how about stacking this on the pink 2? then 3 -> 4 is a back&forward flow, and 4 -> 1 has a sudden change on direction, which could be juggling enough to emphasis the change of music.

Makyu

00:39:233 (3,4) - 01:18:566 (3,1) - fix the blanket
00:17:366 (2,3) - suggest shorten the distance between them and cancel the jump. if the following jump pattern aims to emphasis the piano, how does this one work?
00:30:433 (1,2) - suggest u change 1 to a slider or move it away from 2. after playing 00:27:233 (1,2) - and 00:28:833 (1,2) - , this would mislead players into playing as 1/2 beat.

Insane

stack leniency -1. then the stuffs with 1 beat off can be perfectly stacked.
00:06:433 (5,1) - fix blanket
00:12:833 (5,1) - i think this 3/4 slider is unpredictable. suggest u change the shape of the slider. i.e. deeply curve it
00:44:300 (4) - personal taste: how about changing this reverse into 2 circles with 1 beat gap (1/1)? normally, the downbeat is corresponding to a reverse slider's turning point, but your reverse slider does opposite things.
00:37:100 (1) - remove the finish?

Hard

00:37:900 (3) - snap the slidertail on red line. current slidertail does not follow anything, even the only sound here, singer's breath, does not start or end on the current point.
nothing much to say to a Hard diff with distance snap......

Normal

00:26:566 (2,3) - avoid 1/2 stack pattern in normal diff. newbie players are hard to identify this. there are many patterns like this, here and after the kiai time ended, so i don't list them all.

that's all from me. really a solid set. good luck!

kunka

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Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-02T15:19:48+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Adol Christin wrote:
hello kunka~ yay adol~~
Insane
stack leniency -1. then the stuffs with 1 beat off can be perfectly stacked. I think that it's not necessary to change the stack leniency personally. I change it if it becomes the big problem. I keep it now.
00:06:433 (5,1) - fix blanket fixed
00:12:833 (5,1) - i think this 3/4 slider is unpredictable. suggest u change the shape of the slider. i.e. deeply curve it ok. I change it and hear more opinions.
00:44:300 (4) - personal taste: how about changing this reverse into 2 circles with 1 beat gap (1/1)? normally, the downbeat is corresponding to a reverse slider's turning point, but your reverse slider does opposite things. In fact, feel sense of incongruity me, too w However, the 00:44:433 - has a sound, and sense of incongruity occurs in snap when I remove it. So, I switch to 1/2slider and circle.
00:37:100 (1) - remove the finish? ww As I thought, do you feel sense of incongruity? However, I want to express it because there is clear cymbals sound! So, i added soft1 (all diff)

Hard
00:37:900 (3) - snap the slidertail on red line. current slidertail does not follow anything, even the only sound here, singer's breath, does not start or end on the current point. I also noticed it during a correction imao FIXED!!
nothing much to say to a Hard diff with distance snap...... DS is very convenient ww

Normal
00:26:566 (2,3) - avoid 1/2 stack pattern in normal diff. newbie players are hard to identify this. there are many patterns like this, here and after the kiai time ended, so i don't list them all. If it's in kiai time, it becomes a reason to remove stack. However, this doesn't have any problem.

that's all from me. really a solid set. good luck! Thank youuuuuu!

Added "hell girl" to tag

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-08-03T02:16:32+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
Makyu
00:39:233 (3,4) - 01:18:566 (3,1) - fix the blanket I will let all blankets like that.
00:17:366 (2,3) - suggest shorten the distance between them and cancel the jump. if the following jump pattern aims to emphasis the piano, how does this one work? I was planing on change that patter, it plays really bad, changed.
00:30:433 (1,2) - suggest u change 1 to a slider or move it away from 2. after playing 00:27:233 (1,2) - and 00:28:833 (1,2) - , this would mislead players into playing as 1/2 beat. I did something different. since someone pointed it out

Starz15 wrote:
[Makyu's Insane]
00:26:300 (2) - Fix blanket? I will let all blankets like that.

Rest seems fine Thanks!

Kawaii Diff

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Chanyah

1,839 posts

Joined November 2014

Chanyah 2017-08-07T14:38:29+00:00

#Modreq - Just saw a few mistakes so feel free to ignore this

Makyu Insane

00:17:100 - why the pause here? I just thought this was odd when playing it when there wasn't a need for 1 - I don't know if this is intentional or not

01:23:500 (2) - There should be a NC here

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-08-07T21:19:35+00:00

DJ Lucky wrote:
#Modreq - Just saw a few mistakes so feel free to ignore this

Makyu Insane

00:17:100 - why the pause here? I just thought this was odd when playing it when there wasn't a need for 1 - I don't know if this is intentional or not I think there was an error when I gave the diff to Kunkla, that part should be mapped

01:23:500 (2) - There should be a NC here Not really, I wanted the ending of the previous pattern to flow right into the beginning of this pattern. It joins the two patterns together and it gives my map something a bit different than the other ones you often see.

Hitsounds finally

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Noise.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu's Insane
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi hell girl Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
BeatmapID:1370620
BeatmapSetID:640797

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Sorry it took me so long with hitsounds, I am really slow for everything, I hope this deoesn't delayed your ranking plans for this map!
Call me when mods come to give a quick check and answer!

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-08T03:15:55+00:00

ok~ updated

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-08-09T05:55:00+00:00

How can i reject ur req ;-;

777th post congratz XD

from my Q

[Milan-]

00:14:966 (2,3) - Hmm, put same beat as 00:14:966 (2,3) - this seems better. is there any reason to use different beat between 00:13:366 (2,3,2,3) - these two parts?
00:16:566 (2,1) - It seems ok but i think change them to 1/2 slider looks more better. for consistency with 00:17:900 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these

[Insane]

00:10:566 (2) - idk y u use 1/4 slider. how about put circle for make consistency with 00:09:766 (6,1) - this?
00:14:433 (5) - i think keep consistency with 00:16:033 (5,6) - these will better. make them to same beat
00:14:700 (1) - should be 3/4 slider? is there any different sound between 00:13:100 (1,1,1) - these 3 points?
01:05:033 (4) - overmapping. i think here is no sound.

GL

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-09T08:06:38+00:00

Kawashiro wrote:
How can i reject ur req ;-;
777th post congratz XD
I did'n't notice it ww thanks!

from my Q

[Insane]
00:10:566 (2) - idk y u use 1/4 slider. how about put circle for make consistency with 00:09:766 (6,1) - this? This is note suitable for vocal follow, but is OK.
00:14:433 (5) - i think keep consistency with 00:16:033 (5,6) - these will better. make them to same beat fixed
00:14:700 (1) - should be 3/4 slider? is there any different sound between 00:13:100 (1,1,1) - these 3 points? I was waiting the modder which suggested this 3/4! 3/4 is preference personally, but the real rhythm is 1/2. I thought very much, but decided to make much of accuracy and consistency. FIXED!
01:05:033 (4) - overmapping. i think here is no sound. hmm,,,ok.
GL Thank you for your help

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-08-20T19:51:28+00:00

Hello! Sorry for being late. Here's my mod from my M4M queue.
Finally a good mapset, less work! xD

General

I feel the offset is set a bit too early. I would set 309 (+9ms) instead. Check it carefully with 25% playback rate and tell me if you agree with this.
Easy and Normal diff should not have the same SV. I would suggest you to reduce the Easy's SV because it actually looks a bit fast in my opinion. Or you could increase by x0.1 or x0.2 the Normal's SV, but I suggest you to decrease Easy's one.

Easy

00:08:300 (3) - I guess you forget to add whistle on this slider's tail for consistency?
00:10:700 (2) - I would use whisle on this slider's head, because it has the same intensity of the previous 00:09:900 (1). It sounds pretty good because you started to use it on each slider's head, including the next (3)
00:33:900 (3) - I would move this some grid upwards, it is almost out of the screen and it's covered by accuracy bar. Well, if you do so you should move all next elements as well, but it won't be a big issue I guess. I think it's like too much pushed actually, and you could avoid this to be honest
01:28:033 (4) - (just a tip) What about setting NC here? It would warn players about the lower volume (like you did for Normal diff)
Good map. Nothing to say, just small tips. Also, consider to reduce SV like I mentioned in "General" field.

Normal

00:08:300 (5) - Same of Easy, even for 00:10:700 (3)
00:49:900 (5) - I would set NC here to keep consistency with 00:48:300 (1)
01:01:500 (2) - I think it would be better if you followed the same rhythm logic of the previous part. I would reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle on 01:01:900 that should be actually clickable being a downbeat like you did for 00:55:500 (3) and 00:58:700 (3) . It even confused me a little, actually xD
I liked this so much

Hard

00:33:900 (6) - NC for consistency and to avoid this long combo

Insane

00:27:366 (7) - (Just a gameplay tip) What about removing this circle and this one 00:33:766 (7) ? These "holes" in the rhythm makes them more fun to play actually, because keeping the 1/1 stack makes the break enjoyable in my honest opinion (like, in my play style when I have this kind of holes I like moving the cursor a bit on the right to avoid to click it since it's not 1/2 anymore but the rhythm change to 1/1). Well, that's not a big issue, just a tip from a player here :3
01:29:100 (4) - Is this circle moved a little on the left intentionally? If not, move it on the same line of previous elements

Makyu's Insane

00:12:366 (1) - I feel this spinner is a bit too short and for this reason it will appear suddendly. I would just avoid it and map this section with something like kunka made for his Insane.
00:20:033 (3,4) - This jump and 00:21:633 (3,4) looks too pushed to me. I would try something else reducing this spacing, also because this kind of jumping is a bit bad to play to be honest
00:30:433 (1) - Why did you decide to use circle here instead of 1/2 slider for consistency? You can consider to add 1/2 slider instead of the simple circle, like you did for 00:27:233 (1) and 00:28:833 (1) and all other parts
00:39:766 (1,1) - This is the only part you stacked these two elements while in the other parts you didn't but you used some spaced pattern. What about to make it consistent in this way? You don't have to move elements, just switch these two 00:40:300 (1,2): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8894998
00:44:833 (1,2) - This NC should be swapped actually, even if I got what your intention was here

Milan-'s Extra

00:28:300 (1,2,3) - 00:29:900 (1,2,3) - I love these <3
00:32:033 (3) - Well, this is totally covered and unreadable, so unrankable. I love this one as well but it can't be ranked I guess
00:34:700 (1,2,3) - Fidget spinner?!?!
01:02:166 (2,3,4) - This whole pattern actually plays bad. What about stacking the (3) with 01:01:900 (1)'s head instead? It plays much better and looks much better actually: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8895094 (next tip is related to this one)
01:03:900 (3) - Here, if you followed above, move this circle for the same reason, like stacking it with 01:03:100 (2) 's head?
01:10:700 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - God this remembers me your Rain diff I love so much <3 (even if I can't still fc with hd :'( 1 damn miss, I will do it!) Your style is predictable :3

That's all! I hope it will help.
Good luck guys!

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2017-08-22T02:34:34+00:00

r

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Milan's Extra]
00:27:233 (5) - Este y 00:32:033 (3) - este otro, fueron bien dificiles de preveer. el primero esta bien creo, el segundo lo cambie algo menos overlapped xd
00:57:500 (1,2,3,1) - En lo personal, no setí que fluyeran bien suave que digamos. tampoco fue la idea que sea muy sueave la verdad

Starz15 wrote:
[Milan-'s Extra]
00:01:100 (3) - Fix blanket tried
00:03:900 (2) - I would suggest a Ctrl + G since it's going against the pattern you used for the same notes at the beginning of the song vocals become stronger, so spacing changes a bit too

Adol Christin wrote:
hello kunka~

Milan-
00:00:700 (2,3) - 00:13:100 (1,2) - blanket tried
00:15:100 (3) - reverse...... the entire section has no reverse. it makes the flow stop, which is not that suitable imo. try this? im mapping the melody, so reverse fits the best i think uhm
00:44:166 (4) - how about stacking this on the pink 2? then 3 -> 4 is a back&forward flow, and 4 -> 1 has a sudden change on direction, which could be juggling enough to emphasis the change of music. did something else

Kawashiro wrote:
[Milan-]
00:14:966 (2,3) - Hmm, put same beat as 00:14:966 (2,3) - this seems better. is there any reason to use different beat between 00:13:366 (2,3,2,3) - these two parts? there's a change in the melody, that's why
00:16:566 (2,1) - It seems ok but i think change them to 1/2 slider looks more better. for consistency with 00:17:900 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these i mapped just the melody the whole time, so circles fits better as there's a constant sound

Chewin wrote:
Milan-'s Extra
00:28:300 (1,2,3) - 00:29:900 (1,2,3) - I love these <3
00:32:033 (3) - Well, this is totally covered and unreadable, so unrankable. I love this one as well but it can't be ranked I guess thanksx d and changed
00:34:700 (1,2,3) - Fidget spinner?!?! ftw
01:02:166 (2,3,4) - This whole pattern actually plays bad. What about stacking the (3) with 01:01:900 (1)'s head instead? It plays much better and looks much better actually: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8895094 (next tip is related to this one)
01:03:900 (3) - Here, if you followed above, move this circle for the same reason, like stacking it with 01:03:100 (2) 's head? did something else on this one, but changed both, yes
01:10:700 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - God this remembers me your Rain diff I love so much <3 (even if I can't still fc with hd :'( 1 damn miss, I will do it!) Your style is predictable :3 not sure if that-s a good or bad thing tbh xd but cool you played my maps w

thank you all!

map

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sorry for being slow kunka xd

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-22T03:28:54+00:00

updated
@milan I'm still collecting mods, so it's no problem slowly

Affirmation

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Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-08-23T07:35:31+00:00

Q

[Extra]
00:08:700 (2,3) - set consistent DS with 00:02:300 (2,3) - ?
00:28:300 (1,3) - stacking miss

[Insane]
00:03:233 (5,1) - jump it more?
00:12:833 (5) - NC
01:16:300 (1,3) - overlap looks not so good for seeing, you didn't tried it in this map.
why HS doesn't fit with your mapping pattern...

GL

kunka

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Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-23T13:14:22+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Chewin wrote:
Hello! Sorry for being late. Here's my mod from my M4M queue.
Finally a good mapset, less work! xD

General
I feel the offset is set a bit too early. I would set 309 (+9ms) instead. Check it carefully with 25% playback rate and tell me if you agree with this.
I tried your proposal. But I hear a little the hit sounds late. 00:53:100 (1,2,3,4) - is particularly easy to check. If when had the same suggestion from other modder, I'll check it again.
Easy and Normal diff should not have the same SV. I would suggest you to reduce the Easy's SV because it actually looks a bit fast in my opinion. Or you could increase by x0.1 or x0.2 the Normal's SV, but I suggest you to decrease Easy's one. I think it's fine. I'm in possession of a similar ranked map and it proves to be no problem. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596015
Easy
00:08:300 (3) - I guess you forget to add whistle on this slider's tail for consistency? There is a piano sound on the 00:01:900 (3) - and 00:05:100 (3) - tail of the same rhythm, but not on the 00:08:300 (3) - tail.
00:10:700 (2) - I would use whisle on this slider's head, because it has the same intensity of the previous 00:09:900 (1). It sounds pretty good because you started to use it on each slider's head, including the next (3) fmm,,This is the same reason as above. I'm not adding hitsounds by the nuances or sensibilities of that song. I'll add hitsounds in a way that faithfully reproduces against the sound as much as possible.
00:33:900 (3) - I would move this some grid upwards, it is almost out of the screen and it's covered by accuracy bar. Well, if you do so you should move all next elements as well, but it won't be a big issue I guess. I think it's like too much pushed actually, and you could avoid this to be honest ok. I changed placement.
01:28:033 (4) - (just a tip) What about setting NC here? It would warn players about the lower volume (like you did for Normal diff) I don't think there's a need to discard consistency and add nc.
Good map. Nothing to say, just small tips. Also, consider to reduce SV like I mentioned in "General" field. I think it's fine as I said in a general. But that's the same as the offset proposal. I'll consider it if there was the same suggestion from other modder. I keep it now.
Normal
00:08:300 (5) - Same of Easy, even for 00:10:700 (3) Same as easy diff.
00:49:900 (5) - I would set NC here to keep consistency with 00:48:300 (1) Please look my nc It's all arranged at the same interval.
01:01:500 (2) - I think it would be better if you followed the same rhythm logic of the previous part. I would reduce this slider by 1/2 adding a circle on 01:01:900 that should be actually clickable being a downbeat like you did for 00:55:500 (3) and 00:58:700 (3) . It even confused me a little, actually xD You're right. fixed
I liked this so much yay thank you
Hard
00:33:900 (6) - NC for consistency and to avoid this long combo Oh! Nice catch!!
Insane
00:27:366 (7) - (Just a gameplay tip) What about removing this circle and this one 00:33:766 (7) ? These "holes" in the rhythm makes them more fun to play actually, because keeping the 1/1 stack makes the break enjoyable in my honest opinion (like, in my play style when I have this kind of holes I like moving the cursor a bit on the right to avoid to click it since it's not 1/2 anymore but the rhythm change to 1/1). Well, that's not a big issue, just a tip from a player here :3 This map is made up of vocal follow. 00:27:366 (7) - can't be removed because there are lyrics.
01:29:100 (4) - Is this circle moved a little on the left intentionally? If not, move it on the same line of previous elements Yes, this is intentional. This is placing considering the flow of curve from 01:28:166 (8) - . Straight lines make the flow rigid.
That's all! I hope it will help.
Good luck guys! Thank you for modding, Chewin

Neoskylove wrote:
Q
[Insane]
00:03:233 (5,1) - jump it more? fmm,,i keep it now. It's also good, the intro is quiet melody, so big jumps are not particularly necessary.
00:12:833 (5) - NC OK~
01:16:300 (1,3) - overlap looks not so good for seeing, you didn't tried it in this map. Sure you are right. I'm also placing it on the understanding that. Because, above all, melody and flow were prioritized.
why HS doesn't fit with your mapping pattern... As you see, that's because you're creating in vocal follow ww

GL Always thanks for your mod

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-08-23T19:05:27+00:00

chewin wrote:
00:12:366 (1) - I feel this spinner is a bit too short and for this reason it will appear suddendly. I would just avoid it and map this section with something like kunka made for his Insane. I dont feel like it, but I will keep this in mind.
00:20:033 (3,4) - This jump and 00:21:633 (3,4) looks too pushed to me. I would try something else reducing this spacing, also because this kind of jumping is a bit bad to play to be honest Yeah, I played it a few times and felt the same, I hope what I did is ok
00:30:433 (1) - Why did you decide to use circle here instead of 1/2 slider for consistency? You can consider to add 1/2 slider instead of the simple circle, like you did for 00:27:233 (1) and 00:28:833 (1) and all other parts Vocals
00:39:766 (1,1) - This is the only part you stacked these two elements while in the other parts you didn't but you used some spaced pattern. What about to make it consistent in this way? You don't have to move elements, just switch these two 00:40:300 (1,2)https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8894998 Sure, I like it
00:44:833 (1,2) - This NC should be swapped actually, even if I got what your intention was here I just dont feel NC should be in the downbeat, doesnt look good and can confuse the player, since (1) is stacked if the NC is removed from there ppl would think its a 1/4 ir 1/2 gap and can miss combo, I know I can change a bit the mapping but I just too lazy >.<

PECO

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Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu's Insane
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi hell girl Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
BeatmapID:1370620
BeatmapSetID:640797

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41,380,60566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
13,291,60700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,201,60833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,135,60966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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182,322,62566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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115,238,66966,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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211,213,67366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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326,305,67900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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326,305,68966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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390,278,71233,1,0,1:0:0:0:
286,171,71366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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233,84,75233,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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144,308,80166,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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39,68,80700,1,0,1:0:0:0:
109,22,80833,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,90,80966,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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428,318,87900,5,0,1:0:0:0:
267,222,88033,1,0,1:0:0:0:
460,93,88166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,93,89100,5,2,0:0:0:0:

P.S: If you decide to change offset or something related to timing remember to tell me so I can change it too!

kunka

1,570 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-24T02:58:35+00:00

k updated

@Makyu ok. If it need to change the offset, I 'll call you about it. Thank you~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2017-08-27T15:27:09+00:00

Hi~

Jigoku shoujo is a very good series imo c: (sorry took a little time to mod)

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Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Easy

Hmm...looks pretty good

Normal

00:00:300 (1,2,3) - Somehow dont like this pattern ahha, just saying :p
00:07:766 (3,4) - Maybe separate these 2 or make it slider? Can also make blanket to 00:08:300 (5) - because the rhythm is kind of different with recent notes, everything is flowy in the map~
01:06:433 (5,6) - A little overmapped for Normal i think, maybe can extend 01:06:433 (5) - to 01:06:700 - (pls ignore down beat xD)

Hard

(>.o)b

Makyu's Insane

01:04:966 (2) - I think this jump is a little too huge for a slower part in kiai
01:11:233 (3,4,1) - I think the jump should be emphasized more on 01:11:500 (1) - rather than between 01:11:233 (3,4) - , which is like a new downbeat jump like 01:08:833 (3,4,1) -
01:18:566 (3,1,2) - ^ same, I think 01:19:100 (2) - is kind of weak compared to 01:18:566 (3,1) -
01:13:366 (2,3,4,5) - The patterns are same but there's no vocal at 01:13:366 (2) - maybe change to something else which makes the whole 01:13:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - combo consistent?
01:16:166 - You missed a vocal here to hit, could make it like 01:19:100 (2,3) -
01:22:700 - I think the KIAI should be until here, use 1.2 SV until there and use 1.0 SV for 01:23:500 - to the end because it sounds not much different from kiai and the front part at 00:13:100 -
01:23:500 (2) - Might need NC here
01:28:300 - Insert something here? 0.0

This diff would be perfect with a little more polish

Insane

00:01:100 (4) - Why different shape with 00:01:900 (1) - ? XD
01:17:900 (1,2,3) - wow trap? There's no other triplets anywhere in the diff...

Milan-'s Extra

old Monstrata? ...

00:48:700 - Feel like this should be clickable, plays better in extra imo (others like 00:50:300 - too)
00:52:566 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe could balance out the jump distance a bit more? like 1 > 2 gradually to 3, 4? The current 00:52:566 (1,2) - looks unbalanced imo :p
01:29:366 - 5 / 10% vol? xd

conclusion overmapped trololol bye XD

Nice mapset! A star for you

/

Good luck!

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-08-27T16:39:29+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
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Blue : comment

Rakuen wrote:
Hi~

Jigoku shoujo is a very good series imo c: (sorry took a little time to mod) yay I enjoy watching them every week >▽<

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Easy
Hmm...looks pretty good ＼(^o^)／

Normal
00:00:300 (1,2,3) - Somehow dont like this pattern ahha, just saying :p This pattern is the best!
00:07:766 (3,4) - Maybe separate these 2 or make it slider? Can also make blanket to 00:08:300 (5) - because the rhythm is kind of different with recent notes, everything is flowy in the map~ fmm,,These 2 lyrics are strongly emphasized. This different nature lyrics are the same sound, so I think you need a clickable notes.
01:06:433 (5,6) - A little overmapped for Normal i think, maybe can extend 01:06:433 (5) - to 01:06:700 - (pls ignore down beat xD) I also felt it. But I think a clickable circle is better because 01:06:700 (6) - is a very strong sound and is also a part of the lyrics.

Hard
(>.o)b ＼(^o^)／＼(^o^)／

Insane
00:01:100 (4) - Why different shape with 00:01:900 (1) - ? XD What? I confirmed it, but it's the same...Just in case, I've overwritten the copy.
01:17:900 (1,2,3) - wow trap? There's no other triplets anywhere in the diff...This was a troubled. I want to keep the status quo because obviously there is a sound. But I can understand what you say. In fact, my friend did a test-play, but made a mistake here www OK! FIXED

Nice mapset! A star for you /

Good luck! Thank you for modding and star!!

Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-08-31T04:54:41+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
Hi~
Makyu's Insane
01:04:966 (2) - I think this jump is a little too huge for a slower part in kiai It is, but its also predictable, I have never seen problem with that jump, still I will keep it in mind
01:11:233 (3,4,1) - I think the jump should be emphasized more on 01:11:500 (1) - rather than between 01:11:233 (3,4) - , which is like a new downbeat jump like 01:08:833 (3,4,1) - Hmm, I like the idea, I will leave it like I have it and if I can think a better pattern to emphazise the downbeat better I will apply it
01:18:566 (3,1,2) - ^ same, I think 01:19:100 (2) - is kind of weak compared to 01:18:566 (3,1) - Same, This is the main reason I will have to think well what to do, because I want to keep consistency
01:13:366 (2,3,4,5) - The patterns are same but there's no vocal at 01:13:366 (2) - maybe change to something else which makes the whole 01:13:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - combo consistent? I want to change that part too, but I want to keep the stron feeling the kiai gives without overmaping, and since there is no vocal there it is hard to do
01:16:166 - You missed a vocal here to hit, could make it like 01:19:100 (2,3) - The reason I dont do that its because in the second part I am getting the player ready to change into the slow part after the kiai time
01:22:700 - I think the KIAI should be until here, use 1.2 SV until there and use 1.0 SV for 01:23:500 - to the end because it sounds not much different from kiai and the front part at 00:13:100 - I was actually thinking to finish kiai here 01:18:700 - I dont feel that part as strong as the kiai,
that's why I ended it there
01:23:500 (2) - Might need NC here I explained why I am not using NC in that part >.<
01:28:300 - Insert something here? 0.0 No, the point is a forced ending, that's why last 3 notes are jumpy, to make the cursor move faster and end abruptly with one anti-jump with almost no sound

This diff would be perfect with a little more polish thanks! I hope my english is not too broken, I am really tired

I will give you changes tomorrow!

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

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Ryuusei Aika 2017-09-02T04:25:14+00:00

rip my fingers

Easy
00:56:033 (3,4) - nazi blanket
01:04:300 (1) - maybe it's middle and end also need hitsounded? have some beats here like 01:05:100 (2) - just a little bit weaker (that issue is the same in normal and hard)

Hard
00:12:300 (3,1) - Can you make them visually the same ds with 00:11:900 (2,3) - ? would look better imo

Makyu
hp4 is way too low even if the song is 225 bpm. try something like ar9/od7.5/hp5~5.5 is even better imo
00:00:300 - green line's volume setting conflict with red line
00:20:833 (3,4,1) - this flow is so weird, using larger ds (less important sound) -> smaller ds (more important sound - see 00:21:100 (1) - ) in a straight line (a little hard to react). stack 00:20:966 (4) - with 00:21:500 (2) - can solve that question simply
01:11:366 (4,2) - ^ with stacking 01:11:366 (4,2) -
00:33:900 (2,3) - try making a blanket?
00:54:700 (2) - nc? part changing
01:23:500 (2) - ^
01:18:566 (3,1) - hmmmmm blanket is off
01:29:100 (1) - how about just delete it lol if you put it here means you don't follow the vocal at the end completely, which is quite weird

Insane
00:14:300 (4,5) - how about ctrl+g? changing flow at 00:14:433 (5) - can emphasize the drum beat better
00:25:900 (1) - ctrl+g? can follow the trend of rotating at 00:25:366 (2,3,4,5) - and also enlarge the ds
00:41:366 (5,1) - a little obvious missing blanket

Milan-
01:06:966 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g 01:06:966 (2,3) - then ctrl+g 01:07:233 (4,5) - for a better flow?

gl :3

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-09-02T11:17:15+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
rip my fingers You’ll be fine w

Easy
00:56:033 (3,4) - nazi blanket I just fixed a little bit.
01:04:300 (1) - maybe it's middle and end also need hitsounded? have some beats here like 01:05:100 (2) - just a little bit weaker (that issue is the same in normal and hard) This is vocal follow and I don't think you need to add hitsounds. I think I can follow enough by soft-hitnormal (default).

Hard
00:12:300 (3,1) - Can you make them visually the same ds with 00:11:900 (2,3) - ? would look better imo OK! fixed

Insane
00:14:300 (4,5) - how about ctrl+g? changing flow at 00:14:433 (5) - can emphasize the drum beat better fmm,,OK.
00:25:900 (1) - ctrl+g? can follow the trend of rotating at 00:25:366 (2,3,4,5) - and also enlarge the ds Distance too wide. Flow is a good suggestion. So I changed it to the counterclockwise by doing a ctrl+G of 00:25:500 (3,4) -
00:41:366 (5,1) - a little obvious missing blanket Fixed

gl :3 Thank you very much for sparing your precious time

auhueu

50 posts

Joined April 2013

auhueu 2017-09-03T04:43:41+00:00

いい譜面だと思います！

気になる点があったら報告します

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-09-03T10:20:44+00:00

- auhueu - wrote:
いい譜面だと思います！

気になる点があったら報告します

ありがとうございます

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2017-09-05T01:48:16+00:00

Okay let me see, seems just some small proplem.

[Makyu's Insane]

Timings:
00:00:300 (volume level)

-> Inconsistent red + green line volume

Ranking Criteria - Timing

No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

[Insane]

01:22:700 (1) - This note seems stack to 01:23:500 (1) - slider head will better because it looks like won't overlap and neat here imo

kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-09-05T03:48:45+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Okay let me see, seems just some small proplem.

[Insane]

01:22:700 (1) - This note seems stack to 01:23:500 (1) - slider head will better because it looks like won't overlap and neat here imo agree. FIXED!

Volume of Inherited points issue is clear, so Makyu will be doing a fix and reply along with some mod. I'll wait a milan and Makyu reply because there are some mod replies. Thank you, my GOD!

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Makyu

424 posts

Joined April 2012

Makyu 2017-09-06T02:28:05+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Makyu
hp4 is way too low even if the song is 225 bpm. try something like ar9/od7.5/hp5~5.5 is even better imo About the setting on this diff,
I lowered the OD to 7.8 to make it slightly easier, the HP is unchanged.
00:00:300 - green line's volume setting conflict with red line
00:20:833 (3,4,1) - this flow is so weird, using larger ds (less important sound) -> smaller ds (more important sound - see 00:21:100 (1) - ) in a straight line (a little hard to react). stack 00:20:966 (4) - with 00:21:500 (2) - can solve that question simply Yeah, normally the downbeat is the most important sound, but I am emphasizing the highest pitch wich is the piano, thats why the downbeat is not a jump, the flow seems ok, I asked for lots of playtest and no one said that part felt strange or something similar
01:11:366 (4,2) - ^ with stacking 01:11:366 (4,2) - Same here, but I still changed the pattern tho, testing it I felt the new pattern is way better and flows better
00:33:900 (2,3) - try making a blanket? This part is not meant to be a blanket
00:54:700 (2) - nc? part changing I already explained why I am not doing NC here, I dont think this is a big issue.
01:23:500 (2) - ^
01:18:566 (3,1) - hmmmmm blanket is off I will not change any blanket <3
01:29:100 (1) - how about just delete it lol if you put it here means you don't follow the vocal at the end completely, which is quite weird I dont see any problem with this note, but someone else pointed it out, I will ask for mor advice on this last note and chenge it before quialify is done.

Fixed the Timing issue.

@Kunka there seems to be conflics with tags, mind checking it? sorry for late response!

soon?

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ノイズ
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ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu's Insane
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi hell girl Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
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kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2017-09-06T02:49:09+00:00

updated
@makyu I don't know what caused the tag to change...Anyway, fixed.

I'll wait for milan update

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2017-09-06T03:20:24+00:00

hi xd

re

Neoskylove wrote:
[Extra]
00:08:700 (2,3) - set consistent DS with 00:02:300 (2,3) - ? wanted to "increase" the distance as the section ends
00:28:300 (1,3) - stacking miss did

Rakuen wrote:
Milan-'s Extra
old Monstrata? ... not even close lol
00:48:700 - Feel like this should be clickable, plays better in extra imo (others like 00:50:300 - too) those sliders are the ones im not emphasizing tho
00:52:566 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe could balance out the jump distance a bit more? like 1 > 2 gradually to 3, 4? The current 00:52:566 (1,2) - looks unbalanced imo :p i know, but sounds good with the abrupt change in the music imo xd
01:29:366 - 5 / 10% vol? xd ok

conclusion overmapped trololol bye XD agree

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Milan-
01:06:966 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g 01:06:966 (2,3) - then ctrl+g 01:07:233 (4,5) - for a better flow? i was thinking about it too, but didnt fit well with the rest of the map i think ): as i use circles on top of sliders' head but during 1/2 rhythms

Thank you!

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kunka

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kunka 2017-09-06T03:31:46+00:00

All updated

smallboat

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smallboat 2017-09-07T03:51:51+00:00

Okay Bubbled

kunka

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kunka 2017-09-07T04:17:11+00:00

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!

Makyu

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Makyu 2017-09-07T18:22:21+00:00

wooo!!!

Kagetsu

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Kagetsu 2017-10-31T23:12:49+00:00

[Makyu's Insane]

you should increase volume for the intro, even though this section is calm, 10% feels inaudible
00:20:833 (3,4,1) - these kind of movements are extremely uncomfortable, i don't think it's appropriate for this type of diff, i would suggest to use a more comfortable movement, like using ctrl+g on 00:20:833 (3,4) - or something like that
00:21:633 (3,4,1) - i would say the same for this. generally you might want to keep the same type of movement for similar music instances.
00:25:900 - there's something that bugs me about this section. all of these things 00:26:700 (1,2) - 00:28:300 (1,2) - 00:29:900 (1,2) - 00:31:500 (1,2) - 00:33:100 (1,2) - 00:34:700 (1,2) - 00:36:300 (1,2) - are visually different despite the fact that they're representing the same thing. you should use visual resemblance
00:33:900 (2,3) - it kinda triggers me because it looks like a failed blanket lol i guess you could try something like this instead
00:36:833 (1,2,1,2) - i wonder why this combo is so differently spaced in the sense that the objects are nearly touching each other in contrast with the previous sections. it doesn't look quite nice ):
00:43:500 (1,2,3) - overlapping sliders is not something you do often so i don't see a reason for this being mapped that different
00:46:433 (3,1,2) - i would say the same for this, it looks looks too different compared to previous patterns that are representing the same thing
00:59:233 (3,4,1) - kinda unbalanced visually speaking ):
01:26:700 (1,2,3,4) - this feels undermapped for what music is offering, using a denser rhythm would fit a lot better
01:28:300 - could use stacked circles for vocals like the other diffs did

[Hard]

00:13:100 - the 1/2 sliders with reverse arrow usage around this section feels a bit arbitrary? i think it would be better if you use them for the piano, like 00:13:900 - this?
00:57:100 - maybe https://puu.sh/ybR75/9de0fc95c9.png
01:00:566 (6,7) - if i were you, i would use more circles for this transition, the current rhythm doesn't properly emphasize the music change imo

good diff, though i would recommend you to check some of your rhythms, sometimes using less dense rhythms helps other notes to stand out more.

[Normal]

00:07:766 (3,4) - i would recommend to unstack this, you use 1/2 stacks later on the map so the 1/1 stack might be confusing for newbies

kunka

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kunka 2017-11-01T07:39:40+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:100 - the 1/2 sliders with reverse arrow usage around this section feels a bit arbitrary? i think it would be better if you use them for the piano, like 00:13:900 - this? I change 00:13:366 (2) - if I switch to reverse. Waltz rhythm of this phrase because if the first down beat is a powerful 1/2 slider is the best. In fact, other patterns are arranged that way. example 00:13:900 (4,5) - 00:14:700 (1,2) - 00:16:300 (1,2) - etc
00:57:100 - maybe https://puu.sh/ybR75/9de0fc95c9.png OK~
01:00:566 (6,7) - if i were you, i would use more circles for this transition, the current rhythm doesn't properly emphasize the music change imo fmm,,OK. However, the difficulty increases when you place a circle alone because of the fast BPM. I'll use the stack because I do not want it.
good diff, though i would recommend you to check some of your rhythms, sometimes using less dense rhythms helps other notes to stand out more.
ok~ I fixed the rhythm below while checking again. 01:03:500 (5,6) - 01:09:100 (1,2) - 01:01:100 (1,2) - 01:12:300 (1,2) - 01:15:500 (1,2) - 01:18:700 (1,2) - Reduce notes and change the rhythm.
[Normal]
00:07:766 (3,4) - i would recommend to unstack this, you use 1/2 stacks later on the map so the 1/1 stack might be confusing for newbies fixed

Thank you, Kagetsu! I think the hard diff reduced the density and got a good fix

Also partly fixed because there was a problem in the tag.

Makyu

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Makyu 2017-11-01T17:32:13+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
[Makyu's Insane]
you should increase volume for the intro, even though this section is calm, 10% feels inaudible I increased it to 18%
00:20:833 (3,4,1) - these kind of movements are extremely uncomfortable, i don't think it's appropriate for this type of diff, i would suggest to use a more comfortable movement, like using ctrl+g on 00:20:833 (3,4) - or something like that Yeah this part its bugging me really hard, I did what you said, I hope it's ok now
00:21:633 (3,4,1) - i would say the same for this. generally you might want to keep the same type of movement for similar music instances. Done
00:25:900 - there's something that bugs me about this section. all of these things 00:26:700 (1,2) - 00:28:300 (1,2) - 00:29:900 (1,2) - 00:31:500 (1,2) - 00:33:100 (1,2) - 00:34:700 (1,2) - 00:36:300 (1,2) - are visually different despite the fact that they're representing the same thing. you should use visual resemblance The similarity is there, with the anti-jump notes, the rest of the patterns is to give that slow part some variety
00:33:900 (2,3) - it kinda triggers me because it looks like a failed blanket lol i guess you could try something like this instead Yeah, but it's not meant to be a blanket, I usually use this combos Thinking about triangles... I did the same thing here for example 00:05:100 (2,3,1) - but it's not clearly visible due to the short lengt of the slider
00:36:833 (1,2,1,2) - i wonder why this combo is so differently spaced in the sense that the objects are nearly touching each other in contrast with the previous sections. it doesn't look quite nice ): Well I did it because this is the slower part of the whole song, I like it, but I guess I can change it it doesn't hurt
00:43:500 (1,2,3) - overlapping sliders is not something you do often so i don't see a reason for this being mapped that different I actually do overlap quite often, its just that I did not do it the way is done in this pattern I like it a lot so no changes
00:46:433 (3,1,2) - i would say the same for this, it looks looks too different compared to previous patterns that are representing the same thing The reason its done that way in this part is because I don't want a high jump, I moved (2) to make them not overlap with (1) but (1) is staying static
00:59:233 (3,4,1) - kinda unbalanced visually speaking ): I changed it
01:26:700 (1,2,3,4) - this feels undermapped for what music is offering, using a denser rhythm would fit a lot better I don see it that way,
I don't see any reason to put more notes, imo it woulf feel overmapped, mostly because the main sounds are vocals and acoustic guitar
01:28:300 - could use stacked circles for vocals like the other diffs didI could, but I wont, I really like the way the song ends abruptly with all kind of sounds but vocals, so I want to emphazise that, the final note its basically to represent a final sound (vocal), a really abrupt end with a soft note at the end, I feel its really cool

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kunka

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kunka 2017-11-01T23:04:24+00:00

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Kagetsu 2017-11-08T05:57:21+00:00

kunka wrote:
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kunka 2017-11-08T10:02:35+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
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yataaaaaaaaaa!!
A very big thanks for all your help!

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Akitoshi 2017-11-08T17:52:08+00:00

おめでと～

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Makyu 2017-11-08T20:34:29+00:00

YAY!! Congratz Kunka, Milan, good work <3

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Satellite 2017-11-08T23:20:30+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
おめでと～

yay

kunka

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kunka 2017-11-09T02:59:14+00:00

Thanks everyone!

Doyak

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Doyak 2017-11-13T14:17:08+00:00

Hi kunka, I want to discuss something about the romanisation of the artist.

We searched through the web and couldn't really find "mioyamazaki" as a proper indication of the artist. The all-lowercase one only appears on account names or http://www.mioyamazaki.jp/miopedia/ which I don't think is a good reference. One possible romanisation we found is https://www.instagram.com/mioyamazaki0428/ or https://twitter.com/mio_yamazaki/status ... 6771008513 which says "MIOYAMAZAKI" but it still doesn't seem that good too. Or there's https://www.vevo.com/watch/mio-yamazaki ... U981702253 this vevo video which says just "Mio Yamazaki" (but I can't see the video here).

I wonder what you think about this. Please reply on this thread, I'll be waiting.

kunka

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kunka 2017-11-13T15:39:36+00:00

hi Doyak
I've adopted a character that was converted purely romaji. So it doesn't stick to lowercase letters.
I examined it thoroughly. But too little information on romanization.
The use of lowercase letters is often used in URLs, etc.
There is the following information about the use of uppercase. (Quotes from the official Twitter)
https://puu.sh/yl7Yw.jpg
https://puu.sh/yl7Zo.jpg
https://puu.sh/yl8Cz.jpg
In addition, there is a description which seems to be written myself in the official Twitter https://puu.sh/yl7SK.jpg

From the above content a uppercase might be valid.

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Doyak 2017-11-13T15:44:44+00:00

Good!

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ScaredWings 2017-11-16T18:52:03+00:00

Wait, so why did it get DQ'd ?

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Doyak 2017-11-16T19:01:02+00:00

ScaredWings wrote:
Wait, so why did it get DQ'd ?

Because it was using "mioyamazaki" (all lowercase) as the artist before. Now the mapper has updated it.

I guess no one is against using full caps, so here you go.

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