JoJo wrote:

Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper （趴 出门自重100次去= =

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●清风说StackLeniency要统一呢=。= 虽然我不是很确定~

  Breeze wrote:

  koubou的StackLeniency是0.3而其他2个难度是0.5,这是不允许的,请保持一致

鬼畜MAPPER KPY魂淡为什么你的重叠率是0.3...

[长喜神mapper早 0.0]

• ●等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@ 改了OFFSET忘RESNAP了...搞定
  ●虽然不是很必要，但是和其他难度统一一下combo color？
  ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系？
  ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。

[KPY超级卖萌Hentai]

• ●乃用了5种不同速度的slider，而且你肯定不肯改，所以急需自重100次。
  ●01:11:798 (1) - KIAI在这里结束。
  ●02:26:558 (1,2) - （超级nazi）快点叠好点魂淡！！
  ●02:38:078 (x) - 不像其他难度加个spinner？

[妮姆芙姥爷与他的好基友]

• ●Oh no... 356个note没有snap。= =这个也忘了..
  ●01:02:558 (6,7) - 可以叠更好~ 拽了一下
  ●01:11:798 (x) - KIAI在这里结束。好吧

[Storyboard]

• ●White.jpg分了好多代码写，其实完全可以写在一起=。= ...看不懂 一会问你..
  ●Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\lyric\53.png",320,240
  F,0,120276,120756,0,1
  M,0,120276,127956,195,309,254,309
  F,0,120756,127476,1
  F,0,127476,127956,1,0.00800003

你们都那么触让我这个渣滓情何以堪~ TwT Rebubbled! ★ミ

Raging Bull wrote:

Weee. Just another annoying suggestion by me. Maybe instead of KPY, you can put what difficulty it is too? (KPY's Insane) ? That and it would look more consistent in your naming with wcx's normal.

Raging Bull wrote:

Oh okay then. Well then...Have a star. I bother you too much :3

Kanon wrote:

KPY
soft whilstle听起来声音大了 還好
01:16:358 (1,1) - 这里我觉得效果不好，所以还是建议改掉 這個還好啊,跟著音樂漸快
00:59:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里换成slider或者NOTE用相等的间距更好一点？因为我感觉这里的vocal不是很适合用这样的2个一堆的排列 個人持保留意見
01:22:358 (3,4,5) - 这里跳很容易打错节拍，我觉得这里不要放跳比较好？可
01:36:038 (1,2,3) - ^ 這個不了..後面是鼓點,跳起來還好
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - 这里不要spam new combo比较好，confusing 不加才confused呢,顏色再跟SB.
02:24:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议这里改掉，听起来爽，玩起来很不爽，一般打图遇到这样的排列我就直接傻了 好吧我弱 你叒那你肯定打不到NR的圖,沒有明確的原因去修改,所以保留
02:30:998 (2) - 开头 clap？加了就難聽了
结尾不放个转盘么 嘛 这个可加可不加不放

kpy的diff是Hard的话。。为什么和collab的难度差不多 难度分布在调整下比较好 接近Insane的H

Kanon wrote:

我发现我MOD速度有够慢的
General
我觉得soft normal-hit和 soft whistle 声音降低一点比较好，因为这歌本身CLAP声很重，在加上自己加的hitsound， 歌本身听起来会有点混乱。normal hit和whistle我个人觉得还好 clap声我倒是觉得很重..一直在种绿线砍CLAP的音量

王长喜
你用来调节音量的绿线居然用了这么多，不蛋疼么
tick rate 2 就为了几个tick换CLAP 真的好么，要是我宁愿换排列，C1 Tick一直听着很蛋疼啊
combo colour跟其他diff统一。。
01:36:758 和后面这跟绿线 4%的音量差距没人能听出来吧
01:43:958 ^ 和后面2根
01:50:678 ^
02:15:636 (6) - new combo? 这里+的话 后面你自己看着改
其他没了，我就是来吐槽你这个神MAPPER的

KPY
soft whilstle听起来声音大了
Slider速度变化太多，超过3种，虽然我觉得只要玩起来没问题就好，但是
01:16:358 (1,1) - 这里我觉得效果不好，所以还是建议改掉
00:59:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里换成slider或者NOTE用相等的间距更好一点？因为我感觉这里的vocal不是很适合用这样的2个一堆的排列
01:22:358 (3,4,5) - 这里跳很容易打错节拍，我觉得这里不要放跳比较好？
01:36:038 (1,2,3) - ^
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - 这里不要spam new combo比较好，confusing
02:24:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议这里改掉，听起来爽，玩起来很不爽，一般打图遇到这样的排列我就直接傻了 好吧我弱
02:30:998 (2) - 开头 clap？
结尾不放个转盘么 嘛 这个可加可不加

collab
01:42:876 (2) - 这个不如去掉？ 有点怪玩起来。。嗯 好吧
02:07:238 这里很明显感觉缺了个音 +NOTE？等妹控看看
前面高潮部分放了不少3连 后面反倒没了？。。开始跳了
02:24:758 这里开始学王长喜多放一些finish 难度在提高点我觉得比较好这里全程白线CLAP 在氛围上我觉得还可以 长喜那我倒是觉得很吵.. 难度确实想提高过..但是我鬼畜不起来..(死
这个diff我个人觉得是最好的 玩起来有点像死里路的图

kpy的diff是Hard的话。。为什么和collab的难度差不多 难度分布在调整下比较好 反正2个都像HARD 就这样吧..

star KUDO白赚了 拍飞~

EDIT : STACK 那个不用每个diff都一样。。我刚问人的 soga ROGER

wcx19911123 wrote:

Subject: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home

JoJo wrote:

Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper妮姆芙

[长喜渣mapper早 0.0]

• ●等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@
  ●虽然不是很必要，但是和其他难度统一一下combo color？
  ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系？
  ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。

发pm前先膜拜下神mapper妮姆芙
后面两句我ign了，前面个两句你看着办0.0

KayeSara wrote:

OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!

KanaRin wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!

Raging Bull wrote:

Good map! Ranked! Congratulations!

quintitem wrote:

:3 Current Priority: +7
所以說讓不會mod的我來扔第八顆星吧\:D/(被打)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

02:10:358 (2) - whistle on start? clap is enough for me
02:12:278 (4,6) - ^
02:24:758 - kiai toggle should be here owo where is my kiai line..

wcx's Normal:

-tick rate 1?

01:36:758 (4) - new combo
02:24:758 (4) - ^

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3)
01:36:758 (4) - new combo

Collab:

01:29:558 - add note? not necessary I think
01:42:998 (2) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? this is on purpose

Taiko: Fine

Nice map~ -w-

SamiPale wrote:

Hello, request from Mei_coN
以下是我的意见，歌词部分是我觉得必须改的

[Easy]
01:15:638(1) - spinner有点别扭，换成别的或者延长到下小节第一拍
高难都有人一起collab了做低难认真点嘛 X，这个还好吧..还是不改了 认真点么..我有苦说不出啊

[KPY]
S:C2大声点

[Collab]
00:16:118 to 00:27:638 - 建议将这里每小节的第三拍取消掉，一般来说一三拍clap都是为了推向高潮而用的，这里是个过渡期所以不建议使用（而且背景音24拍也有的较小声的类似鼓点音）第二次被这么吐槽了 好吧我弄掉
01:00:758(1) - clap? OK
01:07:958(5,6) - 觉得这里default finish效果要比clap舒服，clap换成finish然后在(5)的尾巴加个clap同意
02:00:278(T) - 意义不明的降音量？要降的话还是多几条线渐降比较好忘了怎么出的错啦 我好像是有单独下线减FINISH音的怎么都没了
02:23:558(7) - remove clap? X，这个CLAP感觉挺必要

[Lyric]
由于日本汉字基本没简体字，所以下面涉及到简体转繁体的建议改回去，假名汉字的互换就随意了
11.png 錆付いた心 音も无い世界 --> 錆びついた心 音もない世界
16.png 一人っきりで泣く后ろ姿 --> ひとりきりで泣く後ろ姿
34.png 35.png 冗談みたい / な毎日 <--这样分割比较好，みたい是一个完整的助动词
42.png 梦に落ちるの --> 夢に落ちるの
43.png 44.png 第二句的「すぐに」唱的时候是在第一句显示的时间里的，建议改到43.png中
46.png 二人 --> ふたり
51.png 无邪気な顔 --> 無邪気な顔
74.png 思いを残するの --> 思いを残すの (残す是五段动词没有サ变动词的原型)

参考用booklet http://puu.sh/5iGy

[StoryBoard]
Foreground sb\lyric\712.png 目测没fade效果,move效果也出错了 基本全重制了

总体氛围营造得很不错，star

xykbear wrote:

《论尼姆芙和王长喜》
AoI渣电脑表示SB载入其卡无比啊～
个人意见：osb文件里的数值最好整理一下，小数点后面太多位了 ..不会弄 有区别吗= =

[Collab]
00:16:118 (1) - 感觉用finish效果更好 2个FINISH不太好了
00:26:678 (5) - 折返的锚点上移一格，然后曲线锚点左移一格 哎好吧
00:31:478 (10) - 右移一格嗯
00:38:678 (7,1) - 上移+左移一格嗯
00:52:118 (11) - 最后一个锚点下移两格
02:12:038 (2) - 最后一个锚点下移一格
02:33:398 (3) - 左移一格 这几个没区别啦= =不要了

[easy]
00:22:838 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish
00:38:198 (5) - ^
01:28:118 (5) - ^
01:44:438 (1) - 最开始加finish 没想加那么多的..
02:24:758 (1,2,3,4) - 每个白线上都加finish 已经有FINISH了吧
02:37:238 (3) - 去掉这个点，从02:36:998开始做一个1/2往返滑条 不要把 我在跟鼓点 这里变VOCAL会很笨

·最后膜拜各位神mapper，中秋节快乐(●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

pieguy1372 wrote:

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3) //no
01:36:758 (4) - new combo //k

SamiPale wrote:

[KPY]
S:C2大声点 //現在很ok阿.

xykbear wrote:

[KPY]
将难度名改成“KPY's Hard”，与前面的保持一致 //為甚麼不考慮於後面一致?難道collab可以說成Insane's collab?
00:18:758 (2) - 第三个锚点右移+上移一格 沒開grid
00:21:398 (4) - new combo,为了把来回跳进行区分开来 //可
00:22:598 (1) - 是不是没开GS？直线不水平了 一直沒開
01:17:318 (1) - 将折返上的finish改到开头的红线上，曲子背景音的敲锣是在这个位置的 可
01:29:078 (3) - finish //X
02:01:718 (4) - finish //X

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

kanpakyin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

Didn't! I have already told Nymph_ to fix something via tencent QQ

Kawayi Rika wrote:

神MAPPER Nymph_ 也做这个曲子了啊~膜拜一下~

一些小建议~~


[Collab]

00:27:638 (1) - Start point add finish. didn't sound good for me
00:38:918 (8) - Overlap here? 00:39:158 (1) it is on purpose, I am pretty sure
00:54:998 (3,5,1) - add finish.
01:25:238 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:32:918 (3) - ^ I think maybe too loud.


[wcx]

00:27:638 (5) - add finish.
02:00:278 (4,5,6) - ^
02:01:718 (1) - Start point Remove finish.
02:15:638 (6,7,8,1) - With the above.

nice job give star~

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
一些建議:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
控制一下combo,最好3-5...在easy里弄6或者8的combo很奇怪的 = =还好啦

[wcx's Normal]
00:24:278 (x) - add a note with clap.
最好也控制下combo.

[KPY]
01:17:318 (1) - 這之后拉個spinner會比較好
02:29:558 (1,2) - finish怎麼沒有了?建議補上
02:37:958 (7) - 這之后像easy,normal那樣拉個spinner做結尾會比較好

[Collab]
00:25:718 (3) - 這箭頭感覺有點遮啊,換個方向吧 我觉得还行啊 完全没读图障碍
00:56:438 (3,4,5) - 我覺得(4,5)沒有被覆蓋得很好确实呢 弄了
00:58:118 (x) - 加個note?不是很乐意
00:58:358 (T) - 這后面的4根綠線貌似都沒用嗯 以前换音效分不清了
01:02:198 (5,6,7) - 我覺得(6,7)沒有被覆蓋得很好嗯 弄了
01:09:518 (1) - 應該是后面的紅線開始我觉得也是 但是玩起来蓝线舒服
01:29:558 (x) - 加個有clap的note?嗯 我一直这么想 不管COLLAB同意不同意了。。

禮物
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Rukarioman wrote:

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable. Alright.k
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that? Change a bit about the combo and it's more easy to read.
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them. I want to follow the SB colour here.However too many modder mention about this so I decided to fix it.

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
01:19:718 - Add in a break here or add some mapping. A little bit too long no mapping. add a break here

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable.
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that?
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them.

Collab:
- Same about Tick Rate as above.
00:37:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Those two triples and that stream don't really fit imo. I don't hear anything in the music that calls for this. Meicon changed here to 4 notes and sliders
00:47:078 (1,2,3,4) - These notes placed in a place where no music actually plays seems a bit odd. Maybe remove them? Meicon said it is ok.
00:55:478 (5,1) - Man this anti-jump felt really weird imo. move the notes further then
01:26:198 (3) - Imo this would flow better if it was horizontally flipped. K