1. Beginner (0,57 stars, 76 notes)
2. Futsuu (2,51 stars, 365 notes)
3. Inner Oni [SGTS Edit] (5,41 stars, 944 notes)
4. Inner Oni (5,92 stars, 953 notes)
5. Kantan (1,75 stars, 201 notes)
6. Muzukashii (3,61 stars, 513 notes)
7. Oni (4,63 stars, 711 notes)

D o t wrote:

Hi from my q

[Muzukashii]
01:13:103 - add a note would be better? done
01:38:907 (297) - move this to 01:39:085 - and delete 01:39:264 (298) - just like 01:37:478 (294,295,296) - nah the crashes are on 1/1 not on 3/2 here
01:47:121 (333,334,335,336) - same as Oni. done

[Oni]
00:30:692 (50,51) - change to k? it sounds nice these are already k o.o
00:56:049 (187,188) - change to k? the piano is rising done
01:09:621 (257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - it's weird here are all k... try to add some d here? done
01:29:264 - why here is empty
01:29:799 - ^
01:30:335 - ^ Yeah right, filled those spots
01:47:299 (180,181,182) - delete and add finish on 01:47:121 (179) - is better. idk what the last three notes for.done

[Inner Oni]
01:13:609 (495) - change this d or 01:13:669 (496) - change this k would be better done
01:40:514 - add a note? felt empty here done
01:41:585 - ^ done
02:04:532 (938,943,948) - change to k? high pitch here done
02:06:496 (950,951) - delete this two or move to it sounds better bcz 1/4 sound are too hard to recognize when playing so it sounds weird when place on 1/4 done

pwhk wrote:

for M4M

0.5* beginner wwwww Just for fun

[Kantan]
00:44:978 (36,37,38,39) - maybe dkkd would better reflect the pitch? good point
01:08:192 - add k and change 01:08:549 (75) - to d to vary a bit, and higher sound Done
01:12:478 - add k like above Done
01:29:621 - missing k? You added note for same sound in 01:26:407 (8) - I'm following the violin which doesn't change pitch here
01:33:907 (7) - d seems better fit Done
02:06:407 (1) - I guess this is better be a K? Yeah right

[Futsuu]
00:23:014 (3,4) - dk? I think kd reflects the pitch on 00:23:014 (3,5) - better
00:27:299 (16,17) - ^ same
00:35:871 (38,39) - ^ same
00:41:049 (54) - violin is absent here. Remove? Done
00:41:764 (56) - d seems better fit for pitch I want to distinguish it from the kd pattern which comes next where the pitch goes down significantly
00:46:049 (69) - maybe d is better for pitch The pitch is so high I think it should rather be a k
01:35:335 - 01:37:478 - The finishers here might be too hard for Futsuu. Remove finishers? Done

[Muzukashii]
00:46:049 (98) - maybe d is better for pitch Same as in futsuu
00:49:799 (112,113) - maybe swap to vary pattern a bit compared to 00:50:335 (114,115,116) - , which sounds differently Done
02:04:978 (425) - could use 1/4 kkkk here, up to you Yeah why not, it's the final pattern

[Oni]
seems fine

[Inner Oni]
seems fine, above my skill level to mod

Good luck~

Marm wrote:

m4m eyy

Inner Oni

00:07:478 (25,26,27,28) - to don and 00:08:549 (29,30) - to kat for the pitch changes here, like you did before. Done
00:30:603 (58,59) - change one of those two to don to give emphasis on the pitch changes. Would still play well.(59 works better imo if you'd accept this suggestion). I actually prefer using a kkkk pattern as the pitch is pretty high here.
01:48:282 (633) - consider deleting this note for playability. (or just keep it as a "hard place on the map", it's interesting this way too). Not sure yet, I like the 1/6 1/4 transistion this way
01:50:424 (655) - and 01:50:960 (660) - to don. It gives more emphasis on the high pitch piano notes. Just like you did in 01:52:478 (676,677,678) - and 01:53:014 (681,682,683) - Done

Very interesting streams, they play really well.
Also, that ending :p. I'd say to change the 1/6 to kddk but since this is low bpm the kkdk isn't so problematic at all.
Very nice diff. Thanks <3

oni

same suggestion from inner: 00:07:478 (25,26,27,28) - to don and 00:08:549 (29,30) - to kat for the pitch changes here, like you did before. Done
same as inner: 00:30:603 (49,50) - one of those to don (49 for me). You can keep it if you want the easier kkkkd pattern instead. Like on inner I prefer the kkkkd for the high pitch here
01:21:407 (1) - this to kat for the higher pitch compared to the following notes? Done

muzu

00:07:478 - same as inner and oni. Done
00:31:942 (44) - this one to kat for the high pitch? or even 00:31:585 (42) - to kat for 3/2 kat spacing if you find it interesting. Done
01:32:478 (276,277) - those two to kat for pitch differences. Hmmm i like the kkddk ---> kkkdk transition with 01:34:264 (283,284,285,286,287) -

01:28:907 - that's some delicious snapping here. Don't judge me D: I just wanted variation from the triplet patterning

futsuu

00:43:371 (58) - to kat for higher pitch? Done
00:44:442 (62,64) - to kat for the same reason as the previous suggestion. 64 to make it different from the previous quad since it's higher pitch Done
00:48:549 (75,79,81,85) - don? lower pitch than previous notes. Done
01:21:407 (166) - same reason as oni. higher pitch compared to following notes. Done

kantan

01:07:121 (74,75) - those two to don for the pitch. (maybe only 75).Done

beginner

I don't know how I'd change this one tbh, sorry orz.
After checking kantan I thought to myself how it was possible to map an easier diff here, congratz xd. When I mapped it I never thought it'd be 0.56* lol

Nice song and amazing Inner. Good luck with this one o/