Kamikaze wrote:

Checked hitsounds, the volume of hitnormal sounds a little low, but it's acceptable (I can hear it okay-ish), but tom2 had 5ms of delay and you could cut off the ends of each hitsound file to save a bit of space, so I did that and uploaded it here!
I'll try the map once more tomorrow and after you update, unless I find something to nitpick I'm gonna bubble it wooo!!

error_exe777 wrote:

hot map

do you need a BN for qualify?

error_exe777 wrote:

okay, dont mind if i do

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[General]

1. rainbow anniversary original 1024x768.jpg is unused, im p sure. the other one is being used for the background and there isnt a storyboard so. if so it should be deleted

The original one has been replaced long ago, it's not anywhere in the folder

[Rainbow Melody]

00:21:704 - kinda feel this slowjam is slightly harsh tbh. a 0.7x might fit a bit better, but thats just me. up to you EDIT: or, after speaking with kami, make the slowjam at 02:08:613 - slower instead cause the section is more tame than the one at 00:21:704 - (im not overly bothered about any of this but whatever goes) 02:08:613 - is now at 0.6x

03:19:522 (199522|4,199522|3,199658|3,199658|4) - this jack should ideally be avoided since the jack at 03:19:795 (199795|6,199795|5,199931|5,199931|6) - is for a different instrument and avoiding it could help give some differentiation between the two nice catch w undid the jacks

03:59:340 - shouldnt you have these LNs from here as doubles for the vocal lead ins? kinda like you did at 01:15:704 - Originally I didn't want to include those in there because that part is a slow LN section and it's pretty hard to acc already in general. But hey, it should still be fine

04:15:340 - unsure whether its intended or not but col 1 is empty for a good 2 seconds so you could balance it out a bit more it was intended, but i found something to move to include col 1, so all good

thats all, after you apply any changes i can qualify after 24 hours of kami's bubble

Hi, welcome back and thanks for checking ' w' nice doggo

Rivals_7 wrote:

04:17:316 - unused greenline?
edit: 02:18:431 - 02:21:704 - 02:45:158 - 03:57:704 - 04:56:068 - 04:57:704 - these too? none of them actually have effect from the initial SV

oh preview point is unsnapped too. its minor tho but i guess thats worth mentioned

2018-04-08 19:12 Cryolien: hi, are you free atm?
2018-04-08 19:15 Cryolien: i want to request a DQ on my map to fix some stuff

Rivals_7 wrote:

04:17:316 - unused greenline?
edit: 02:18:431 - 02:21:704 - 02:45:158 - 03:57:704 - 04:56:068 - 04:57:704 - these too? none of them actually have effect from the initial SV

oh preview point is unsnapped too. its minor tho but i guess thats worth mentioned
Removed all unnecessary green lines and snapped the preview point

Tofu1222 wrote:

First, congratz for qualify. This map is all around a great one for me, but I would like to raise a few concerns before it hits to ranked stage.

[Rainbow Melody]

1. 01:20:340 - As to follow your patterns on placing F hitsounds for the hihat sounds on the 2nd and 4th white lines of each bar, I think here should have an F. Also, you can definitely hear the hihat here too.
2. 02:38:613 - 02:38:749 - You can see clearly from the types and the strength of the drums of these two and the latter two that they are different. So I would suggest replacing C with W here.
3. 02:42:704 - to 02:43:522 - I think that the hitsounds should be placed as in the screenshot based on their types and the strengths : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10657278 Besides, 02:43:113 (163113|6,163113|0,163249|1,163249|5,163386|2,163386|4) - these notes can be quadraple notes because they have drums of the same strength with 02:42:704 (162704|3,162704|6,162704|2,162704|5,162840|1,162840|4,162840|5,162840|2) - .
   Actually these 4 note chords are meant for 3 snare, 1 piano. So I will make 02:43:113 - these into 3 note chords
4. 03:45:522 (225522|2,225522|0) - Why you double this? I think you are supposed to make double notes on 03:45:431 - as what you did in 01:32:886 (92886|5,92886|0) - .
5. 04:25:522 (265522|5) - Delete this LN because there is no new synth or vocal sound here.

Good luck <3 Make sure to apply rival's suggestions if this gets DQ'ed :3
Applied everything else mentioned, much thanks

Garalulu wrote:

I think it can be improved more, so here's the mine

[Rainbow Melody]

1. 00:04:658 - if you did double for melody and drum unlike 00:04:522 - there is only drum, 00:06:840 - you should add one note here for melody, because you already did at 00:05:068 - 00:05:613 - 00:06:158 - .
   same issue with above : 00:09:022 - 00:11:204 - and etc
2. 00:13:249 - 00:13:386 - the drum thing is very heavy and identical, and 00:13:249 - has a melody too. It should be double, and each one note of that part can be same col, here's an example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10674357
3. 00:20:340 - For consistency it should be triple tho, for the C hitsound part
4. 03:04:795 - 03:05:340 - same density with 03:02:613 - 03:03:158 - , really looks weird. Literally different music structure but they have same note amount. You should adjust this part as 03:06:977 - 03:07:522 - cause it's more like same structure.
   I intend to keep the LNs as it is because the pitch is going upward, but i'll change the density of the regular notes. Same as with 01:35:340 -

simple drum based chart, I love what you deal with this song.
Thanks for looking through, applied everything else