1. Aishiteru (2.58 stars, 502 notes)

Japanese Ver: Lilyanna | English Ver / Japanese MAD Ver: Shad0w1and

Hazu- wrote:

Aishiteru

1. AiMod
2. You can silence the end of the first spinners ( 00:01:057 (1) - 00:04:300 (1) - 00:07:544 (1) - 00:10:787 (1) - ) since in the end there is nothing, and the sound that makes the spinners at the end is very noticeable.
3. 01:00:652 - The vocals skipped here are very noticeable, when I played this I clicked 01:00:855 - too early, besides in 01:13:625 - you map the vocal and the "form" of the vocals is quite similar.
4. 01:15:449 (1,2,1) - 03:02:476 (1,2,1) - This confused me a little lol although this is very similar is positioned very different. should be fine as a advanced
5. 02:18:490 (5,6,7) - You can make these sliders parallel, looks better visually.
6. 02:47:679 - Same as 01:00:652 -
7. 03:18:692 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.
   
   
8. 04:13:827 (6) - NC?

Nothing much to say, good map.
GL~

Neoskylove wrote:

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[dfg]
00:55:990 (1,2,3) - looks little bit hard to read its 1/3 anyways
02:25:990 (7) - how about copy 02:24:976 (5) - and paste? does not matter
04:41:395 (1) - slider looks little bit weird? you didn't try this slider well.

GL!

xJ1 wrote:

Hey, from my mod queue

Aishiteru

00:50:922 (3) - Maybe make it like this? https://prnt.sc/fx16pq

00:46:868 (2,3) - Could have better flow

04:46:868 (2,3) - Same here

Very clean map, nothing much to say, could easily get ranked

My map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/640966

MoeAsuka wrote:

m+s4m
01:10:584 (3) - 这里的flow我更觉得ctrl+g会更流畅啊
04:30:044 (1) - 我个人觉得这个走向挺尴尬的，好像滑条折返点往左下移一点更舒服

GL
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/635395

Kisses wrote:

愛してる

1. The difference in SVs for the kiai isn't that big. How about 1.2-1.3? better as current
2. 01:45:855 (3,4) - Would look better aesthetically if the spacing between these objects were the same as 01:45:246 (2,3) imo. Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8629305
3. 02:48:692 (4) - whistle on head? to match other parts like 02:51:936 (5) - they are different
4. 03:07:341 (1) - slider + circle? I'm kinda surprised you didn't make 03:07:949 clickable when you have parts of the map with no distinguishable sounds such as 03:01:463 (4) clickable well the music is like this, current one is the best solution imo
5. 03:44:638 (1) - This spinner would be better left unmuted at the end to give players feedback on where it ends
6. 03:55:179 (3,4) - ctrl + g this rhythm feels like it fits a lot better imho :v doesn't really matter

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Err, that's really all I can say tbh

randomknights wrote:

hi

this isnt much of a mod cause i only spot couple things that i feel might need looking at so no need to give kudos if u dont want to

yeah its a great map and solid didn't really see anything wrong with it but i guess thats a pro for u haha
but only a few things that concern me.



Aishiteru diff

01:07:341 (4,5) - i noticed you left out note in between here. but put one in between here00:54:368 (4,5,6) - and its the same calm as other no beat in between them any reason for that?

now i see why you didnt here 02:54:368 (4,5) - and did here 02:41:395 (1,2,3) - on the second one cause the music is still intence so to say then the other but the ^top one is the same but note on one and not the other


04:33:287 (1) - maybe make it straight inline with 04:33:895 (2) - this cause its kinda off a little but you might be doing it like that cause of the offseting sliders i guess?

04:56:598 (2) - same^as 04:55:990 (1) -

um thats pretty much it hope it helped and gl with it getting ranked XD

pishifat wrote:

do u need someone to qualify