Hi! From my queue, sorry for being so late
[General]Audio bit rate is too high (199kbps), you have to reduce it to 192kbps
Every diff ends with a slider, but I think a spinner would fit much better for two reasons:
1. It doesn't break the "only straight sliders" gimmick (lunatic and freedom only)
2. It adds score variety, this way leaderboards won't be "locked" when there are many SS
[Normal]00:15:196 (2,2) - These two make a bad overlap, you can fix it by rotating all the pentagon patterns 00:16:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a bit
00:27:196 (1,2) - and 00:28:529 (1) - Overlap in a kinda messy way. You could try something like
this and adjust the patterns afterwards
00:41:863 (1) - If you're keeping the slider, fix the overlap with 00:40:863 (2) -
[Hard]00:02:863 (3,1) - I understand you wanna keep this pattern 00:00:530 (1,1,1) -, but that overlap looks a bit ugly ;_;
00:11:029 (4,1) - Overlap :v
00:13:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - This can look much cleaner if you ctrl+h it, overlap 2 with 00:13:529 (3) - and order it like 3,4,5,1,2.
screenshot if it sounds confusing
00:17:863 (1,2) - Move these a bit on the left so that 1 doesn't overlap these 00:16:529 (1,2) -
00:19:696 (4,5,6,7) - You could continue the pentagon pattern better, 4,5,6 look almost aligned. Here are a few ideas
1 -
200:28:529 (1) - Move this a bit up and overlap with 00:26:863 (2) -
00:29:363 (1,2) - same with this
00:31:196 (1,1) - Bad overlaps with 00:30:529 (1,2) -
00:33:196 (1) - Bad overlap with 00:32:529 (1) -
[Lunatic]00:11:696 (1) - Overlap with 00:10:529 (1) -
00:17:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlap with 00:17:196 (1) -
00:25:196 (2,1,2,1) - Space these a bit, they look too closer
00:33:196 (1) - Overlap with 00:32:196 (3) -
00:35:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - If you move all of this a bit to the right, you can make it look cleaner by creating a nice triangle
here[Freedom]00:03:196 (1) - Move it up pls
00:16:696 (4,1,2,1,2) - Spacing from 2 to 1 should be larger that spacing from 1 to 2. There's clap sound on every 1 that makes it stronger, therefore it sould have bigger spacing
00:17:863 (1,2,1,2,1) - Same here
00:20:529 (1,2,1,2,1) - Kinda same here too
00:27:529 (3,1,1) - Overlapsssss, you can fix it by rotating the star pattern a bit counterclockwise
00:39:946 (2,3,4,1,1) - Make these parallel for a better look
That's all! Yeah I know I sounded like an overlap nazi, I think the map and its gimmick are great but little things like that ruin aesthetics a bit.
Take a
star ~★, good luck!