00:18:167 (2,3) - Space these a bit more like 00:08:987 (1,2) -
sure i guess00:41:822 (3,4) - The drums here are almost silent, so I wouldn't map them as notes, maybe not even at all.
made into 1/200:48:501 (2) - This is overmapped, no drum sound here.
00:48:725 (3) - ^ Ditto
00:49:844 (6,8) - ^ Same dealio
01:57:079 (2,1) - I think these are spaced too closely together. 01:56:490 (2,1) - Is a lot bigger DS along with 01:57:667 (2,1) - . Not a big enough change in the music to have such drastic change in spacing imo.
made spacing look more like the other sliders02:09:211 - There's a sound here, so maybe make 02:09:137 (3) - a 1/4th slider?
its basicly inaudible and i think a circle fits better02:30:166 (1) - This would look nice if it was the same shape as 02:30:670 (1) -
Example, or maybe even
this the second option was cool02:30:418 (1) - blanket the end of slider with 02:30:670 (1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658235 03:16:855 (4,1) - 03:21:267 (4,1) - 03:22:737 (4,1) - 03:24:208 (4,1) - Why do these have higher spacing than the rest of patterns like this? The DS on these patterns feel really inconsistent throughout the entire map.
they are basicly the same so i dont think its a problem03:41:340 (1,2,3,4) - make this angular like 03:06:048 (1,2,3,4) - to contrast the wavy form of 03:40:457 (1) - and to fit in with the rest of the section.
i think it fits with the rest of the map too03:51:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is stellar dawg
<304:14:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this a stream with the 1/4 slider starting at 04:15:016 (6) - to keep consistency with having them on the strong notes which you do before and after (ex 01:51:049 (7) - , 01:52:814 (1) - , 04:15:457 (12,13) - , 04:39:722 (7) - ). Do that 04:16:045 (5,6) - , 04:16:486 (10,11) - , 04:19:575 (5,6) - , 04:20:016 (10,11) - .
i think its confusing to do it that way, id prefer it was a circle as the start of a sectionWhy did you map 04:31:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so differently from 01:58:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ? They're the same thing, but mapped so differently. Also, the doubles are weird to read because of the spacing, so if you decide to keep them, I propose something like
this spacing wise.
the sounds arent that different but i think the "atmosphere" and feeling that you get from the later section is much different from the first. It feels darker and i wanted to emphasize that by making the players click more and aim in a different way. (Maybe this sounds muddy but it was the way i interpreted the song lol04:40:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make the slider start 04:40:898 (1) - because of reasons I stated previously.
this one is a mistake06:08:147 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can you make the progression even here? Why is the distance between 06:08:147 (1,1) - so much bigger than 06:08:809 (1,1) - And 06:09:471 (1,1) - ?
i think it looks cool06:18:867 - There's a sound here
06:19:024 (2,3,4) - This is all 1/4. Would be cool if you mapped to it
i dont think its audible enough and that the sliders fit better06:25:951 - Sound here
06:26:159 - ^
06:31:419 (1,2) - 06:32:669 (1,2) - 06:33:919 (1,2) - 06:36:419 (1,2) - 06:37:669 (1,2) - 06:38:919 (1,2) - 06:46:419 (1,2) - 06:47:669 (1,2) - 06:55:169 (1,2) - 06:56:419 (1,2) - Do something like 05:43:992 (6,1,2,1) - here. I think it would look cool and convey the same message without being mega gay to read.
06:44:805 - Sound here
i dont hear this one. It would be really annoying to have in there anyway06:45:013 - ^
07:03:086 - Move the break thing to 07:04:336 - . Think it would be cooler.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658534 yea07:36:750 (4,1) - 07:41:161 (4,1) - Dong this just in case you change the thingies
i didn't but thanks08:07:375 (1) - It would be sick if you did slider art here like Mazzerin did at the end of Recharging the Void.
Yeah i'll try to make something niceSick map dawg, gl
thanks <3