1. Bourbon's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 441 notes)
2. Easy (1,42 stars, 81 notes)
3. Extra Entchen (4,89 stars, 336 notes)
4. marshall's Gans (4,53 stars, 140 notes)
5. Normal (4,06 stars, 123 notes)

Broetchen8441 wrote:

Marshall's Gans:

00:26:850 (1) - Maybe replace with something else? (It's okay, but it could fit the song better if you remove the spinner and insert something else instead) nope
00:31:457 (2) - add note? no
00:31:778 (2) - ^ ^
01:02:850 (1) - maybe redesign? (yep I'm picky... but there should be some kind of nicer slider-building for that one... like using some white points and 1 or 2 reds... but that's up to you) ok
01:06:278 (1) - ^ yep

Rest looks quite nice, I'd like to see this map getting finished, since it's pretty neat

Broetchen8441 wrote:

Extra Entchen:

Ich empfehle Gridlevel 3, gut zum Mappen, auch für die allermeisten Slider gut ausreichend, aber nich zu kleinkariert (haha, Wortwitz...).
// I'm recommending gridlevel 3, nice for mapping but not too tricky.
Avoid new combo-spam in streams please, most people won't like that, but for kind of regeneration-parts it should be okay (which are used before/after extremely hard parts... well, Dangaard uses them like that~)
Maybe increase Overall Difficulty by 1, so you got 7 instead of 6?

00:30:278 (1,2) - I don't get this >.< eh... yeah, i changed it ^^
00:31:778 (5,1) - Why left empty? Maybe fill with slower sliders instead? fixed
00:34:457 (1,2) - double whistle, maybe remove one? (just suggestion, think you may have missclicked once) fixed
00:43:993 (1) - insert break after spinner?fixed

Missing hitsounds in later part, end is unfinished but I guess you know that yourself - go finish it, looks pretty nice, especcially for your first map
I've finished it already

1. Add offset 45659 with BPM 151. Then place 00:45:659 (1) - on new white tick, place 00:46:917 (2) - 1/6 forward after another white tick. Don't forget to change their length a little and place 'em in center
2. Then add offset 47422 with BPM 140 to return to usual rhythm. Add also these two sections to other diff

TicClick wrote:

[*]Add offset 45659 with BPM 151. Then place 00:45:659 (1) - on new white tick, place 00:46:917 (2) - 1/6 forward after another white tick. Don't forget to change their length a little and place 'em in center
[*]Then add offset 47422 with BPM 140 to return to usual rhythm. Add also these two sections to other diff[/list] marshall_racer should decide what he wants to do ^^


Extra Entchen
00:16:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - LOL With DoubleTime it's harder than Revolution Deathsquad ^^
00:22:564 (1) - move it 1/8 back and make 1/8 longer Done
00:33:814 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combo Done
00:35:421 (2,3) - remove finish from all the slider and add it only to first repeat I almost got it, but ONLY to FIRST repeat?
01:01:136 (1,2,3,4,5,2,4) - remove quacks eeh,I reduced the Quacks
01:06:386 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo Done
01:07:029 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combo Done
01:24:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - well, this spacing is too big even for Insane But that's Extra ; Nope
01:26:491 (1,1) - change their shape? Nope
01:30:875 (2,2) - remove claps Done
01:31:491 (2,3,2,3) - remove whistles Done
01:31:414 (1,1) - add claps Done
01:32:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I highly recommend you to change its spacing to something like 0.4x ~ 0.5xSorry but i like that Spacing as it is

TicClick wrote:

marshall's Gans

00:26:850 (1,1) - remove clap ok
00:33:707 (1,2) - add whistles ok
00:34:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - there are almost no notes in music in this moment
00:34:564 (3) - add finish ok

1. Add offset 45659 with BPM 151. Then place 00:45:659 (1) - on new white tick, place 00:46:917 (2) - 1/6 forward after another white tick. Don't forget to change their length a little and place 'em in center
2. Then add offset 47422 with BPM 140 to return to usual rhythm. Add also these two sections to other diff

w-wat?
01:01:136 (1,3) - remove whistle from the beginning ok
01:04:564 (1,3) - same ok
Also, you should make this quack more quiet nah

yzhbxiang wrote:

Following are my personal suggestiosn:

General:

The duck in the slider is funny, lol. But I think slider components have to be used completely.
So you still need make those files:
sliderfollowcircle.png
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png
sliderscorepoint.png If it's not in the rules i won't make it xD

Easy:
00:25:136 move to x:304 y:48 Done
00:54:279 Sliders 1, 2, 3, 4 all move one gird to the right Done

plz use distance snap to check whether each distance is reasonable or not in this diff Yes, ok ^^

Normal:
00:47:422 change whistle to finish ok
00:49:136 ^ ^
00:50:850 ^ ^
00:48:707 remove finish ^
00:50:422 ^ ^

Gans:
01:27:952 this circle is unnecessary, better remove it nah... Marshall likes the triplet
I think every other thing is fine

Extra:
00:48:386 move to x:496, y:192 ok
00:50:100 ^ ^
00:51:063 move to x:16, y:192 ^
01:06:279 add clap here I think it sounds better in my way ^^
01:06:707 ^ ^
and
01:06:493 remove clap ^
01:06:814 ^ ^
01:07:350 ^ ^
01:20:768 miss a whistle here Done
01:32:414 circles 6,7,8,9. Use flip horizontally function to design a symmetrical layout Done

A funny song, good job and good luck Star Thank you ^^