Protastic101 wrote:

final thing

03:35:732 (215732|1) - remove note to avoid the 1/8 minitrill seeing that you capped the next 1/8 roll with a jump at 03:41:538 - and they're both the same sound.
07:35:375 (455375|1,455418|0,455461|1) - Same thing here

My bad, i'am forgot~ Applied
thanks you <3

doot dat bubble then =w=)b

Thanks a lot protastic



ExUsagi punya^

your map looks so good. How do people do this kind of maps

Sorry telat wkwk

[Let's Go!]
00:01:010 - Lebih enak dipindah di col 3

00:03:153 (3153|1,3238|0,3581|1,3667|0) - Part disini sbnernya agk aneh buat ane maenin, lebih ngeflow klo column 1-2-1-2.

00:04:524 (4524|3,4610|2,4696|3) - Trill disini bikin transisinya jadi agk kluar dari struktur pattern yang diinginkan, jadi sebaiknya 00:04:438 (4438|1,4524|3) - Pindah kolom.

00:05:381 - klo dibikin stair begini akibatnya jadi ngetrill di 00:05:038 (5038|0,5210|1,5296|0) - dan 00:05:296 (5296|2,5381|3,5467|2) - dan tidak trlalu mencerminkan instrumen yang diinginkan, lebih baik tukar kolom 00:05:210 (5210|1,5296|2) -

00:07:181 - coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018913 biar ngemirror 00:08:553 - lebih terstruktur ama ngeflow imo.

00:11:038 (11038|0,11124|2,11210|0) - Pergolakan pattern disini jadi trill 1-3-1 ga ngeflow imo, coba tuker kolom antara 00:10:781 (10781|1,11038|0) - deh.

00:28:696 (28696|1) - Part ini suka kerasa janggal waktu dimainin karena noteny dipencet 1/4 part sebelum LN nya berakhir, coba tuker kolom antara 00:28:610 (28610|2,28696|1) - biar lebih flow

00:32:553 - Kurasa masih ada suara LN lagi disini, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018942

00:45:924 - Mnurutku klo mw bkin diagonal pattern jgn wktu lg ber LN patternny soalny readingnya jadi agk misleading , coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018952

00:46:953 (46953|2,47124|3) - Switch column ja biar ngebentuk 4-1 yg ngemirror 3-2 di 00:47:381 (47381|2,47467|1) -

00:48:324 - coba bikin jadi https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018959 biar note di 00:49:353 - jadi lebih masuk transisinya ke double selanjutnya.

00:51:924 (51924|2,52096|1,52181|2) - menurutku lebih seimbang klo 2-3-2 karena pattern di 00:52:438 - benar2 berfokus ke arah kanan, jadi lebih seimbang klo pattern sblmny mengarah ke kiri.

01:23:253 (83253|0) - jadi kolom 3 ja soalny banyak mini LN disini agak bikin fokusnya jadi terdistorsi antara LN ama pattern rumit lainnya seperti mini trill.

01:25:523 - mirip kayak diatas, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018987

01:41:901 (101901|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja biar strukturnya sama2 ngebentuk dengan 01:42:226 - dsbnya

01:49:280 (109280|0,109361|1) - tuker kolom ja pattern ini, gapa2 mirip ama 01:49:523 - biar ga trlalu membludak abis hit pattern 01:48:874 -

01:54:469 (114469|0,114550|1) - tuker kolom jg karena suara kicknya ampir sama ama 01:54:712 - doubleny

02:06:377 - Transisi patternnya jg agk ga masuk disini, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019035

02:08:273 (128273|3,128360|2) - Tuker kolom jg biar stair LN nya bisa ngemirror 02:08:704 (128704|3,128791|2,128877|1) - , dan spaya ga trlalu kaget wktu tiba2 patternny jd full 1/4 LN stream

02:09:049 - menurutku agak aneh klo 1/4 LN nya tiba2 ga dimap disini karena suarany masih lumayan kedengaran jelas loh disini

02:10:170 - drum ilang? klo takut agk trlalu maksa, imo mending prioritaskan drum daripada 1/2 LNnya.

02:14:222 - transisi minijacknya agk mengejutkan, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019057

02:18:187 (138187|2,138360|2,138532|2) - stackny disengaja? karena blm ad suara spesial disini, kalo di 02:16:118 (136118|3,136291|3,136463|3) - memang cocok karena ad kicknya 3 kali. coba pindah 02:18:360 (138360|2) - ke col 2

02:21:291 - agak underwhelming sepertinya, saranku ad 1 LN buat lebih merefleksikan suara pitch yg meninggi kayak https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019079 (pake trill pattern karena suarany berulang jadi bisa dipake trill)

02:48:877 - ane tau mw pake SV buat emphasis instrumennya, tapi karena cuma pake 1 LN, impact LN nya di direct playnya langsung ga dapet imo, mnding langsung 1/4 note ja kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019096 , dengan SV pun masih enak dimaenin.

02:56:291 (176291|1,176463|2,176635|1) - jadi 3-2-3 ja untuk menghindari stack 02:55:946 (175946|1,176118|1,176291|1) - yg tidak mengindisikan instrumen khusus.

03:09:825 - Double notenya salah tempat? harusnya di suara yg lebih gede kyk 03:09:739 - 03:09:911 -

03:26:377 (206377|2,206538|2) - jacknya pindah ke col 2 ja, biar player lebih ada ruang buat persiapin tangan kanan hit burst di 03:26:861 -

03:35:409 - bisa dibuat SV disini, asal jgn trlalu kenceng xd

03:56:377 (236377|3) - menurutku jadi LN lebih oke disini, soalny ini momen transisi ke stream, jadiny 2 LN wktu ke stream lebih dapet flownya.

04:03:474 - 3,00x SV trlalu kuat disini, kaget kena terpa badai :< , klo mw impact yg lbih kuat ama terbaca, coba 2,00x SV di 04:03:474 - , ama 0,50x SV di 04:03:635 -

04:21:216 (261216|2,261296|1,261377|0) - coba bikin 2-3-2 biar lebih struktural mirroring 04:21:538 -

04:43:463 (283463|1) - rada agk independen kiri, pindah ke col 4 ja

05:06:527 (306527|2,306689|3) - Tuker kolom ja biar stairnya keconnect jadinya

05:09:592 (309592|1,309673|0,309753|1) - lebih enak klo 1-2-1 biar stackny di col 1

05:13:947 - trlalu kenceng 0,6 ama 2,2x formula.. mnding jadi 0,8 dan 1,6x

05:22:818 (322818|1,322898|0) - pindah ke col 3 dan col 2 ja :<

06:17:553 - Agak trlalu kuat jg dsini, coba bkin biar mirip ama yg kbilang di 05:13:947 -

07:14:718 (434718|0) - mending ke col 2 ini, soalnya trill 1-4-1 diantara burstny bkin transisinya ga mulus.

ok sip , klo udh, call balik ya

KatashiVik wrote:

your map looks so good. How do people do this kind of maps

>w<)~ thank you

Maxus wrote:

Sorry telat wkwk

[Let's Go!]
00:01:010 - Lebih enak dipindah di col 3 ok

00:03:153 (3153|1,3238|0,3581|1,3667|0) - Part disini sbnernya agk aneh buat ane maenin, lebih ngeflow klo column 1-2-1-2. ok

00:04:524 (4524|3,4610|2,4696|3) - Trill disini bikin transisinya jadi agk kluar dari struktur pattern yang diinginkan, jadi sebaiknya 00:04:438 (4438|1,4524|3) - Pindah kolom. pattern telah di modifikasi XDi

00:05:381 - klo dibikin stair begini akibatnya jadi ngetrill di 00:05:038 (5038|0,5210|1,5296|0) - dan 00:05:296 (5296|2,5381|3,5467|2) - dan tidak trlalu mencerminkan instrumen yang diinginkan, lebih baik tukar kolom 00:05:210 (5210|1,5296|2) - ide bagus

00:07:181 - coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018913 biar ngemirror 00:08:553 - lebih terstruktur ama ngeflow imo. ok

00:11:038 (11038|0,11124|2,11210|0) - Pergolakan pattern disini jadi trill 1-3-1 ga ngeflow imo, coba tuker kolom antara 00:10:781 (10781|1,11038|0) - deh. lel, sebelumnya patternku begitu, ok back to old pattern

00:28:696 (28696|1) - Part ini suka kerasa janggal waktu dimainin karena noteny dipencet 1/4 part sebelum LN nya berakhir, coba tuker kolom antara 00:28:610 (28610|2,28696|1) - biar lebih flow mantap

00:32:553 - Kurasa masih ada suara LN lagi disini, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018942 gak ikutin suara itu, penekanannya lebih ke instument utama + vocal

00:45:924 - Mnurutku klo mw bkin diagonal pattern jgn wktu lg ber LN patternny soalny readingnya jadi agk misleading , coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018952 ok

00:46:953 (46953|2,47124|3) - Switch column ja biar ngebentuk 4-1 yg ngemirror 3-2 di 00:47:381 (47381|2,47467|1) - ok

00:48:324 - coba bikin jadi https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018959 biar note di 00:49:353 - jadi lebih masuk transisinya ke double selanjutnya. ok deh

00:51:924 (51924|2,52096|1,52181|2) - menurutku lebih seimbang klo 2-3-2 karena pattern di 00:52:438 - benar2 berfokus ke arah kanan, jadi lebih seimbang klo pattern sblmny mengarah ke kiri. ok

01:23:253 (83253|0) - jadi kolom 3 ja soalny banyak mini LN disini agak bikin fokusnya jadi terdistorsi antara LN ama pattern rumit lainnya seperti mini trill. ok

01:25:523 - mirip kayak diatas, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9018987 ok

01:41:901 (101901|3) - pindah ke col 2 ja biar strukturnya sama2 ngebentuk dengan 01:42:226 - dsbnya ok

01:49:280 (109280|0,109361|1) - tuker kolom ja pattern ini, gapa2 mirip ama 01:49:523 - biar ga trlalu membludak abis hit pattern 01:48:874 - ok

01:54:469 (114469|0,114550|1) - tuker kolom jg karena suara kicknya ampir sama ama 01:54:712 - doubleny ok

02:06:377 - Transisi patternnya jg agk ga masuk disini, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019035 diterapkan

02:08:273 (128273|3,128360|2) - Tuker kolom jg biar stair LN nya bisa ngemirror 02:08:704 (128704|3,128791|2,128877|1) - , dan spaya ga trlalu kaget wktu tiba2 patternny jd full 1/4 LN stream ok

02:09:049 - menurutku agak aneh klo 1/4 LN nya tiba2 ga dimap disini karena suarany masih lumayan kedengaran jelas loh disini emang sih, ada 2 jenis suara panjang 1/2 LN di bagian itu, tapi saya lebih cenderung ngemap suara yang agak keras pitchnya ketimbang yang anda maksudkan. Alasan lain, sengaja ikutin suara itu, karena kalau saya ngemap keseluruahan 1/4 LN ada bagian tertentu berubah jadi LN jumptril, jadi gak greget awal2 udah jadi susah patternnya walaupun current pattern jg terlihat sulit XD

02:10:170 - drum ilang? klo takut agk trlalu maksa, imo mending prioritaskan drum daripada 1/2 LNnya. lel, ketahuan

02:14:222 - transisi minijacknya agk mengejutkan, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019057 diterapkan

02:18:187 (138187|2,138360|2,138532|2) - stackny disengaja? karena blm ad suara spesial disini, kalo di 02:16:118 (136118|3,136291|3,136463|3) - memang cocok karena ad kicknya 3 kali. coba pindah 02:18:360 (138360|2) - ke col 2 tangkapan bagus

02:21:291 - agak underwhelming sepertinya, saranku ad 1 LN buat lebih merefleksikan suara pitch yg meninggi kayak https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019079 (pake trill pattern karena suarany berulang jadi bisa dipake trill) nice, dan saya mirror ke sini juga 02:26:808 -

02:48:877 - ane tau mw pake SV buat emphasis instrumennya, tapi karena cuma pake 1 LN, impact LN nya di direct playnya langsung ga dapet imo, mnding langsung 1/4 note ja kyk https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019096 , dengan SV pun masih enak dimaenin. baiklah, fix juga SVnya

02:56:291 (176291|1,176463|2,176635|1) - jadi 3-2-3 ja untuk menghindari stack 02:55:946 (175946|1,176118|1,176291|1) - yg tidak mengindisikan instrumen khusus. pengamatan bagus

03:09:825 - Double notenya salah tempat? harusnya di suara yg lebih gede kyk 03:09:739 - 03:09:911 - terpasang

03:26:377 (206377|2,206538|2) - jacknya pindah ke col 2 ja, biar player lebih ada ruang buat persiapin tangan kanan hit burst di 03:26:861 - ok

03:35:409 - bisa dibuat SV disini, asal jgn trlalu kenceng xd terpasang 0,65x - 1,35x

03:56:377 (236377|3) - menurutku jadi LN lebih oke disini, soalny ini momen transisi ke stream, jadiny 2 LN wktu ke stream lebih dapet flownya. ok

04:03:474 - 3,00x SV trlalu kuat disini, kaget kena terpa badai :< , klo mw impact yg lbih kuat ama terbaca, coba 2,00x SV di 04:03:474 - , ama 0,50x SV di 04:03:635 - lel, badai harvey di texas mungkin hehehe, nda masalah menurutku. Saya sudah coba 2,00x tapi kurang ngefeel SVnya, selain itu protas juga sarankan. Artinya, semakin lebar jarak posisi note untuk dipasang maka perlu ditingkatkan SVnya berdasarkan rumus evening, apalagi snapnya kurang dari 1/1.

04:21:216 (261216|2,261296|1,261377|0) - coba bikin 2-3-2 biar lebih struktural mirroring 04:21:538 - ok

04:43:463 (283463|1) - rada agk independen kiri, pindah ke col 4 ja ok

05:06:527 (306527|2,306689|3) - Tuker kolom ja biar stairnya keconnect jadinya ok

05:09:592 (309592|1,309673|0,309753|1) - lebih enak klo 1-2-1 biar stackny di col 1 ok

05:13:947 - trlalu kenceng 0,6 ama 2,2x formula.. mnding jadi 0,8 dan 1,6x ok, rendahkah SVnya, 0,70x dan 1,90x hasil dari (4 - 0,70 x 3)

05:22:818 (322818|1,322898|0) - pindah ke col 3 dan col 2 ja :< my bad

06:17:553 - Agak trlalu kuat jg dsini, coba bkin biar mirip ama yg kbilang di 05:13:947 - ok, jadi 0,64x hasil dari (0,70 - 0,06) dan 1,84 hasil dari (1,90x - 0,06)

07:14:718 (434718|0) - mending ke col 2 ini, soalnya trill 1-4-1 diantara burstny bkin transisinya ga mulus. ok

ok sip , klo udh, call balik ya

Terima kasih banyak atas checknya maxus, super duper membantu

Rearranged pattern di 05:42:880 - 05:46:498 - biar lebih variasi

Ok dh acceptable, good luck :3

Thanks a lot Maxus and protas





Fancy Animation by Arzen

fancy af <3

I thought it should be "Tracks" because it's not only one song :thinking:

But nice one, congratulations!

Omg - I don't understand a thing about what you said on the mod Protastic, but this is why mania is magic xD

Anyway, great job Verniy!

Another things:

Offset is quite too early, don't you think so?

I got a solution:

1. Offset: 507ms BPM: 175,00 (00:00:507 - )
2. Offset: 72.077ms BPM: 185,00 (01:12:077 - )
3. Offset: 125.435ms BPM: 174,00 (02:05:435 - )
4. Offset: 199.937ms BPM: 186,00 (03:19:937 - )
5. Offset: 268.795ms BPM: 186,00 (04:28:795 - )
6. Offset: 341.685ms BPM: 199,00 (05:41:685 - )
7. Offset: 403.366ms BPM: 175,00 (06:43:366 - )

I feels like it been off-beats a lot.

Tho, it's a little disappointed that it didn't have "2 MINUTES FIGHTERS" and "The Sampling Paradise (P*Light Remix)", but it's all nice spread you let's the song goes from BOOTH to HEAVEN, pretty neat ideas.

Also about the title: I think it's the same with "Songs Complication" but by this case it's "Tracks"
It's just a suggestion.

But that's it, overall the map and storyboard looks pretty great to me, nice job btw. Good luck!

Hello.

This map got reported to me. After looking into the map i must agree with Kuo. The offset need's to get fixed.
Pretty cool map otherwise!

bg yg lama layoutnya udah bagus loh yg skrg jadi ke crop di monitor 4:3 :c

Thanks all for the comment

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Another things:

Offset is quite too early, don't you think so?

I got a solution:

1. Offset: 507ms BPM: 175,00 (00:00:507 - )
2. Offset: 72.077ms BPM: 185,00 (01:12:077 - )
3. Offset: 125.435ms BPM: 174,00 (02:05:435 - )
4. Offset: 199.937ms BPM: 186,00 (03:19:937 - )
5. Offset: 268.795ms BPM: 186,00 (04:28:795 - )
6. Offset: 341.685ms BPM: 199,00 (05:41:685 - )
7. Offset: 403.366ms BPM: 175,00 (06:43:366 - )

I feels like it been off-beats a lot.

Tho, it's a little disappointed that it didn't have "2 MINUTES FIGHTERS" and "The Sampling Paradise (P*Light Remix)", but it's all nice spread you let's the song goes from BOOTH to HEAVEN, pretty neat ideas.

Also about the title: I think it's the same with "Songs Complication" but by this case it's "Tracks"
It's just a suggestion.

But that's it, overall the map and storyboard looks pretty great to me, nice job btw. Good luck!

Applied everything, thanks a lot kyou-san
Really really.. sorry protas and maxus ;w;

Arzenvald wrote:

bg yg lama layoutnya udah bagus loh yg skrg jadi ke crop di monitor 4:3 :c

padahal layoutnya gak saya apa-apain, cuma replaced image aja :3

Updated:
Snapped all pattern, SV timing point and SB timing
Smooth + add some SV
Changed a tittle

Maxus and I were talking about the title last night and we think it should be "SOUND VOLTEX Track Compilation" without an 's' on tracks, as that would imply it's multiple combined single mp3s such as this. Example for using plural tracks would be like if you added both p*light songs and then nanahira songs together. You have two completely different and separate things, whereas this is only one collection of songs with a single theme (being that the artist is p*light).

00:36:249 - Might consider adding a note here for the 1/4 triplet which is the same in sound to 00:30:678 (30678|2,30764|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9082980

00:54:164 (54164|3,54249|2,54335|3,54421|2,54507|3) - Bit of a longer trill that I think you could break to be four on each hand, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083079

03:04:228 (184228|1,184400|1,184572|1,184745|1) - Bit of a longer and unnecessary stack. I think it'd be better to try and keep them to three notes long, though two notes at most would be preferable but also require rearranging some LNs or using shields https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083099

06:17:865 (377865|2,378016|2,378167|2) - 06:18:468 (378468|0,378619|0,378770|0) - 06:18:921 (378921|1,379071|1,379222|1) - Looking for a pattern to justify these three note stacks but I dont seem to see any as 06:22:690 - which is similar in sound uses a more linear structure. I'd try to avoid the stacks in this case and do something more in line with the next half of the kiai like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083136

Protastic101 wrote:

Maxus and I were talking about the title last night and we think it should be "SOUND VOLTEX Track Compilation" without an 's' on tracks, as that would imply it's multiple combined single mp3s such as this. Example for using plural tracks would be like if you added both p*light songs and then nanahira songs together. You have two completely different and separate things, whereas this is only one collection of songs with a single theme (being that the artist is p*light). i really agree with you.. refixed tittle, finally someone noticed it, since i don't know how to explain to KK mods

00:36:249 - Might consider adding a note here for the 1/4 triplet which is the same in sound to 00:30:678 (30678|2,30764|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9082980 the ryhtim song has changed, so.. i just focus on high pitch or main instument (beat)

00:54:164 (54164|3,54249|2,54335|3,54421|2,54507|3) - Bit of a longer trill that I think you could break to be four on each hand, like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083079 nice catch

03:04:228 (184228|1,184400|1,184572|1,184745|1) - Bit of a longer and unnecessary stack. I think it'd be better to try and keep them to three notes long, though two notes at most would be preferable but also require rearranging some LNs or using shields https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083099 applied

06:17:865 (377865|2,378016|2,378167|2) - 06:18:468 (378468|0,378619|0,378770|0) - 06:18:921 (378921|1,379071|1,379222|1) - Looking for a pattern to justify these three note stacks but I dont seem to see any as 06:22:690 - which is similar in sound uses a more linear structure. I'd try to avoid the stacks in this case and do something more in line with the next half of the kiai like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9083136 applied

thanks for recheck >w<)b

seems good then =w=)b

hmm

kok si mapper jadi jaog begini.ka_mim